THE EULOGY TS (Completed) (VM ADDED)

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Hi Everyone! 😊 I am finally back. Too late though. And I know many of you will be ready with several questions and special negative thoughts that you want to tell me. You are all allowed to do so. 😆

It might be a bit sad but too much of inspiring. This is something i would do whenever anyone dies in my family. No, not a long eulogy but being this girl i am trying to portray through the TS.😃

KAMZOR DIL WAALE BHI PADH SAKTE HAIN, ITNA KUCH KHAAS NAHI HAI.

Genre: Sad drama overloaded with cute and romantic moments.

She was standing right in front the coffin. She seemed to be the bravest amongst all there and according to me amongst all the Londoners. She had the courage to stand there and speak to everyone. When everyone was crying or feeling sad, she had a smile on her face. The cute smile he always wanted to be on her face.

She looked at everyone with a drop of tear trickling down her cheek. She saw everyone so sad and some in the front crying. Finally she spoke up-

"We don't need to cry. We cannot. We have to show him that he made us smile all throughout and so even after he left we will smile. Not for ourselves but this time for him."

Everyone saw the courageous girl in front of them. Almost all of them were comparing themselves with her courage and found that they were nowhere near her. She continued,

"Sirius Black, his favorite movie's character, once said, The ones you love never truly leave you. They are always with us, In here'." She pointed at her heart.

"I am not acting brave today but I am acting what he would want me to do today. We used to fight so much, always but our egos weren't this big that we couldn't apologise. Would you all want to hear a small story?" everyone nodded.

"Well, this is OUR story. We met first in a caf. I know most stories begin in a caf but OURS IS DIFFERENT.

*FB*

She just walked in the caf, her favorite caf. She used to come here every time there was some problem she was facing. The owner knew her very well.

Girl- (calling the waiter) Excuse me!

The waiter saw her and understood her mood. He went to her with a cappuccino. Girl looked at the cappuccino and smiled. There was smiley on the top of the coffee made out of cream. That smiley always brought smile to her face. How did the person know her moods always?! She looked at the waiter with a confused look.

Waiter- Ma'am it's a mystery.

He smiled and left. She saw here and there and found the person she was looking for. He came and sat in front of her.

Girl- I have been expecting you only. How do you know that I was about to come?

Man- I just know.

Girl- You caf is full of mysteries.

Man- Again about the coffee, I am sure.

The girl just nodded in response.

He took out his mobile and switched on the front camera and put in front of her face. She saw the camera and gave a confused look.

Man- Your face speaks it all. Those who don't speak their heart out in order to never hurt anyone cannot hurt themselves. How? This is the answer. (Pointing out at the mobile) Anyone can tell that you are upset regarding something. Being in the third year of a medical college there might be several problems you might be having. You can share. (he said in an assuring tone)

Girl- I know I can. You are the best person I have met so far. You are really the best, Frankenstein. You assurance can alone make me feel better. To the least I get to know that I am not alone.

Man- Nisha, you started again with calling me FRANKENSTEIN. Why a giant?

Ni- Because, you are too fit for your age.

Fr- (sarcastically) What do you want? Shall I be walking with a stick? (proudly) I am too young for that.

Nisha smiled at his cuteness.

Ni- (sarcastically) Indeed you are. After all you are just 57.

Manager- (called out) Mr. Mehta, you have got a call.

Man- I have to go.

Ni- I don't understand why they call you Mr. Mehta! I mean that first of all they should not call you by name since you are their boss, the owner of this caf and even if they have to call you by name why don't they call Rudra?!

He smiled and left. Nisha had her coffee. Just then she heard Rudra making announcement.

Ru- Tonight, there is a special function. It is my grandson's birthday. I would like to invite you all to the event.

He looked at Nisha as if inviting her for the party. She smiled and nodded. Then Nisha left. She was on her way back to the hostel when she heard someone call her.

"Excuse me, Ms. Nisha!"

She turned around. There was a hot guy who was real handsome. Well this was enough for Nisha to leave to the dreamy land.

"Actually you left your Handkerchief on the table. I just saw it so ran to give it back to you. Here you go!" he gave her the handkerchief.

"How do you know me?" Nisha asked. "Frankenstein talks a lot about you." He replied. He was about to leave when Nisha called him. She was shocked. How did he know so much about her?!

"I am your Frankenstein's grandson who came yesterday from India." He replied seeing her confused expressions.

"Leaving his parents for Frankenstein?" she asked. He smiled in response.

She smiled widely and forwarded her hand, "I am Nisha Jain. And you are?" he smiled and shaked his hands with her. "Kabir Mehta! Nice to meet you." They smiled.

Ka- Though I know you had a coffee but would you like to have it with me?

Ni- (naughtily) Asking me out? (cutting him off before he could begin) I wouldn't have minded but today I am running late. I will be here at night and I think the birthday boy will be here as well. So we can have a coffee then.

She smiled and left after greeting him. Nisha was running late as she had to go to her friend's house as well for a project.

*FB ends*

That was the first time I saw him. He was nice but the best thing I saw was he looked much like Frankenstein. He had the eyes of his Grandfather. His father and mother left Frankenstein alone with nothing but a broken caf and a 2BHK house in London. Frankentsein made everything perfect by himself. Kabir came to know about the truth a day before his birthday, that too by someone else. As he told, that was the moment he packed up everything and left for London from California.


So guys, this is the first part. I would love to see your comments for the same if possible. And I have to read many stories on this forum. (dramatically) Toh mere comments ka intezaar karna doston. Main jald hi waapas aaungi.


haan i know you all want to crown me as the drama queen.😆 Chalo enough of bakwaas. waiting for you comments.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesomely start 👏
Nibir meeting was good...
Waiting for next...update soon...!!
And I want update of our is different too...
Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Where were you ??? What happened ?? And when we'll get update ??
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Originally posted by: Anmol333

Awesomely start 👏

Nibir meeting was good...
Waiting for next...update soon...!!
And I want update of our is different too...


Thanks a lot Anmol. Glad u liked it. Will update this soon. 😊
And about Ours is Different, i am not sure if i can and even if i can it will be after March 21st. That's when my exams end. sorry for the delay.
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Originally posted by: Anmol333

Where were you ??? What happened ?? And when we'll get update ??


Long story. There were a lot of happenings around.Not some serious ones but actually i couldnt get enough time. 😃
Bas ab Taareef mat karna😉😆😳

And about this, you will get it soon, if i get positive replies for the same.😃 Yr apna forum bahut shaant ho gaya hai.😭 Will update this soon. And Ours is Different aur ek aur jo Ts hai i am not sure if i can really update them.
But i am sure i cant before 21st march.
😊
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I was thinking that only.. I mean I have already guessed that your exams were going on or it will be in march...
Koi nhi jab time mile tab update karna 😊
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Originally posted by: Anmol333

I was thinking that only.. I mean I have already guessed that your exams were going on or it will be in march...

Koi nhi jab time mile tab update karna 😊


Thanks for understanding. Actually now i am going through Pre-Board exams. Main exams will be in March. I will the post the next part soon. to the least i have a person to read it. 😉 Will update tomorrow.
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Yaar update ane wala tha na 🤓
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Part-2 (a)

The New Friendship

Kabir came to know about the truth a day before his birthday, that too by someone else. As he told, that was the moment he packed up everything and left for London from California.

By the nightfall I was there in the caf because I knew Frankenstein never liked late comers though he didn't appreciate the ones who came earlier as well but still I was an exception.

*FB*

She reached the caf and was guided to her chair which was in the front. All the guests who knew the likes and dislikes of Frankenstein were already there, who were ample in number. And those who didn't surely weren't included in his list of the liked ones.

Nisha was just thinking about all this when the old man came in dressed up in an Indian sherwani and kurta. He looked proper Indian guest who had come to a wedding. He came and sat near Nisha.

Ru- (curiously) How's everything?

Ni- (obvious look) We met in the morning, Frankenstein.

Ru- (irritated) I am not talking about you. I am talking about the decorations and about myself.

Ni- (chuckled) About the decorations, they signify absolute perfection. And about you... (looked at him nicely) You are looking like a proper Indian dulha waiting for his bride.

Ru- (flirting) But I don't have any yet!

Ni- (understood) Frankenstein, you are too old for me otherwise you are a perfect guy for a girl because this is what a girl wants. Handsome! Cute! Intelligent! Kind! Generous! And above all a man who understands. So you are perfect.

Ru- Would like dating my young form?

Nisha looked confused. Rudra pointed at the door from where Kabir was entering in a blue Indian kurta, a cream legging and a cream netted chunri around his neck in SRK style. Nisha laughed.

Ru- (cutely annoyed) It is not a joke!

Ni- But I can't be serious about him (pointing at Kabir)

Just Kabir came to them.

Ka- What are we talking about me?

Ru- Actually Nisha was saying...

Nisha covered Frankentsein's mouth.

Ni- Nisha was saying that the grandfather and grandson duo is looking good.

Rudra looked at Nisha. Nisha left his mouth. Kabir sat on her left side and Rudra left to make an announcement about Kabir.

Ka- (in Nisha's ear) You are not so good at lying. And you look hot and happening in this red dress.

Nisha looked at Kabir shocked when Rudra called him. Rudra asked him to sing a song for someone special. He thought that Kabir didn't have any but he didn't know that Kabir actually did. (WE KNOW WHO)

Kabir took the guitar and sat on the chair. He started singing the song.

(guys you can listen the song along if you want)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dGippFgWiQ4

Tu.. haan tu..
Tu.. haan tu..

He started playing the guitar looking at Nisha.

Maana sabse tu haseen hai husn wali
Maana sabke tu dilon mein basne wali
Haan haan hain nasha
Adaa bhi nakhre wali, par..

He kept on staring her. he gave the guitar to his friend to play.

Taarefon se nahi
Tu maan'ne wali

He went near her. And bowed in front of her. Nisha smiled.

Tu.. haan tu..
Tu.. haan tu..

He then started moving around.

Khamosh dil na zor se dhadakna
Dikh na jaaye haye
Usse tera tadapna

He pointed at his heart as if scolding him for beating loudly.

Mere haal pe, hai muskurane wali, par..

Nisha chuckled.

Taareefon se nahi
Tu maan'ne wali

He then started swaying on the beats.

Tu.. haan tu..
Tu.. haan tu.. woh..
Na na na ..

"""MUSIC""""

He went near a girl of Nisha's age only and forwarded his hand for a dance. The girl was pretty. Nisha was burning inside, she didn't know why though. The girl gave her hand in and Kabir took her in the middle. The girl put her hand on his shoulder and he put his on her waist maintaining a distance.

Tere kaano mein gungunaaun
Ya pahaadon se chilaun (x2)

A man (the girl's husband) came and patted on Kabir's shoulder and Kabir smiled and left. the girl made faces

Tu hi tu, tu hi tu, tu hi tu
Koi Sufi shikayat karu
.

Tu ru ru, tu ru ru, tu ru ru
Koi filmi shararat karu
O nakhre wali, par..

Kabir just kept on moving here and there singing. The environment created by him was heaven.

Taarefon se nahi
Tu maan'ne wali

He finally forwarded his hand to Nisha and smiled and gave her hand in his. The same position was taken again but there was lesser distance between them now.

Maana sabse tu haseen hai husn wali
Maana sabke tu hai hosh udaane wali
Mere haal pe hai muskurane wali
Taarifon se nahi na na..

He twirled her around and then again grabbed her waist and they swayed to the music.

Taarefon se nahi
Maan'ne wali oh..
Tu maan'ne wali..

At the end he made her fall in his arms in a delicate manner. Nisha could see his care in the dance postures.

As soon as the song ended they all got up and clapped for Kabir. Nisha went and stood in a corner. Frankenstein called for the cake. They cut the cake while singing Happy Birthday for Kabir. Kabir fed the cake to Frankenstein first and then to Nisha. Before giving her he said, "To my new special friend" Nisha smiled and had the cake. "From my new special friend." Kabir smiled and had the cake as Nisha gave him.

*FB ENDS*

I think that was a life-changing day for both of us. I looked at Frankenstein. There was a knowing smile on his face all this while. It felt like he understood that is going to happen in the future.

Edited by 357159pikachu - 8 years ago
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Part 2 (b)
The New Relation

Days passed and me and Kabir became even better friends. We started sharing an unbreakable bond. Frankenstein was observing everything silently. He just smiled whenever we were having coffee together or some more cute moments together.

*FB*

Chadi mujhe yaari teri aisi
Jaise daaru desi
Khatti meethi baatein hain nashe si
Jaise daaru desi
Chadi mujhe yaari teri aisi
Jaise daaru desi
Khatti meethi baatein hain nashe si
Jaise daaru desi

Nisha and Kabir were sitting together in the caf.

Ni- Yaar Kabir, I am getting bored. This sem break is really boring. Neither can I meet my friends nor can study anything.

Ka- Excuse me! (hurt tone) What am I to you? Am I nothing?

Ni- (chuckled) Saas Bahu serials ki Peedit Bahu! (bored tone) its so boring. Nothing exciting!!!

Ka- (teasingly) What exciting do you want?! Huh?!

Nisha looked at him and started beating him.

Ladkhadane lagi mushkurane lagi
Bewajah har jagah aane jaane lagi
Tu mujhe main tujhe
Jo bhi ho dil mein woh khul ke bataane lagi

They started running here and there where Kabir was defending himself and Nisha was beating him. Their laughter covered the room's silence. Kabir was running facing Nisha when he hit Frankenstein. They stood together in front of him.

Chadi mujhe yaari teri aisi
Jaise daaru desi
Khatti meethi baatein hain nashe si
Jaise daaru desi
Chadi mujhe yaari teri aisi
Jaise daaru desi
Khatti meethi baatein hain nashe si
Jaise daaru desi

Ru- You two... (put his hand on their heads) are perfect together. never leave each other.

He said so and left.

Waqt bhi sarfira sa lage
Bhaagta sa rahe har jage
Waqt ko inn dino sujhne hai lagi dillagi
Yaariyan gaadiyan jab huyi
Mastiyan sastiyan tab hui
Aaj kal marziyon ki jagah se thuggi zindagi

Kabir and Nisha shared an eyelock.

Ka- (curious) Kuch samajh mein aaya?

Ni- (still in the dream land) Bahut kuch!

Kabir looked at her in awe.

Ni- Mera matlab tha that... Leave it! let's go out somewhere!

Ka- Sure! To London eye?

Nisha nodded.

Saath hum jo chale
Bann gaye kaafile
Aur koi hume ab mile na mile
Mauj hai roz hai
Roke se bhi naa yeh rukte kabhi silsile
Come on, come on

Chadi mujhe yaari teri aisi
Jaise daaru desi
Khatti meethi baatein hain nashe si
Jaise daaru desi

They sat in a car. London eye was a bit far from his place. They sat in his car and left. Nisha was stealing glances from him. Kabir understood it and also somewhere he understood what she felt. They knew that they liked each other and somewhere it was even more.

Hai chadi hai chadi iss kadar
Ghoomti jhoomti har dagar
Befikar befikar sa lage zindagi ka safar
Yaar ko yaar ki hai khabar
Pyaar se pyaar si baat kar
Yeh jahan hai jahan
Hum rahein ab woh hi umr bhar

They went to the London eye. It was big and terrifying. Nisha denied going. Kabir held her hand.

Ka- Mujhpar bharosa hai?

Nisha nodded cutely.

Ka- Toh chal, you know I won't let you be harmed.

Nisha smiled and they went together. They sat in the BIG WHEEL OF LONDON. Nisha was acrophobic (feared of heights).

Dhoop ko thaam ke, chal pade na thake
Fursaton mein rahe, kaam ho naam ke
Befikar befikar subha suhaani ho khali ho pal sham ke

The big wheel started. Nisha was getting scared. She held Kabir's hand firmly digging her nails into them but he didn't say a word.

Chadi mujhe yaari teri aisi
Jaise daaru desi
Khatti meethi baatein hain nashe si
Jaise daru desi

Ladkhadane lagi mushkurane lagi
Bewajah har jagah aane jaane lagi
Tu mujhe main tujhe
Jo bhi ho dil me woh khul ke bataane lagi

Chadi mujhe yaari teri aisi
Jaise daaru desi
Khatti meethi baatein hain nashe si
Jaise daaru desi
Chadi mujhe yaari teri aisi
Jaise daaru desi
Khatti meethi baatein hain nashe si
Jaise daaru desi -

He just kept staring her. how cute she looked when she was scared.

Ni- Bhagwaan aaj bacha lo! Bas aaj! Fir jab chaahe maar dena!

Kabir slapped her at that instant. Nisha was shocked.

Ka- (painfully) Dare you say it again!

Nisha understood what he felt. She apologised. For a moment she forgot her fear and sunk in the moment but as soon as they reach the peak the fear caught her up again.

They got down after all the fear and controlling thing. They were discussing about the ride when she got a call from her aunt. She excused herself and picked up the call.

Ni- Ji chachi, boliye!

After some time Nisha excused herself from Kabir and went somewhere alone. Kabir did not know the reason the reason for her being upset so he decided to follow her. He saw her sitting on a bench and crying. He ran to her and hugged her immediately. Nisha could feel his presence and started crying her heart out. After sometime Kabir left her. Nisha wiped her tears. Kabir was waiting for her to speak something.

Ni- Kabir, I am sorry! I have disturbed you.

Ka- (annoyed) It's great Nisha that you very well understood that I wanted to hear it from you. But it wasn't this. So tell me what happened when you talked on the phone? (concerned tone) Nisha, you can trust me!

He kept his palm on hers in an assuring way.

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