Was It Because I Am Your Responsibility? - OS [On Track] Check Pg 12 - Page 3

Originally posted by: Jinan.

OH MY GAWWWD! 😭

This was so damn, beautiful! ❤️

Like, I cant even express my feelings right now...

I know how much I longed to see him like that... tadapta hua Billu.

Im a sadist, I know. 😈😆

But, the way you wrote about his feelings after seeing her getting shot,

Then recalling all those old moments he spent with her,

And how he realized that this was love, the feeling, the dard, was love! ❤️

I loved how the tiny scene from yesterday's episode just fitted in here.

Her answer to why she took the bullet on herself was the same, but well, he was not the cute wala Billu ji, who tried to avoid talking about it by making her drink water. 😆

He confessed... didn't he? Oh my God, yeah he did! ❤️

Ahh! I loved how the IPKKND dialogue was placed in there.

This is my favorite one from you, maybe bcz Im overly obsessed with these two right now,😆 but your writing is gorgeous! 🤗

Originally posted by: Nimik

Really nice Harshada!

Loved it to the core!!

The way you described Shivaay's feelings and his interpersonal conflicts was indeed appreciable!!

Keep it up!

-Shikha

Originally posted by: shonagudia

such a beautiful piece. Loaded with emotions and what not .
Thank you for writing this for us as a fiction as it didn't happen in show .Honestly i would have not liked it in the show as much i liked it here. But yeah wanted to see his confrontation with doctor atleast like this ..
Shivaya's anger behind the pain , his worry and fear to lose her forever..

And those lines how can i ever forget. the stary nights and honest confession. that one line made us forgive the Hero of anything ..😆
Perfect here too.. 👏

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awww...that's only coming from my heart

it is an awesome os

the ipkknd dialogue..it increased the charm of this os❤️❤️❤️

how can someone doesn't remember the epic dialogue of ipkknd...being a crazy fan of arshi...I can't control my happiness...its very well go with this scene 🤗usually arshi fans don't tolerate the same scenes or dialogue gets used some where but I think we are developing the same love towards shivika also

The realization and confession was surperb...

you portrayed it very well harshu

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

Hey Jinu, my dear🤗🤗

Such a pleasant surprise to have you here😳

Thanks a ton dearest. I am glad you enjoyed reading this one.

Oh Jinu, I am not a sadist A big big no. Neither I am an angst person nor do I like to let my characters suffer. But lately, I have been doing that only.

Oh that is just so sweet and kind of you.

Haha, You know right I am an admirer of sweet and cute things more than anything else, but somewhat, I didn't like it much in episode. May be because the expectations was too raised up or I don't know.

But intensity is equally beautiful, no?

Yes he did, finally ❤️

IPKKND I just remembered that dialogue so included.

Ahan, you made my day.. oops night... actually whole week😆

Loads of love + Hugs

-Harshada