New FF on pg 15 scroll down.Babu jee

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Hi friends , thanks to all your comments i was able to write few fan fictions and now im going to write some more.... i m going to cpllectthem all and put it in one topic so its easier...........

Its Aek chabis fun fictions.........hope you enjoy it......By writing them i dont mean to judge or harm or hurt anyone .... so plz if my words do hurt anyone im truely sorry for it......here are all my ffs .........

New FF on pg 15 scroll down.... Babu jee

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=790458&T PN=15#13892438

Scene after 29 or 30 decs epi

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=790458&T PN=15#13892438

Sandeeps confession

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=790458&T PN=13#13760024

Episode of 9th Dec-Re written by me

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=790458&T PN=11#13664633

New FF on page 5..Part 1..Part 2 on pg 8 urmis wedding..dont miss it.........

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=790458&T PN=5

Part 2

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=790458&T PN=8

The first 4 ffs are on page 1

New FF on page 2

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=790458&T PN=2

New FF on page 3.. after 25th nov 07

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=790458&T PN=3

New Fantasy Fiction ,Sandy kidnaps urmi..

Sandys confession

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/aek-chabhi-hai-padoss-mein/841726/new-ff-sandys-confession

fanfic Babu jee

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/aek-chabhi-hai-padoss-mein/890585/fanfiction-babu-jee

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This was my very first ff.....encouraged by my friend honey:)))

its the scene after the Voice of india came to Cg and CG had their own voice of CG.........

Kamaal hai... sandeep babu says... and those words just ripe through urmis heart......... and the look on the face of sandeep babu... shattered all of urmis dreams for them..........Sandeep takes the bouquet to suman and the whole CG is watching this and strange thoughs are going though their minds..........pami aunty says... how sone these 2 are looking and someone seconds it.......and urmi is listening to all this ............sandeep oblivious of whats going on in the ppls mind.........Whole night urmi is tossing and turning in her bed...... shes scared and worried .... what will i do if sandeep babu marries suman bhabhie..........i would rather die then see all this........no i wont die.....ill leave CG......... yes ill do that...............Urmi decides to leave CG for good........ she starts making plans... she decides it will be better to go to Nanital........ yes ill do that....... i cant sit here and see Sandeep babu getting married and living here ..........no no.........i cant see that.........

When morning came..........she told her parents that she wants to trasfer her collage to Nanital and wants to do her degree in psychology there........her parents look at her as if shes gone mad... but they didnt argue........she also told them that they shouldnt tell this to anyone as yet.......so they agree.......

Secretly urmi starts making plans and packs her bags........while shes packing pammi aunty comes and talk to urmis mom about sandeep and suman......urmi closes her ears .......i dont want to hear all this......in b/w all the chat about sandeep and suman... urmis mom tells pammi that urmi is going to nanital for few days to get admission in the college there........ pammi aunty is shocked.......urmi putar hume chor kar jarahi hai.........????

Well !!! now urmis secret is out of the bag......... the 4 dewans heared it and when they heared it.. they know why shes going......jugle starts crying.... how will we live here without our urmi......and hari , rahoul n mushtak are also unhappy......today there was no sound near ratirams jees canteen.........ratiram jee is aso concerned that what has happened to these 4 today.....how come they are so quiet.........

Urmi is sitting on her bed and thnking... all these yrs i have loved him.... should i just leave without fighing??? but now i have nostrength to fight any more........... suman and cheeku needs sandeep more than me.....yes ill just go and leave them all to be happy.......

Sandeep by this time is busy writing his articles in the news papers office........he clueless about whats happening in CG........

Urmis father bring home the ticket and tells her that lets go you have a train to catch in 2 hours.........Urmi says ,im ready......

Suddenly.. in the news office.......sandeeps cell phone rings.........he sees the name... JUGLE..........why would jugle call him at this time???something must bewrong in CG..... hee ans the call and says.. jugle whats wrong... jugle is crying his heart out..... Sandeep screams(like always) whats wrong tell me.........in between hicups and tears jugle says... urmi is leaving cg and shes going .......

Sandeep gets up from his chair and runs out... what do u mean going... where is she going... jugle ans me.....snif snif..shes going to nanital for good... sandeep bhai sirif app hi isse rok sakte hain.........plz hamari urmi ko rook lain... warna hum kase zinda rahain ge.......He tells sundeep about suman .....Sandeep tells jugle......do something.....im comng... use rook ke rakhna.. main aaraha hoon....superman coming to save cg again....

Sandeep sits on his bike and their music is playing in the background.....heads towards cg..........fast.........

In CG.. zoya is in urmis room ....crying and fighting with urmi... urmi u cant run away like this.....urmi cries....... tu aur main kiya karoon..........main yeah ab bardasht nahi kar sakte......

She picks her bags and walks down the stairs .... the 4 dewans are literally crying ....not concerned that ppl r watching.........she bids farewll to everyone and sits in the taxi with her mom n dad..........everyone is crying .........

Suddenly the taxidriver says, the cars tyre is flat...... all jugles work........jugle smiles secretly... like he always does.......... this will give sandeep ample time to get here........

They all hear the bike entering cg... sandeep jumps off the bike and comes to the taxi and looks at urmi... Urmis eyes are down... her hearts beating so fast .. ..she feels as if she will faint just now.......she cant face sandeep... not now plz not now......Sandeep opens the taxi door and asks urmi to come out... aase hi ja rahi hoo......aek cheese bhool gayee ho.. mere ghar main hai.. ushe tu lajayoo......... urmis parents say , yes yes go n get it... Now urmi is really uncomfortable..........she is sure she hasnt left anything in sandeeps house...........

In sandeeps house.... Sandeep looks at urmi and says.......... kiya, kiya karrahi ho........tumhara damag tu kharab nahi howa.........urmi is silent... eyes down.........urmi mujhe jawab do.........urmi replies.. aap ne tu kuch nahi poocha..................

Sandeep........ kyoon ja rahi ho?... Urmi,..bus aase hi.....CG se man bhar gaya hai......plz main yahan jo bhool gayee hoon use dadain tu main jayoon.........

Sandeep... mujh se kuch galti hogayee.... urmi shakes her head.. nahi.....
Sandeep.......idhar dakho.......urmi nahi.........
Sandeep.. i want to tell u something........ urmis heart sinks more..she thinks..OhGod no...... plz dont ask me to stay for ur wedding..........i cant....just cant... ill die............and a tear rolls down urmis cheek, and sandep quickly catches it in his palm
and says... ab main is ko kahaan rakhoon.........urmi tries to take the tear but he quickly pockets it.........and says, its mine now..........
Urmi looks up at him in confusion...........Sandeep has this mischief smile on his face which urmi cant predict whats going on in his mind..............and shes staring in his eyes and he in her.........sigh............ and suddenly the taxis horn is sounded......... cutting the silence and the bring them both to earth... urmi turns to go saying... bye...
but she is abrutly stopped... sandeeps hand grabs her wrist ....stopping her .....i wont let u go.....
Urmi says, why not???.....Sandeep...I have to ans ur so many questions... then only u can go.......Urmi asks, what qs.. he said.... everyday u ask me qs and eat my brain... well now is the time to ans them..........first......... yes i want to
get married... but not too soon........after sometime......when im ready for it......... do u understand that?... Urmi.. hmmm...nods.....Urmis heart sinks more... I dont want to hear this plz........Sandeep... second , yes i do see a chavi of
my preetam....... and urmi looks up to him....still confused....................tears now rolling down her cheeks
Sandeep.... plz dont cry , icant see ur tears.. and how will u see my chavi if u keep on crying like that....... Urmi , i dont want to see ur chavi.... let go of my hand............i want to go...........Sandeep.. yes u can go.. but first u must meet my chavi..........(hehehehe) (do u want me to continue).........

Urmi is trying to free her hand.. but Sandeep is holding it tight... ouch u hurting me... sandeep... sorry... dont try to free it. i wont let u go unless u see my chavi.............. urmi closes her eyes tight... I wont see her and u cant make
me......strange thoughs are going through urmis head...... sandeep smiles and holding her hand leads her near the table...... urmis eyes r still close... sandeep stood behind her n whispers in her ear.... open ur eyes...... urmi shivers......... n says noo........... Sandeep ... plz for my
sake..........Urmi slowly opens her eyes and sees that she is in front of a mirror and all she can see is herself and sandeep in the mirror............Still confused she looks in Sandeeps eyes..........he had a strange look on his face n his
eyes were shining... urmi had never seem him like this before...............sandeep smiled and the min he smiled urmis head snapped.... she turned to face him and said angrily .........r u making fun of me........tears running hard now...

sandeep........... .noooo.........why do u say that????? U r my preetam ki chavi.........Urmi.... no im not... i know for sure u
dont love me...... Sandeep.......You know i dont love u, but i know for sure that i love u......... (sighhhhh!!!!!!!!!!)( Arent we
dying to hear these 3 words from Sandeep babus lips???).......urmi...sacheee............sandeep.. nods ... urmi smiles .. still looking in to each others eyes....... eye talking.......
and then they hug... and she is crying more....... sandeep... now y r u crying........ cause i cant belive it....... Sandeep... well is it only one side love or what???? Urmi looks up to him and says what???? (aik tu urmi ko kyee baat samaj main hi nahi aati..............) Sandeep........ do u love me or not............Urmi yes... i do love you... a lot....... Sandeep......breaths a sigh of relief............are you still going to go , leaving me all alone.........Urmi .. no . never.. and
then they hug and together they go down and they send the taxi wala away........... Everyone is happy that urmi is not going... but noone knows the reason why....ONLY zoya and jugle knows what has happened..........They all know
that Sandeep can solve any problem. ........Sandeep looks at jugle as if thanking him..........eye talk.......... and the 3
dewanas looking at jugle..... what has jugle done that they dont know off ...(Jugle ki khair hai) .......Sandeep then turned and looked at
urmi and their eyes talking......... hmmmm.........and from here on their love affair starts...............they decide to keep it a
secret for sometime..........till they both are ready to tell the world about their love.....................
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Posted: 04 October 2007 at 6:43am

The camera focus on Urmis house.... hmmmmmmm... favourite place on CG.......Urmi is havin breakfast and Sujhata is holding some curtains.... Sujhata.... Urmi after breakfast do put these curtains on the door ......Im going to Pummis house....Urmi..why so early you going to Pammi auntys house.. ??? Sujhata...There is some problem ...hmmm...dont tell anyone.. but Rose Aunty is very upset....her ex-boy friend is back and he is after her to marry him... so shes very upset and he left her at the alter and now he is back... us ki himat tu dakho.......hum bhee kam nahi...Rose isnt alone..... we all are with her..... but keep it quiet for now....Urmi ok mom.....thinking,... ill only tell Sandeep babu.... hehehehe...........

Sujhata leaves and Urmi finishes her breakfast and picks the curtains to put them on the door, climbs the stool and reaches high to hang them.....as she was haning the curatins ... she didnt hear someone come in and stood just next to her and said.......kiya kar rahee hooo......... the min she heared this... bus.... lost her balance and fell.... and landed right in Sandeep babus arms............hahahahhaha.....

A deam come true for urmi..... Sandeep was holding her and their eyes meet ........staring at one another... no sound no words... thousand thoughs going though their minds.........from far away they heared Sujhatas voice and ............sandeep put her down... steading her and asking..... tum theek ho... Urmi.. hmmm....... eyes down......Sujhata enters and sees them ..... whats wrong.... Sandeep..... nothing.... i came to talk to you about Rose aunty and ended up helping urmi..........(liar) blushing urmi and sandeep put the curtains... smiling at one another..........☺️

In Sagars shop... the phone rang............It was a man... asking for Rose............

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Second ff................13 October 2007 at 8:01am



Urmi is sitting on the swing in her house... thinking.... mere liya time nahi hai.... poori duniyah ke liya time hai... bus mujh ko sirif daantana aur no kah dena... bus......Urmi was busy sulking...didnt realise that someone had climbed stairs and was standing and looking at her........

Sandeep coughed and Urmi startled looed up and saw the reason for her miseries standing in front of her.....Sandeep comes near the swing n gestured if he could sit on the swing... urmi moved a bit n he sat down beside her..He was holding a paper bag.. Urmi wondered what was in it.....😉

Sandeep looking here n there like always....... S

said asked ....Naraaz ho?

Urmi, nahi....

S, phir raat ko khana dene kyoon nahi aayee?

U, saar main dard tha....( atypical excuse😆)

S,ab theek ho,.........bending his head a bit n looking at her.

U, hmmm... nodding........

S, jitna tum mujhe jaan ti ho, utna koyee mujhe nahi jaanta......Urmi looking straight. avoiding eye contact.... Sandeep going on...... main cheeko se moo nahi phair sakta.... woh mere best friend ka beta hai... jab main us ko daikh ta hoon, tu mujhe mera buchpan yaad aata hai, shukar hai ki us ki maa tu hai....main tu bilkul aanat tha...........

This made Urmi feel guilty and she turned to face him ,thinking what was coming next, not a bad news from him.......he was looking staight as if talking to himself.....suman mere best friend ki wife hai.... woh meri bhahie ki tarha hai( now wouldnt we love to hear this heheheh😆)

This little speech bought hope and light to Urmis life.....she smiled and Sandeep turned to look at her... seeing her smile, he smiled too....then he gave her the paper bag and said, kaal plaza chalo gee???

U, nahi

S, kyoon, abhi tak naraz ho?

U, nahi, main yahaan kal nahi hoon gi...

Surprised , Sandeep asked, kiya matlab?

U, Main kal 10 din ke liya (Sharimi Urmis little sis) ke paas Shimla ja rahee hoon....(about time urmi, go n leave him, then he might miss u 😛)

S, dus din????? He stood up, tum dus din wahaan kiya karro gi? bore ho jayoo gi....

U, nahi Sharmi aur main Shimla ke sair karain ge, phir doono wapis saath aajayaan ge.......

Urmi could see Sandeep really worried now......10 din bohat ziyada hote hain....

S, tum teen ,char din main aajana...

U kyoon?

S, CG tumhare bigair kiya kare ga.....

U, CG ko bhee mere bagair rahne ki aadat ho jayee gi...

S, aur mujhe??

This comment from Sandeep, made Urmi look at him and she sould see that he had that smile on his face.... Urmi , who had lost all hopes form sandeep ever returning her love.... didnt want to build high hopes on sandeeps this statement......... so she didnt ans.....

S, das din ke liya mat jayoo... char din main aajana... hmmm.... tum hari ticket aagayee hai?

U, papa le aayaan ge....

S, papa ko kyun kaha hai, main le aayoon ga......chaar din, bus......bag kholo..

U, hmmm, kiya....

U paper bag, present hai tumhare liya..

Urmi was holding the paper bag, but she was too disturbed at the sudden change in Sandeeps behaviour to notice it... she ddint know what was going on ........

She opened the bag and it contained a beautiful, perfect red rose.....(aaa so romantic 😆) .......Surprised she looked up to Sandeep.......(While reading this, keep U/S in ur mind, their expressions etc).......

S, ab is ke pata nahi nikal na....

U, KIYA????

S, haan , sara din tu yahan khari phooloon ke pate ukhair ti ho... pyar karta hai, nahi kar ta, karta hai, nahi karta............

Urmi is shocked,,,,.........aap ko kase pata chala...

S, haan main daikh ta hoon, tumhe tu pata hi nahi hota ke kahaan ho jub, phool se pooche ti ho....

U, aap ne kase suna?

S , suna nahi.... tumhare lips se parh liya, u know lip reading...

Urmi is in a total shock now.....

S, Urmi.........is phool se mut poochna... yeah kiya bataiyen ga... main bata ta hoon.........Haan woh tum se pyar karta hai... sirif tum se hi karta hai... plz is baat per secure ho jayoo... but ushe ahbi time chahiye........jaldbazi mat karna plz........

Urmi is shocked...shes staring at Sandeep....not a word coming out from her mouth..........am i asleep..... am i dreaming again????

S,Abhi mujhe time chahhiya... plz...(.😃)

Pami Aunty and Sujhata were coming up the stairs.... seeing them sandeep changed the topic...

S, Urmi tum fikar mat karo, ticket main le aayoon ga....

Hearing this Sujata says, are Sandeep tum, ache howa aagayee, Urmi ke liya ticket le aayoo plz, warna rasiklaa tu bhool hi jaayaan ge....

S, jee.. ab tu parsoo ki hi mile gi....

Sujata, Haan koyee baat nahi... jab bhee mile....

S, ok main try karta hoon...

Sandeep looks at urmi, whos still in a shock......holding the flower and just staring at sandeep.......mouth wide open...........(hehehhe)

Sujhata looks at the rose in her hands and says,, uff urmi, ab is phool ko na toor dena, pata nahi phooloon se kiya dushmani hai tumhari....😆

Sujata and Pami goes inthe house........Sandeep smiles at urmi, whos still in a deep shock.....

S asks, plaza tomorrow,, Urmi just nods, and Sandeep goes down the stairs.........

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Fantasy Fiction......3 After ramleela...30 October 2007 at 9:13pm

After ramleela........CG served dinner to everyone........everyone is talking about the show n praising Urmi and Sandeep.......the 3 clowns( i have got a new name for them🤣) .....still crying over what happened in the end.......

Jugle........yaar hamari urmi ko lines change nahi karni chahiye thee.....

Mushu..... main sandeep bhai se urmi ki shikayat karoon ga....🤣

Hari.... pagal ho kiya.....sandeep bhai hamari nahi sunainge........

A little far and away from the crowd, stands our sandeep babu.......in deep thoughs........what did happen just now????????Did i really say those words out loud in the front of whole of CG???/ Very worried... ab meri reputition ka kiya hoga???? Loog kiya kahain gi.........???

Up in urmis room.........zoya is dancing n laughing.........while urmi is retouching her makeup....shes wearing the red kurta shalwar......all ready to go down and drive everyone nuts with her beauty.........😳

Zoya....Urmi meri doost, u have done it..........aaj tu maza aagaya.....bichare sandeep bhaijan.......unko kahna hi parha......

Urmi.....smiling... haan... aaj tu unhone kah hi diya.. aur main ne bhee kah diya.........ab jo hona hai ho jayee........magar ab main darti hoon.....

Zoya.........Kyoon??? kis se darti ho, tumhare mummy aur papa se........

Urmi... nahi yaar....sandeep babu se.........kah tu diya... ab woh muj se khafa ho jayaan ge.......😕

Zoya....tu tumhe jab pata tha ke woh khafa ho jayaan ge tu tum ne aasa kyoon kiya????

Urmi......kiya karron, control hi nahi raha 😕

Zoya.... ab bhuktu....chalo neeche.......

Downstairs......both the girls went down.... urmis eyes looking for sandeep..........she could see he was standing away from the crowd n was in deep thoughs.......suddenly he turned n their eyes met.....sandeep eyes searching urmis eyes, as if saying, why did u do that to me???Urmi quickly lowered her eyes and went n stood near her mom......now she was really scared........

Sandep watching her coming down the stairs, in that red suit which makes her look so beautifull...thinking..... i forget the world when i see her...how can she have this effect on me...sighing

Sujhata.....urmi , mari beti........kitni achi lagrahi thee.......

Sujhata was prasing urmi and all the ladies were also praising her and suddeny she saw sandeep babu near her... he whispered to her...

Sandeep....aik min chalo mere saath......

Urmis heart sank.........she knew he was very angry with her.......she said....

Im busy..... sab loogon se baat karahi hoon...

The ladies, when they saw sandeep, started praising him too... kitni achi ram seeta ki jori hai... wah wah....itni khoobsirat........

This made sandeep more angry and he whispered in urmis ears.......

Kab tak yeah loog yaha rahain ge....kabhi tu akali milo gi na..... he said that n went away............Urmi is really upset now........ab kiya hoga.......

Urmi... quickly goes to Zoya and tells her what sandeep said to her.........sehs really upset.......zoya....urmi kuch nahi karain ge bhaijaan.........maar tu nahi dainge na???

Urmi... ab main kiya karoon.........

Zoya.......jayoo....un si mil ke aayoo........

Urmi... abhi?????

zoya.... haan! tu aur kiya????

Urmi.........really worried..... sees that ppl were enjoying themselves, and she slowly moved toward sandeep and said.....main aap ki ghar main aap ka wait kar rahi hoon....theek hai....looking at him with those lovely eyes....

Sandeep looked in the eyes and said slowly, ok.........he felt his heart melting...all the anger leaving him.......Sandeep thinking..God... why does this happens to me when i look in her eyes.......i cant think... i just want to drown in her lovely eyes....how will i scold her for what she did.........grrrrrr.........😡....now getting angry at himself...

Urmi waiting in sandeeps house.....pacing the floor....making knotts with her dupatta........he will be so angry ... what will i do now????

Suddenly she stopped.... the object of her fear was right in front of her.....her heart sank more.......she closed her eyes.......ready to face his wrath.....

Sandeep entered the house and sees her pacing the floor n suddenly she stopped when she sees him n closes her eyes.... sandeep can feel her fear.......he knows she is scared of what he will say to her.........he was so angry at her....but now looking at her, eyes closed..........he smiled........my beautiful urmi..........i dont know how she can fall in love with me........its so funny........of all the ppl in the world, she has to fall in love with me.... im not worthy of her..... sandeep sighs.........what can i give her?????What do i tell u , urmi???That i have loved you for ages aaah, but i cant tell u.......you have to forget me.........there must be a prince outside of cg,, who would keep u so happy.......he would give u everything that i cant give... sigh.........thinking all this.......he moved towards urmi..... all the though had bought his anger back..........

Sandeep........Urmi......kiya!! kiya!!!... kar rahi thee tum neeche??? Tumhara dimag tu kharab nahi hogaya hai???Aik bakhera khara hojata.......tum ko pata bhee hai tum neeche kiya kah rahi thee???

Urmi... eyes shut tight..........head down.........her heart beating so fast.. she can hear it.......suddenly, 2 tears started roling down her cheeks.........sandeep saw that and his anger vanished........sigh.......

Sandeep... ab ro kyoon rahi ho...??? Daant rahaan ho is liya???

Urmi shakes her head, saying no......

Sandeep.. phir.... bakhera khara karne ke liya???Urmi says no again......

Sandeep sighs......... and says .. urmi tum ne mera saath acha nahi kiya.......kiya zaroorat thee lines change karne ki..........ab sab samjhain ge ke maine yeah sab script main likha hai..... abhi tu koyee baat nahi kare ga... per... baat tu nikla ge na.......

Urmi nods.....

Sandeep.. plz ab ro mat.... bakhara khara hoga tu main sambhal loon ga.......

Sandeep.. thinking... plz dont cry.......i cant see u cry........

Suddenly urmi feels fingers on her face n her tears being whipped......she snifs and suddenly finds herself in sandeeps arms.............😉 sandeep hugss her and whispers in her ears... plz dont cry..........i sorry for shouting at u.......😳

Urmi quickly.. not wasting a min also holds him back and smiles......she had dreamed of this.... that someday sandeep will hug her first...😆 (arnt we wating for that too 😛)

Sandeep could feel urmis heartbeat..........it was beating so loud he could almost hear it.. he hugged her more tightly.........saying..........

Dar gayee???

U.. mmmmm... noding........

Sandeep smiled..... rubbing her hair with his chin......they stood like this for few mins............to urmi it looked as if ages had passed and she would want the time to stop.............

Sandeep moved a bit n lifted her face to see in her eyes and said...

ayee.... woh line wapis se kahan.........

Urmi....her eyes shining as she looked in sandeeps eyes........she could see something different there.. something which she has never seen before.....they were smiling n were full of love..........love for her........she smiled and asked.... koon si line ..........

Sandeep.....last line play kee.. jo tum ne likhi hai.......

Urmi blushed.........and hid her face in his shoulders...saying no........

Sandeep laughed and said.......ab akeli main sharam aati hai... aur sab ke saamne.... aase hi kah diya... hmmm........😳

Sandeep........... urmi...kaho na plz.........

Urmi... kyoon.... kiya woh aap ki liya mane rakh ti hai???

Sandeep....hugging her tightly... haan.. bohat ziyda........tum sooch bhee nahi sakti kitna......jo main nahi kar saka.. woh tum ne kardiya...

Urmi smiled.........thinking,, yessssssss.......he loves me....😳

Sandeep.... plz aik baar kahdo........

He moved her back again n as urmi was about to speak.. they heared noise on the stairs, as if someone was coming up.........sandeep and urmi quickly drew apart .......... and were blushing ,when our dear jugle jumped in the room...........urmi... urmi......

Urmi ... kiya hai, jugle,,, hating jugle for intruding on one of the most beautiful moment of her life......sighing........

Jugle...he could sense something b/w urmi and sandeep... and he said ...kiya horaha tha yahan per...........

Sandeep came forward... tumhe bata ne ki zaroorat nahi......tum batayooo yahan kyoon aaye ho.......?

Jugle.... woh hehehe Urmi..... mera matlab hai, urmi ki mummy urmi ko dhoon rahi theen,.. tu main ne soocha ke main dhoon ke aata hoon.......hehehe😆.

Urmi sighs and says.... tum jayoo.. main aati hoon.......

Jugle still standing and looking at urmi.......

Urmi,,.... jugle jayoooo...... jugle runs down the stairs......

Urmi turns and looks at sandeep........aap darwaza band karna kab seekhain ge.......

Sandeep laughs........ ab seekh jayoon ga.......

Urmi...blushing..... main chaloon......

Sandeep.........aur ab rehersal kab karain ge??

Urmi blushes and says, kal?

Sandeep.... comes closer and kisses urmi on her forhead and tells her to go...

Urmi turns to go and looks back at sandeep.... searching his eyes......looking for answers.......he smiled back n noded... his eyes telling her all she wanted to hear from his lips ........blushing.... she moved on....

Urmi walking on cloud9.......... goes down the stairs the song of their tune playing in the background.........

Ok........ this is for 4th nov..😳........i hope u all like it,,,..............do comment plz, even if u dont like it.... correct me also....

Edited by Fazila~ - 17 years ago
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My fourth ff 13 November 2007 at 12:00pm

Its a beautiful morning....and the sweeper is clean all the dirt and mess left behind by the show and the

ppl.........

Urmi is just waking up...........yawn..........thinking........kiya main ne raat ko khwab dakha tha???? Ya abhi khwab daikh rahi hoon... and pinches herself... Ouch!!!.. khwab tu nahi hai..........then she smiles......... and hugs her pillow..........sigh.........i love u sandeep babu aur aaj main aap se wapis kah don gi aur aap ko bhee kahna pare ga.......smiling she sits up... then suddenly a though stuck her..........woh aaj tu naraz nahi hoonge na???

Kal raat ko tu mood bhee acha that........... aik tu yeah sandep babu ke moods ka main kiya karoon........In ke ghar jayoon ya na jayoon...........

just then urmis mom shouts ... urmi uth jayooo.......... bohat so lee.........

Urmi ... aayee mummy........

Urmi is on her way to the kitchen.......sandeep babu is already there.. having breakfast with rasiklal... and completely ignores Urmi........ urmi goes in the kitchen n is so angry..... pata tha.. yahi hoga... raat ka nasha utar jayee ga......... grrrrrrrr....😡

Urmis mom..... urmi make tea for all of us......

Urmi getting more angry now........haan haan, yehi kaam ka liya hi tu main rah gayee hoon bus.......

She makes the tea n serves everyone... this time she was ignoring sandeep completely..............she left the room and went in the kitchen...

Sandeep was watching her the whole time........she looked so beautiful when she wakes up in the morning ... and when shes angry she looks awesome.... her cheeks glow and her eyes become more bright........smiling to himself he was deep in urmis thoughs when rasiklal said....... kar lo ge na????

Sandeep coming back to the earth........ looks at rasiklala and says yes yes... kar loon ga...........but he doesnt know what?

He turned and saw urmi standing there watching him.......he raised his eyebrows n asked what ? she said nothing, smiled n left.....now sandeep was in big problem... he didnt know what rasiklal had told him to do.......but im sure urmi heared it.... ab is se poochoon ga tu meri class lalagi.........ab main kiya karoon......rubbing his hands on his face...........

He looks at rasiklal and asks..........aaa......kitne baje karna hai........???

rasiklal.. jitne baje usne kaha hai.. theek hai... and he gets up and go.....

Sandeep sighs and goes in the kitchen......carrying the tea cups.....he sees urmi alone and asks... kasi ho............

Urmi......... theek hoon.......ab nazar aayee hoon?

Sandeep... tu kiya tumhare papa ke samne yeah sab poochoon???

Urmi.....eyes him and says: kyoon nahi....

Sandeep........yeah sab main nahi kar sakta... tumhe pata hai main kasa hoon........badal nahi sakta apne aap ko........

Urmi.. acha........hmmm.........theek hai....

Sandeep.. acha suno.......tumhare papa kiya kah rahe the??? main kiya karloon? tumhe kuch pata hai ...

Urmi laughs.... hahaha.... tu aap kahaan thay us waqt........

Sandeep.... kis waqt....

urmi.... usssss…. waqt... jab papa aab se batain kar rahe the???

Sandeep rubbing his hands on his chin..... and looks and urmi n smiled.......thinking.. if i tell u what i was thinking then.....first u wont believe it... second if u do believe it u will faint right here which i dont want to see........

Sandeep.....plz agar tumhe pata hai ke papa ne kiya kaha, tu mujhe bata do plz.........

Urmi........aur agar na batayoon tu??? raising her eyes and smiling...

Sandeep........kiya bachoon jasi batain kar rahi hoo........batayoo na....

Urmi.... main bachi... aur aap ne nahi suna tu aap koon??? looking at him with her eyes laughing........

Sandeep... main pagal... plz batayooo

Urmi.... mujhe kiya dain gai???

Sandeep.... jo mango....then quickly changing.....aaa nahi..... jo mujhe sahi lage ga woh doon ga...

Urmi... kyoon mera bharosa nahi hai??? Eyeing him with her lovely eyes……ahem ahem….

Sandeep.. clears his throat..... aasi baat nahi hai...

Urmi.... phir kasi baat hai....

Sandeep irritated.... acha chooro , tumhare papa se hi pooch loonga......and he turns to go out...

Urmi quickly stops him with her hand: aik min..... naraz hogayee...

Sandeep...... nahi.....tum se bohat kush hoon....

Urmi smiles and says ...........acha .... bata don.......

Sandeep........bari kripa ho gi aap ki.......

Urmi laughs and says... plaza lajayaan ge?

Sandeep........aasi wahiyat film daikhne ke liya,.. never.......

Urmi makes face and says plzzzzz........acha, jahan papa ne kaha hai waha le jayaan ge?

Sandeep.thinking then said...... acha la jayoon ga.....kaam batayoo...

Urmi.... haan...email kiya laye tha ...... ke sharmi aa rahi hai.... teen din ke baad.......4 baje ki train se???.... tu papa tu yahan hoon ge nahi.... tu aap ko jana pare ga... .. app ko aur mujhe.........

sandeep.... makes a face n tells her.. thanks...tum nahi aayo gi........

Urmi.. kyoon kyoon... aap ne tu abhi kaha mujhe laajaan ge.........

S.. wahan tumhe sambhaloon ga ya sharimi ko???

U…yeah kiya baat hoyee……..naraz ho kar……..

S… acha ab rona mat…….aek tu itne nakhra hain .. ke bus………

Urmi looking at sandeep with innocent eyes……

S… ok plaza la jayoon ga….. theek hai…..

U…excited and with a big smile asked… kaab…….

S…jab mujhe time mile… tab..

U….making faces n said… aap ko mere liye tu time hi nahi hai…….

S…aasi baat nahi hai….

U….tu phir…….bhool jayaan ge……

S….agar bhool gaya tu plzzzzzzzz… request kar ra ha hoon……….aa kar yaad dila dena plz….theek hai

U….theek hai………kaab???????Knowing urmi,..she wont let go of sandeep untill he promises to take her😆

S sighs…..kaal 6 to 9 ka show.. theek hai…….

Urmi felt like hugging sandeep, then stopped….. haan!!!!!

S… koon si movie dakhna hai?

U….thinking n then said…….kahoo na pyar hai……she said it so sweetly n as if pleading........

Sandeep….didn't realise that urmi was taking a movies name……all blood drained from his face…..wwhat is urmi saying………I should tell her now.. again that I love her……..Oh God…..what is she up too……

Urmi was looking at sandeep…. And said, kiya howa……

Sandeep too shocked to say anything……..just moved his head n said…Urmi , tum kiya chahitee ho???main yeah sab nahi kar sakta…..

Urmi innocently said.......purani film hai??? Theek hai nayee daikh lainge…….

S….kiya…kiya kah rahi ho…

U…movie…..kaho na pyar hai… purani film hai…….

S….colour coming back to his face…..started blushing…….movie ka naam kiya hai???

U… kahoon na pyar hai……..that struck Urmi… anyways.. urmi is very slow at thinking all these delicate issues……

U….App kiya samjhe…….and she started to laugh……..

S….kuch nahi samjha…..movie tum choose kar lena….

Aur kaal tayar ho jana…….ja raha hoon…..

U…..smiling and looking at sandeep said……..Jab we met……..and laughed again

S…. tum na….. and laughed……and started to move…….and raised his hand and touched her face and left ..leaving urmi flushed and smiling……..😳

Ok........ this is for 11th nov..😳........i hope u all like it,,,..............do comment plz, even if u dont like it.... correct me also....and tell me if i should conti or stop it hehehe😆

love

Fazila :)

Edited by Fazila~ - 17 years ago
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Hi friends..........im writing another ff and it will be posted soon.......so till then enjoy tonights epi and also read this promo n comment do iconti or NOT😆

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Edited by Fazila~ - 17 years ago
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wow 👏 good job Fazi 😉 n sorry you said don't read and I've been scrolling down doing the same 😆

kya ideas laate ho yaar tum Fazi keep up 😉

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Originally posted by: iiwafa

wow 👏 good job Fazi 😉 n sorry you said don't read and I've been scrolling down doing the same 😆

kya ideas laate ho yaar tum Fazi keep up 😉

bara kahna maan te ho mera... ya lakeer ke fakeer ho??????????read the whole thing........heheh scroll down is for all the fans of ff 😆
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Originally posted by: Fazila~

bara kahna maan te ho mera... ya lakeer ke fakeer ho??????????read the whole thing........heheh scroll down is for all the fans of ff 😆

jo bhi samajh lo ................ but I've been peeking through the posts trying finding the thing you didn't want us to read 😕 but I cudn't find one 😆

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