IshRa FF: Yeh Hai Mohabbatein (Chapter 5 - Page 50) (23rd June)

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Hello everyone. Well I am back. I am here to start a new Fan Fiction.

IshRa FF: Yeh Hai Mohabbatein
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So, the story starts with the scene when after showing the DNA reports, Ishita went and Raman realized his mistakes and decided to say a "Thank You" to Ishita but when she returned, she scolded him. So, my twist starts from here. Here they will have a different talk.

The tracks which were shown in the show, my story will also have the same tracks but with a different angle. And I will end this story at a certain point.

Hope you all will like it.

So, below given is a list of the tracks which were shown in the show. If any edittig or omitting is required do tell me.

1. Iyers Anniversary
2. Drunk Ishita
3. Raman defending her
4. Ishita apologising him
5. Mising Ishita
6. Adi's bday
7. Param entry
8. Holi - Ishdi introduction
9. Raman convincing Adi
10. IshRaRu dinner
11. Adi and Shagun insulting Ishita (my take)
12. Ruhi angry Raman and then him convincing her
13. Ruhi convinced IshRa hug
14. Some nice scenes
15. Param mess (my take)
16. Mimi engagement preparation
17. Cocktail party
18. Engagement night
19. Accident track (my take)
20. IshRa spoilt date
21. Adi coming to bhalla house
22. Param re-entry
23. Bathroom scene
24. Newspaper sequence
25. Ishita bringing Shagun home
26. Court marriage drama
27. Shagun Mihir truth revealed
28. Shagun coming Mihir's home
29. Adi bonding with IshRa
30. Navratri celebrations
31. IshRa blooming relationship
32. Mani entry
33. Raman jealous
34. Party night
35. IshRa blooming relationship yet again
36. Ashgun wedding sequence (my take which includes everything from cocktail party to wedding night)
37. Shagun coming bhalla house - whole sequence
38. Shagun out
39. Happy family
40. Ending

In this story, Raman won't be rough tough rude crude man. He will be simple and silent man craving for love and happiness. And Ishita will be supporting him all through.

This story will be written with hindi and english, both dialogues.

Hope you all like it!




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The below post has the prologue in hindi.
While the post below that has the prologue in english.



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Prologue

Aapne kitni aasani se decide kar liya ki aap Ruhi ko de doge woh bhi kise shagun ko... Cheer
Meri toh kabhi aapko fikr nahi hui. Lekin apni socho. Kya aap ek din bhi Ruhi ke bina reh paate. Chal pade the stunt dikhane. Aap mar jaate raman. Mar jaate.

With that she left but before leaving she said

Maine jo kaha sochna raman sochna


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Prologue

How easily you decided that you will give Ruhi to Shagun... Chee. Well, you never cared for me. But think about yourself. Would you have been able to live without her even for a day. You wanted to become a hero. You would have died, Raman. You would have died.

With that she left but before leaving she said

Think about my words Raman. Please think.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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very interesting dear continue and pm me when update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting concept and prologue
do continue soon
continue ur old story too
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting start
update soon
Pm me whenever u update
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Before ending y don't introduce ishita pregnancy track which we cannot watch in the I want to see how Raman we pamper ishita

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