Dear Krishi🤗I honestly, am not much a Priyanka fan. I actually am not a fan of anyone from IB. Though I like characters, love their performances at times but fan? That's a big word. There have been very few stories on screen and characters countable on fingers, I have fallen in love with.
I gave this story a read, just by seeing this is yours❤️ and it was worth doing👏
This is an amazing piece of write-up. I completely cherish the way you have portrayed Priyanka here. It was very beautiful, to see a strong side of Priyanka.
The initial paragraphs, stating the flashbacks about how strong her family have been... especially her brothers, the way they have protected her always were described so well. That made a real good start to your story.
Rudra cracked me up with his comment for Kamini😆 His character is such a fun to watch and read, most of the times.
My most favorites lines from this would have to be the Priyanka's starting lines to the press people. ... "Press conference maine call ki hai. How he is supposed to answer any questions? Can you please wait for me to go ahead with what I want to?" These lines stood out for me👏 That just came out, so strong. I loved them❤️
And then, the final face off with the hidden truths, yet the main one is still to get out of the curtains.
Everything was beautiful.
Much Love
-Harshada
Edited by LoveToWrite - 8 years ago
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