Priyanka TS - Waylaying The Demons Inside (Completed Page 1) 13/4/2017

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

go for it priyanka

totally loved her courage

totally worth it

please do continue

bye sumi

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

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+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Dear Krishi🤗

I honestly, am not much a Priyanka fan. I actually am not a fan of anyone from IB. Though I like characters, love their performances at times but fan? That's a big word. There have been very few stories on screen and characters countable on fingers, I have fallen in love with.

I gave this story a read, just by seeing this is yours❤️ and it was worth doing👏

This is an amazing piece of write-up. I completely cherish the way you have portrayed Priyanka here. It was very beautiful, to see a strong side of Priyanka.

The initial paragraphs, stating the flashbacks about how strong her family have been... especially her brothers, the way they have protected her always were described so well. That made a real good start to your story.

Rudra cracked me up with his comment for Kamini😆 His character is such a fun to watch and read, most of the times.

My most favorites lines from this would have to be the Priyanka's starting lines to the press people. ... "Press conference maine call ki hai. How he is supposed to answer any questions? Can you please wait for me to go ahead with what I want to?" These lines stood out for me👏 That just came out, so strong. I loved them❤️

And then, the final face off with the hidden truths, yet the main one is still to get out of the curtains.

Everything was beautiful.

Much Love

-Harshada

Edited by LoveToWrite - 8 years ago

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Krishi

@Black_Maniac

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Part 3 Up!

Thank you so much guys, I can't thank you enough for all the love. I'll reply to all of your comments soon :)

By the time, read the last one, and let me have a little more comments to reply to 😆

Love,

Krishi ❤️

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

amazing

the ending was superb...

loved it

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Superb
Priyanka proved to be a true oberoi

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rarefan

@rarefan

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

This is as good as it gets for Prinku. The ending was perfect.

I totally think she should remember all the lessons taught unintentionally by Ranveer.

Keep writing.

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Mystery1234

@Mystery1234

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Amazing..

The strongness with which Priyanka faced everything 👏

Just loved this brave version of Priyanka Singh Oberoi..

Perfect ending

Awesome

Thanks for the pm😊

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varala

@varala

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Awesome update

As a woman I appreciate Prinku's bravery 👏👏

Thanks for pm 😊

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ck1234

@ck1234

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#59

just read all three parts... well written ... awsome...

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Anya

@elysianights

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Krishi that was indeed a khickitod ending😆 but seriously it was amazing!Just loved this story how you showed the fierce Priyanka Singh Oberoi.i do wish that they can show something like this but it will be only a wish. yeah they have shown her standing for her self but this was more appropiate.I totally loved this.❤️

The cv's should read this piece of work once and than realize that they would have done something more better than the things they showed but anyways will miss this story.It was amazing.

Do write more dear.

Love yaa,

Anya 😳

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