Beete Lamhe~~ShraMan OS - Page 7

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Anu. ..kya tu itne main emotional ho gayi chutki .🤗

Dolly ka toh jeena mushkil kiya tha maine, ussse pooch.

Pehli baar mere saath aisa kuch hua yaar...

Has anyone one of us readers commented that you have not written well? It was a beautiful piece to say the least. In this mechanical world, if we are able to move anyone, to stir up any emotion in them, to make them feel someone's pain through our words, it only means that we have been successful.

Yup Resh...I agree with this thought of yours...

You should be gloating about your success with this piece, had it been me, I would be waving out a celebrity style wave with my hand in the air to every person I would see around.

Resh even I was on cloud 9 by seeing y'all's response..Par mujhe laga ke zyada he rula diya..

Ab tu mujhe forum par idhar udhar fudakti huyi dikhni chahiye ..bas❤️
Aapka hukum saaraakhopar...!!!❤️

Originally posted by: --Elara--

Anyways Anu, its beautifully written. It is not at all easy to make someone cry when they read your work and you have successfully pulled it off and oh so well! Hats off girl!
Just that i don't like tragic endings, it should always be #HappilyEverAfter.

Thank you so much Di...!!!I feel so elated by this comment of yours...!!!
Thank you so so much...

Originally posted by: --Elara--

Oye, you'll never quit writing, got that? 😡 Bas try to give us happy endings.

Originally posted by: Nik03

Oye...Pagal ladki!!
How can you say that you'll stop writing 😡
I wont stop writing yaar...Bas emotional pieces nahi likhungi...
Are itne bhi naazuk dil nahi hai re...!!
Sabne comments kiye,like kiya coz they loved it...N wo to sad endings mein hota hai na yaar!!
ha yaar...Mai kuch zyada he nervous ho gayi...Sorry...!!😳
Iska matlab ye nahi hai k tu Anu special likhna chod degi...Pagal!!
Or dissapointment ki to baat bhi mat kariyo...Kis ne kaha tujhe ke tune dissapointment kiya?!!
Sorry yaar...par...Sorry..

Kuch Vi Ainveyi!!
I'll unres sooon I promise...Ab khush ho jaa Anu baby...Give me a smile... 😃


Love you sho much🤗🤗
Lub u too my nikki pie...!!🤗🤗
N A very very Happy Holi ...May God fills your life with lots of colors of Love,peace, happiness, health, wealth...🤗
Same to you tooo...!!!🤗🤗

"SHRAVAN...!!!"A hear piercing scream was heard and then...dead silence...just a drop of something was heard and Shravan banging the door of the room...

"Bhaiya ruko...ruko please..."Pushkar pulled him aside...

The doctor came out of the room...

"Kya hua Doctor??Sumo...SSumo kaise hai??Mera baby...Kuch toh boliye..."Shravan asked impatiently...

"Mubarak ho Mr.Malhotra...Aapko Ladki huyi hai..."The doctor said...

"kyaaa??Saach..??Thank you so much doctor..."Shravan's happiness knew no bounds...

"Par I am Sorry Mr.Malhotra...Hum aapki wife ko bacha nahi paaye..."

"Ye aap kya keh rahe hai doctor??"Pushkar asked

"Ji ha...Humne toh pehle he kaha tha ke dono meyse koi ek he bach sakta hai...Aur Mrs.malhotra ney kaha ke Hum beti ko bachaye..."

"Aur aapne uski baat maan li??Ek baar mujhe pucha kyu nahi??"Shravan said ...his tone showing anger but eyes were full of despair...

"Sir aise cases mey hum Mothers ke baat sunte hai...Aur zyadatar mothers yahi suggest karti hai... We are sorry sir..."They doctor left and Shravan was devasted...Just then the nurse came in with the baby girl in her arms...

"Sir...aapki beti..."She handed the tot to Shravan as he held her with utmost care...She was not crying...She was smiling...Shravan stared at her angelic face..."Sumo kaun kehte hai ke tum nahi ho iss duniya mey??Tum ho...Apni jaan humara iss nanhi se jaan mey rakhkar chali gayi ho tum..."Shravan kissed the baby's forehead to which the baby giggled...

4 years later...

"Papa..."

"Yes mera baacha..."Shravan said lifting the 4 year old Aastha in his arms...

"Papa mai mumma se mili..."

"Aacha..kaha mile aap mumma se??"He said touching her piggy nose...

"Mai widow ke pash khali thi aur phir mumma vaha aayi..vo vahi pe khali hai...chalo na.."She said pointing towards the window...

They reached there...

"Kaha hai beta mumma??"

"Vaha..."She said pointing to the tinkling wall hanging...

"Aap kehte the na ke mumma bilkul vaishe hasti thi...Dekho...woh hume dekhkar Smile kar rahi hai..."

Shravan's eyes welled up hearing her talk...His Sumo had never left him...She made had her presence in Aastha...Same eyes...Same nose..Same giggles...

"Beta mumma vaha nahi yaha hai..."He said pointing her a stomach

"Meansh??"

"Means aap bilkul mumma jaise ho...Same to same...Carbon copy..."He said kissing her nose...

"Isshiliye aap mujhe Sumo bulate ho??"

"Haan..."

"papa aap mumma ko mish karte ho??"

"Nahi..."

"Kyu??"

"Kyunki mere paas tum jo ho..."He said hugging her tight...

So this was for compensation for all those whom I made cry...

Now I have my paper tomorrow and koi chutti nahi hai so I'll be here on the 18th after my last paper...

Miss me till the...😳

Love,

ANU😳