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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: angeldream14

Geet is not his sister

n i think yash n sam knows that
sam is truly crazy



What she knows will b revealed soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

Nice updates dear

Loved it!!
Sam is one hell irritating and crazy girl
She is bit different and geet surely accepts the fact that maan was right
Glad that geet stood up thyself to save her self-respect and dignity
Hope naina would have understood that never to judge a book by it's cover
Sam just abducted dev to spend time with maaneet and to have fun!!
Yash and Sam's talk always have a deep meaning to their simpler words and they seems to know lot more than they show
Maaneet parents fiasco is a big time mess and fishy too
Dev witnessed maaneet sleeping together
NYC precap!!
Lookslike after witnessing maaneet together dev would turn possessive for Geet
Thanks for the double update
Will be waiting for the next update
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Naina got her lesson so now Geet wont be bothered by her

Everything will b out after d next two updates


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: priyasree


Amazing, lovely n wonderful update





Thank u fr liking this story😃


And about Maaneet's behavior everything will be revealed very soon 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SAI92

I like the way u show their relationship grows btw Maan & Geet, Maan & Yash






I'm glad you are liking it

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: uluvmg

Wonderful double updates...geet also came to know maan was right about sameer'a foolishness... sameera asked geet reason for not calling him bhai & loved the response from maan... yash also irritated by sam's childish behavior..thanks sameera's talking in sleep which made maaneet slept together & dev witnessed it... interesting precap...excited for next...thanks for pm...!!






Hehe yup she will unknowingly bring them closer


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

AWESOME UPDATES BUDDY. GOOD GOING



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Part 10








"Words cut deeper than knife"



Maan heard the sound of his room's doorbell and got up to open the door .Geet had woken up early and had just moved and sat near the bed. "Geet why are you on the floor did you fall off your bed , did you have any nightmare", He asked looking at her sitting on the floor. "Umm...yeah , I fell from the bed , I will get going to my room now", She said collecting her stuff to leave. Why did I sleep on the floor', She thought to herself. "Who is it", Maan said opening the door. "Oh Dev it's you", Maan smiled.






"Ah Maan bhai , Yash bhai asked me to wake you up for your meeting", Dev said . "Oh meeting , what is time now, crap , I have to hurry now", He said rushing in . Geet watched as he got ready and she went to her room. My body is aching the floor was hard, but why did I sleep there. I'm getting a strange feeling like I know I'm doing something wrong ...even after knowing it..', She thought to herself.



Dev was confused, Well may be I'm thinking too much , I don't know about siblings, since I don't have any'. He bumped into Sameera, "So did you get to spend time with Geet", She asked . "She must have gone to you last night, right". "Umm...no she went to Maan bhai's room", Dev said.



"Dev don't you think its weird", Sameera tried to make him think otherwise.Dev smiled, "No Sameera I don't think so , in fact it was good she went to Maan bhai , we are not married so it would have looked indecent and they are siblings". Sameera looked at his face , though he said that but he was easy to read , the boy looked unsure himself. "Okay leave that , let us all go enjoy the beach",She smiled. Everyone went to the beach after having their breakfast except Maan who said he would join them later. "Dev, you are a good swimmer right, then why not go and enjoy", Geet asked . "I...I don't actually like the beach", He said. "Then why did you join us , I could have stayed with you at the hotel", Geet said. "Umm...no , its fine I like being with you here too", He said making Geet smile. "Sorry, I'm late", Maan rushed huffing with his surfing board. "Umm, Maan do you know how to surf", Geet asked. "Sure he does Geet, he knows every sport", Sameera said hugging him making Geet a little uneasy."Geet if you want to join them then go ahead",Dev said after a while.



"Ah no Dev , I'm fine here", Geet said . Just then they heard girls squealing . They looked up to see Maan riding the waves , "Wow , I didn't know he could do that", Geet said. "Maan bhai is amazing Geet", Dev said. She didn't answer but was gawking at the perfection with which Maan surfed.He came to the sure and was hugged again by Sameera, "Why can't she just him alone for once". Geet was annoyed by Sameera not knowing why.





Dev was a little offended by that. "Geet are you jealous of Sameera", He asked out of the blue making her look at him. "I'm not getting what you are saying", She said. "I mean do you think she will take your brother away from you as you like him too", Dev said not thinking the impact this sentence of his made on Geet. "I never thought you were so disgusting Dev, have you lost it , how can you think like that and here I thought you loved me and I loved you. You have hurt me by saying this", Geet spoke getting up from there and running back to the hotel.






Dev cursed himself for thinking on Sameera's words and hurting the one he loved. He ran behind her . Maan watched the heated exchange of words though he could not hear what they spoke but seeing Geet hurt he was thinking of asking Dev but Sameera stopped him. "Let both of them sort out whatever it is. It's not very wise for you to interfere in their relation", She advised making Maan to nod as he thought she was right.



Dev couldn't get through Geet and regretted his words. The diner was a quiet affair much to the distaste of Sameera who initiated a conversation, "Why is everyone so silent. Well what about tomorrow"."Tomorrow we are going back", Maan said sternly. "But Maan...", Sameera tried but was interrupted by him, "No ifs and buts now Sameera , we have enough of your childish whims . Don't you think Dev's parents might be worried . The boy is a nice person but that don't mean you take advantage of that,"He spoke rudely. "You are boring Maan , what about you lovebirds", Sameera asked the duo . "Umm... I think Maan bhai is right , my parents will be back by evening tomorrow and we still have our homework to do", Dev said.



"Alright, fine then I'm going to drink and enjoy my last evening alone", Sameera spoke taking another glass of the wine. "Sameera, what the hell , you can't handle alcohol, leave it", Yash said and both him and Maan tried to make her stop but she was adamant and then passed out after the second glass only. "I will carry her", Maan said . "No, I will handle her", Yash spoke but Maan didn't let him. "Yash you already had a hard day today as you had meetings after the beach, so you go and rest I will take care of her". He carried Sameera to her room. "Maan I can help", Geet said. "No Geet you go and sleep in my room , I will take care of her , she gets a little out of control when drunk we have handled her before and I will do that now , don't worry dear", Maan said patting her cheeks.




Geet nodded and went to the other room. Maan looked at Sameera and sighed and went on the couch to sleep. "You will never change, why are you always such a little troublemaker", He thought looking at her. Geet saw Dev taking laps from her balcony and went down towards the pool. "You can swim so well", She said. "Umm...I was a little worried as I had to take my glasses off when going for a swim", He said. "So...", Geet asked not getting the logic. "You see ...I m unable to see very nicely without my glasses", He told her nervously making her smile. "Its alright. I feel you look good in every way", She said. "Thank you Geet, I am really sorry for the afternoon, I did not mean to hurt you . I don't know what got into me", He confessed. "Dev, you should understand one thing, I accepted you because I truly liked you", She smiled. "Geet I am sorry", Dev apologized. She nodded in negative, "Its okay Dev, we are both at fault with time we will understand each other better", She smiled. Dev was overwhelmed by her reply, he couldn't help but thank God for giving him such a person who loved him as he loved her with such a pure and forgiving heart. He kissed her for the first time and Geet reciprocated his feelings, not wanting to hurt him anymore. Both were happy and the next day was the day of their return .



The next morning everyone packed and headed back. Yash dropped Dev first and apologized again for his sister's childish behavior. He bid bye to Geet and asked her to call him once she got back to which she nodded shyly. Yash headed for Maan's house and dropped them. "Hey, what about me", Sameera tried to interfere to which Yash glared her, "You little miss need a lesson and for that you are going to be staying in your own house with me". "But...", Sameera tried again. "No ifs and buts , we are leaving", He said bidding bye to his friend who breathed a sigh of relief. "Let's go Geet, freshen up and we will have diner together alright", He smiled patting her head lovingly. "Umm...Maan," Geet called. "What is it dear, do you need something", He asked. "I ...I need a mobile", She asked hesitatingly thinking he will refuse. To her surprise he nodded and said, "Alright tomorrow after work we will go to get it, now let's go", He smiled. Geet just looked on to his retreating back, he really cared about her every need , he did not for once asked why she needed it and somehow it did hurt a little but she did not why. Maan on the other hand knew she wanted it to contact Dev he could see a new glow to them after the trip and concluded he should not be interfering in her private life and somehow he has built up a trust for Dev.



Please scroll down for part 11



Edited by pixelflower620 - 8 years ago
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Part 11








"Your eyes speak the truth when everything else is a lie"



Geet as promised call Dev after her diner, to which he answered. "I am really sorry Geet, I did not even consider your feelings", He said thinking about his act but Geet again did not let him. "Its okay Dev , we are dating and love each other right". "Thank you Geet, I don't know how much to thank God for sending an angel like you for me", He said feeling really happy. "I'm lucky to have you to Dev", She smiled. They talked for a while about their homework and also about Geet getting a new mobile. Maan felt happy watching Geet smile. He will work harder for her, he decided. Next day as promised, Geet waited for Maan outside a mobile shop. She was looking around when she saw the same watch Maan lent her. "This is the same brand , let me check the price", She said looking at the price tag and was shocked to read the amount. "5 lacs. OMG , how did he get this costly watch and why did he gave it to me", She was shocked. She looked around to see college students having fun. This made her think, Maan, he was so young too and is working hard at such a young age when he should be enjoying with friends. Her thoughts broke when she saw the ladies around her turn their heads and when she followed their gaze she saw they were gawking at Maan. He found her and rushed up to her. "I am sorry did you wait long,"He asked to which she nodded in negative.



"Come on let's get you a good mobile", He said. Geet looked through the phones and asked for the latest model. Incidentally both her and Maan chose the same model for themselves. "Maan you can get another phone it is the latest model and I want this", She said. "Geet you are just a student , I am working so I need a phone with latest features", He argued. The salesgirl saw them and said, "Sir, you don't need to argue with your girlfriend, you can have this one here , it is the same and it will convenient for both of you". Geet felt something strange but Maan cleared the air, "We are not lovers but family , thank you for this one. We will take both of them", He smiled. "Oh I'm sorry Sir , I will pack these", She said embarrassed at her assumption . They took their mobiles and bought the same sim cards for their phones for the convenience. Maan and Geet sat on a bench overlooking a wide area. "Geet call on my mobile then I can save your number", Maan said. "Okay", Saying this she called his number, to which he answered. "Oh, wait let me go a little far. It looks strange having a conversation through phone when we are sitting next to each other", Geet said.



She went a little far and the area overlooked the city. "Hello", She called again to which Maan answered. "You know Maan I never thought , you would agree for getting me a mobile this easily", She said over the phone facing her back to him . "Why would you think so", She heard his voice through the phone. "Umm, you know you would have said, that I won't study and will always call Dev and all", She smiled. "It is the first time you came to me for something, how could I have refused you. I will work hard to get you whatever you want", He said through the phone. "Oh , then you should be careful before you say that , I might ask something big the next time", She teased. "I will work harder", Came his reply. "Then how about I ask you to buy all the buildings within my vision right now", She poked thinking he is joking. "I will work harder, for you , I will work my hardest, it is the sole purpose of my life", His reply shocked her hearing the gravity in his voice she turned around to look at him only to see him looking at her.








His eyes held an unknown emotion which she wasn't able to decipher.








She felt that strange feeling again, this time emanating from him as well but before she could ask, she heard Sameera running up to him hugging him. "Happy Birthday Maan", She said hugging him tightly. Geet was shocked at this piece of information. "Thank you Sameera", He smiled. "You did not tell me it was your birthday", Geet murmured. "Its okay dear no need to worry about it", Maan spoke not wanting to hurt her but unknowingly it did hurt her. "Oh Maan, let's go I have made preparations", Sameera said dragging him away. "Geet, I will be back by evening , don't worry", Maan said.




Geet looked upon the retreating duo , she felt hurt not knowing his birthday. She went to a bakery, but then decided she might try baking a cake at home. She went back and downloaded a recipe. She tried but failed . After several attempts she finally baked the cake and waited for Maan. Sameera on the other hand took him to a lavished hotel. "Did you like the decorations Maan . I did it for you", She asked. "They are good, thank you Sameera", He smiled. They had their diner but Sameera got a little drunk again and Maan had to take her to her hotel room, not trusting anyone else with her safety as he knew her since childhood knowing how stupid she can get once drunk.



Just as he was about to leave she pulled him and hugged him, "Maan, I love you", She said. "Sameera, your jokes are going far enough , come one now leave me", He said trying to gently ease her arms around him. She was not ready to leave him, he heard his phone ringing and tried to get it but she disconnected the call. It ranged again and Maan took it only to see the caller being Geet. "Don't pick it up", She said. "Stop it Sameera, what has gotten into you. She must be worried", He said trying to get her off and did manage to get himself free but the call ended. "Did you never love me Maan", She asked knowing the answer very well.



Maan sighed, "Sameera we have been through this". "Why, why can't you look at me the way you look at her", She said getting his attention. "What do you mean", He asked. "You know very well Maan,she may be a kid not to understand but I am not, why are you so concerned about her when ..", Before she could complete he was enraged and held her arms tightly. "Not a word Sameera, not a word against her", He said enraged but calmed down a little when he saw her tears.






He tried to wipe her tears but she stopped him. "If I am not important to you Maan, why do you bother about my tears. Why can't we just return to our old lifestyles when there was only us, why", She asked. "Sameera, you are my precious friend. You know, I thought if everything was fine with her if she was happy , I might return to uncle and help him like he wanted me to, but after meeting her seeing what she has been through, I can't leave her, she is the most important person to me, has always been. I worked hard just for her, for a moment I don't even know what I will do if she ever said she don't need me , what purpose my life will have. I am sorry but I can't return to you", He said. "Maan please can you stay here , please I beg of you. Think of this as a favor you will be doing me", She pleaded. Maan nodded. The whole night he stood awake watching her sleep, "Why won't you understand Sameera, we never belonged to one another. You are a nice person even after all your selfishness I know there is a good heart in you, why don't you let that out, why do you want to hurt her and yourself".



Geet waited for him all night but he never returned, she was emotionally upset and slept due to tiredness. Maan came home early in the morning to see her sleeping uncovered in the living room. She woke up to the sound of the door opening. She was feeling a little dizzy and felt herself burning. She did not say anything and went to the cabinet. "Geet do you need something", Maan asked her watching her searching the cabinets for something . When she did not answer, he went up to her and touched her arm. "Don't touch me", She mumbled. "What are you saying Geet, why are you taking the first aid box, you are burning. Since when have you been ill", He asked concerned, but she pushed him . "I said don't touch me. Why would you care if I am dead or suffering just go back to wherever you came from, I don't need you even if I die. You don't care for me anyway", She yelled. "Why do you think so Geet", Maan asked stunned with her behavior. "I said just go aw...", She couldn't even complete when she fainted due to high temperature. Maan patted her , "Geet ...Geet, please wake up. I promise I will never leave you again, please wake up",He cried.



He carried her to the nearest clinic, calling for the doctor, a nurse came out and told him he has to wait till 9 so the clinic opens. "What about her, don't you see she has fainted call the doctor now", He said. The nurse was annoyed at the young man's behavior but she called the doctor as he was in no mood to go. The doctor came and prescribed him some medications. "What , only this but what about injections or something", He said still not satisfied. "She is just running a little temperature she fainted due to dehydration we have given her the treatment for that , you can take her home and give her something to eat before you give her this medications", She said. Maan nodded reluctantly and carried her back. He laid her down in the living room. After some time Geet opened her eyes to see Maan sitting next to her. "Are you alright now", He asked caressing her heard. She turned her face to the other side, "I am fine , you can go now . I should anyway get used to it as you will be married in a few years and then you won't have time for me . It is better I get used to it". Maan held her hand, "I will never marry anyone until you get settled"."But you left me ...you never thought, I waited for you even baked a cake", She whimpered. "I had the cake dear, thank you and remember I will always be here for you .I'm sorry about last night but trust me it won't happen again now sleep a little I am here", He said softly caressing her head and she slept knowing she is not alone, while Maan watched her sleep , praying this life of theirs never end unknown to him that this won't last long.



Precap - The most awaited part...Revelations ....it will be on blog withpassword provided only to those who have been with this story so if you want the password still wanting to continue with it then please comment below...sorry if I'm sounding mean or rude but I really need to know how many people have actually read it.






Thank you for all your support on this story, I'm really grateful😃😃😃...plese do give your honest reviews on these two parts😃😃😃

Edited by pixelflower620 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome parts ..
Everytime I listen to Maan and Yash's talks I feel that there is something hidden and maybe Geet is not Maan's real sister ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 10...
Nice part

Sam is spoiling dev mind...why she interferes in dev,geet matter when she asked maan fir not to...
Maan handled a drunk sam and samhuggging maan was disturbing geet...
Dev words did hurt her...they had a fight..
Patch up with a kiss...
KISSS!!??DOC...dev kissed geeetttr... grrr...
Maan was ok with dev,geet relation!!?
I am confused!!!??

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