Sick love... Update pg 1

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Sick love

She loves him. He loves only her money. At one time he probably looked after her, spoke beautiful words, showered compliments and gifts, fed promises round the clock
And she got caught. She fell in love. The wedding took place and they became a married couple. Something has changed in him. She waved it off, this is nonsense. He asked for money, she gave. People around turned a finger at temple - beautiful, smart, and so in love with this hunter for wealth
She didn't believe. She listened to him only. He was talking about love. The news of pregnancy, she seemed happy. For him it turned out to be punishment
A little girl is the key to a chest with money, which treacherously selected from him
He beat her mother, he beat her
Mother still believed him. But she saw everything. She will not be like this, never will be. When she grows up, she will save her mother from him, and they will always be fine
The pain became familiar, the scars countless, the sleep became a luxury, the fear a second name
This is the wrong love, she knew. And she will save her mother. Mom loves her. And she loves mother. Mom opens a dark room, my mother comforts her, mother wipes away her tears. But my mother doesn't understand that this person is bad
She would never, never leave her mother. Even if it hurts, even if hundreds, thousands of wounds. Even if the body will be beat black and blue . She'll save Mom. She loves her

Years passed. She was saving her mother. Again and again. And mother came back again and again. She loves mother. She will not leave her. She doesn't let go of those who she love. She doesn't let go of the hand she took. She holds Mom's hand. She loves mother

He's gone forever. Her nightmare has finally disappeared. And now everything will be fine

Her life has changed. She fell in love. He isn't like that at all. He doesn't need her money. She checked. At them all is in another way. He protects her. He loves her. She loves him. At them all is in another way. She took his hand

Time passed. Days were followed by days. He has changed. She waved it off, this is nonsense. He's lying. She forgives. Now he drinks. She forgives. He doesn't like everything. He is screaming. She waved it off. She loves. He loves? Loves. At them all is in another way. He squeezes her hand. It's just anger. She waved it off. There remains a bruise. It is no longer necessary to forgive. At them all is in another way. She loves. Everyone has problems. Everything will be alright. She loves

And he loves? He loves. It's just anger. She waved it off

She doesn't let go of the hand she takes. She will not be like Mom. She loves

At them all is in another way

Sick love
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sunithi thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful Laksha..
For Maya love has given her pain only.Yes in her life love is sick..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful writing. Maya has got just pain all her life.
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She doesn't believe him. Slightest. Absolutely. Not at all
And did he give her reasons to trust him?
She watches him. She is afraid of losing him. He's innocent. Like a child

He is frantic. She looks after him. She follows him. Healthy breakfast, lunch and dinner. Not to drink. Do not walk. Don't drive drunk. He is furious

And did he give her a reason to trust him? Even one? Even small? Even once? She said you must deserve trust, but you just broke it. Again and again

All wrong. He is screaming. She smiles. This makes him more out of himself

His photo in the apartment is everywhere. There he is as he was then. Look on photos, thoughts in her head, talk, hug, cuddle closer. Feel at home. There her husband loves her. In her own world. In thought, in her head. She hides there. Outside everything is cold. It's all nonsense, she waved. It's just a draft in her life. Close the window. Clogs the cracks. And the wind will go away forever

Three years. Three years it was all good
He arranged a surprise. How's the surprise? Does he still have secrets from me? It is not right. It should not be. The windows are closed. There was no clogs draft

Hi baby. And here your surprise. Are you a bit surprised now? You're suffocating me. Hate you. Open this damn door
You don't want. Then suffocating with me. Blow after blow. She is hysterical. He's laughing

He's leaving. He drinks. She drags him home. She again closes all the windows. She will find all the cracks. There will be no more clogs draft

Hate you. Give me the poison
In the pharmacy on the contrary, you can go. He will not go. Sneak "I hate you", wring with harm her hand and go away again. He loves. Just anger. It's all nonsense, she waved. She loves

But something is wrong. Learn all the thoughts. In a beautiful pendant we'll put a microphone. And there find a window, and there find that gap, and she will clog it

The microphone is detected. He is drunk. He is frantic. No, he's already furious.

"What did you want to hear?"
Fear knocks somewhere in the veins
"She is my wife"
He loves, she thinks happily

She loves. Even God will never separate them. She doesn't let go of the hand that she took. She will not be like mom


Mother looks. What do you see, Mom? Her or yourself? Do you think about what she saw all these years? Do you remember how her father beat her? Do you think what you did then? How did you broke the whole her world? This is your creation. Your daughter. This world. This illusion. He doesn't love, you sees. This is the wrong love

Sick love
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sick love

Mirror, a bit crooked

Mother and daughter

She loved her mother. She saved her all the time again and again. Contrary to herself. "He's a bad man. He needs only your money" But her mother let him in again. System failures. Fear is permanent. A sleep is like a dream. She will save her mother. She will open the doors and the windows, and they will fly away together. She just have to endure a little bit, a little bit longer. And then she will grow up, get on her feet, be strong and save her mother

And she saved. She thought so. Only her mother still shook the time back. The doors of house were opening to the monster again. Fear flowed again through the veins. The bruises returned to the body. But she loved her mother. She save her

Years have passed. The daughter has already grown. Now she herself is someone's wife. Shouts. The door is constantly clapping. Anger creeps on the walls of home. Bruises on the body and wounds. He loves her. At them all is in another way. She loves him. He has the right. After all, and this is love, isn't it, Mom?

Mother looks in the mirror. The daughter is somewhere in dreams. A reality ruthlessly looks into the eyes. He doesn't love. He's insulting. He humiliates. He beats. But he doesn't go away. As it was then in the dark past

She saves him from the world. He's as innocent as you, Mom. It's just anger. It's just friends are bad. This society is pouring dirt on him

Reflection disgustingly laughs in the face
Mother looks with tears in her eyes

A cry of desperation, a cry for help
Mom, save me! Please mom! Open this door! Mom, save me from monster! Please mom! Mom, save me!

Mother hears everything. But again doesn't move. She only looks at her daughter, that burns to ashes

The faces changed. Not mother, but husband. And she kept holding hand, which she took. Monster changed. But the pain is still same. And she still loves

Somewhere in prostration, somewhere in a vacuum, restless and drifting 9-year-old girl

Her tears are silent. Deep pain is hidden. And the illusion again envelops her

Sick love

Jhanvi, it's your fault! Only yours! Your daughter will burn in a sick love to ashes! And this is only your fault!
Edited by Laska - 8 years ago
shruthiravi thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good one Laska. Maya is following Jhanvi's path. it's a pity.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@shruthiravi, not certainly in that way
Look, if we see just two pictures, then they seem to be the same, but if you look more closely, if you superimpose the image, you can see the difference

The past always returns, the past always plays a role, but the past never repeats itself exactly

Maya's case isn't just sick love for Arjun. Everything is much more complicated and worse here

It is a reflection of love to mother, to Jhanvi. Jhanvi having tied Maya to herself, taught that in love is betray, cheat, cause pain, that in love it is necessary to catch up, what kind of love must be fought to the last breath
This is the history of relations between Maya and Jhanvi. Jhanvi was a victim, Ashvin the monster, Maya the defender
But the truth is that the victim was only one - Maya
Now the situation has changed - the victim and the monster have merged in one person. And Maya is stuck. She must protect, she must fight, and she got used to that when you love you get hurt
And she was stuck between the victim and the monster
Stuck between the fact that you need to cherish love, do not let go of your loved ones, save your loved ones. And you need to escape from the monster

She hides from this truth. She is building an illusion. She doesn't know what to do in this situation. She doesn't know how to let go. Jhanvi didn't give it to her. Jhanvi taught Maya only to suffer

And she fights for love, watches, runs after love, saves, and tries to survive with a monster

This is the impasse in which Maya was driven by Jhanvi

Therefore, she calls her, there is no one else. She begs her. Therefore, she speaks of the child. Therefore, she asks to fulfill his mother's debt at least once. For once to show the way. Don't just quit left just to surviving with a monster

But Jhanvi is just silent again and looks

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