Maaneet ss-Mera Maasoom Patidev- Part 7/pg 111 (25-May-2018) - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: laughingpearls

wow interesting please update soon


thank u dear😃
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Originally posted by: mahimesha

interesting start 😃


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Originally posted by: chandrikaVARSH

nice story waitig an update


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🥳🥳🥳WISH U MANY MORE HAPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY CHELLAKUTTY..MY GURMEET CHOUDHARY @ MAAN🥳🥳🥳..I MISS U MAANEET SO MUCH..

hi guys thanks for liking and comments..plz ignore spelling and grammatical error ..iam sry..

NOTE : Plz first imagine maan is innocent 😆😆..yeah it really tough one..but plz imagine..its only short update..next time i will give long update and more cute maan..

Maasoom 1


...A room showing how much happiness in their life.room full of smiling couples photos..moon light hits girl face..A girl face glowing but not insake of moonlight because of her happiness..a girl sitting in sofa and starring at moon..

Girl: Baby, u know me and mera maasoom patidev or ur innocent papa when we met first time..remembered that incident automatically broad smiled appeared in her face.

Flashbback start

Geet : Bhabhi teasing me so much.tomorrow first I will meet him and then asking sry to him..haha mainly said him that iam not his sister...with irritating face.

Next day

Geet ready for going her adventure and come downstairs..already everyone in dinning table.

Geet joined them and simar serve breakfast everyone

Geet: Good morning with smiling face

Mohinder : Good morning princess

Prem: Good morning sweetheart

Simar: Good morning di..with teasing tone.

Geet : Bhabhi with grinned teeth..

Prem: Simar why u calling my sweetheart to dii...with same teasing tone.

Geet: Bhai..with angry face..

Rano: Why everyone teasing my princess..

Geet: Love u maa

Rano: I love u too baby, her prince only call to di..

Everyone burst their laughing and geet irritating her family teasing.

Geet: He is not my prince..everyone got it.. and went out immediately

Geet cursing her prince in her mind..

Geet come to temple and searching her chota bhai...sry sry..prince..😆😆

Man sitting in corner of temple pond throwing stone to water with sad face.

Man thinking something..

Man: How I will do...it is wrong but shona said do it..with puppy face

Last night

Man sitting in his room with sad face..

A girl touched his shoulder and his head raised up looking girl with sad face..

Girl: Maan bhai..why u sad if anyone said anything to u..

Maan nods his head innocently : Oh...shona

Girl:iam ur baby sister right..

Maan nods his head forcefully: Ha shona ..

Sowmaya: Then tell me why u sad.

Maan: Di slapped me...with sobbing and innocent face...he narrated morning temple incident to his sis.( prologue)

Sowmaya: How dare she..she slapped u but u ran out without did anything with angry voice

Maan: Yes...with innocent face.

Sowmaya: Bhai, why u not slap her..atleast shout her.

Maan: shona cool down..it is wrong, slap anyone mainly girls..with pout face

Sowmaya: But u didn't any mistake but she slapped u. so she deserves punishment..

Maan: No shona..she look like doll with sheepish smile

Sowmaya : bhai ,She slapped u but u saying she look like doll..tomorrow u will slap her otherwise I am not talk with u..with angry face

Maan half heartedly accept her wish.

Maan come back to original..

Maan throw stones to water continuously.

Geet standing next to maan

Geet: What r u thinking

Maan head raised look at geet : Hmm.thinking how to slap u ..flowly said..

Geet eyes popped: Kya..with shout voice.

Maan stand up : Di...

Geet shout: What u said now.

Maan placed his both hand to both cheeks and nods his head negatively

Geet: Tell me

Maan: Oh...di...thinking how to slap u..with stammering voice

Geet more irritating hears di word from his m shaped lips

Geet: Chup bikul chup.First iam not ur di..don't call me didi..u understand

Maan nods his head both positive and negative randomly.

Geet: Open ur mouth and said iam not ur sister.

Maan: U only said don't talk with pout face..

Geet : u speak now and say iam not ur sister with irritate face

Maan: Iam not ur sister with..stammering voice.

Geet slaps her head:hey babaji...plz save me from this kid

Maan : iam not kid with cute angry face

Geet: haha.. ur not kid ,Call me geet not di.

Maan: Tika geetji...with slow voice

Geet ( mind): he thought iam older than him..now geetji..hey babaji...ok leave it geet atleast he called geetji not di...that horrible word..

Geet: hmm why u want slap me..

Maan: my shona want slap u..so I want to slap u..otherwise she not talk with me..

Geet: who's shona...with angry voice...( jealous)

Maan: my baby sister..yesterday u slapped me but I did nt any mistake..with pout face

Geet : oh ur sister. ( her face become calm and relived ).but u don't beat ur friend right.

Maan: yes, I am not beat my friends..but ...with scratching his hair..

Geet: I thought ur my friend..iam sry yesterday I slapped u..friends..give her right hand to shake..

Maan lower eyes seeing geet face: ha I accept ur friendship but before I will slap u otherwise my shona not talk with me ...cute face

Geet rolled her eyes: ok don't slap hardly ..

Maan slapped her like feather touched her cheek..geet fake sad look to maan

Maan: sry.geetji .i slapped u hardly right...iam bad guy..i slapped girl continuously cursing himself..

Geet smiled: no yaar..but u did not slap me..u touch my cheek..

Maan : u teasing me..dont talk and iam not ur friend..with childish angry face.

Geet pulled his both cheeks : sry baba..ok I will give treat ..u forgive me..

Maan smiled broadly: panipuri with icecream

Geet: done..but till now u not say ur name..

Maan hit his forehead: oh I forgot..iam Maan singh Khurana..with proudly said.

Geet: Ok Mr.maan singh Khurana..lets go icecream parlour..

Icecream parlour..

Maan eating more than..10 icecream..and geet surprised his behavior..he is grow man..but itna maasoom..how is it possible..

Maan: geetji , why u starring my icecream ..iam not give u..hided icecream to his back.

Geet chuckled face: I have my own icecream..i don't want urs continue eat her icecream

Maan laughed seeing geet face because some icecream stick in her nose..

Geet: hey maan why u laughing..and mermesied seeing his innocent laugh

Maan laughing voice: u look like joker..

Geet glare to maan : wipe it yaar..

Maan close to geet and geet heart beat rapid fastly...maan cleaned icecream with his tongue..

Geet stunned : maan what u did..with shocked expression.

Maan: cleaned ur nose said with calmly.

Geet: u use tissue paper not ur tongue..with little harsh tone

Maan: but juilee wiped this way only..with confused look.

Geet: juilee..

Maan: oh geetji I forgot..i need go now..dadi waiting for me..

Maan kiss her cheeks : thanks for treat..see u later..went out immediately.

Geet eyes popped remembering he kissed her cheek...and also blushing..

Geet mind: who's juileee..my prince ka girlfriend...with angry face even he kissed me.with blushing face .hey geet what r u thinking.ur prince...hey ladka mujhe pagal kar degi..

Part end

prolouge page 1

next part - PART 2

If u likes this part plz press like button and comment me..deariee..

I WILL UPDATE MARRIAGE AT FIRST SIGHT AND HOPE PART THIS WEEKEND BUDDIES..


Edited by maaneetfavo - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update. I wonder how this masoom patidev get ready to merry n now he has a baby too. Hahaha. Lovely family moments. The moments between maaneet are treat to heart. Waiting for next.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww my just falling in love with this cutie maan... He us soo adorable and his antic's are Mashallah...

Hope to see more maneet outing n love blooming continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice one
Geet family teasing her calling her di
Maan is so innocent and cute my cutiepie
Sowmya said maan to slap geet I to want maan to slap her how dare she slap my cutiepie
Maan kissed her
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update
Waiting for next update. .

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