A Ram Lakshman SS-Lakshman through Ram 's Eyes ~Updated Chapter5 Pg11~ - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: SenAnu

Finally, after ages and desperation! 😆😆

SUMI SUMI SUMI SUMI 🤗
This chapter was completely worth the wait !!

WOW, just wow!
Each and every aspect and each emotion and each incident was so beautifully depicted that it brought tears to my eyes 👏👏👏

And all the parts where Ram recalls their childhood, wow! I could see everything happening in front of my eyes 😳😃😃
You write so beautifully and maturely Twinnie! You have become so much better and the best now 😃


Your true love for Ram Lakshman was shown so beautifully and it really was just amazing !

Now I cant wait to know what Sita will do for her Son 😃

Keep Writing like this Sumi, Lord Ram and Lakshmana are always there with you 😳😃😃

(Im there with you too 😆😆)

Fabulous !
All the best for your future dear 😳🤗

Anu ! Anu ! Anu ! Anu ! 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Thanks a lot for such a quick review...😳

Sorry for making u wait for so long...😳

I am glad that u loved it...😃⭐️

I have added much Lakshmila too..😉😛

I have not proof read , so forgive if any mistake is there..😆😛

@Bold , U r of course there with me as u r my Shatrughan ...🤗😳😆

I don't know when will next update come , but , I will try to update asap..😆😳

Best of luck for your future too baccha...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
Res- Unres by 10.30 latest 😆
Unres!
Okay, so.
Firstly- I hate cliffhangers! 😭😭
Secondly- I love the way you have brought the entire childhood as a narration that Raghuvar does, and LakshMila are *awws*
Achha, this is a RaLaksh fic na, where did LakshMila come? 😆😆
Amazing, baby, keep going, and we love you! 😉
Edited by Shrinika13 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
The update was simply amazing! <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
Finally the wait is over Sumi!😆😳
Just beautiful dear... Superbly portrayed the reactions of each n every person... No doubt it was a screenplay before my eyes 👏

This Bromance is something I always cherish! Loved it to the core ❤️

And in the last my heart jumped with joy... I am dying to see what Sita does for her Laal!!!! 😃

Now don't make us wait that much ok...😉😆

(On your advise even I have started my work) 🥱

Love
Mohini!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Wow...read...and will come back to review the entire fic! It's the whole of Ramayana!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hawww seee I am back with the reviews...gussa kyun karti hai? I am getting old and feeble...likhne me waqt lagta hai..
Wow...tune to puri Ramayana bata di...I loved it🤗

Very well written...your Ram-Lakshman jodi is always to heartwarming to see...thank you sweetie...and also the teeny weeny LakshMila❤️

You know where my heart lies...love you.
Continue writing..muah



Lots of love
Rii

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