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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: aarthi525
superb as always

Thank you Aarthi:-)

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Shikha Singhania

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Really nice Harshada!

Loved it to the core!!

The way you described Shivaay's feelings and his interpersonal conflicts was indeed appreciable!!

Keep it up!

-Shikha

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shonagudia

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

such a beautiful piece. Loaded with emotions and what not .
Thank you for writing this for us as a fiction as it didn't happen in show .Honestly i would have not liked it in the show as much i liked it here. But yeah wanted to see his confrontation with doctor atleast like this ..
Shivaya's anger behind the pain , his worry and fear to lose her forever..

And those lines how can i ever forget. the stary nights and honest confession. that one line made us forgive the Hero of anything ..😆
Perfect here too.. 👏

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AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

awww...that's only coming from my heart

it is an awesome os

the ipkknd dialogue..it increased the charm of this os❤️❤️❤️

how can someone doesn't remember the epic dialogue of ipkknd...being a crazy fan of arshi...I can't control my happiness...its very well go with this scene 🤗usually arshi fans don't tolerate the same scenes or dialogue gets used some where but I think we are developing the same love towards shivika also

The realization and confession was surperb...

you portrayed it very well harshu

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: meetaa_13
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Can't thank you enough for writing it for me Harshada !! 🤗 U are such a sweetheart <3

I absolutely loved this one !! Such a beautifully written scene with so many emotions and simplicity...hats off 👏 The sadist in me loved to see him in pain and his realisation..IPKND dialog was cherry on the cake !!it was so Shivay...I hope to see this in the show one day 😳

Thank you so much !!

Meeta

Hey Meeta🤗

I have already said, it was my pleasure dear.😳

Thank you so much. I am relieved now, that you liked it.

I honestly was too anxious to post this.

Ah, I am not a sadist A big no. I hate to see others in pain. And that is the one reason, my all fictional characters are perfect. I don't like them to be flawed.

But lately, I write angst

IPKKND dialogue😳 Undoubtedly it is the best. Like every scene in the IPKKND is amazing.

I repeat, it was a pleasure writing something for you, who have been such a beautiful person in writing feedbacks on my stories.

love

-Harshada

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: rarefan
U did quite a justice to SSO.
Nice one

Maddy

I am glad if I did.

Thank you.

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac
This was another beautiful piece Harshu 🤗
I don't know... It was like this shimmery, happiness-spreading kind of read. It filled me with warmth.
You made it simple, plaintive but beautiful. The words seemed fitting, and assuring as well.

I honestly loved it ❤️

Thank you so much Krishi🤗

Glad you liked it.

Love

-Harshada

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Illuminati07
Harshada
I really loved this OS..I was in tears reading this
Thank you for this..
N yea d ipkknd line.. how can anyone forget that epic sentence..
It fits perfectly here
I wish such scene was there yesterday but...
Your OS more than made up for it
Thank you

Ashti, I am glad to have you on this thread.

Thank you so much dear.

Oh did I leave you in tears? I am so sorry for that. But at the same time, I am so happy that you could actually feel it enough that it made you somewhat teary😊

About IPKKND line, 😳 Ah, that sounds beautiful, doesn't that? IPKKND has given not only a epic pair but epic scenes and dialogues, I would say,

I am glad it didn't come out weird way.

@Bold above, Now I think it was worth writing this one.

Thank you.

Love

-Harshada