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awww what an FF fazi 😳 this is almost the same as I was dreaming .......... soo sweet the way vasudha responded by taking a mature decision ..... and babu jee going straight to the point 😉 wah babu jee 👏 .......... and above all Sandeep jee of taking a decision of not going back to CG who brought everything back on track just in time 👏
kya yaar Fazi good job yaar 😊

wah kya baat hain fazila!!!!!nice one,do continue!!!! 👏

thank u all............i cant thank each of u, cause then it will flood the post...........i always read what u all write , that makes me going.......thanks guys........ 😳 😳 😳

Nicely written. I hope we have a happy ending like that 😊

Babu jee.........

As dawn breaks the life in CG starts… everyone is waking up from their beauty sleep and getting ready for their daily chorus.
All alone, sitting on the bed is Shukla jee… rubbing his eyes; he turns his face and looks at his wife pic on the wall…
S.. haa… kasi ho… main tu aaj zara beemar hoon…He rubbed his chest, from last night he could feel slight pain in his chest…Sandeep had come last night to give him medicines and he hadn't complained it to sandeep about the pain…He slowly got up from his bed.. his mind on Arjun, his son in usa…
S… sighing. He though, I wish you were here with me my son, Im so alone, if it hadn't been for sandeep, I would have been dead long time back. He made his way to the kitchen to make some breakfast….

Sandeep was busy making tea for himself and unconsciously whistling the tune of, sakhi ri mohai preetam chavi bhayoo…and moved his face towards urmis house and suddenly stopped whistling, and started laughing….
Sandeep: tum pagal ho gayee ho and went on making tea.

Urmi's alarm clock didn't wake her on time and she was late for uni, it was her last exam and she had over slept… she was rushing out the door, Mummy mai ja rahi hoon.
Sujhata, coming out of the house, yeah doodh aur roti kha lo, phir jayoo.
U. Mummy main already itni late hoon, mera paas time nahi hai yeah sab khane ka….
Shujhata, bhooke pait kase paper do gi, bus do min, jaldi se khalo.
U. Mummy nahi plz, mai jarahi hoon.

Sandeep was watching all this from the patio and said, aunty kiya horahai maa bati mai?
Sujhata, dakho na sandeep, exam dene jarahi hai aur nashta nahi karrahi…
Urmi looking at sandeep and said, main wase hi late hoon, aur late ho jayoon gi…
Sandeep shaking his head, nashta kar lo, main tumhe scooter per choor aata hoon….
Urmi, shocked, haan….
Sandeep: aunty ishe khilayaan, main aata hoon…
Sujhata quickly handed urmi the milk and roti and said, khala…
Urmi took 2 bites from the roti and quickly drank milk and said, sab ke sab mile howai hain…
Sujhata started laughing… and walked near the stairs where urmi was running down and sandeep was screaming,,, aahista, ghir jayoo gi tu exam dane kase jayoo gi..
Sujhata laughing: Sandeep, yeah kah rahi hai, hum sab is ke khilaf mila hoya hain..
Urmi turned and gave her mom a look and said.mummy!!!!
Sandeep laughing, jaldi karo time nahi hai.
Urmi sat on the scooter and Sandeep turned to look at her and said, natak khatum nahi hote tumhare….
Urmi put her hand on his back and gave him her best smiles and asked, khatum kar dun???
Sandeep turned to face the road and smiled and they drove out of CG….

Scene changes: Down, inside sagars shop
Shukla jee…. Is talking on the phone….haan Arjun….main theek hoon, tum , bitiya aur bahoo kase ho….
Arjun…. Hum theek hain… aap kase hain? Apna khayal tu rakhte hain na….
Babujee… haan beta main tu apna khayal rakh ta hoon…. Aur yahan sab mera khayal rakh te hain…..bus tari kami hai
Arjun… babu jee…. Main kiya karron…. Aaj kal tu itna kaam hai ke kiya batyoon….aek saal tak tu aane ka chance hi nahi hai….
Babujee…. sighs…. haan beta kaam bhee zaroori hai….
Babujee coughs and wishes his son would come to meet him soon…atleast one more time before he dies….
Arjun. Babujee aap ko paise tu mil rahe hain na?
Babu jee… haan beta…….Sandeep in sab cheezoon ka khayal rakhta hai….
Arjun….sandeep kasa hai? Ushe kahiye ga ke main ne kaha hai ke aap ka khayal rakhe…
Babu jee…. Acha beta…..sandeep ko kah doon ga….
Arjun… acha babujee apna khayal rakhiye ga… ab main phone rakh ta hoon…
Babujee…. Acha beta, bitiya ko pyar karma…..rakhta hoon….
With a sad face babujee keeps the phone on its holder…..Sagar is standing by the table , looking at babujee and sighs….
Babujee…. Shukriya sagar beta….
Sagar… aare babu jee…. Is main shukariya ki kiya baat hai… yeah tu mera farz tha…
Babujee walks out the shop…. Sagar worriedly looks at babujee leaving the shop and walks out to see, as babujee walks home….it looks as if babujees worries had increased….

The 3 dewanas are playing cricket. And they hit a shot which misses babujee by few inches…sukha jee and rangeela are watching this, they quickly come out and scream at the boys….tum loog kab sudhroge……..kab insaan bano gee….

Sukha jee n rangeela escort babujee to his house….
Sukha jee….Aap theek tu hain na….lagi tu nahi…?
Babu jee… nahi nahi…. Bache hain…. Main theek hoon….sighs… in se hi tu mohalla main raunak lagi rahti hai….and finally laughs…. like he always does….. in ko kuch na kahna… main theek hoon….

Babujee sat on the chair and sukha jee n rangeela went back to their work……….

A happy urmi coming home in the human rickshaw…..so happy that her exams were over, now she can concentrate more on her sandeep babu…. Blushing as she though about her ride to the university…She was in deep thoughs when the rickshaw guy stopped the rickshaw near her house……..she saw lots of ppl near babu jees house…..she paid the guy and ran towards them….Her father and sukha jee were checking babu jee… babu jee was lying lifeless on the wooden bench outside his house……. Worriedly she looked around but couldn't see sandeep……she asked her dad, what happened????
Rasiklal.. pata nahi jawab nahi de rahai…
Urmi…. Sandeep…????
Rasiklal… upar hai, tum jaldi jayoo aur ushe bula ke layoo…..
Urmi ran up to get sandeep….
Sandeep was sitting by the computer and staring at his monitor…………his screen saver full of different pics of urmi….hehehhe
Urmi entered his house n said .. Sandeep babu…
Sandeep quickly tuned the monitor off……..thinking Oh God… bach gaya…. That she didn't see it…
He turned to see her and saw that something was not right, he quickly got up and ask… Kiya howa… tum theek ho….
Urmi shooked her head and said babu jee…….The expression on her face told sandeep everyting, he ran down the stairs and ran to babu jees house… thinking… Oh God don't take him away from me…. Hes the only family I have in this world….. well almost only…….

Sukha jee saw sandeep running towards them and when he saw babu jee lying still he just stopped and looked at sukha jee with lots of questions in his eyes and asked …. Kiya who???…. Sukha jee quickly said,,, nahi hes fine…. Bus jawab nahi derahai… jaldi hospital lajana chahiyee….
Sandeep came closer and checked babu jees pulses…….they were very faint…….he moved his hand on his nose to check his breathing… he was breathing but it was very weak…….he quickly picked babu jee as sukha jee bought the car closer… He put babu jee in the car and drove fast to the hospital.

Its evening now,Urmi is pacing on her patio… truning her dupatta in her hand… she hadn't received any news from the hospital.She knew that sandeep will be in a lot of pain and he must be all alone and she can imagine what he must be going hrough… She should have gone with them… he needs me by his side…. If something does happen to babu jee , sandeep will be shattered… Urmi saw zoya coming up the stairs and she took hold of zoyas hand and said…. Zoya kuch khabar aayee???
Zoya: nahi abhi tak tu kuch nahi pata chala…….
Urmi: Zoya , mukhe hospital jana hai… kuch bhe kar…… Sandeep babu bilkul akale hoon ge, unko mero zaroorat par sakti hai…..plz meri dost kuch kar….
Zoya , looking at troubled urmi and said: acha soochti hoon…hmmmm… khana le kar koon kaye ga?
Urmi: sandeep babu khana thori khayaan ge…
Zoya: Urmi bahana to khane ka ban sakta hai na… hmmmm
Urmi smiled…….and hugged zoya haan……..main mummy ko bata tee hoon… chal…….
Quickly the 2 girls convinced Sujhata that they need to send food to the hospital, and they made tea and sandwhiches and packed them and ran down the staris…. As they were coming down they saw sukha jee getting off his car and they ran to him…he saw urmi and saw the questions in her eyes…. He said… babu jee is doing fine, danger se out hain, but he will need time to recover. Then he said: Sandeep pareshan hai. This made urmis heart sink more..
Sujha jee asked, yeah kiya hai, poininting at the basket in her hand, Urmi replied, its food for Sandeep.
By this time the whole of Cgians had gathered around Saukha jee and were asking about babu jees health, Sukha jee was updating them on it and then turned to Urmi and said, Sandeep ke har ja kar us ki pen aur book le aayoo, tumhe pata hai na koon si???
Urmi : jee
Sukha jee: Haan, us ne kaha tha ke urmi ko pata ho ga. He smiled and said, us ka mobile bhee le lana, aur main 5 mins main zara fresh ho kar aata hoon, phir tumhe hospital le jata hoon.

Hospital
Sandeep was pacing the floor, in deep thoughs…Babu jee was stable, he had become very weak so that's why he had fainted, tonight they will monior him and will send him home tomorrow. The doctors had allowed him to meet babu jee when he had gained conscious. Babu jee had told him not to tell Arjun that he was not well…. This thing was really troubling Sandeep. Why had babu jee made him promised not to tell a word about his sickness to Arjun? Shouldnt his son know that his father was sick???? He was thinking, with whom should I discuss with about all this and he looked up and smiled…. His hearts delight had just walked in and was moving towards him. Basket in her hand and her face full of worry.
She came and stood in front of Sandeep and asked: Aap theek ho? Quickly changing it to ,babu jee kase hain???
Sandeep had heard both the questions, he nodded with his head and said, doctors ne kaha hai ke aaj ki raat observation main rakhain ge aur kaal agar tabiyat theek ho gi tu ghar jane dain ge..
Urmi kept the basket on the bench and turned to face sandeep, Sandeep sighed heavily and took both her hands in his hands and said, kis ke saath aayee ho?
U: Sukha uncle ke saath, who kisi aur kaam ke liya gaya hain… thori dair main aayaan ge….
S: nodding….looked in urmis eyes and said; I m so scared.
Urmi looked into his eyes and said… kuch nahi hoga babu jee ko…. Who bilkul theek ho jayaan ge…. Aap fikar na karain….yahan bathain..
Urmi made sandeep sit on the bench and sat near him and took his hand in hers and turned to face him, he looked very sad….urmi tired her best to comfort him………
S: main wapis aanat nahi hona chatha….
U: babu jee kabhi aap ko akala choor kar nahi jaayan ge…..
S: magar… he started to say something but urmi kept her hand on his lips and said… kuch nahi ho ga…..doctor ne kiya kaha hai??? Theek hain na babu jee… tu phir…
S: main pareshan hoon…..
Urmi looked at him and asked, koyee aur baat aap ko pareshan kar rahi hai?
Sandeep looked at urmi and nodded… Babu jee ne mujh se bari ajeeb baat ki hai, kaha ke Arjun ko na pata chale ke main beemar hoon……..ab yeah kyoon kaha unho ne, kiya Arjun ko is baat ka pata nahi hona chahiyee???
U: thinking…. Said… shahid babu jee ushe pareshan nahi kar na chahte, is liya kaha hoga…. Arjun bhai itne door hain , kiya kar sakte hain,
Sandeep: wapis aa tu sakta hai na?
U: shahid babu jee is liya nahi kah raha hoon ge….
Sandeep, pata nahi amrika ja kar loog aase kyoon hojate hain ….. apni zameen aur pane loogoon ko kyoon bhool jate hain…
U: Hum kiya kar sakte hain, bus babu jee ka khayal rakh sakte hain, aur yehi kafi hai….Then she looked at him and he was smiling and yes… shahid tum theek kah rahi ho….

Urmi: App ne kuch khaya?
Sandeep shaking his head …. Main theek hoon aur mujhe khana nahi khana.
Sukha jee had already told urmi in the car that sandeep had told him not to bring any food for him and that he was fine as he was. But Urmi was not going to listen to sandeep. She quickly opened the sandwiches and filled the cup with tea n and offered it to sandeep. Sandeep looking at her and said, maine mana kiya na?
U: Agar yahan raat rahne hai tu khana to hoga.
S: Acha??
U: hmmm..
S: tum se main kab jeeta hoon… smiled and took the tea cup from her hands . She handed him the sandwich too…Which he took reluctantly and started eating it. He was indeed very hungry and was glad urmi had come to feed him.

From a edge of the hall, Sukha singh jee was watching urmi feeding sandeep, and he smiled, thinking, I knew only she can do this job, bring a smile on sandeeps face and can feed him… this girl is perfect for sandeep, if only sandeep knew and I wish he realises how imp she is for him…..

In the morning, the whole of CG is in the hospital…. The doctor gave OK to babu jee , that he could go home now but he must rest and look after himself………. Everyone is happy and Sandeep is also happy and he searches the crowd and finds Urmi smiling at him and he smiled back….as if saying thanks for being there last night…. Urmi blushed then they all went back to CG.

Amazing Fazi.. I think you can become director of the show. too good.

good one,fazila...do keep writing 😊

Originally posted by: smartly_yours

Amazing Fazi.. I think you can become director of the show. too good.

🤣...wow thanks for that smartly, ill think about it 😉😆😳