Was It Because I Am Your Responsibility? - OS [On Track] Check Pg 12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: itzanya32

Hey Harshu! Dear you can call me anything you like😳 and really sorry for being late😛
My life is a complete mess nowadays Itna kaam rehta hai na ki kya bataonBut anyways I won't tell much as you know this will continue the whole life😆

Now coming to the update it was as usual fabulous 👏👏 It was so piognant and full of emotions.Was really giving me an emotional feel😆 but the last part took my heart away😳

"Was it because I was your responsibility?"

"Because I love you.."----- Love this part!❤️ It was heart whelming and the last dialogue was chery on top of the cake! It suit so perfectly at that spot!

Do wite more Dear.

Love you,
Anya😳

Anu🤗 Very very sorry for this late reply I am awfully busy these days.

Oh I can so relate to you when it comes to hectic life😆

Thank you so much Annu...

I am glad you liked it dear...

I was so unsure about introducing that part. But now, relieved that you all liked it.

Me? On track? No😆

Loads of love

-Harshada

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse
She chose shivaay over herself...yeah
That's anikaa...selfless love for shivaay...
And last dialogue of shivaay maar hi diya yaar...
I love all shayaries and love this os...I know I know I'm too late to comment but kya karu main late latif hu beastie...Pata nahi kyu ek ajeeb si khushi milti hai jab bhi tumhari stories padhati hu...hey main yaad to hun naa tumhe...???

This once for my darling harshu...

Mere bagair mukammal hai...daastaa teri...,
Tere bagair mukammal main ho nahi sakti...!!!

(Mukammal means unblemished)

Khushi😳😳

Thank you so much...

I am glad you enjoyed reading...

NO No😆 Thats the lyrics of the song dearie, not any shayries

Absolutely don't bother about being late. Look at me, how late I am in replying you...

😡 Tumko nahi to aur kisko yaad karungi, huh?

BUt I miss you so much these days. I just wish to get free soon so that I can interact with you like before.

Absolutely beautiful

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Mystery1234
Beautiful OS Harshu dear..
You should write more often on current track..
The way you expressed the emotions...
Everything was Awesome
Loved it
Thanks for the pm😊

Thanks a lot Harshita😳

I dont think its a good idea though😆 but I will try.

I am glad you liked it😊

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sharmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Harshu...
This was beautifully written..
I had tears in my eyes as i read this shot.
Very well written nd Shivaays realozation was beautifully put in.
I loved it how he confessed widout any hesitation..😉. I am serious.
Awesome one!

Love Sharmi.

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Hi dearies🤗

Firstly a big thank you for appreciating this shot so much. I mean, I actually wasn't expecting this kind of response over this.

Now, I think many of you thought the lines I used in this shot, were of any Shayries... and even I forgot to clarify.

That isn't any Shayri or anything of that sort.

They are the lyrics of a song "Mujhko Ye Zindagi, Lagti Hai Ajanabee"... A very beautiful song. I am posting the video below. Check out if interested and haven't heard.😳

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TfsulmHgc8A[/YOUTUBE]

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: lucky_princess
Harshu...
This was beautifully written..
I had tears in my eyes as i read this shot.
Very well written nd Shivaays realozation was beautifully put in.
I loved it how he confessed widout any hesitation..😉. I am serious.
Awesome one!

Love Sharmi.

Thank you so much Sharmi.

Glad you liked it...

Love

-Harshada