~THE UNDOING~(MG) (UPDATING & Note-Pg 32)

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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#171

Have come across this story and read all parts in one go..It's completely different and unusual and I haven't read anything similar in the past. Very mysterious. Geet and her family's new neighborhood is scary and dull. It seems only Geet experiences all the weird things. Her Mom and Dad are normal and happy. What that old man said to Geet before dying is irrelevant to her. it seems unpleasant things are happening with Emma too or is it all Geet's hallucinations? Very interesting. Love to read what happens next. Pls include me in your pm list.

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#172

interesting update...wats happening to geet

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#173

nice update...

loved it ...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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fantesy

@fantesy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#174

superb part...curious to know what happened there.. update soon

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#175

Fab and intriguing update

Loved it!!

Geet was feeling awkward and uneasy meeting their neighbors

Geet felt Emma was feeling awkward too and all thanks to their mothers

Geet felt Emma to be a spolied brat and was in geet's undesirable person list

Their mere touch resulted their ambience into a panaromal place filled with mystery

Lookslike they both were connected in past and both were related to the village too

Geet and Emma both were trapped in a glass and in a mysterious place

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#176

NYC Chapter banner dear

Thanks for the pm

Will be waiting for the next update

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shimmer0398

@shimmer0398

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#177

Hey!! I didn't get any pm abt the update!!

bt d update was fantastic!! Do they see themselves as mermaid?? I thought maan would come!! Bt u really didn't disappointed me!!

bt d update was preety small,,nxt time we want long ones!! U se looonggg one!!

is ema also a part of past?? Totally curious!!

plz update asap

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gurtimuskaan

@gurtimuskaan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#178

what actually happened when Emma n geet shaked hands, they were taken into a completely different dimension n why cant they move their body.. strange

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#179

ch 6

OMG!! Emma and Geet...Are they related to each other by somehow? What's this connection? Are they part of some sort of prophesy? Whatever it is , I am sure that they both going to be great friends like Harry and Ron in the Harry Potter...he he...