THE OBEROI SERIES (updated on 22/05/2017)

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idolovestories

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: itzanya32
The shots were pretty good...dear...you are a superb writer...about ideas...I would love to see annika and Rudra doing mischief and annoying Shivaay. ..or a fruit punch party...!!! Where once again all of them are tipsy..and doing weird things..
Do continue soon...

thank you so much!

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idolovestories

@idolovestories

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND
Nice one...both omru meeting n this...how abt how shivika met n their interactions...just a thought...would love a pm when u update...thnx

thanks and about the pm, i am still figuring out how it works so lets see

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Lipiseth

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Superb

Loved the post.please update next part ASAP.😊

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idolovestories

@idolovestories

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Lipiseth
Superb
Loved the post.please update next part ASAP.😊

thanks. i'll try

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: idolovestories

thanks.

but i am new to the forum so i dont know how the pm concept works. sorry

Hello there, you write very well. I havent read it fully but have overlooked it. Will read as soon as I get some good free time.

But for now, you said you dont know how PM concept works. I will try to explain in short.

See basically you PM updates of your stories to your readers ( links) in order to make it easy for them to catch up your work.

Coming to how to do that,

Open inbox ----> New Message ---->
Copy paste the link of your chapter---> Select the buddies from your buddy list ( it shows a list right above where are you typing PM ---- > and send

Thats it. Hope that helps.

- Harshada

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idolovestories

@idolovestories

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

Hello there, you write very well. I havent read it fully but have overlooked it. Will read as soon as I get some good free time.

But for now, you said you dont know how PM concept works. I will try to explain in short.

See basically you PM updates of your stories to your readers ( links) in order to make it easy for them to catch up your work.

Coming to how to do that,

Open inbox ----> New Message ---->
Copy paste the link of your chapter---> Select the buddies from your buddy list ( it shows a list right above where are you typing PM ---- > and send

Thats it. Hope that helps.

- Harshada

Hello!

Thank you so much! I will send PMs from now on

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idolovestories

@idolovestories

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

THE OBEROI SERIES #3

Shivay Singh Oberoi's BMW

"Om , What is her name? At least tell us that!"

"For the hundredth time Shivay, I am-"

"Oh, please stop exaggerating! I've asked you just 14 times. Hundred it seems!"

"Mr. Calculator Singh Oberoi, tum kabhi nahi sudhroge. Anyways,

"What's in a name? that which we call a rose
By any other name would smell as sweet."**. hai na?"

"For god's sake Annika, not Shakespeare again! i am-"

"Actually Shivay I am surprised you even know whose quote it is! Considering your extremely limited knowledge of 15th Century British literature, I must say, I am proud of you. Tu bada hoke hamare parivar ka naam roshan karega" said Omkara, ever the voice of reason, earning applause form his bhabhi.

"Alright om. Bohot ho gaya. Ab bata bhi dena yar. Kaun hai yeh ladki jisse tu hame milana chahta hai par uska naam tak nahi batayega hame?" I mean, I understand ki tum apne girlfriend ko leke possessive ho but this is on another level totally!"

"To be honest, I never thought i would live to see this day, but i agree with Shivay. Kuch to batao!!"

"Guys, tum log bhi na! Vaise tum log itna request kar rahe ho to haan! Tu usko ache tarah se jaanta hai, Shivay. Ab aur kuch nahi. "

This effectively silenced the duo who were left wondering who on earth they were going to meet. But it was not really leading them anywhere because that's the only thing they had been doing since morning when Om had told them at the breakfast table that he wanted them and Rudra to meet someone in the evening for coffee. Rudra had a basketball match today so he couldn't come and these two were baffled.

The sleek BMW came to a halt as they reached their destination. All three got down at the cafe and went in. Om's phone started ringing and he took the call with a smile.

" Haan Richa , aa gaye hum. Booth number kaunsa hai? Acha thik hai bye"

They walked to the booth and a lady was waiting for them, in all her elegance and poise. She had aristocratic features and looked exquisitely beautiful.

" Richa Mukherjee" Shivay said in a cold tone reserved solely for his most formidable and competent business rival.

** The quote is from Shakespeare's 'Romeo and Juliet'. But don't worry, this is not a premonition of some kind, it is not implying any impending tragedy in Shivay and Anika's life.

But on second thoughts I might just decide to be cruel...😉😃

Edited by idolovestories - 9 years ago

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Awsm update...
Do update more...

P.s Do keep updating the title so that people came to know that you have updated... 😊

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idolovestories

@idolovestories

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

THE OBEROI SERIES # 4

WATCHING IPL...

It was the finals of IPL 2017. Mumbai Indians vs Rising Pune Supergiants.

Annika was at Oberoi Mansion praising her self control. She had managed with great difficulty to not reply to a dozen high pitched 'Oh My Matas' that came from a certain someone. Apparently there was a huge crisis in the dining room. Two chairs were not placed at their proper positions!! They were away by a couple of inches! The audacity of this "middle-class, sadak chap ladki" to not notice it right away! Why did Shivay even marry her?

It took Annika superhuman power to get out of that place wihtout saying anything, which was bound to bring upon her a fresh volley of insults. Now she was fuming, though.

After escaping form the Oh my Matas , she finally found time to watch the match. No more evil mother-in-laws. Finally she could be at peace. Just as the match started, her husband walked in followed by his youngest brother.

"Bhabhi, what do you think? Kaunsi team jitegi?"

" Mera Pune of course! Dhoni jo hain usme!"

At this, Shivay smirked and said, "tumhe Mumbai ko hi support karna padega."

"kyon??" She was really angry now.

"Kyonki Bhabhi, yeh apke Pati Parmeshwar ki team hai."Rudra grinned. So his Bhabhi didn't know , he realized. Now this was going to be fun.

"Pati Parmeshwar! yeh! " She scoffed. " Vaise matlab kya hai tumhara? Shivay Mumbai Indians team me the?" She burst out laughing. To even imagine Shivay playing cricket, or any sport for that matter was impossible.

"Annika he means that yeh team meri hai."

"Apni ise kharid li hai kya?" She started laughing again. But at Shivay's lack of response, her laughter died. She saw him smirking triumphantly.

"O bete ki! Aap MI ke owner hai!" Now this was a mini heart attack situation. But she was Annika, wasn't she? Time to wipe off that smug grin off his face. It had stayed for too long, and at her expense.

"Toh Shivay, aap please meri ek choti si request puri karenge? Please?"

"haan batao" came the haughty reply.

"Aap na mujhe ek baar Rohit Sharma se milva dijiye. please."

"haan okay. Main tumhe kal hi Rohi- Ek minute! No! ".

Now it was Annika's time to smirk and flaunt her victory. Realizing that he had again let her have the last laugh , Shivay pretended to receive a call from Mishra and ran out of the room, in an attempt to salvage his pride.

Annika was laughing like a maniac, leaving Rudra wondering what happened to his Bhaiya and Bhabhi.

Hi guys, I am updating after along time. I am not very good at writing this kind of stories. It was an idea my sister and I came up with. So please leave your comments and enjoy, if possible. :)

Edited by idolovestories - 8 years ago