SwaSan Five Shots -Her Eyes Speak...His Heart Listens...Epilogue Pg 13

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SwaSan Five Shots -Her Eyes Speak...His Heart Listens...


Prologue:

The Night was dark , the moon shone over the white stone buildings , quietly sleeping in the still hours of the night , though not able to drive away the darkness completely but still, the moon succeeded in giving some light to the empty streets of Udaipur , its transparent yet white rays hitting the various buildings , while most of the buildings blocked the way of the moonlight one building' s open window absorbed the rays within , there inside she was sitting on her oval shaped bed with a pencil in her hand touching her lips , her hair fluttered as the breeze from outside hit them , her eyes were fixed on some pieces of papers in front of her eyes , and she was completely engrossed in her work.

Down the moon looked , a boy was standing , his eyes looking up at the open window , his hand at the back of his head rubbing his hair and his face with a gesture of not so happy.


This Amit , He was to meet Shreya and return within half an hour , its been half night since he's up , what to do? The boy seemed to be angry as well as a bit afraid.

" Should I go and check? He asked himself confused.


" Go Na... Said the little devil getting his place on his right shoulder.

" No Sanskar , it would be wrong to go to somebody's house like that... Said the Angel settling himself on the left Shoulder.

" Why , even Amit went up na...wasn't that wrong? Asked the Devil raising his little eyebrows.

Sanskar nodded looking towards the Angel with a look that Devil was right.

" So what , if Amit kills someone , even Sanskar'll kill... Said the Angel retorting back.

" But now , Amit isn't killing na so Sanskar go... Said the Devil while the Angel was about to say something.

" Right...sometimes I should listen to Devil too na... Said Sanskar passing a cute smile to Angel who disappeared sticking his tongue out to Sanskar , Devil smiled and Disappeared.


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Sanskar looked towards the ladder that was going upwards , " Get ready Sanskar... He said to himself as he went mighty close to the ladder and then started climbing it. He was quite afraid as he was climbing , he was going towards the 1st floor of the house , as he reached he saw two rooms adjacent , one window opened and other closed.

" This must be Shreya's room , the window is opened... He thought as he jumped inside , as he did his feet hit the floor creating a thud sound , the girl heard it.

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" Why you closed the Window? Amit asked Shreya.

" If someone sees us then... Shreya said with a smile while Amit thought tensed about Sanskar nodded.

" Why we need to meet like this...?? He said to her sadly while they continued their conversation.

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" Who is there? Who is There? The girl asked getting up from the bed and coming towards the source of the sound looking towards Sanskar.


Sanskar hit his head slightly , " Wrong room , the Angel was right...Why I did this... He cursed himself under his breath , he was tensed that the girl has got to know about him.

The girl came near him and was about to touch him when he grabbed her waist , held her mouth , pinned her to the wall and looked towards her breathing heavily.


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The girl closed her eyes in tension, her heart started beating fast , the moonlight was still falling inside and now on the duo standing.

The girl tried to speak but his grip on her mouth was so tight that she couldn't.

" See... Sanskar was trying to give an explanation when she started hitting her hands wherever she could to get free , she had opened her eyes , Sanskar looked towards her confused , his heart was beating faster as her hands touched his chest , he held her hand leaving her waist , as he held her hand , her hand was stopped at his chest , her hand was now on his chest and she could feel his heart beat , something passed down her body , like a current.

" Laksh... She tried hard to speak while he left her mouth seeing her struggle.

" Laksh...Laksh...I know you are there..I know , everyone said that you are gone, you came back , for me...for your Swara...Laksh... Swara was continuously saying while Sanskar , who has till now left her hand was shocked as well as confused listening to her words.


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Credit : Piyali and Jasminerahul

( Note :- This is a Collaborated work of Me and My Friend Jasminerahul)





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Posted: 8 years ago
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swasan meeting was lovely.why did swara call sanskar laksh?though I am a co author I couldn't resist enjoying it as a normal reader.nice pics
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

swasan meeting was lovely.why did swara call sanskar laksh?though I am a co author I couldn't resist enjoying it as a normal reader.nice pics


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice Start Piyali!

Swara has a painful past with Laksh. I guess Laksh and Swara had an accident. Laksh is dead perhaps?

Send PM for further updates.

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Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was so Nice to see you both with New Story.😊
The Concept was so Interesting.😊
Swara and laksh part was so Interesting.😊
Swara had a bad Past with laksh.😭
The Story is getting so Interesting.😊
The Pics were so nice.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaSweety-Anu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting prologue
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice prologue. Swasan first meeting is very interesting.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fantastic Prologue

Just loved their first meeting it was simply awesome
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sounds interesting
Sanskar climbed into wrong room
He met swara both felt something
So why she's calling his Laksh
Looking forward to story continuing
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update and mice start...is a heart transplant patient? If so nice concept of second chances..
Update and pm me soon...

Waiting raz

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