Maaneet Rosid FF - Love Forever

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himani_692

@himani_692

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

wow another Rosid Ff the concept is interesting & different nice character sketch waiting for updates eagerly pls do pm me

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kavita

@kavitha_r

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Part 1

Maan is a well-known business tycoon who is running multiple activities in Bharadwaj Group of Industries. He is living with his wife Geet and his little brother Siddhanth. He began to take the responsibility after his parents died. Geet too takes care of Siddhanth.

Siddhanth: Bhabhi, I want to become a big man like Maan Bhiya.

Geet: Yes, you will become like him but you have to put in a lot of efforts.

Siddhanth: What should I do for that. (He was studying in the school.)

Geet: Do your homework like a good boy.

Geet and Siddhanth sit together and complete the homework.

Geet: That is like a good boy. Now you can play with your friends till your bhiya comes.

Siddhanth goes and plays cricket with his friends. It is now his turn to bat. He faces the first ball. Siddhanth hits the ball so high that it breaks one of his neighbor's window glasses.

The neighbor is none other than the watchman's house. He comes to the boys charging them. The boys run away looking at them. Suddenly, the car comes. It is none other than Maan. The boys hide behind the car. Maan comes out and sees the boys. He sees the man chasing them.

Maan: what is the matter?

Watchman: Your brother and his friends broke my glass.

Maan gives him 5000 Rs and said, "This is the compensation for you. Put the better window panes. Children have every right to play. If you have any problem from our side, come to me."

The watchman leaves.

At home, Maan said, "Siddhanth, what you did was not right but I have supported you. See that you don't do it again."

Sid: I will take care next time.

Maan and Sid freshen up. Maan checks Sid's homework and said, "Good job. If you work hard, you will definitely top the class."

Sid: Geet bhabhi helped me. I want to be like you.

Maan: You will definitely become like me. I have a surprise for you.

Sid: What?

Maan: Come with me.

He takes Sid and his friends to the real cricket ground and said, "Guys, from now on, you will play here."

Sid: Wow. You are the best brother.

Days pass by. Sid does well and gets an admission in the high-profile college with all the facilities. However, some of the Sr. students initially rag him, making him wear the ladies bra but feel sad for him, seeing the tears falling from his eyes. The next day, they said, "Sid, I'm very sorry. I want to make friends with you."

Sid agrees.

Roli too joins the same college. She had lost her parents when she was very small. From then on, she is staying in Pammi's orphanage. Pammi has been torturing the children especially, Roli who is scared of her.

Edited by kavsy - 8 years ago

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Heatsha8176

@Heatsha8176

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Nice start
Maan n geet really take care n love Sid
He wants to be like his bro n studies hard
Now he's in college n so is roli
Poor roli is getting tortured by that pammi
Hope Sid makes friends with roli soon n finds out about what's happening in her life
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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arisharosid20

@arisharosid20

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Wow awesome geet & ma'am really love sid alot.. Know sid in college really can't wait for rosid meet.. Oh no pammi Torture roli alot... Hope sid save her soon update next part soon

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akshara

@AksharaRosid

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Wow maan and geet love Sid a lot .

Now rosid are in the same collage .can't wait see rosid meet .

Thanks for the pm

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Amazing Part.😊

Maan and Sid bonding was so Nice.😊

The way Maan teaching good Morals,it was so Nice.😊

Maan took Sid to Real Playground to Play,it was so Nice.😊

Seniors in his College ragged him.😭

But later realized their Mistake and make him Friend,it was so Nice.😊

Roli also joined in Sid's College,it was so Interesting.😊

Please Update Next Part soon.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaSweety-Anu

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Surprised to see the small Sid.nice to see small Baldev as small Sid.loved his bonding with maaneet.so nice to see geet guiding him n making him do homework.loved maan's reply to the watchman n sid taking maan's advise not to repeat it in d positive sense.maan is so nice to arrange a cricket ground 4 sid.Sid in college.glad that though he was ragged seeing his tears his seniors themselves made friends with him.Poor roli.she lost her parents n is suffering in pammi's orphanage.waiting 4 rosid meet

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Amazing update, loved it.

Maan-Geet taking care of Sid and love him too much. Roli joined Sid's college.

Thanks for the PM dear.

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InToTheUnknown

@InToTheUnknown

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

that's a really nice start...Maani is a nice bro n Geet a even good bro...I can't imagine sid being ragged...I will cry now!!!But fine those seniors made company with him...now Roliji is his clg mate...let's see how the love birds meet...may b out if town for few days n cannot cmnt...plz bear me...