Maaneet ss-Mera Maasoom Patidev- Part 7/pg 111 (25-May-2018) - Page 36

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Part 3

Maan enter khurana mansion entrance and remembering outing with geet.his face glowing and grinning like child..his happy vanish after heared roaring voice.

Maan..stop here with heavy and dominating harsh voice from inside the mansion.

Maan face change to pale and his body shivering hearing man voice.A 50 + old man and early 20's young man stood next to that oldman.

Maan: ji...bad...e papa..with stammering..his tounge rolling even he cannot complete single word from his own mouth.

Yeah old man none other is maan's badepapa and young man is maan s cousin ( badipapa son)

Note: guys .i clear one think ..maan parents already died in his childhood.( harak and preeto maan badipapa and badi maa ..savitri sister s son and daughter in law..they r not khurana..but khurana 's and every property managed by maan's badi papa..yeah everything under by maan name only..they made maan to puppet for them.)

Badipapa shout voice: in whole day ,where r u went.i already said don't go anywhere.without my permission , where r went with angry face

Maan eyes bow down to ground: ji badipapa ..i went to met my friend with shivering tone

Thud thud sound..

Opps harak singh slapped maan cheek..not one time ..he slapping continuously..

Maan corner lips cut insake of cruel slap by his badipapa..maan felt down to ground not tolerate his hard slap..his tears flowing in his cheeks..his whole body shivering .

.in crying voice..iam not going anywhere ...badipapa..plz don't beat me..with stammering and shivering said maan.

Karan: dad why hurt ur hand to slap that stupid.( karan.give his belt to his dad)..harak start beating maan through belt. Maan held badipapa leg begging stop beating him..

Maan: plz..badipapa forgive me don't beat me .with sobbing voice..

Karan and harak smiled seeing maan begging to save his life..

Karan: dad , he did not obey my words .iam right maan bhai..with smirked face.

Maan: Promise badi papa, I doing everything what chotu bhai said..with placed his hand to crown head

Harak negelect maan innocent promise and once again tired to beat maan but some one held his hand behind him.

.Harak turn look at person : preeto , leave my hand .today if I forgive him, he roaming everywhere without our knowledge with hard voice.

Preeto: harak ji ..he is kid..dont slap like animal with motherly love voice.

Harak: but preeto..preeto gestured stop showing her hand to harak

Hark throw belt to corner of room with disgusting face.

Preeto shout : nakul..nakul

Nakul running from kitchen ..ji malakin .and nakul seeing maan state and his body bleeding .

Preeto: nakul, help maan settle to his room. With heavy hearted Nakul helped maan to escort to his room..

Maan room

Maan room is small room and single cot and ceiling fan only there is no ac .

Nakul helped maan to sit in his bed and sit next to maan and carrying his hairs smoothly

Nakul: maan baba..if ur parents alive , u live in ur mansion like prince..but today they beat daily like ur slave for them with tears rolling in his eyes..

Maan hand wiped nakul tears and placed his head to nakul lap: why kaka..my parents leave me alone. Because iam not good child ..my parents not love me .they hate me then only they went to god place with crying voice.

Nakul: no maan baba. Malkins ( maan parents) love u so much.in ur childhood they died in car accident.that day u want stay in mansion with maaji ( dadi) u don't want go with ur parents..otherwise u also die in that car accident..time god u escaped .

maan: if iam going to them..i am also die na, nakul kaka..i am happily live with my parents..even god also hate me then only god separate my parents .

Maan beta ...voice came from maan door steps

Maan raised his head : dadi...with sad face.

Maan tried to sit in bed and his body pain shout: hahaa...

Dadi running to held maan and maan lips crept little smile..

Dadi helped lay down to bed and dadi sit near maan head and her hand carring his hairs with teary eyes.

Maan: dadi, plz don't cry..i am alright with little smile.

Dadi: everything my mistake , if I am not gave power of attorney to harak ..this is not happen in ur life.u enjoyed ur life .

Maan: dadi , u never did mistake. U r best dadi in the world.even I enjoyed my life with dadi, nakul kaka, choti, chutiki, bubblu , and geet ji with little blushing face.

Dadi : geet ,u did not before mention her name with confused face.

Maan: oh , geetji my new friend..look at nakul signed him bring haldi paste for maan. nakul left

Dadi thought: geet is school kid..maan mingled with kids easily. His friend everyone kids only.

Maan: dadi, what u thinking..

Dadi: nothing beta, if she have leave time bring her to our mansion.

Maan: who dadi

Dadi: geet

Maan: ok dadi .but leave time with confused face.

Dadi: she have school time. study is important na, beta.

Maan mindvoice: haan, she look like doll but she studying school with confusing face, why she did not tell me.how dadi know she is studying school..i angry with her..why she hide big thing from me with pout face.

NAkul come inside with haldi paste bowl : maaji

Maan come back from his thought: nakul kaka , what in ur hand ..

Dadi: haldi paste for ur wound , beta

Maan: no dadi, I don't want haldi paste for my wounds with puppy face.

Dadi: no maan beta ,ur wounds cure soon na..u need apply haldi paste.

Maan nods his head negatively and hide his face inside blanket : no dadi , I don't want ..plz. it more burning my wound .

Dadi: ok .baba..u slept now..maan placed his head to dadi lap..maan dose off with dadi lap..his tears seeing in his face clearly

Dadi carring his head and sowmaya enter in maan room with teary eyes.

Sowmaya:dadi, why u did not stop papa .everyday he beated maan bhai. see dadi, his arms bleeding with crying voice.

Dadi: our fate sowamya..i did not know when my maan get peaceful life..tears rolled in her eyes..babaji plz save my child..

Preeto and harak room

The room so big, luxuries , refrigretar, ac, everything in their room

Pretto :karan give this drink to maan..he injured more by ur papa beating with concerned voice

Karan: mom, today what happened with u ,first u saved that stupid from dad beating now u want I give haldi drink to maan . today u talk like my stupid sister with irriating face.

Preeto: hmmm , u proved everytime, u have no brain..this is not ordinary milk..i mixed slow poison .if reguarly maan drink this slow poison..he become abnormal state..he behave like mad person.even he will attempt suicide soon with evily face..

Karan: why u take slow way to kill that stupid with disgusting face.

Preto: I never do anything without reason, go give this milk to maan..

Karan went to maan room with milk glass.

Maan sleeping in his small bed cot..

Karan shaking maan arms forcibly and maan jerked up bed quickly..

Karan: maan bhai, drink this milk with sugar coated voice.

Maan: oh ..chotu bhai..with fear face..

Karan love to see maan fear face with smirking face: if u did not drink this milk , I say to dad , u did not obey my word..

Maan : nahi chotu bhai, I drink..he snatched milk from karan hand, he drank one gulp..dont say anything to badipapa..he beat me.

Karan: why I complaint about u.u r my big bro .i did everything for ur good only..u r nave bhai..if u roaming outside alone , its not safe for u with fake concern voice.

Maan nods his head innocently and his eyes image so bluring..

Karan: good night bhai..went out with evily smile.

Maan slept.

( guys slow poison so ,it take more days to react in his body..)

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Handa mansion

Geet rolling her bed one side to another side..

Geet: it almost midnight ,till now I did not got sleep. My eyes not get sleep if i watch any movies..but it so boring. What I will do..her head blub glow ..

Geet : night outing with friends but no one come with me in night time..hmm maan with showing her whole tooth .

Geet dialed maan mansion number and nakul attend call with yawning face.

Nakul: hello

Geet: ji, can I speak to maan

Nakul:ji , who r u

Geet : oh ..ha, he is my friend.

Nakul: ji, he is sleeping, he is health not good.u will call morning..beta.

Geet: what happen to him with worried voice..tell me na

Nakul mindvoice: how I tell her, he beated by badi papa. Even I don't know what she related to maan baba..

Nakul: nothing beta,he have fever. With slow voice

Geet: fever with whispering voice, kaka, plz tell his home address with concern face

Nakul hearing concern voice and thought she is good friend of maan ..he told mansion address..

Geet: thanks kaka and cut the call.

Geet : maan have fever because of u ,geet.u only give icecream treat for him..what I did it ..he ate more icecream. But he so cute with dreamy face...I want know , if he alright or not..

Geet jumped in window door without knowing anyone went out to see her prince.

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Geet stand infront of khurana mansion..

Geet : maan , ur mansion really big one. Hmm..how I get inside.look at gurads sleeping in sitting position.thank u babaji..she enter mansion sliently without wake up guards.

Geet look at sky : babaji, help me..find my maan in big mansion..if iam searching whole room na, I cannot findout him tonight..what I will do babaji..

Geet decided toss coin to choose left or right .

Geet: if head means right side or tail means left side and then.i search him

Geet tossed : she got head face..thanks babaji, I search in right side of room..

She searching every room slightly..finally her legs strucked in window side. Geet drooling his face while moon light shine..

Geet: why he so handsome in his sleeping state also.

geet seeing his face only because of moon light..his bare body covered with blanket..he sleeping with cuddling in his stomach.

Geet : he so cute ..why babaji, u create him like cute , handsome , innocent..i don't know whose lucky person got him with irritate face.

Geet hit her forehead : oh I forgot he have fever..i want check first...he is good or not..she jumped inside room through window.room already dark ..geet legs hit flower vase..vase fell down to ground.maan hearing noise and sit up in bed post with closed eyes..

Maan: hey babaji, what sound with fear voice.

Geet hide behind curtain and hearing maan voice and geet tried move to maan side..her payal make sound . in silent room it make more eco.

Maan with closed eyes: payal sound, in midnight time..hey bhagan surely it is booth only..with shivering face..bhagan plz save me from ghost. He saying hanuman mantra continuously ..

Geet eyes open widely : iam ghost for u with murmuring voice.

Geet : oyie stop ur pray..i am not going anywhere with changed heavy voice.

Maan gulped his saliva and open his eyes : bhagan , plz save ur favourite child, I will give u everything..hmm what I will give u , god with scratching his own hairs.

Geet giggled hearing his prayer : omg maan , u r impossible.u r original piece . there is no substitute for u with slow voice..geet giggling heared by maan

Maan looking there and here : ghost ji, plz don't hurt me.my dadi maa said that iam good child. Bhoothji not hurt with good child na ? with slow and hesitate voice

Geet chuckled face and change her voice : are u kid ,maan ? with murmuring voice ..u answer my question then I decide about I will hurt u or not but u only said true only not any lie

Maan hold throat with his three fingers : promise ghostji ..i never saying lie in my life time with proud voice

Geet: tika , mister cutie with little smile face.

Maan: ghostji.my name is maan singh khurana not mister cutie..with innocent face.

Geet rolled her eyes: I know , mister cutie, I call u only this name..maan nods his head

Whom u love u most in the world.

Maan : ghostji, dadi maa with tooth smiling face.

Geet: then

Maan: my shona , my baby sister.

Geet: then

Maan: my friends.

Geet : friends not have names with eagerly voice.

Maan folding one after one finger said : bubblu, chutiki, raju finished everyone name except geet.

Geet: let think ,mister cutie, u forgot anyone..

Maan: ha , my juilee

Geet hearing juile name , even she don't know why she got irritating hearing his pet name .her face fell down .he mention everyone name except me even he mentioned his pet dog, juile..with angry face.

Geet: then what about geet..she is not ur friend with little angry voice

Maan: no, she is not my friend . she said lie to me..she is going to school but she did not told me with cute angry face.

Geet shout : why , iam not going school with confusing face.

Maan: nahi, ghostji, iam not saying u..iam saying about my geetji.

Geet : what u said , my geetji .with little blushing face.

Maan: oh...she is not my friend so she is not mine with child sturborn.

Maan: ok I said everything correctly na..u did not hurt me na ..with innocent face.

Geet chucking face and mindvoice: I want eat ur cute cheeks , maan.. u r really my mister cutie. anyone fallen for ur prince charming face with murmuring face.

Geet: but u say , geet

Maan: geet nahi geetji

Geet give impossible look to maan: ok say geetji is ur friend.

Maan: geetji is ur friend with smiling face

Geet glare to maan: oyie mister cutie, u r not parrot, what iam saying to repeat once again with angry tone

Maan hits his forehead: oh sorry..with sheepish smile..

Maan get down to bed and his legs slipped through because of spilt water in floor and geet running tried to held but maaneet both fallen to bed .geet top him and maan under her. Maaneet staring each other..

Part end

NEXT PART 4- pg 69

Precap: geet payback time to karan.,😈 geet treat maan wound ☺️..

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