Jealousy-race & rage *Part 12* @pg 85 *29/10*

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smileyallora

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Shanaya (shona)

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Posted: 8 years ago

Really nice Smiley. ... continue please i wanna know their journey 😳

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Trupti11

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Posted: 8 years ago

Amazing 😃
Plzzz continue soon

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love_never_dies

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Posted: 8 years ago

This is great .

You should continue.. soon 😉

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Apoorva

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Posted: 8 years ago

That was really awesome..😃

Shivaay visiting her 3 times in four days since she left lol someone's can't stay away from her Haan ;) loved the chand bit ..he exchanged that to see his chaand! Awww.. 😳

then him losing his control before his family lol 😆

Oh my he didn't let her even reach the interview venue 😲 by using such tactics.. wow 👏😆

Loved Shivaay Shakti convo too :) What is AC doing at Oberoi office :O Shivaay is gonna misunderstand or get mad at her. He is so gonna get jealous bring it on.😆

I loved everything about this part. really good job at writing. :)

I would love to read pre marriage n pre Daksh story on Shivika. :D

You should definitely continue this. 😊

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Rohit Saxena

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Posted: 8 years ago

yes, do continue, look gud.

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Adithi555

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Posted: 8 years ago

Very nice start ..plz continue😳

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Ultimatewinnerr

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Posted: 8 years ago

Ofcourse you should continue, please continue😳

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rainbowveins

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wow this is awesome!I love reading about pre-marriage Shivika where things progress much differently than they have in the show,and this fic of yours is absolutely perfect!Do update soon :) And pm me if possible😊