Pyaar Thoda Hatke!(6 shots) (Based on Ruhi's Love Story)

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This is the story of Ruhi , a total tomboy who loves to enjoy and only knows to love her life , thats out Ruhi and about our hero ,Arjun a ruthless man who had a a bitter childhood , which resulted in him becoming a goon , the reason was an accident in which his parents died and the murderers were not punished but someone helped him to punish them , it was an underworld doon Babu bhai who was 5 years elder than Arjun but cared for Arjun like an elder brother and then made Arjun a ruthless goon as he is now. This story starts when these two people cross paths in a totally different angle.

Ruhi is in her best friends wedding and is a responsible girl but sometimes too childish too, Arjun is there to catch a girl who cheated Babu bhai and took his 5 lakh rupees.
Ruhi by mistake breaks a keys of her friend's bhaiyaa's bike which was actually a prank played by her friend .
Arjun mistaken Ruhi for that girl while Ruhi mistaken him to be her friend's bhaiyaa without seeing each other.

They both run out of the hall and run on road while they enter the back stage of another hall. They both go on the stage while they both keep running on it , suddenly Ruhi hits a tray of vermilion which falls on both of them and she is about to fall but Arjun holds her in nick of time , they both see each other for the first time while it is followed by an eyelock and a sudden burst of laughter of the people present in the hall made them break the eyelock while they both fight over this misunderstanding. Arjun leaves angrily while Ruhi in the party sees a few ladies taunting a lady , she sees the lady and says tensed : Ishima...

Her mother Ishita , the only lady in this world for whom she can do anything , her sweet angel was being taunted , she went angrily to those ladies and gets into a fight with them while her sweet nature d mother Ishita stops her from fighting while the fact that Ishita is not Ruhi's actual mother is revealed in this conversation. Ruhi sees her father Raman Bhalla a business tycoon coming with her cute little brother and sees them angrily while scolding them for coming late. Ishita again stops her due to which a cute friendly fight ensures between the brother sister duo and Raman -Ishita stare them. After that a lady comes ,Ruhi is shocked to see her and remembers her childhood with her father all alone without a mother and how Ishita came to lite her life and the whole happiness that was taken from her and her family by this lady , Shagun.

Ishita smiles seeing her and is Happy for her but Ruhi remembers how she was separated from her brother by that lady and her husband Ashok when they shifted to London to handle Ashok's family business. While Shagun smiles seeing Ruhi , Ruhi fights with her and leaves the scene angrily. There's a rain outside and she forgets her anger and starts enjoying in the rain dancing to it , someone is seeing her with his lustful eyes which she's not aware of . she goes from there while the man is revealed to be Babu bhai who tells Arjun to abduct Ruhi . Arjun agrees to it while the next morning starts.

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Hello Friends , so Myself Piyali, The writer of IshRa :Burning in Love if anyone knows about that FF , actually this is the first story I had written and it is really close to my heart for the same reason , I had posted it long back , around 1.5 years back when the show didn't even have the leap on Tellyupdates , My friend suggested me to post it here as well and so I am doing it , though at that time I didn't knew about who will play grown up children and so I had my own cast , you can imagine anyone in the roles of Grown Up Adi-Ruhi and their Love interests.
My Cast was:
Ruhi: Umang Jain

Arjun : Kanwar Dillon


Aditya & Anchal: Shivin Narang and Farnaaz Shetty


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I hope you like this story.

Shot 2
It starts with new sunrise , a new day in the liVes of the members of Bhalla house.
All the members meet at dinning where after some random talks they talk about last night and Ishan starts teasing Ruhi which results in another cute fight between the brother -sister duo which is interrupted by Ishita who makes Ishan remember that he has his schools (He is 5 years old).
Ishan lefts the scene as usual while others too gets busy in their work while Ruhi leaves towards her collage , Ishita towards her clinic and Raman to his office, they think it to be a normal day but are unaware of the storm waiting for them.

As soon as Ruhi reaches collage , Arjun who was already waiting there for her arrival kidnaps her by making her unconscious and then takes her in his car.
Ruhi suddenly gets conscious and finds out that she has been kidnapped as her hands , eyes , mouth and legs were tied.

She gets angry and tries her best to open herself while Arjun who was driving the car sitting in the front seat sees this and while driving only opens the cloth tied to her mouth.
As soon as the cloth is opened , Ruhi starts cursing Arjun for kidnapping her while he gets angry with this and ties her again.
Ruhi is silent all the way due to the cloth while Arjun has a smile on his face seeing Ruhi silent.

They then reach somewhere in the middle of jungle but Ruhi couldn't see the place due to the cloth tied on her eyes.
Arjun then opens the cloth on her eyes and mouth and takes her inside a big mansion by lifting her. All the way Ruhi keeps beating him while he doesn't pay heed .
They reach inside while Arjun drops her in the middle of a hall where a man is sitting and so many people standing.
The man is revealed to be Babu bhai who tells Ruhi that he loves her and wants to marry her while Ruhi thinks him as a mentally ill person due to his liking towards HER.
She doesn't agree while Arjun is told to take her in a room on second floor and he does that and locks the room from outside.

When Arjun comes with a plate of food for Ruhi, she again fights with him which is followed by an unintentional eyelock.

Arjun them leaves the plate there and goes out while Ruhi gets worried for her family.
Ishita is shown in Bhalla house as she returned earlier for she had no work left and she sees Mrs Bhalla and Mrs Iyer fighting as to whose made dosa will Ruhi eat and Ishita resolves their fight and informs them that she has called Shagun, Ashok and Adi for a dinner.

Everyone is happy as they'll meet Adi after a long time and they keep waiting for Ruhi and Ishan, while Ishan returns from school Ruhi doesn't which makes everyone to worry for her. Raman too returns but Ruhi isn't yet there. Ishita starts crying for her daughter while she gets a call on her number. Picking it up she finds it to be Babu bhai's call who informs her that he kidnapped Ruhi and will marry her soon. He cuts the call before Ishita could reply while ishita breaks down and tells everyone that their sweet princess has been kidnapped by a undersworld don.

All the members are shocked but they couldn't even cry for Ruhi being missing when Shagun arrives and they all decide to hide the truth as well as their emotions from the Khanna family as that will make them too worried.

All try there level best to divert Shagun and Ashok's attention with some random talks while Aadi too arrives and Ishan (doesn't know about Ruhi's kidnapping) too comes out of his room.
The whole family is overwhelmed to meet Adi but this happiness is mixed with the sadness and tension for Ruhi.
Ishan is not happy meeting Shagun due to Ruhi who hates Shagun while he's too happy to meet his elder brother aadi.

Aadi , Ishan , Ananya and all other kids and elders go from their to the dinning table while Ahagun, Ishita, Ashok and Raman sit there and discuss about Ishan about whom Ashok didn't knew that he was the son of Mihir and Mihika who died in a fatal accident leaving there last sign with Ishita -Raman . Mihir hated Shagun and thats why he disowned her due to which he didn't told her about his son but Ishita told her everything and she and Raman adopted Ishan.
Ashok is really sad with everything while Adi comes there and wants to know about Ruhi but Ishita and all lie to him about her collage trip and cover the matter.
The Khanna family leave with a hope of meeting Ruhi soon while all the members of the Bhalla family break down after they are gone.

Ishita and Raman who themselves are broken from inside give strength to everybody while Ruhi tries to escape but isn't able to due to some goons stationed outside 24/7.
Ruhi is in her room when she hears a strange guitar sound from somewhere while she thinks that who's singing in the middle of jungle at this time...

Superb start..
Is it fully on ruhi's love interest.?..
Would like to read more.
Continue soon...

Originally posted by: divan19

Superb start..
Is it fully on ruhi's love interest.?..
Would like to read more.
Continue soon...

Thanks a lot , yup its entirely on her Love story with Adi's story included in the end...thanks a lot again...will update soon...😃

Awesome start...continue soon plz

Nice start
So arjun was by himself till this babu helped him
Now they're like brothers
Baby his eyes set on ruhi so asked arjun to kidnap her
Both arjun n ruhi have got lost in each other's eyes still haven't joined the dots together realizing they're attracted to one another
Wonder how long it will take arjun to understand n what will he do then
Will he be willing to give his love up to his bro or betray his bro for his love
Till then app family worried for her
Adi sad not seeing his sis
What's gonna happen now
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

Concept seems very nice...

Shot 3-

Rescue Operation

Ruhi is thinking this and she comes near the window of the room thinking this.
She eyes the goons down and gets an idea.
She says to them : I wanna go out...
Goon 1 : yaa and we'll let you go...he ...he ...funny joke hann...
Ruhi smiles and says : I am gonna marry your boss so I am your future boss and if you don't agree then...
She was saying this when a goon cuts in saying : ok, but you can only be inside the mansion.
She smiles while they come up and open the door.

She thanks them and then starts searching the mansion to see that who is singing..
She comes to a godown type of place on the ground floor and sees a boy singing and playing guitar , she is facing his back.
She tries to face him and he turns out to be Arjun.
She is shocked and goes to him and says : hey you sing so well haan , i never knew it seriously...you can become a great singer...
He is shocked to see her and says : what are you doing here???? Who let you free??
She is tensed and doesn't reply.

He holds her arm and takes her to the same room while she tries resisting.
In the room:
Arjun says to her angrily : don't even try to get free or the consequences will be bad.
She eyes him and says : listen to me you sing really well(she was saying when he tries to go but she pulls him towards her) why are you not listening...
They both suddenly hear a noise and see Babu bhai coming there , Ruhi pushes Arjun behind a wardrobe.

Babu bhai comes in and says : who opened this door????
Ruhi confidently says : i made them open it but i am not running away , any problem...
Babu bhai comes near her and says : no problem baby , you can do anything after all you are the future queen of this place...
Ruhi gets angry and slaps him hard on his cheeks saying : just stop yourself , lets see i become your queen or you become a king of jail...
Babu bhai eyes her and takes out a knife from his pocket, he keeps it on Ruhi's wrist and slashes it.

Ruhi is shocked to see continuous blood oozing out and so is Arjun seeing Babu bhai doing this...
Ruhi winces in pain while Babu bhai laughs and says : this is not gonna kill as it is a little side from the vein but next time(he holds her face tightly) if you try to be oversmart...i would kill you baby...
He throws her on the bed and gets out of the room locking it from outside.
Ruhi is almost unconscious and Arjun comes out and sees her.
He holds her wrist and caresses it , unknown to him he has tears in his eyes seeing her in this state.
He goes near the cupboard in the room and takes out the first-aid box kept there.
He does the first -aid of the cut and sprinkles water on Ruhi.
Ruhi wakes up subconscious and sees the cut .
Arjun turns his face to other side and says : you want to run away from here???

Ruhi eyes him shocked and comes in front saying : you will help me??
Arjun (without eye contact ): yaa , i can help you because i don't want Babu bhai to do a wrong thing because he always does wrong with those who do wrong with people, he is never bad to innocent people , i don't know why is he doing this to you...
Ruhi angrily : oh please , your Babu bhai is a bad man , you are just in illusion of his goodness...

Arjun angrily : just think before you say, you want my help or not???
Ruhi nods while Arjun says: ok , so the men stationed below are asleep and i will go out through window and give you a rope , without making noise take that rope and come down , then i'll help you out of this jungle but after that its all up to you...
Ruhi nods satisfied while Arjun goes out from the room building.
Ruhi eyes him going out and thinks he is not that bad...

Shot 4-

The episode starts with Ruhi eyeing Arjun going down and she is lost in his thoughts when suddenly he shouts :now you want to be free or not???
She gets out of the thoughts and says : sorry , i am coming...
She too climbs the rope and was about to fall while going down when Arjun holds her , now Ruhi is in Arjun's arms.
Arjun eyes her innocent face closely , for the first time he saw how beautiful she was while she was eyeing deep inside his eyes falling in love with him every time she saw his eyes...
Suddenly they both come out of the trance and Arjun drops her down , he guides her to the way of road in the jungle and it is morning now when they are still walking silently.

In the Babu bhai's home:
He goes to Ruhi's room and finds it empty , he suddenly eyes a bracelet of Arjun and thinks ;Arjun??
He runs to his men and says : run fast , catch Arjun and Ruhi as soon as possible ...i knew someday he would betray me...after all he was not from our origin, i gave him shelter but he..he betrayed me...
Some of his men leave who were his loyal s but some stay back and argue (Arjun's friends)
Arjun and Ruhi are walking when suddenly Babu bhai's men spot them and run to them.
Arjun is shocked to see them and says : listen , please let her go...
1st man : oh please, you betrayed Babu bhai and now suppressing us , don't even think , we'll even fight with you for Babu bhai...
Arjun eyes Ruhi eyeing them scared , her face shows her nervousness, her fear , the fear of Babu bhai who...who can do anything to her...
He comes in front of her and shields her from them.
Arjun : ok , so then you have to fight with me...
All of them start fighting , they were around five while Arjun was alone , Ruhi was eyeing it all in utter shock , she didn't knew what to do...she was blank...her fear overpowered her senses and she was standing there like a statue, Arjun was fighting with them , he was able to overpower them but still at last five people are much more than a single person so he at last was defeated, Ruhi came to her senses seeing him getting beaten by those men , badly...he was fighting them just to save her.
She screamed : arjuuunnn...
She ran to him , trying her best to protect him from their beatings but no use , he was half unconscious , he tried to speak and at last spoke the words : run away...for your life run...
Ruhi hugged him while herself getting the beatings and says : no...your life is much important than my freedom...
They at last tried to take her , dragging her while she cried , she was eyeing Arjun totally in blood , suddenly she got the strength , the strength to fight back, she freed herself with much struggle , she ran to a fallen tree trunk nearby and held it and gave a big blow to one of the men, he was on ground , others were shocked , one of them pushed her and she fell down in a muddy puddle nearby. Her face and clothes were fully covered in mud and so was her fear...she got up and again hit them all , now all of them were down, she ran near Arjun and sat crying near an unconscious Arjun : please stand up...
The voice came like a thunder from her mouth but he didn't , she ran from there in search of help, she ran like a mad , crying badly , her speed seemed like that of a jet , she doesn't know for how much time she ran but she just ran to find a single person in that deserted forest and at last she saw a mansion , a big mansion , she had a smile , a hope in all the sorrows , she ran to the mansion and ringed the door bell continuously , the name plate outside mansion was : Khanna mansion...

Adi opened the door , he was shocked to see her , he couldn't recognize her , her face was covered with mud and so were her clothes.
Ruhi : please help me...please...
Adi : who are you , i told papa not to take house in forests but he liked adventures...now thieves are coming...
He was about to shut the door when Ruhi spoke : i am not a thief...i am not...i need your help please...
Shagun who was passing by hears their conversation and comes to the gate and says ;beta , who are you???
Ruhi recognizes Shagun and hugs her in despair.

She cries : Dhagun mumma...
Shagun understands that she's Ruhi.
Shagun emotionally : Ruhi...

Ruhi breaks the hug and drags her towards the forest in hurry.
Shagun calms Ruhi and takes her to the place where Arjun is lying unconscious with other men.
Ruhi while crying narrates her the whole incident and Adi hugs her saying : why Ishima didn't told me?? My Ruhi...
Shagun calls the inspector and they take all to hospital.
Then she takes her to Bhalla house while all hug her, Ruhi is all the time thinking about Arjun.
Arjun in hospital is in critical condition.