Broken Relationship ( Short -Stories)Updated Part:7 (Epilouge) pg:4

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Broken Relationship (Short -Stories) I have Written This Short - Stories When Swara - Ragini and
Sanskar - Laksh Separated from Each other and Ragini and Laksh did they Sharadh
of their Relationship

After Ragini and Laksh Went back with Annapurna Sanskar and
Swara Came back and Decided to leave the City forever as nothing is left for
them in the City.

Part:1


Swara is Sittng on Edge of the bed and Resting in Sanskar Arm and Says Why Everything got vanished within in Second Why Ragini and Laksh did not Trust Us Why
Everything got Ruined Said Swara While Crying and Hugging Sanskar tightly


I Can Understand Swara My Own Brother will Take Such a Huge
Step I can't believe how can Laksh be So Useless He should Understand Me I am
only the One who used to care for him and Today He Ditched me in front of whole
world I am ashamed to Call him as my Brother


Suddenly Swara wipes up Her Tears and Says Enough Sanskar
Just Enough We have Tolerate everything Till Now but No more if Ragini and
Laksh think we are Enemy and wanted to break Relationship with us than No
problem We will Go very Far Away from here or we could go to Some Other Place
and Start a Fresh Life with Mom, and Ayush


Sanskar Says Yes you are Right we have really Sacrificed
Everything for So called Family if they don't need us then what is the Point of
living for them who have just blamed us for no Reason


Swara but where would we will go Sanskar your company also taken away by Adarsh
they have Snatched Everything from Us . What we will do?


Sanskar Says Don't Worry My Friend remember I Told You about him Who
has his own Company which has the business called STATIONARY PRODUCT IN THAT He has a job for me As a senior administration So everything is Set for us
You Don't Worry about it and also I have my personal farm house it's not very big but it will perfect for three of us so Don't worry about it!


Precap: Swasan Left the Baadi and Kolkata forever with shamistha and ayush . And Ragini
and Laksh comes to know the whole truth about Adarsh and also that he and parineeta with Dadi have
Been the one who have created the misunderstanding between Sanlak and Swaragini! What
will Ragini and Laksh will do now?


*I don't know whether someone have written this Short
Stories or not but I felt to write this one
So I wrote it So please Give me your
best comments..


Enjoy😳





Part :1 update Above[DIV]Part :2 update pg:1 - bottom
Part :3 updated Pg:2
Part :4 updated pg:2
Part :5 updated pg:3
Part :6 updated pg:3
part :7 updated pg:4
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Yasmin.
I had read many stories from this sharadh n separation track so could not guess if i had read something like this b4😆 but yea it is awesome..i really want to read stories from this track as it is one of my favourite one..really wanted swasan to leave mm n go to some other city or place but unfortunately it didn't happened in serial..hope u will cover it nicely..do update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update yashmin di🤗
Would like to know more... this was worst handled track🤢


Tani
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part:2 Swara Was packing her bags and Sanskar Came There and Swara Says I have packed our bags We Just have to keep them in the Car Sanskar Says Alright You go and Check out about Mom is She Ready and You both Seat in Car I bring the Luggage
As Sanskar goes with the Luggage While Swara leaving the room she Come Across Their Family Photo Sanskar Looks at Swara and Asked Her Will She Take the Photo as Part of the memories. Swara Wipes her tears and Says No Sanskar memories and all are for those whom there is any Relationship but for this People From Now On There is no more relationship between them no more. Whatever Love and Respect We have for them is totally Vanished Today they don't deserve our Love anymore.
Anyway Says Swara and tells Sanskar that I am waiting for You Outside with mom do come Soon As Swara Leaves Sanskar thinks I know Swara What You have Went through So much till now but No more From on we only lead Happy life and Start a Fresh life I Promise You that now on your eyes will filled with happiness. That's your Sanskar promise
Swara Comes to Shamistha and Asked Whether she is Ready and Shamistha Says Yes but She Asked Shona Are You happy about the Decision that you took? Swara Says Yes Mom I have taken Right Decision at Right Moment infact I have to this long back but no problem and mom please I don't want to have any discussion on this topic any more. and From Now Onwards You and Sanskar and Ayush is my Family nothing more than that! Now let's go Sanskar is waiting for US.
The Three Left the Baadi and Kolkata Forever. With Hope of New Life and Leading a Fresh Start
Precap: Ragini and Laksh Came to Baadi to meet Swasan and their Come to know by someone that Swasan have Left the City Forever and Ragini break down! What will they do now? (Sad Swaragini Music Play in background)
Edited by kashaf789 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey yasmin...
I have read stories regarding misunderstanding track between sanlak n swaragini...but im soo looking forward to read your version of story...read part 1 n 2...start was good..will wait to read more...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi yasmin 😊. How z u and family? Hope all going good there. Read both the parts. I'm loving this story. But when I was going through my story ( which I had written on the same track) I realised that I did not show swasan fight for their rights. ram has equal rights on the house as dp has. So if you could write something like that it would be great. Maybe if Swasan had a change of heart and decided not to leave and fight for their rights. After all, sanskar had his karma & co merged with the Maheshwari sons. So you could show him taking back his company which he had built with his work and toil. Hope I have not angered you.
Love
Nivi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely
Can u pm when u next update
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Originally posted by: Nivijo

Hi yasmin😊. How z u and family? Hope all going good there. Read both the parts. I'm loving this story. But when I was going through my story ( which I had written on the same track) I realised that I did not show swasan fight for their rights. ram has equal rights on the house as dp has. So if you could write something like that it would be great. Maybe if Swasan had a change of heart and decided not to leave and fight for their rights. After all, sanskar had his karma & co merged with the Maheshwari sons. So you could show him taking back his company which he had built with his work and toil. Hope I have not angered you.

Love
Nivi




Thanks for the idea and I am very happy that you are like my ss will surely update soon and I am not angry 😆 with you
Kitna accha idea hai yaar tumne
Love you
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Edited by kashaf789 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow...di liked dis determined version of swara
Looking forward for next update😳


Tani
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Posted: 8 years ago
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<p align="center">Part:3</p>

Ragini and
Laksh are in their Room Laksh Standing Near the Window and Says to Ragini that
I don't believe that my own brother will do this with me I won't forgive him
Ever Ragini Says to Laksh that I used to avoid Dadi and Aunt Saying that Swara and
her mother Never Like my happiness Today it proved that they were Right.


Uttara Came
to their Room and Says I don't know whether I have any right to Say anything or
no but Today after what you have did with Swara Bhabhi Sanskar Brother it is
Unforgiveful Laksh Says you are not that Mature to talk this things. Uttara
Says Fine I will go but before going I want to Show you some proof regarding
Sanskar innocence it will make you realized that how wrong Decision you both
have taken by not believing them.


Uttara Plays
the same Video which She had recorded that day after raglak came back home. Uttra play the video and it is shown whole conversation between Adri and Dadi and also how he bribed police in Private to beat
Laksh and he also told police not to take his name and instead take Sanskar name
and he also makes fake video Send it to Police So that Blame can come over Sanskar.and so every one believes that Sanskar is the one who has given money to police to beat laksh.
[P]Uttara Says I
hope your misunderstanding have been Cleared and Uttara Left Raglak Room while leaving she cried and said from onwards I have only one brother that is Sanskar and one sister in law Swara and she left room crying
Ragini Laksh Hell Shocked and Says they have done Such a Huge Mistake by not believing them and say why every time they don't see
Truth properly?

Swasan have tried a lot to say truth and even tried to prove it innocent but why we did not trust them say ragini while crying bitterly.

Laksh Says we
have to go and asked forgiveness from Swasan before its too late no matter what happens I will complete my family
again Ragini Says will they forgive us I don't know Said Laksh but we can try
they Rush to Baadi without informing anyone Their Arrive at Baadi and found its Locked they Asked Someone if their know where there are So Man Says Their Left Baadi Laksh Ask Did he know where Their went so man Says No. Ragini break down and Says i have lost my sister again and my mom too and she cry bitterly . Laksh console Her.


In the Car While Sanskar Driving Sanskar Asked What happen Shona Why you So Upset ? Swara Says I am Worried about your Company Sanskar with so much hard work you have bulit it and You cant give up like that. Swara Says Sanskar We have to get the Company from those people. anyhow. Sanskar Says Not to worry Swara i have Already talked with the Lawyer and No matter What happens I will get my company from those people Wont Spare them. but for now we have to leave this place and city i dont care about me but for me You are most important and your self respect I can't see you in pain anymore and they Left the City forever.

Precap: New Life wait for them in New City Called Delhi And

maheshwari come to know whole truth and raglak decided to find Swasan Will they able to find them?
Edited by kashaf789 - 8 years ago

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