Priyanka TS - Waylaying The Demons Inside (Completed Page 1) 13/4/2017

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Priyanka TS - Waylaying the Demons Inside

Priyanka Singh Oberoi had shut herself in her room for about 6 hours now. She hadn't let the family know something was wrong. She had put up a brave and happy face and not broken down and she could not be more proud of herself.

Why was she born in such a powerful family? No, she didn't despise them, she never could. She despised herself. Everyone who she called family were so strong. They were hard to crack on the outside, extremely lovable on the inside never the less.
And she? Who was she? Shivaay, Omkara and Rudra's stuttering, nervous sister. More than anything, she had become their weakness. Wasn't she supposed to be their strength? Here, her problems made them weak. They faced so much all because of her. Her mind flashed to the day where she had requested Om Bhaiya to let her drive the car. What did she do when he trusted her? She ran into someone. And what did she face, nothing. Om Bhaiya drowned into guilt, had to do drugs? Why? Because he wanted to protect her.
She remembered the day she requested Rudra to let her play the extremely expensive video game. She had let one of her friends to play it who had very conveniently broken it by mistake. When Papa had come to know about that, he had shouted so much at Rudra. He had grounded him and Rudra couldn't go for his last school trip. She had taken away his excitement but he did not complain even once.
How she had burnt the cake Shivaay Bhaiya was baking for Choti Maa with so much love because she had forgotten to keep a check on the oven as Shivaay Bhaiya cracked another deal. Choti Maa had been so upset. Bhaiya and she thought no one had listened to the exchange that took place but Priyanka did. Choti Maa had complained how Shivaay Bhaiya won't let anything go wrong if it was something special for his cousins but one time he did something for her, he didn't even bother to make sure if it was edible. Shivaay Bhaiya had been extremely upset with that one taunt. Yes, Choti Maa had still eaten it after showering him with kisses but that one statement made Bhaiya so bitter that his mom couldn't fathom the happiness he got around his brothers and sister.
And now, she had managed to ruin everything. One mistake of hers and everyone was paying heavily. She had managed to tell Shivaay Bhaiya about what had gone between her and Ranveer. She had trusted Ranveer on that. She had trusted him because she had seen him saving her from those guys of her college.
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When she had seen the media accusing Anika of being Shivaay Bhaiya's mistress she had been fuming. She controlled herself, lest Mrs. Randhawa got upset. She might derail Anika and Shivaay Bhaiya again.
So after the press was gone, she headed towards her room. She had been about to enter her room when she heard Daksh's laughter which, for some reason, was sounding demeaning. She followed it to a room. As she pressed her ears against the door, she heard Shivaay Bhaiya saying something that sounded like "I won't do this."
To which, Daksh had replied, "Think about it Shivaay, if Priyanka's pregnancy does come out, what will you do. Honestly if I would have been in your place, I would have supported Priyanka. Announce it to the world that Anika is your mistress and I swear I'll hand over all proofs of Priyanka's pregnancy. Or else.." and Priyanka could literally feel his devilish grin through his voice. They had talked some more but Priyanka had walked away.

The hurt and fury that raged within her wasn't something she could describe or control. She now understood why everything that had happened actually happened. Shivaay Bhaiya would have announced Anika was his wife, a position and a gift Anika deserved but just for her sake, Shivaay Bhaiya was hurting himself. Enough was enough and she knew what she had to do. If this baby was the root cause of all problems, she had to clear it off. Problems ko unki jadd se ukhadna tha.

Even though this baby was a part of her, it was a big mistake. Never had she imagined she would do something like what she had. She had been her family's pride, yet, once again she had managed to weaken everyone.

Everyone was unaware as Priyanka rode off in the morning to the hospital. She would consult a gynecologist and get done with this baby.

Little did she know what was to come. To her utmost horror, the doctor informed her that there was no baby to abort. Priyanka Singh Oberoi was not pregnant. Ranveer, a man she had trusted for some reason had thrown such a big lie to he face. But then, a lot of things that were unclear were uncovered when the doctor explained that Priyanka had been drugged. As she said this, things became clearer. Yes, she wasn't as smart and cunning as most of her family members but she knew what had happened. And to this, Priyanka pledged that she wasn't letting ACP Ranveer Singh Randhawa go easily. She was going to set things right, in a few hours itself.

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Greetings guys! I am back. I will be going out for a trip for a few days so will be absent from the forum. I know I have a SS to update but this is something I want to write, rather I need to write.
Let me know what you think of this. I am about to introduce a brave Priyanka, following her brothers' paths.
Special thanks to @napstermonster aka Navin for a post on the damage done to PriVeer. Somehow I feel really disgusted with Ranveer as a man and as a man of law.
I know you guys aren't Priyanka fans but try giving this a chance. I am out for some dirama.

Cheers,
Krishi ❤️

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Priyanka TS - Waylaying the Demons Inside
Part 2

The Oberois had been surprised when they came to know that Priyanka had organised a quick party later in the evening. As they walked into the living room, they were surprised even more to find everything set up so beautifully. Anika was running around, ordering the florists and the chefs, checking everything for one last time.

"Anika, what's going on?" Shivaay questioned to which Anika ignored him.
Noticing the tension between the two, Rudra asked the same question again.

"Priyanka said it's a very important day for her and asked me to help her as a friend more than anything. She seemed extremely nervous and I couldn't say no." Anika smiled a little.

As if the Oberoi's weren't enough surprised, Kamini Randhawa's voice boomed through the Oberoi walls. "Aaj aisa kya hai jo humari bahu hume khud invite karne aa gayi?"

"Priyanka specially invited you, Kamini aunty? Rudra looked confused. He then muttered to Om and Shivaay, "If she was my mother-in-law, I wouldn't have invited her to my own wedding." Om and Shivaay suppressed their smiles and muttered a 'Shut Up Rudra'

"It's okay if she invited Ranveer and aunty but why Daksh." Rudra angrily eyed the man, who seemed so happy, as if it was his party.

"Namaste aunty," Priyanka walked down the stairs dressed in a golden gown, hair let open looking no less than a princess.

"Here is the Oberoi Princess!" Om grinned and walked towards her. She smiled at him and hugged him. "Bhaiya, I need you to support me today. Help me when no one does. You are one of my only strengths today." She whispered so no one but Om could hear. She smiled at everyone once again and ignored Om's questioning eyes. "And please keep Shivaay Bhaiya at bay. He might not let me go ahead with what I want to do."

She went and touched Kamini's feet who blessed her with a 'You look beautiful beta.'

"Uh, Priyanka, why exactly have you organized the party?" Tej voiced the question that had been bugging everyone but before Priyanka could answer, the press and media burst in.

"Aap log andar kasie aaye?" Shivaay fumed.
"Bhaiya, maine inhe bulaya hai." Came a voice that sounded like Priyanka's yet it didn't. It had a completely different confidence in it.

The Oberoi's looked at Priyanka in confusion. Only yesterday had the security guards pushed them outside with such force. Daksh smirked. His bahu was doing a great job unknowingly or stupidly.

"Shivaay Singh Oberoi, aapne kal kissi bhi sawal ka jawab nahi diya tha." One of the reporter shouted his rage quite evident.

"Excuse me." Priyanka's shrill voice cut through. "Press conference maine call ki hai. How is he supposed to answer any questions? Can you please wait for me to go ahead with what I want to?"

Everyone was as confused as the Oberois. Never had Priyanka Singh Oberoi muttered anything more than 'no questions please'.

Shivaay headed in Priyanka's direction but Om caught hold of his arm. He slightly shook his head and blinked assuringly. If Priyanka was so confident about whatever she was about to do, who were they to stop her?
Shivaay held himself back, confusion etched on his face.

When the press finally got over their first shock, they started clicking their cameras maddeningly. If Priyanka Singh Oberoi had come forth with a press conference, some spicy news was on it's way. How could they miss a chance at promotions?

"As you all know, I am about to be married to Assistant Commissioner of Police, Ranveer Singh Randhawa. The news might be quite abrupt for all of you but well, I had to do it. Before I begin, I would like to tell everyone present here to not interrupt me until I am done. As I will speak, there are sure to be some gasps and questions and interruptions but I will be pleased if I am allowed to continue throughout without any of those."
She took a deep breath. Public speaking was something she had avoided for years but it was the need of the hour. It was her turn to payback the people who were trying to attack her family's reputation, her dignity, a woman's right as a wife, her parents' izzat. Moreover, everything was at stake today. One wrong statement, one wrong move and every pain that she took in preparing herself for this would go down the drain.

"My in-laws are a bunch of great people. Even my to-be-husband. Let me start with a story. A girl, once, even though underage, drove a car into the night. Her elder brother protested, yet she made him agree somehow. Unfortunately, she crashed the car into a woman, who was unaware of what was about to come." The media looked confused, what was she even talking about.

"Now, as her relative, maybe sibling, I mean the unfortunate woman's sibling, what would any of you do?" while everyone stood there with furrowed eyebrows, Ranveer and Kamini's faces were morphing into grim expressions. In an attempt to handle things before this worsened, Kamini spoke, "Priyanka beta, what are you saying. Shaadi ke ghar main marna marane ki baat nahi karte."

"Aunty, I requested something before I started." Priyanka's hands were fisted. Pinky grinned as Kamini stood stumped.

"Now, it so happens, that the sibling comes to know of the girl who is responsible for his sister's condition. What is he supposed to do? Well, logically, he could go to the police. I might come back to this later. Seeing your expressions, you seem quite confused. Let me give you some news that might excite you." She had a contemplating expression.

"Shivaay Bhaiya has an announcement to make. Though, I request you to not shower him with a load of questions. I'll justify everything he says. After all, all you guys need is proofs, explanations and justifications."

"Bhaiya, I make you swear on me, meri kasam khaiye, aur sabko bataiye ki aapka aur Anika ka kya rishta hai. Main janti hun aap bolna chah rahe hain par kisi ki vajah se nahi bol paa rahe. Trust me Bhaiya, please." Priyanka looked at Shivaay, biting her lip in nervousness. If Shivaay didn't trust her right now, everything would turn into a mess. When she mentioned the specific someone who was an obstacle, she have a small yet hard glare at Daksh.

Shivaay breathed in. He looked at Priyanka, and then at Om and Rudra. He smiled at Priyanka and accepted what he wanted to accept even yesterday. "Anika meri biwi hai. Woh sirf Anika nahi, Anika Shivaay Singh Oberoi hai." The room went into a round of collective gasps. Before they could question, Shivaay continued, "Woj meri takkat, meri strength hai. Usse kuch bhi kehna yani Shivaay Singh Oberoi se dushmani mol lena." He beamed at Anika and hugged her. Priyanka smiled. Part 1, check.

As the press showered a few questions, Priyanka interrupted, "Aap sab ko pata chal gaya, kiinke beech pati-patni ka rishta hai. Ab yeh toh sochiye, ki Shivaay Bhaiya ne kal yeh confess kyu nahi kiya." Priyanka's features were hardening as the moments passed. Shivaay's eyes widened, "Prinku-"
"Shivaay, let her speak." Om cut through Shivaay's statement.
"But Om,"
"Shivaay Bhaiya ko blackmail kiya jaa raha tha." Almost there Priyanka. You can do it.

"Unhe aur koi nahi, Daksh blackmail kar raha tha." The family looked at Priyanka and Shivaay in shock. Shivaay gulped. He slightly nodded, negatively at Priyanka. Priyanka gave him a reassuring smile and continued, "Ab press conference ka asli reason."

"Bas karo Priyanka." Ranveer slightly grabbed at her arm. "Can you please stop framing Mamu?"

"Framing?" Priyanka smiled an angry smile. "Let all the truth come out Ranveer. Let everyone know how much the world has progressed."

Before she could speak any further, a reporter cut through. "Ma'am hume abhi pata chala hai. Aapne subah kissi women's charity main donate kiya aur koi complaint lodge ki?"

"There. Sab batati hun. Daksh ne Shivaay Singh Oberoi ko mere naam pe dhamki di. Blackmail kiya. Let me quote what he had said, "Apni behen ki izzat pyaari ho, toh duniya se kehde ki Anika teri mistress hai."

Om, Rudra, Anika and Janhavi looked at Daksh with disgust. Shivaay still had his gaze locked onto his sister. What was she planning to do? Will she let it all out?

"Kya bakwas kar rahi hai yeh ladki?" Daksh jumped in. All his plans were out in open. This wasn't how it was supposed to be. Priyanka seemed so sure that even if she continued, her izzat won't be at stake. Before he could spoil it and present everything in his twisted way, Priyanka raised her hand.

"I am sorry Daksh, you can't speak at this moment. You can definitely do that after I have said what I want to."

"Priyanka, tameez se baat karo." Kamini voiced through gritted teeth. "Tumhare hone wale pati ka mama hai woh. Bhulo mat, tumhare pet main mere bete ka baccha hai."

"Sab kuch saamne aa jayega aunty." Priyanka gave her a sugar-coated smile.
Kamini looked at her in surprise. Wasn't she scared of her pregnancy anymore? And what the hell had Daksh blackmailed Shivaay with? Moreover, why?

"Daksh ne Bhaiya ko meri pregnancy ke naam par blackmail kiya." There. You said it Priyanka. It is now on how you progress. Don't let them shun you. Speak.

The Oberois had never seen a day full of surprises. And none of them were pleasant, mind you.
Ranveer and Kamini looked at Daksh, horror clear on their faces. How the hell did Daksh come to know about this? And why the hell did he do all this? He created a mess out of everything.

"Aap shaadi se pehle pregnant hai?" this question was thrown at Priyanka multiple times, each of it framed differently. Only one thing was common in all of it. Demeaning Priyanka's morals and the Oberois' upbringing.

"Please let me complete." Priyanka shouted. She could not take it anymore. It was draining all of her being with each statement she had said and was planning to say. None of their comments were being helpful either.

"Bacche ka pita mera hone-wala husband hai." The press looked at her with weird looks. How does it change the truth? Obviously the Oberoi's must have forced the ACP into marriage. Like father, like daughter. In some ways, at least.

"Ma'am, honestly, iss baat se koi faral nahi padta." One of them dared to point it out.

"Aur agar main kahun ki main pregnant nahi hun toh?" Priyanka put forth.
Ranveer looked at her in shock. What the hell was she talking about? Blood drained from Kamini's face.

"Aapne abhi kaha ki Daksh ne Shivaay Singh Oberoi ko aapki pregnancy pe blackmail kiya, aur aapke bacche ka hone-wala baap ACP Ranveer Singh Randhawa hai." The reporters looked at Priyanka as if she were crazy. Only moments ago she said something and now she said what if it isn't true. Who ever does that?

You are done Priyanka. Come forth with it. Tell them the truth.

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Man, I am sorry if this comes out boring. Lot of stupidity maybe... I am not sure. And I am sorry because here Shivaay's confession didn't do justice. Maybe because it is on Prinku's part so I had to focus there. I have made it clear that Shivaay wanted to announce the day before but he couldn't because Daksh confused him.
And yeah, it is way dramatic that Prinku can get 😆
Hope you guys don't hate it.
Comment what you liked/didn't like.

Cheers,
Krishi ❤️

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Priyanka TS - Waylaying The Demons Inside
Part 2

You are done Priyanka. Come forth with it. Tell them the truth.
"Medical science has been advancing since long, it still does. As a man of law, Mr. Randhawa here, should be protecting everyone, not terrorizing them. I am being forced into this marriage by none other than this man." Priyanka took yet another deep breath. Her statements were jumping from one topic to another. She felt herself failing to express herself. Clearing her head, she tried again. Tried again to explain the wrongs that could happen.
"I was told I was pregnant and I quite believed it. Ranveer even showed me proofs. Unfortunately, those were all faux. He, a man serving law, exploited a woman. And by exploited I do not only mean the fake reports that he presented in front of me and Shivaay Bhaiya, but also the drugs that he unknowingly let into my body. He exploited me, physically, mentally. Everyday I spent, thinking how I betrayed my family while this 'man of law'," Priyanka shouted in disgust, her emotions at bay, "enjoyed my trauma. Yes, I admit that I was the one responsible for his sister's accident but I don't really think he gets the rights to make my life so miserable. Destroy my sense of understanding, play with my family's trust and my brother's emotions. As for the complaints lodged in the woman's association, there were quite a few. Against Ex-ACP Mr. Randhawa, for whatever he did, in whatever way he exploited me and my family, against Mrs. Randhawa, for knowingly supporting him in this set up of her son and for ill-treating Anika Bhabhi's brother, Sahil and against Mr. Daksh Khurana for stalking, traumatizing, kidnapping and almost murdering Anika Bhabhi." There was not a single word in her speech that did not leave people shocked. As Shivaay understood and let it in his system what Ranveer had done, he advanced towards him, his fists clenched in fury, followed closely by Om and Rudra. No one, not a single being was allowed to hurt their Prinku, better known as the strong-hearted Prinku pehelwan.
Shivaay caught hold of his collar as his eyes looked at him with disgust. Om caught hold of his hands and tried freeing Ranveer. When Shivaay looked at him in confusion, Om's shaken voice sounded soft, "He deserves punishment but not from us, from the one he wronged and from the law. Leave him Shivaay, he isn't worth it. It is only Prinku that can..." Before he could complete his statement, the piercing noise of hand against cheek resonated through the hall. Ranveer took in a sharp breath, his cheek hissing with pain.
What happened next, happened in blur for Priyanka. She remembered breaking down as the security led everyone out. As she slid to the floor, her brothers came to her and hugged her tightly. The police came and took Ranveer and Kamini with them and Kamini had let out a few words saying that she would avenge her son and herself. The Oberois couldn't care less.

"Prinku..." Shivaay smiled through the tears. "Aaj sabko prove kar diya tu Prinku Pehelwan kyu hai, hai na?"
She nodded and smiled, tears streaming down her cheek. "I did the right things Bhaiya, hai na?" All three of her brothers nodded their heads, Om kissing her forehead. "Priyanka Singh Oberoi kabhi kuch galat nahi hone de sakti. She saves all of us from going to hell." And chuckled.
"Om Bhaiya, aap hi toh kehte ho ki sacchai aur acchai important hoti hai."
"Wah OBros! Prinku had adopted the good traits from all three of us. O's goodness and truthfulness, which I am sure had made him feel proud. Shivaay Bhaiya's smartness, matlab kya plan banaya han? And cherry on the cake, the power that your hands have, kya thappad tha! I am sure Randhawa isn't going to even think of coming in front of you after you have given him such a nice makeover of your five fingers on his face."

"Shut Up Rudra Bhaiya." Prinky grinned through her tears. Her brothers looked at her with raised eyebrows.She shrugged and played innocent. They chuckled and pulled her into a hug too.
"Bhaiya now we'll have 4 OBros in every OBro moment. Afterall, Prinku Pehelwan is here with a bang!"

She couldn't believe she had been through it. That it was over. She had fought the demons that had tried to suck the happiness and life out of her. She had stood up for her family. She wasn't the stuttering Oberoi anymore. She had stood up for Shivaay Bhaiya too. She had stood up for her family, for what was right. She had never seen her family beam so much in pride for her. They were proud of her. The look of her father's face, the from that wouldn't wipe off for days fluttered her heart. Her mom's tear filled eyes whenever she looked at her made Priyanka feel that she was on top of the world. Her brothers' love was no less. She could see that there was a change in everyone for her. Not that they didn't love her before or didn't respect her. They did. Only that her courage hand touched them. They never criticized her for not being able to speak in front of people. In fact, they cherished and protected her. Just like a lioness pounced on enemies when it came to her cubs, Priyanka answered Ranveer's deeds with a similar fierceness.

*7 years later*
Priyanka Singh Oberoi sat in her cabin in her own office. There lay files of different charitable associations that she owned. She had served her own jail period of 2years, against her family's wished. While they were insistent that it wasn't her fault, Priyanka quite needed it. She won't live in as much guilt as before would she? Not that she felt less guilty but if felt as if she had at least served for something wrong she had done.

After she was out, she used the shares in her name and worked really hard to open various charitable organizations. The Oberois owned over 250 associations now, at least more than half of their shares. Anika had worked along with Priyanka to make them better, and Priyanka also had shares of Anika's event managing company.

Over time, Priyanka had met Akash Bhatia, also a social worker. Starting off as business partners, they became acquainted and then friends. Finally, 2 years ago, Akash had proposed her to be his girlfriend much to the delight of the Oberois as well as Bhatias.

As she went through a few files, working on the new fashion house project that she was planning to launch along with Gauri and Anika she received a message from Akash.

Meet me at the Elite Delight at 7

Grinning, she sent an 'Okay' and went ahead with her work at a faster rate.

*
Evening came and Priyanka drove to the venue. On arrival, she was lead to a special booth, exclusively decorated for her by Akash.
As she came by, Akash stood in front of her, nervously glancing at her now and then.
Surprised that her ever-so-charming boyfriend was so nervous, she chuckled.
"What's it A?"
"Uh.." he gulped.
"A?"

"Sshhh..." he breathed in and out and walked towards her. Priyanka looked at him with amusement
"Priyanka Singh Oberoi, it's been 3 and a half years since I met you. Since this stormy yet delicate woman came into my life. We started this relationship as a chance, trying ourselves, trying to understand each other. It is now that I want to make it even more obvious. Where do you stand in my life? I only have one question to this answer."

"You mean answer to this question..." Priyanka muttered in nervous excitement.
"Oh god! Could you please just listen?" he glared at her playfully
"Okay okay," she raised her hands in mock surrender, biting back a smile.
He came closer and caught her hand.
"You are the best woman I have come across. Probably more capable than me at half the things. Your tenderness, your moods, your laughter, your family, I love all of it. All I want is to now be a part of this family, part of the people you extremely care for. And I know you'll say I already am part of them but I do not mean this superficially. I want to be the man you come to with all your problems, trust me with everything, believe in me, support me. I want to support you in your hardest times and I want to be your husband." He ended abruptly.

Priyanka grinned and hugged him. "Ye-yes." She stuttered. Stuttered after a long time. It was only when she was emotional did she stutter now.

Akash hugged her with all his might and Priyanka felt safe. Being around him made her happy. She couldn't believe how far she had come. As she stood there in his arms, she felt ecstatic. She had found happiness now. She had found a man who loved her so much.

"By the way, Akash, just so you know, the proposal was beautiful as simple, just the way I would have liked it. But then, you just messed up in the end didn't you?"

"Oh it's okay. My woman said yes so I don't care anymore." Brushing imaginary dust from his shoulder.
"Your woman already?"
"Obviously mine." Saying so, he placed a chaste kiss on her lips. Priyanka was taken by surprise. Looking at him in shock, she raised an eyebrow.
Raising his hands in a submissive manner, he bowed down in front of her. Priyanka chuckled and then stood on her toes and kissed him back.

She knew she deserved this. Past had taught her so much. Whatever and however it was, it only made her with a little bit breaking.
Of course Ex-ACP Ranveer Singh Randhawa had a special place in her memories. After sometime, she had realised how thankful she should be to him. Intentionally or not, he had helped her bring out the best in her. She wasn't afraid of things anymore. She faced them, however harsh should they be.
She had waylaid the demons inside her, around her. For herself and for the best of everyone.

*
That's how I end this story. It's been a lovely journey writing this up. I apologize if the end wasn't as it should have been. I have put in whatever I could. This might come out as a mess, with a little less on the emotional front but hope it is acceptable not illogical.

Thank you for all the love for this story. You guys are just amazing and encouraging and supportive. 🤗
Do let me know what was amiss. I would love to know what you had expected and how I can improve myself.
Yes, I know it coincidence came up with the episode but it wasn't intentional😆. I wrote this earlier but then sat down for watching. But honestly I am happy with this. Priyanka was at least a part of what I have written her as and it makes me giddy 😳 That slap was epic. :D
Cheers,
Krishi ❤️

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wow..tht was so nice, u really justified priyanka's character. her feeling was well described. n looking forward to see a braver side of priyanka..update soon.
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Amazing...
Just fabulous...
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊
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This is amazing
Update soon
Want to see how Priyanka is going to take her revenge
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OMG!
Priyanka going to take revenge. 😕
waiting for next update.
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amazinggg...U penned it so well...this Priyanka was sooo needed...she should behave like Priyanka Singh Oberoi apart from Prinku someday...& thanx for the pm...
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amazng story dear...luvd it..:-) 😊

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