Broken Relationship ( Short -Stories)Updated Part:7 (Epilouge) pg:4 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update yasmin...
Raglak deserve this desertion..now they will realise how weong they were to hurt swasan...waiting for swasan new start...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part: 4

Ragini and Laksh Says don't know what to do As in One Second Everything get Vanished with they own Hand they have finished Everything Ragini Cries bitterly while Saying it. They decided to tell the Whole Truth in front of whole family They Reached home and Called Everyone in the Hall.

Annapurna, Shekhar and Dadi all came and Annapurna Asked Ragini and Laksh what happen why you call everyone here. Ragini and Laksh Show the Video to Everyone which Uttara Recorded and also told how Dadi Adarsh and Parineeta are the One who have Created Misunderstanding between Swaragini and Sanlak

Everyone is hell Shocked Adarsh Say this must be Someone Trapped against him and Annapurna Slap him tight and Says Why did you do this Adarsh? You made me do a Sin by making me mistrust an innocent, by making me speak all those cheap words to them. No it's not your Fault. It is my fault to believe that fake Video When I knew all about Sanskar and Swara.

Sujata (bursting out with Tears)- ji ji how could you? How could you mistrust my Son and Daughter When you knew about them? Annapurna now felt more guilty. Everyone started blaming Parineeta and Adarsh and Parineeta are arrested by Police. After they were taken away by Police.

Annapurna Says to Ragini and Laksh that Please Get my Son and Daughter back please Ragini and Laksh She Pleaded to Ragini and Laksh to get back Swara - Sanskar Back Ragini and Laksh Promise that they will bring Swara - Sanskar Back to the house at any cost.

In Delhi

Sanskar and Swara Reached to Their Farm house Swara is Amazed to see the Farm house from Outside as well as from inside and Swara Says Wow Sanskar the house is so beautiful after their Enter the house and Sumi went to the Room with Ayush and Swasan went to their Room Sanskar closed the Door of their Room and Said to Swara that Whatever have happen in Kolkata was our Past but from now on We will lead just happy life Swara Says Yes Sanskar Past ko yaad karne se to Accha hai Ki we focus on Our Present and not to cry for those who Don't have any respect or Relation with US and Who always takes US forgranted. You know what Dida used to Say we learn from those mistake which we have done in Past and I think we have Learn a lot from Our Past mistake. Swara Says Dont Worry Sanskar Until you are with Me i dont have any fear because for me You are most important than anything in this World and For You me right! Sanskar says you are Right I love You Shona. Swara I love you too and they hug and Sleep in each other Arm.

Precap: Six month Leap Everything have Changed Sanskar got Business man of the Year Award Swara Expecting and Raglak meet Swasan at the Same party but Swasan Avoid them Will Raglak able to fulfilled the Promise they have done to Annapurna!


Edited by kashaf789 - 8 years ago
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Part:5

In the Past Six months a lot had changed in Maheshwari house the house become Dull without Swasan after Swasan left. Dadi Parineeta and Adarsh Confess their Crime and after coming back from jail their All Suffered from terrible Guilt Their Words to Swara and Sanskar Causing them Terrible guilt and Shame.

*Present

Today Swara - Sanskar are very Successful in their Professions Like Swara is One of the Best Music Teacher in Delhi and Sanskar is one of Richest Business man of Delhi Swara is Expecting a baby.

In the Evening at the Business Party In which Swasan is talking and Bubble in their Own and Also Excited as Sanskar is getting Business man of the Year Award Where Raglak Reached the Party with Maheshwari. Swara and Sanskar Just ignored them and enjoy the Party

As Raglak about to Corner Swasan

Some Announcement make on Stage

Man: As we all know that Tonight is very Special Night for the Person who has come to Delhi with his own Skill and Talent Yes the One and Only

Man: Mr. Sanskar Ram Prasad Maheshwari the Young Business Man of the Year

Raglak and Maheshwari Glad to see Sanskar Achievements

Sanskar Went Up on Stage and Says Thank you So much for this Award I don't know what to Say but First of all Thank you and to entire Team of Karma and Gulmohar ( Sanskar Took over the Company from Maheshwari through Legal Action ) he thank everyone while he about to leave One Reporter Asked

Reporter: Every Success Business Man there is a hand of a Woman? Is that Truth

Sanskar: Don't know about other but Yes There is one Woman in my life who always Supported me She is my Light of my life She is Mrs. Swara Sanskar Maheshwari

After completing Press Confess with Reporter,As Ragini Saw Swara Sitting Ragini comes to Swara as Swara about to leave Ragini Says:

Ragini: Swara Please Listen to me I am Your Sis before Ragini could Complete Swara Slapped her Tight

"Did you ever know the Meaning of Sister? Remember you did Sharadh Vidhi for your Sister the Day you declined to helped me I did Same Ritual for my Whole Family You Maheshwari and Gadodia are nothing for me there are Death for me.

Laksh Says But Sanskar please you listen to me Once cried😭 and Said Bhai!

Sanskar Slap Laksh and Says I have no brother and says before I could do anything Wrong and My name Spoil because of you people it's better You all Leave and Show Them the Exist Sign

Swara Says let me Clear One thing to you all

My family consist of my husband my mom and brother and my Unborn Baby Swara finished placing a firm yet gentle handover her belly. And Says Get-out said Swara Angrily

Precap:

Will Raglak Able to bring Swasan Back to the Family?


Edited by kashaf789 - 8 years ago
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Part:6

After coming out from Party Annapurna Asked Ragini to Tie the Taveez in Swara Waist So that Swara and her baby would be fine Ragini Says Don't Worry mom I will bring my Sister mom and little brother back no matter what happens Laksh get shocked looking Ragini as he doesn't know what to do?

After Maheshwari went Laksh says you promise to mom but how we will do and what are you going to Ragini? Ragini says even I don't know what I am going to do but my heart says we will bring Swasan back to home no matter what happens

Ragini Says Laksh We will stay here and tomorrow I will talk with Sujata Chachi about Swara Godh braai and I am sure Sanskar will never say no to Chachi and if this does not work out we will see another

Laksh Says Let's hopes for the best Next morning Sujata Calls Sanskar and Says:

Sujata: Sanskar I know What all you have went through but I have so hopes that When Swara Get pregnant I will do So many Ritual like baby shower and all so please not for those people but for your mom dad can you please come

Sanskar: I can't say no to you mom but I don't want to put black shadow of those people on my baby

Sujata: Please Sanskar not for them but for me please Come for Few minutes I have so many hopes please Sanskar otherwise I won't talk to you.

Swara: Ok mom you prepared Everything We will come but we will come and for few hours and after done everything we will come back and don't Expect Us to talk with so call people.

Sujata: Ok No problem Bless You Beta! I will wait for you

After Swara Kept the phone Swara Says I know Sanskar You must be angry with me but for Mom and Dad its they dream and for few hours matter we won't talk to Rest of the people trust me. Sanskar understood everything and he simply hug her and says I love you

Ragini gets Delighted after listening to whole Conversation and Says Everything to Laksh and She Says Today I will prepared everything for Swara Baby shower and even say No matter what happen I won't allow Swara to go away from me again

Precap: Swara baby Shower is going on Swara is dressed in Beautiful Lehnga which Ragini Wore in her Baby Shower. Will Swara and Ragini Ever become Swaragini? Will Maheshwari Family Ever become like before? Will they broken relationship ever mended?


Edited by kashaf789 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey yasmin...
Nice part..sujjus emotional blackmailing worked...swasan are coming for swara's godh bharai...but how will they stop them ...it will be interesting to see..waiting

Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Read all the updates together and I really enjoyed reading them. So sujata's blackmail worked. Want to see will Swasan come back to the family or take away sujata and ram from mm. Update soon.
Love,
Nivi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17

Part: 7

The Whole Maheshwari Mansion has been decorated for Swara Baby Shower Everyone is Happy as They Daughter and Son is coming back

Ragini: Today I am very happy my Sister, mom and little brother are coming she is thanking god for keeping back to normal she went to Kitchen to prepared some favorite deserts and food for Swara as well

While she is preparing Parineeta looking sadly and having guilty in mind and Said to Ragini that I was wrong in every matter today I will make best baby shower for Swara and will make things back to normal said To Ragini While Crying and Ragini Hug her back.

In the Evening Sujata, Ram did Arti of Swasan and Swasan enter the mansion while everyone pleased to welcome them wanting them to talk but Swasan Ignored them Sujata Asked Swasan to get ready as we have Function to Start. Function Start Everyone blessed Swara and her baby Uttara Perform a Song called Solah singarkarke Sujata Even tie Taveez on Swara Wits Everything Went Smoothly and Function gets over.

Swara Said to Sanskar I just changed and Come just wait here. Annapurna said where are you going Beta? This is your house how can you just leave us and go?

No Mrs. Maheshwari we are isn't family anymore we are just strangers and we came here so that we can take mom, Uttara and Dad with Us to Delhi.

Durga Prasad said Swara what are you Saying?

That only what you are listening Said Sanskar Angrily!

Ragini Says Enough Just Enough This all have happens because of me? Then Okay I will kill myself

She took the gun and Point it on herself. Everyone Hell shocked. Swara Says Ragini

Ragini says No if you dare cross the line of this house I will shoot myself. Swasan Says Okay We won't go Sanskar took the gun and throw and Swara Hug Ragini and both Cries

Swara Says What is you going to Do Ragini? Did you ever think what will be meaning without Ragini - Swara in Life?

Ragini fold her hand and Says Please Forgive me Swara. Swara Forgive Ragini and Swaragini hug each other and Sanskar also forgive Laksh and Adarsh . All Siblings hug each other.

Epilogue: All Well that Ends Well and after long time they broke Relationship Mended Again. And with this Swara Deliver Sweet Little boy Swasan named it Sahas and they all live happily ever After.

Edited by kashaf789 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved that dialogue of swara : no mrs Maheshwari we are just strangers. But why did you decide to unite Swasan and maheshwaris. Any ways it's ur decision. Loved this ss.
Love,
Nivi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Yasmin...
Nice part..but u ended abruptly...do write more stories

Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Nice lover the simplicity of the story...but why the sudden forgiveness...
Anyway...beautifully written

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