*~Pyar bhi hova~*FF(First update)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi guys....I have started watching Salaam Zindagi since the first week it started...I kinda like writing stories so i decided to type one for this show...Hope u like it...

The scene starts from a wearing a police uniform....She stood in front of her mom and salutated..

M mom-Manya ajj tera phela mission hai ruk mai dahi sukar lathi hoon sub hota hai...

Manya nodded while her mom went to the kitchen to get it....She walked upto her Dadu who was sitting on a chair looking where ever...Manya knelt in front of him and tears rolled down her cheek.

M-Dadu dhekay ajj mera phela mission hai....Appkay liyeah mainay dance chorkay ek police officer bunhi hoon kya app muchje assirvaad nahi daygay...

Her Dadu looked at her...He tryed lifting his hand to put it on her head and he was successful...Manya smiled...

M-Thanx dadu ub mai yeah case zarooror solve kurooon gi....

Just then her mom came out of the kitchen with a bowl of yougurt....Manya stood up and her mom put mouth full spoon in her mouth...Manya touched her feet for blessing...Suddenly her cell phone rang...She recived her call...

M-Hello...Oh haan mai abhi niakl rahi hoon.....Ok bhar hona thik i'll be there...

M-Maa muchje ub chulna hoga...Bye...

Saying that Manya left the house outside her house waited a police car a consatable opened the door for her and she sat inside the front seat beside the drivers seat...The consatable also sat abck into the car on the drivers seat and started the engine...

M-Buki sub station say millay gay...

The guys answered ji mam..Manya felt her shooken by someone...She looked up at who was shaking her it was Sanju...

Sanju-Ohay Manya ji kithay koh gahi...Yeah humari dance class hai dreaming class nahi...Or toh kya yaha konay mai beth kur daydream kur rahi rehearsal kay beech mai...Thats when Manya looked around she was sitting in her rehearsal room for her dance compentition the next day..She stood up and stared at herself wearing a pink salwaar kameez and Sanju also wearing a browm salwaar kameez with her hair out...(note:Sanju is a total girly girl...)

M-Oh sorry mai woh police...I mean kuch nahi....Mai nahi kur sukthi yeah compentition muche appnay dadu ka sapna pura kurna hai...

Sanju was shocked of what Manya had just said...

Sanju-Tera mutlub toh police officer buna chathi hai...Dhek yaar mai kya karoon gi...Or hum dono koh sirf or sirf dance pasand hai or kuch nahi...Yeah alug hai kay toh acha gathi bhi hai...

M-Lekin iss waqt mere dadu mere sub kuch hain...

Sanju-Lekin teray us crush ka kya hoga...Woh ....

Manya had no answer for that she just picked up her purse from the ground and walked to the exit....

Precap:Manya's crush is talking to her...😃

Hope u liked it plz do comment...😊

Ayesha

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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was good can't wait 4 the next 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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cant wait to read more
its really interesting
omg maanya's crush id aakash????? 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: k_luv

so wens the nxt update?!?

Thanx a ton...I'll surely update today...😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanya15

That was good can't wait 4 the next 😃

Thanx a lot...Sure i'll continue...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanx a ton...😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanx a sonali ji...U also watch SZ...😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: **Rekha**

excellent start 👏 👏

Thank you soooo much...😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: rainshine_11

cant wait to read more
its really interesting
omg maanya's crush id aakash????? 😳

Oh thank you soo much...Sure will update...Ya good guess..😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Yes Ayeshaji, I also watch this show! 😉

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