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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

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meetaa_13

@meetaa_13

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Can't thank you enough for writing it for me Harshada !! 🤗 U are such a sweetheart <3

I absolutely loved this one !! Such a beautifully written scene with so many emotions and simplicity...hats off 👏 The sadist in me loved to see him in pain and his realisation..IPKND dialog was cherry on the cake !!it was so Shivay...I hope to see this in the show one day 😳

Thank you so much !!

Meeta

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rarefan

@rarefan

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Posted: 8 years ago

U did quite a justice to SSO.

Nice one

Maddy

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Krishi

@Black_Maniac

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Posted: 8 years ago

This was another beautiful piece Harshu 🤗

I don't know... It was like this shimmery, happiness-spreading kind of read. It filled me with warmth.

You made it simple, plaintive but beautiful. The words seemed fitting, and assuring as well.

I honestly loved it ❤️

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Aashti

@Illuminati07

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

Harshada

I really loved this OS..I was in tears reading this

Thank you for this..

N yea d ipkknd line.. how can anyone forget that epic sentence..

It fits perfectly here

I wish such scene was there yesterday but...

Your OS more than made up for it

Thank you

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LAKSHMI KRISHNA

@lakshmi32

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Posted: 8 years ago

i want to say this much only :

THIS STORY TOUCHED MY HEART ❤️❤️

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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

Oh it was utterly beautiful! I still have tears in my eyes! Loved it!!

-Sanu

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Nohsin10

@Nohsin10

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Wow it's a beautiful os👏

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: meetaa_13
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Take your time dear. Do not rush.
I hope it will be a nice read for you.

Love
- Harshada

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Jinan

@Tashfee

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Posted: 8 years ago

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OH MY GAWWWD! 😭

This was so damn, beautiful! ❤️

Like, I cant even express my feelings right now...

I know how much I longed to see him like that... tadapta hua Billu.

Im a sadist, I know. 😈😆

But, the way you wrote about his feelings after seeing her getting shot,

Then recalling all those old moments he spent with her,

And how he realized that this was love, the feeling, the dard, was love! ❤️

I loved how the tiny scene from yesterday's episode just fitted in here.

Her answer to why she took the bullet on herself was the same, but well, he was not the cute wala Billu ji, who tried to avoid talking about it by making her drink water. 😆

He confessed... didn't he? Oh my God, yeah he did! ❤️

Ahh! I loved how the IPKKND dialogue was placed in there.

This is my favorite one from you, maybe bcz Im overly obsessed with these two right now,😆 but your writing is gorgeous! 🤗

Edited by Jinan. - 8 years ago