RiKara Drabble series - Mischievous Cupids pt 2 pg 2 (20/5) - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi,

So this is drabble #2, featuring ShivRu and our Omkara. His wife has apparently got a new tutor. Enjoy!



Tujhe mirchi lagi?

He wanted a coffee, badly. But look at the irony, the woman he kept telling to get lost, had indeed got herself lost from his vision. Omkara cursed under his breath, making his way downstairs to their shared kitchen; only to come across his two brothers busily pouring over a pot.

"Arre O, app bhi aagaye?" Rudra was quick to pull him into their fold, he sniffed whatever was cooking gladly, as he made his way to the counter.

"How come you're early today Shivay?"

Shivay who was stirring the pot, gave him a little smile.

"Haan wo, accounting department ke kaam jaldi katam hogaya."

Kiyun nahi honge, aap calculator Singh Oberoi jo hai," Rudra chuckled earning one from Omkara as Shivay slapped the back of his head.

"Bhabi ka chamcha!"

"Waise teri Bhabhi hai kaha?" Omkara asked, beginning to stir his coffee. Rudra popped a handful of peanuts in to his mouth and munched them, before answering. Omkara sipped his beverage. "Annika Bhabi daadi ke saat mandir gayi hai, Gauri Bhabhi toh aap ke saamne hi hai, waha apne tutor ke saat par rahi hai..." He pointed at the hall, where they could see her sitting in the study table with someone.

He spluttered some of the coffee, before catching himself.

"Wo tutor hai?" He asked, narrowing his eyes at the young man who did not look much older than Rudra.

"Haan," Rudra sounded excited. "Maine set kar di dono ko. Wo aap ne jo bhuddia lekar aaye the na O, unki baate Bhabhi ko samajh nahi aati, iss liye, maine yeh apne batch mate ko laya unhe homework mein maddat karne ko."

He went on, not noticing how his brother had suddenly gone silent, squeezing the hell out of his coffee mug.

"Kiyun tere batch mate koi kuch aur kaam danda nahi hai kya?" He sounded bitter and bothered, that even Shivay stopped tending to his dish.

"Ab tuje kya problem hogayi? Tu toh mana kiya tha na help karne se?"

"Mujhe kya problem hona hai," Omkara shrugged. And the two tutor and tutee burst out laughing, pouring over some book as their heads brushed together. "Yahaan toh kaam kam Mazak zaada chal raha hai," Omkara scowled. "Such a waste of time."

"Waste of time nahi O, part time. Wo mere batch mate ko part time job chahiye ta, toh main ne -" Omkara sat his coffee down and was wiping his hands, ready to leave. "Arre aap kaha chale..?"

"Main bhi toh dekhu, kya seekha raha hai wo meri biwi ko," he gritted his teeth, before striding off towards them.

Shivay and Rudra exchanged a look.

"Meri biwi?" They repeated his last words, before exchanging an evil smile and a high five.


Open to your thoughts,

thanks for reading!😃

Edited by Sakura24 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
awesome update...
its tooo hilarious...
shivru teasing om...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Is our omie a actually jealous... If then I would love it...
Let's see whether he will he satisfied with the studies of MERI BIWI..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update
I like this new version jelosy omkara... Waiting foe more updats
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
SAKURA Dear...
...I am a silent reader of all your stories.{YAIC&All others}🤗
..still Waiting for I HATE LOVE STORIES coz me misses Rumya.😭
Needless to say ur are an awesome writer and I have just become a big fan of your fictions..👍🏼
I Love these kind of lighthearted stories with splashes of Obbros here and there.
Its so heartwarming and beautiful👏
Thank you so much for giving us such beautiful stories.
update soonish .
Take care .🤗
Love u❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Absolutely Hilarious Sakura...You nailed it...O is getting J...huh...first sign of love 👏
Edited by saske - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That was adorable
I have been inactive for a bit
Just been catching up on all your updates
They have been excellent
Lots of love always
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was so hilarious. Love the brothers' talk as always. Jealouskara is so cute. "Meri Biwi" Hayeee. Can't wait for the next chapter. Post soonnn.. Much love.
Edited by Naina280599 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sakura... 😊 ... let's redefine cute .. Omkara jealous fits the bill totally.. how cute is he.. aweee.. .. I mean.. worth-pulling-cheeks kinda cutesy.. n i am a complete schadenfreude.. 😆 .. I love Omkara in trouble.. he's called it upon himself.. n ShivOmRu conversation is gold.. god bless Ru.. hehe.. this Cupid series is so much fun.. can't wait for the next one..


Thanks so much dearie.. :))..
Edited by A-Musing-Me - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Pls update the next part soon. Nice job.

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