#2 LOVE: THE GAME OFLOSS N GAIN last chap 23/11

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SAACHIGUPTA09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#441

Well superb ending😃👏😳

Thanks for the pm😃

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SAACHIGUPTA09

@SAACHIGUPTA09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: SAACHIGUPTA09
Well superb ending😃👏😳
Thanks for the pm😃

Sorry for the late reply 😭

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priyanka

@Priyankaakdha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#443

Haww .. Mavi u chng ur username ...
Maine yh pm yh sochke open nhi kia tha ki pta nhi kiska h ...

But now only i read the name of story ...

Story finish bhi ho gyi ...
But m Happy that u atleast finished it rather than leave it in mid ...

Amazing ending .cute sa chappy tha

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Avika444

@avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#444

Mavi ...lool ...this is u

...i was wondering who is new person is in my buddy list ...hehehehe ...sorry dear ..for not recognizing u ...anyways ...the chap was superb ...U penned parents fear for their child who is kidnapped , very well ...Jalal and Jo both were so scared and worried for salim at the same time . Adham and Jallu's fight was bang on ...and finally salim is back to his parents ...happy happy ending with Jalal and Jodha planning for salim's sibbling ...hehehe .

Loved it totally dear .

Thanks for pm