My last words before death Swasan OS

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Posted: 8 years ago
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My last words before death...( Swasan Os)

Swara was crying silently remembering all past moments happened in these six months.
She was letting out all the pain through whoch she suffered in this few months. How her life got changed. She was missing sanskar a lot now. She needed him to wipe his tears by his hanky she needed him to give her water by his hands to calm her down. She was now tired by all the happenings. She just wanted to be in her prince's embrace and forget all her worries and sleep. All the sleepless nights were making here more weak.
She was trying to sleep but sleep was far away from her eyes.
Now the tears in her eyes have dried and then again she took sleeping pill just to be away from all the thoughts. Just to stop thinking and crying. Taking a lil heavy dose of sleeping pill she went in a deep sleep in few minutes.

After few weeks raglak become one Laksh said lets go and take swaragini back but Sanskar said that only ragini will come and Swara have to be punish every tries to explain but no use suddenly RAGINI called Laksh and Sanskar and said Swara has committed suchide and she left note before leaving Sanlak shocked which stays I don't have any choice in the matter. To make everything better I have to die. I can't make it right by living. I'm so scared I want out but oh I don't know." I love you so much Sanskar and in next birth I will wait for you please forgive me if you can. Your Swara

With this Sanskar break down and say if I could forgive Swara because of my anger she has done it

He cried and say I love you Swara please come back don't leave me alone and go



He says because of my ego and anger I have lost her again and he breaks down cries bitterly and say I love you Swara Sometime a relationship needs some time rather give punishment or we have to keep ego aside because ego and angryness make things more worse than ever

*I just have written this OS that how Sanskar ego and his angryness have killed Swara not only physically but mentally too and this happened after Laksh returned
I really wanted this kind of thing should happen in serial because whatever reason whoever is correct or wrong Sanskar started the things first so this is my version that punishment Sanskar want to give by Swara itself gave herself as she tired of being great so she kill herself.
Hopefully to get good and best comments from you all.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Swara has not only punished herself but given punishment to sanskar also...
Well written...
Thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You have problem of blaming Sanskaar, you know?
Yes, Sanskaar stated first about having no relation Bt it was Swara who lied to him! Whatever was the reason but Swara did wrong! And it was Sanskaar who asked forgiveness from her, literally begged her to stay & give their relationship and him another chance! Bt Swara just blamed him for everything under the sun & walked out of his life!
Yes, Sanskaar shouldn't have said those things & he was wrong Bt his actions were reactions of Swara's actions!
And ACTIONS SPEAK LOUDER THAN WORDS! And Sanskaar just said about breaking relationship & then asked forgiveness also BUT Swara did break their relationship!
Both Swara & Sanskaar were wrong Bt Swara was more wrong! Marriage is not a play thing that you will keep it hostage for others!
It was Swara who tortured Sanskaar mentally, even physically as he drowned himself in alcohol.
Bt I think its no use to tell all these things to you bcoz you just want to blame Sanskaar! You are Swara fan but don't be a blind fan!
I'm also a Swara fan but I'm a SwaSan fan! I can't be blind!
Both Swara & Sanskaar were wrong & both had ego but Swara had more! She didn't even realise how wrong she was & how her decisions & words affected Sanskaar & his life!
And 1 thing about your OS, do you want to say that doing suicide & ending life is solution of problems?
Think before writing anything!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Woah Nupur, relax dear.
What happened to you to make you react this way?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nupur_5

You have problem of blaming Sanskaar, you know?

Yes, Sanskaar stated first about having no relation Bt it was Swara who lied to him! Whatever was the reason but Swara did wrong! And it was Sanskaar who asked forgiveness from her, literally begged her to stay & give their relationship and him another chance! Bt Swara just blamed him for everything under the sun & walked out of his life!
Yes, Sanskaar shouldn't have said those things & he was wrong Bt his actions were reactions of Swara's actions!
And ACTIONS SPEAK LOUDER THAN WORDS! And Sanskaar just said about breaking relationship & then asked forgiveness also BUT Swara did break their relationship!
Both Swara & Sanskaar were wrong Bt Swara was more wrong! Marriage is not a play thing that you will keep it hostage for others!
It was Swara who tortured Sanskaar mentally, even physically as he drowned himself in alcohol.
Bt I think its no use to tell all these things to you bcoz you just want to blame Sanskaar! You are Swara fan but don't be a blind fan!
I'm also a Swara fan but I'm a SwaSan fan! I can't be blind!
Both Swara & Sanskaar were wrong & both had ego but Swara had more! She didn't even realise how wrong she was & how her decisions & words affected Sanskaar & his life!
And 1 thing about your OS, do you want to say that doing suicide & ending life is solution of problems?
Think before writing anything!




Dear nupur

Each and every word of your comments is nice I really liked it but relax dear my friend I knew you and many Sanskar fans even I am too fan of Swasan but it just my opinion I don't really mean to hurt you so I am really not good in writing OS so I just wrote it in my own words I am really feeling guilty that I have hurt you
😭
Sorry for everything I have done or wrote it
I am leaving Upto you to forgive me
😭
Will return or not return
Good bye
😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashaf789




Dear nupur

Each and every word of your comments is nice I really liked it but relax dear my friend I knew you and many Sanskar fans even I am too fan of Swasan but it just my opinion I don't really mean to hurt you so I am really not good in writing OS so I just wrote it in my own words I am really feeling guilty that I have hurt you
😭
Sorry for everything I have done or wrote it
I am leaving Upto you to forgive me
😭
Will return or not return
Good bye
😭

Hey dear, so sorry for my comment! I was quite disturbed bcoz of some people & I didn't realise that I was quite rude! Sorry again dear!
Whatever I said about the track, I stand by that! Bt I shouldn't have said those words that way which was quite rude!
Hope you will understand & be sure I had no intention to hurt you and I'm really really sorry buddy for that!
Love & hugs <3
~ Nupur
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

Woah Nupur, relax dear.
What happened to you to make you react this way?

Hey Harshu, yeah I sounded quite rude, though don't had any intention to hurt TM neither I realized that I was rude!
Some people are very much brilliant to pissing you off, you know! I encountered with some of those, hence was bit disturbed!
Bt as I realized my folly now, I'm quite embarrassed & guilty!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Hey dear, so sorry for my comment! I was quite disturbed bcoz of some people & I didn't realise that I was quite rude! Sorry again dear!
Whatever I said about the track, I stand by that! Bt I shouldn't have said those words that way which was quite rude!
Hope you will understand & be sure I had no intention to hurt you and I'm really really sorry buddy for that!
Love & hugs <3
~ Nupur


I am not Hurt i can Understand Just Chill and Relax

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nupur_5

[DIV][/DIV][DIV]Hey Harshu, yeah I sounded quite rude, though don't had any intention to hurt TM neither I realized that I was rude![/DIV][DIV]Some people are very much brilliant to pissing you off, you know! I encountered with some of those, hence was bit disturbed![/DIV][DIV][/DIV][DIV]Bt as I realized my folly now, I'm quite embarrassed & guilty![/DIV]



I know dear.
Ah I hope its not a IF collision.
Its okay Nupur. Happens.
I just couldnt help dropping since I saw your disturbed comment.

Much Love
- Harshada
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey yasmin...
Nice Os... quite different end to swasan lovestory...

I wont say i loved it...coz swasan seperation is hardest for me to digest..but its nicely written...

Talia

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