Was It Because I Am Your Responsibility? - OS [On Track] Check Pg 12 - Page 5

I visited IF after a long time & d 1st thing I found is this...Harshada u r magical...pure magic...my heart has swelled in joy too... It's amazing...so lovely...such a beautiful way to express Shivaay's feelings...pain,grief, inner battle...loved it errr... 👏

Originally posted by: crazy-pri

I visited IF after a long time & d 1st thing I found is this...Harshada u r magical...pure magic...my heart has swelled in joy too... It's amazing...so lovely...such a beautiful way to express Shivaay's feelings...pain,grief, inner battle...loved it errr... 👏

Hey dear, its indeed have been so long to have seen you. Hope all is well in your personal life.

Ah you are the sweetest my dear.
Thank you very much.
Glad you liked it.

Loads of love
- Harshada

Originally posted by: Jinan.

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Surprise?😆 Heh, I was gonna read ur other story too, but this one just popped up when I visited the forum so... 😛uparse I was looking for something on the current track anyways.😆</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I do admire sweet and cute stories, but I love angst too! Actually, I dont mind the genre if I can relate to the characters, and that is what I always struggle to do.😆</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Expectations...🥱 I dont even want to talk about those. Im not reading any spoilers from now on, khamokha itna kuch, and at the end what we get is totally different from what we expected.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">But I did find him cute, even though he acted cuter in the past, like, when she got a little cut on her hand. He was the cutest that day. </font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Made your day? How? You were the one who did!🤗🤗</font>

I am glad it was a nice read for you dear.

You of course... made my day.

Love
- Harshada

Pure perfection!
Such a soulful OS, it was.
You have done a marvellous job.
Oh the words, the song and the description - Gorgeous.
I could literally visualize it and it moved me like anything.

No words would be enough to praise this kind of writing.

Just beyond great.

Originally posted by: Rohini..

Pure perfection!
Such a soulful OS, it was.
You have done a marvellous job.
Oh the words, the song and the description - Gorgeous.
I could literally visualize it and it moved me like anything.

No words would be enough to praise this kind of writing.

Just beyond great.

Hello Rohini,
Thank you so much for the lovely words in appreciation of this OS dear.
Glad you liked it:-)

Love
- Harshada

So poignant. So emotional. So heart touching.

Great...Great Job Harshada.

I think its high time that you should stop thinking that you arent good enough when it comes to writing on track because you just nailed it with this...

Originally posted by: WriterAtHeart

So poignant. So emotional. So heart touching.

Great...Great Job Harshada.

I think its high time that you should stop thinking that you arent good enough when it comes to writing on track because you just nailed it with this...

Thank you so much Ani:-)
Glad you liked it.

How sweet of you!!

Love
- Harshada

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

Hey Meeta🤗

I have already said, it was my pleasure dear.😳

Thank you so much. I am relieved now, that you liked it.

I honestly was too anxious to post this.

Ah, I am not a sadistA big no. I hate to see others in pain. And that is the one reason, my all fictional characters are perfect. I don't like them to be flawed.

But lately, I write angst

IPKKND dialogue😳Undoubtedly it is the best. Like every scene in the IPKKND is amazing.

I repeat, it was a pleasure writing something for you, who have been such a beautiful person in writing feedbacks on my stories.

love

-Harshada

I know yaar but the Shivay in the show is not perfect..i love him despite of his flaws but for once i wanted him to realize what Anika means to him ..what if he loses her to death..wanted him to feel sorry for what he did ..what u wrote was all that I wanted from CVs but i knew they will disappoint me and they DID

Thank you once again for this...you write beautifully and shud write ontrack as well Harshada 😊

Originally posted by: meetaa_13

I know yaar but the Shivay in the show is not perfect..i love him despite of his flaws but for once i wanted him to realize what Anika means to him ..what if he loses her to death..wanted him to feel sorry for what he did ..what u wrote was all that I wanted from CVs but i knew they will disappoint me and they DID

Thank you once again for this...you write beautifully and shud write ontrack as well Harshada 😊

I was talking about characters in fan fictions dear.
But in any way, I love perfect characters, because
they do not exist in reality so imagination is the only way to come across them.

You are most welcome Meeta:-)

Woah ... Me? And ontrack? It wont come out good dear.

Love
- Harshada

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

I was talking about characters in fan fictions dear.
But in any way, I love perfect characters, because
they do not exist in reality so imagination is the only way to come across them.

You are most welcome Meeta:-)

Woah ... Me? And ontrack? It wont come out good dear.

Love
- Harshada

Yes ur characters are perfect and that's the beauty of ur stories !!
As much as i wanted to see Shivay cry he made me cry along ! U have written this on track OS to perfection dear 👏 Trust me u will do wonders with on track shots as well !

Much love to you
Meeta