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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Ruurmi

Please add ishita pregnancy

with twins and bond of adi ruhi with them

and full on romance please


Well I am not so sure about adding Ishita's pregnancy track since I don't want it.
Will consider your request if responses are good
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari21v

interesting and awesome starting

liked the prologue
plzzz update soon
dear


Thank You
Will update soon
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Hello everyone!

First of all, thank you so much so much likes and comments in the prologue itself.
Secondly, veryone is asking for Ishita's pregnancy track. Please give your opinion.

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This is update is especially for @pari21v. I want a long comment from you.
And you all also.
The post below has the first chapter with hindi dialogues.
While the post below that has the first chapter with english dialogues.



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Chapter 1

Raman was not able to sleep. Ashok's false words. Ishita's DNA reports. Everything was taking a toll over his senses. After Ishita went to her clinic before saying to think about her words, Raman went to Ruhi and showered all his love to her in just 5 minutes. Then he made her eat and then sleep. While Ruhi was sleeping in her room, Ishita was sleeping on the couch, Raman was lost in his thoughts. Then , at last, he decided to have some straight talks to Ishita.

He went near the couch, sat on the nearby table and started staring Ishita. After few minutes, he realized what he was doing. He shakes her and said

R: Ishita utho

I: (no response)

R: Ishita utho

I: kya hai Raman? (Her eyes closed)

R: Ishita utho mujhe tumse baat karni hai

I: kal. Abhi mujhe sone do

R: Ishita please its important.

I: achha bolo. Mai sun rahi hoon (eyes still closed)

R: nahi yahan nahi. Chalo terrace pe chalte hai

I: (peeping out of the blanket with one eye still closed) kyu kudne waale ho kya (getting back inside the blanket) kal kudna abhi mujhe sone do

R: (gritting his teeth,) ishita utho

Raman forcefully made her stand and then they started walking towards terrace. All this while Ishita's head was on his shoulder as she was too sleepy and right at moment his first priority was to talk to her.

They reached the terrace. She sat on the bench and he sat sat beside her. And then he started

R: Ishita I know ki pichhle kuch dino mein maine bilkul he galat tareeke se behave kiya. Ruhi k saath, family k saath aur tumhare saath bhi. Actually mai kehna chahta hoon ki I want to set things right.

And then he turned towards Ishita to see her reaction only to see her sleeping.

R: (shouting) Ishita

I: (waking up) huh kya?

R: tum so rahi ho?

I: nahi mai nahi so rahi hoon. Mai bahut seriously sun rahi hoon, har woh cheez jo aapne nahi boli, dhyaan se.

R: I love you

I: kya??? (Shocked)

R: (smirking) relax. Sirf tumhe jagane k liye bola.

I: (eyes widened) you are so bad.

R: (smirking) I know that.

I: get to the point

R: dhyaan se suno. Dobara nahi bolunga. (Taking a deep breath) Ishita I know ki pichhle kuch dino mein maine bilkul he galat tareeke se behave kiya. Ruhi k saath, family k saath aur tumhare saath bhi. Actually mai kehna chahta hoon ki I want to set things right.

Raman was standing near the railing of the terrace while Ishita was sitting on the bench near it. He turned to see her reaction only to find her starring. He smiled at her and said

R: kya ghoor rahi ho

I: dekh rahi hoon ki Ravan Kumar toh ek he din mein sudhar gaya

R: mai kabhi bigada Tha jo sudharunga

I: yeah right

She went near him and stood beside near him and said

I: Raman it's good ki waqt rehte aapko realise ho gaya ki aap galat the. Pata hai jab aapne uss din Ruhi ko khoon dene se mana kar diya mujhe bahut gussa aaya or phir aapka continuous rash behaviour. Lekin mujhe samajh nahi aa raha ki aapko aisa laga kyu.

R: are kya bolu yaar. Yaad hai uss din valentine day ki party mein. Mai aise he drunk tha uss par se woh 6 ft 2 inch...

I: kaun?

R: are woh Ashok.

I: yeh kaisa naam hai

R: naam nahi height hai

I: 😔

R: uss din aisi bakwaas ki aur maine usse believe kar liya. I am a stupid.

I: oh yes you are.

R: lekin tumhe bada trust tha

I: or kya. Mai jab se ayi hoon, tabse dekh rahi hoon. Aap dono ki ek ek habit milti hai. Dono lefty ho. Dono ko thanda doodh pasand hai.

R: tumhe mere baare mein kuch zyada he nahi pata hai.

I: o shut up. Mujhe koi shauk nahi aapke bare mein jaanane ka. Woh toh bas maine notice kiya ki aapki or Ruhi ki ek ek habit milti hai.

R: thank you Ishita. Thank you so much

I: Raman it's ok. Maine jo kiya mera farz tha. Mujhe aapka thank you nahi chahiye. Aap bas mujhe ek promise karo. (She said forwarding her hand towards him)

R: kya promise

I: ki aap kabhi Ruhi ko ignore nahi karoge and kabhi uske saath rashly behave nahi karoge.

R: (smilingly kept his hand on hers) promise

I: Ruhi promise

R: Ruhi promise

Their hands parted and they again stood beside each other

I: Raman

R: hmm?

I: aapko bura na lage toh ek baat puchho?

R: bolo

I: aap jab nashe mein mere clinic aaye the toh aapne kaha tha ki

R: ki?

I: (hesitatingly) ki Adi mujhe chhodh k mat jao..

R: woh aise he nashe mein tha isliye kaha hoga

I: sach bolo Raman

R: woh adi ne mujhe phone kiya tha. Woh mujhse milna chahta tha

I: sach. Yeh toh achhi baat hai.

R: koi achhi baat nahi hai kyunki woh mujhse milna chahta tha yeh batane k liye ab woh mujhse kabhi nahi milega.

I: huh?

R: adi ka passport ban raha hai jismein uske father ka naam Raman Bhalla nahi Ashok khanna hai

I: (shocked) kya?

R: haan. Aaj se adi Aditya Bhalla nahi Aditya Khanna hai

I: lekin Raman

R: (cutting her in between) kuch or baat karein. Please.

I: yaah. Lekin Raman (keeping her hand on his shoulder) jaise Ruhi or Ruhi k papa mil gaye hai na waise he Adi or uske papa bhi mil jaenge

R: (looking at her) u think so?

I: I am sure.

They were silent again. When Raman said

R: Ishita

I: hmm?

R: thank you. Thank you so much.

I: It's ok Raman. Achha suno..

R: kaho

I: wapas chalein? Mujhe thand lag rahi hai.

R: chalo.

And they went back to their home. Their room. Raman proceeded towards the bed while Ishita towards the couch when he said

R: Ishita

I: hmm

R: tum bed pe so sakti ho

I: lekin Raman

R: puri zindagi padi hai baatne k liye. Ek bed toh baant he sakte hai. Aa jao.

I: R u sure?

R: haan baba.

I: alright.

And they slept on the bed a little distance apart but yet together.
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Chapter 1

Raman was not able to sleep. Ashok's false words. Ishita's DNA reports. Everything was taking a toll over his senses. After Ishita went to her clinic before saying to think about her words, Raman went to Ruhi and showered all his love to her in just 5 minutes. Then he made her eat and then sleep. While Ruhi was sleeping in her room, Ishita was sleeping on the couch, Raman was lost in his thoughts. Then , at last, he decided to have some straight talks to Ishita.

He went near the couch, sat on the nearby table and started staring Ishita. After few minutes, he realized what he was doing. He shakes her and said

R: Ishita, wake up

I: (no response)

R: Ishita, wake up

I: what is it Raman? (Her eyes closed)

R: Ishita wake up, I need to talk to you

I: we will talk tomorrow. Let me sleep.

R: Ishita please its important.

I: alright you say. I am listening. (eyes still closed)

R: no, not here. Let's go to the terrace.

I: (peeping out of the blanket with one eye still closed) are you planning to jump.(getting back inside the blanket) do that tomorrow. Let me sleep now.

R: (gritting his teeth,) ishita wake up

Raman forcefully made her stand and then they started walking towards terrace. All this while Ishita's head was on his shoulder as she was too sleepy and right at moment his first priority was to talk to her.

They reached the terrace. She sat on the bench and he sat sat beside her. And then he started

R: Ishita I know that from past few days, I have not been behaving very nicely. With Ruhi, with all the family members and with you also. Actually I want to say that I want to set things right.

And then he turned towards Ishita to see her reaction only to see her sleeping.

R: (shouting) Ishita

I: (waking up) huh what?

R: you are sleeping?

I: no I am not sleeping. I am listening to you very seriously, all those things which you didn't say, carefully.

R: I love you

I: what??? (Shocked)

R: (smirking) relax. That was just to wake you up.

I: (eyes widened) you are so bad.

R: (smirking) I know that.

I: get to the point

R: listen to me very carefully, I won't repeat it (Taking a deep breath) Ishita I know, from the past few days I have not been behaving very nicely. With Ruhi, with all the family members and with you also. Actually I want to say that I want to set things right.

Raman was standing near the railing of the terrace while Ishita was sitting on the bench near it. He turned to see her reaction only to find her starring. He smiled at her and said

R: what are you staring at?

I: I am seeing that Raavan kumar improved in a single day

R: I was not that bad that I will improve in a day.

I: yeah right

She went near him and stood beside near him and said

I: Raman it's good that with time you realized that you were wrong. You know when you refused to give blood to Ruhi I was so pissed off. And then your continuous rash behaviour. But I'm not understanding why did you think so?

R: oh please don't ask that. Do you remember that valentine day party? I was so drunk and that 6 ft 2 inch...

I: who?

R: that bloody Ashok

I: what type of name is this?

R: it's not the name, it's his height.

I: 😔

R: he was continuously saying anything and everything and I believed him like a stupid. I am a stupid.

I: oh yes you are.

R: but you were having full faith in me.

I: obviously. From the day I came, I have been observing you both. Ruhi is your carbon copy.

R: don't you think you know I bit too much about me.

I: o shut up. I am not even interested about knowing you. I just noticed that, casually.

R: thank you Ishita. Thank you so much

I: Raman it's ok. It was just my duty. I don't wantyour thank you. I want a promise from you.(She said forwarding her hand towards him)

R: what promise?

I: that you won't ignore Ruhi and won't behave rashly with her

R: (smilingly kept his hand on hers) promise

I: Ruhi promise

R: Ruhi promise

Their hands parted and they again stood beside each other

I: Raman

R: hmm?

I: if you don't mind, can I ask you a question ?

R: yeah

I: that day when you came drunk to my clinic, you said that

R: that?

I: (hesitatingly) that Adi please don't leave me

R: I guess I was drunk so I might have said that

I: really Raman?

R: Adi called me that day. He said he wanted to meet me.

I: really. That's great.

R: nothing is great about it. He wanted to meet me because he wanted to tell me that he won't meet me ever again.

I: huh?

R: adi is getting a passport for himself in which his father's name will be Ashok Khanna and not Raman Bhalla

I: (shocked) what?

R: yeah. He is no more Aditya Bhalla. He is now Aditya Khanna.

I: but Raman

R: (cutting her in between) let's talk about something else. Please.

I: yaah. But Raman (keeping her hand on his shoulder) the way Ruhi reconciled with her father, one day Adi will also reconcile with his father.

R: (looking at her) u think so?

I: I am sure.

They were silent again. When Raman said

R: Ishita

I: hmm?

R: thank you. Thank you so much.

I: It's ok Raman. Listen..

R: yeha

I: lets go back home. Its cold here.

R: let's go

And they went back to their home. Their room. Raman proceeded towards the bed while Ishita towards the couch when he said

R: Ishita

I: hmm

R: you can sleep on the bed.

I: but Raman

R: We have whole life left to share with each other. let's start with this bed. come on.

I: R u sure?

R: ofcourse

I: alright.

And they slept on the bed a little distance apart but yet together.
Edited by ...Forever... - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update dear
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I also one who ask for ishita pregnancy track
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I know your r not big wisher for ishita pregnancy but I have it wishes for long time but it not possible for cv
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Pls pls pls don't stop writing this story pls

It is superb
Starting itself very nice
Pls keep on writing

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