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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Part 2 (c)
The Truth

Ni- (tears brimming her eyes) Kabir, when I was 20 my mom died out of cancer but till her last moment she fought for me. I never came to know that she was suffering from cancer until the day she fainted. My father was a big businessman of India but he was an orthodox. According to him women were of no use except for having children and treating them. But my mother fought for me. I got selected through an exam for the college I am in right now. (crying) Kabir that day, when she was dying, she gave me a ticket to London. My mother gave me the ticket and asked me to become the world's most famous doctor and to prove my father wrong. My father started hating me since then. I ran away from India. A month ago I came to know that dad has left spies behind me. I could never run away from them. Today Kabir, those spies saw you with me. I tried hard to explain to dad that we are just friends but he did not listen to a word I spoke. Kabir he...

Kabir hugged her again as she cried. After a few minuted she spoke the incomplete sentence that made the tears in Kabir's eyes fall out.

Ni- Kabir has cut off all his ties with me. He has...

Kabir hugged her even more tightly this time to never let her go. He patted her back.

Ka- (broke the hug and cupped her face) Nisha! You are a brave girl. The strongest girl I have seen till today. You can't break so easily. The man never deserved you. Many people are there to be with you forever. Your Frankenstein won't leave you. Your best friend Sneha won't leave you. I... I won't leave you.

Nisha looked at his eyes lovingly and Kabir responded.

Ka- Trust me Nisha, I would never let you go.

Nisha just hugged him. The words of Kabir and Nisha's hug said many unsaid things that they were now known to. Yes, they both were in LOVE.

*FB ENDS*

I cannot explain our entire moment when we realized our love but yes that moment was special for both of us.

Then one day I asked Kabir to come to the caf in a hurry, that too at almost midnight. Well there was certainly a reason I was having.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Part 2 (d)
Proposal

*FB*

Nisha entered the caf and saw beautiful lights. She called out for Kabir. Just then music started. A spotlight fell on Kabir.

Ni- Meri dhadkan tujh se hai,
Meri saanse tujh se hai,
Tere liye lad jao duniya se mein
Itni aashiqui tujh se hai...

Just then Nisha came in front of him and another spotlight fell on her. Kabir was shocked on what was happening. He thought that something might have happened to her but here she is saying shayris and singing.

Aankhein coffee peetey peetey mil rahi hain
Aankhein pyaar ke jhonkon se hil rahi hain
Aankhein pyaar ke dhaagon se sil rahi hain

A projector started projecting some pictures of theirs. Kabir looked at those. They were literally adorable. And the best one was with them having coffee and chit-chatting.

Ye jo ho raha hai, accha lag raha hai
Nasha hai ye pehle pyaar ka (pehle pyaar ka..)

She went near him and sang this line.

Asar ye naya hai, nazar ne kahaa hai
Palkon pe beth ja tu aa ke
Chaahe meri neend le ja chura ke

She came close to his ears and sang these lines and went away smiling.

Kabir understood what she meant. He could not control his happiness. He was on cloud nine as if.

Saansein achaanak uchhalne lagi hain
Nazrein ye baatein ukalne lagi hain
Saansein achaanak uchhalne lagi
Nazrein ye baatein ukalne lagi
Dilchaspi khud pe yun din par din mujhpe badhne lagi hai

Then Nisha went in the center and started dancing along with some of her friends.

Ye jo ho raha hai
Accha lag raha hai
Nasha hai ye pehle pyaar ka (pehle pyaar ka..)
Asar ye naya hai, nazar ne kahaa hai

Kabir also finally confessed his love singing the song.

Palkon pe beth ja tu aa ke
Chaahe meri neend le ja chura ke

Nisha went near him finally and sat on her knees.

Aankhein coffee peete peete mil rahi hain
(mil rahi hain..)
Aankhein pyar ke jhonkon se hil rahi hain
(hil rahi hain..)

She took out a box of ring and forwarded it to Kabir. He opened the box and saw a toffee.

Ni- (mischeviously) Har acchi shuruvat ek toffee aur hamare liye ek coffee (a friend of hers brought a mug of coffee with a smiley) se honi chahiye.

Ka- (questioningly) Aur ring?

Nisha took out the ring from her pocket.

Ni- Woh yeh rahi.

Ka- Ab propose bhi kar.

Ni- (fighting) Oh Hello! Ek toh tera kaam main kar rahi hoon aur upar se tu keh raha hai propose kar! Hatt!

Kabir turned around. He was about to leave when he heard a tune. The DDLJ tune, the tune from his favorite movie of his favorite actor (BOLLYWOOD).

Ni- Teri aankhon ki namkeen mastiyan
Teri hansi ki beparwaah gustakhiyaan
Teri zulfon ki leharaati angdaiyaan
Nahi bhoolungi main
Jab tak hai jaan, jab tak hai jaan

Kabir turned and smiled when he saw her in the same pose as SRK's famous one.

Ka- Aage!

Ni- Hum Ek baar jeete hain

Ek baar marte hain aur pyaar...

Woh bhi ek hi baar karte

(funny tone) Unless you are a playboy.

The moment created by Nisha was spoiled and Kabir was leaving when Nisha said,

"Agar woh mujhse pyar karta hai toh woh zaroor paltega.

Toh Palat!

Kabir smiled but didn't turn.

Ni- (with full emotions) Palat!

Kabir was enjoying this attention.

Ni- (irritated) Arre palat na Phulkumaari urf Senorita!

Kabir turned with a shocked face. She called him Phulkumaari! Come on!

Ka- Phulkumaari?! Out of everything.

Nisha just giggled at his cute annoyed face. He went near her (like real near) and held her shoulder.

Ka- (passionate, husky tone) Ab propose nahi karegi?!

Ni- (annoyed) Oye! Abhi kya kiya maine?

Ka- (unknowingly)Mujhe kya pata.

Ni- (pointing her finger on his face) Mr. Kabir Mehta! You don't dare say that. Main kitna kar sakti thi maine kiya and if it is still not good enough for you then I can't help it.

She said so and was about to leave when Kabir held her hand. Nisha turned. He pulled her to him and she bumped on his chest.

Ka- (husky tone) Tune sabse important cheez hi nahi boli.

Nisha was confused but later understood.

Ni- Maine tujhe propose kara aur tune almost reject kar diya. Uske baad bhi main hi bolu.

She looked down. Kabir saw her and realized that tear drops fell from her face.

Ka- Hey!

He cupped her face with concern.

Ka- Iss mein bhi koi rota hai! Accha chal I am sorry. (wiped her tears) Aur mere saamne kya mere peeche bhi kabhi mat rona. Tere aansoon mujhe sabse zyada hurt karte hain samjhi.

Nisha nodded.

Ka- (passionate tone) Aur rahi baat bolne ki toh main hi bol deta hoon. I... Love... You... My Personal Shah Rukh Khan!

Nisha chuckled.

Ka- Ab tu bol.

She didn't say anything and just hugged him tight. Kabir hugged her back.

Ni- (still hugging) Kya yeh kaafi hai!

Ka- More than what I dream for. (smiled)

Ni- I love you Mr. Kabir Mehta.

They heard applauds and cheers. They broke the hug while Kabir still side hugged her. Frankenstein came. They bent down and took his blessings.

Ru- (proudly) I knew it from the very beginning.

Ka- Because you were one flirt and passionate lover too.

They all laughed. Just then the waiter brought a cake.

Kabir was confused.

Ni- happy Birthday my new special life long mate.

Kabir was over-whelmed.

Ka- I will never forget this day for my entire life. Thanks a lot Nisha. Thankyou. (hugged her tight)

They all cut the cake and never changing the prority Kabir gave the cake first to Rudra and then to Nisha. And the best part was that Nisha was proud of Kabir for doing so.

*FB ENDS*

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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Part-3
Our Last Day

You know at that moment I really thought that everything will be perfect for the whole life in front of me. But really love is just like Cancer. It doesn't take your permission to get in and when it does it ends us up with nothing except death. Our marriage was a pure bliss. We came to know what true love is. It is standing by the lover, helping her/him in the difficult times and staying with them whenever they need us and even when they don't.

*FB*

Ka- (moving with a plate after her in an apron) Nisha yaar, teri intership ke baad ke interviews hain Nisha. If you don't eat anything how will you learn and how will you answer?

Ni- (Walking around with a book in her hand) Main teri tarah bhukkad nahi hoon. And it hasn't been an hour Kabir since I ate my lunch.

Nisha finally sat on the sofa. Kabir sat beside her.

Ka- Waise madam (teasingly) Aadat daal lo zyada khaane ki.

Nisha was confused.

Ka- Arre! Jab hamara baby aane waala hoga toh tumhe zyada khana padega, on his behalf as well.

Nisha was shocked at first and then started beating him with the book in her hand in order to hide her shyness although Kabir already saw it. He held her hand. Their eyes met.

Ka- (huskily) apne pati par atyachar kara na toh aaj raat ko main tujhe nahi chodunga fir tu subah uthne mein late ho jayegi aur interview mein gadbad ho jayegi. Because I cannot forget that we have to bring heir to continue our caf business.

Nisha away out of shyness. Kabir made her eat the food and she silently had it. After that she started studying. After every hour or half he would come in the room with something new for food. Nisha had to eat it in order to protect herself from being red.

*FB ENDS*

You know what, best moments do not last for long. I was feeling like I was living a dream but I came to know it later that he was living a disease.

*FB*

Ka- (running after her with a bag) Nisha ye toh le.

Ni- Oh! thankyou!

Nisha was moving hastily.

Ka- Nisha aaraam se or else you would turn the whole world upside down. Sit here (he made her sit on the sofa) Ye kha!

Nisha looked at the spoon filled with dahi.

Ni- Yeh kyun?

Ka- Kyunki kehte hain ki jab bhi kisi acche kaam ke liye jaate hain toh muh meetha karke jaana chahiye.

She looked at the fridge with a puppy face. The fridge contained her favorite chocolates which were quite chilled and as she had cold it was sure that Kabir won't allow it. Kabir silently got up and started moving.

Ni- (sadly) Kabir its okay. I don't want chocolates but please tu mujhse naaraz mat ho.

Kabir kept moving. Nisha was about to say something but stopped as she was shocked with his reactions. He got 2 chocolates from the fridge and went to her. He opened one and took out a piece from it.

Ka- (forwarding the chocolate piece in the already opened mouth of Nisha which was opened out of shock) Khaa le!

Ni- (having the piece) What is gotten into you? Tu mujhe chocolate de raha hai? That too freezed? Are you out of your senses?

Ka- (cupped her face) Nisha I want this day to be the best for you, whatever it takes because Nisha I want you to complete your mom's dream which is now mine. I will expand my caf business but Nisha you should become what I dream for you. I want you to be late from office because of the bulk of patients. I want you to have a bungalow of your own with a lot of cars like Lamborghini etc. Nisha I want you to get this opportunity. I want you to be the biggest doctors of all times. I want you to win always.

Nisha had tears in her eyes. Kabir moved forward and kissed her eyes. Nisha hugged him tightly. Kabir understood what she felt and hugged her back.

Ni- I love you Kabir and will always.

Ka- I know! (dramatically)

They laughed out. Nisha had her chocolate and was about to leave. Kabir coughed as if trying to make her remember something. Nisha smiled and went near him and kissed him on his cheeks.

Ka- (naughtily) Can I have my piece of chocolate for all I did for these days?

Nisha was confused at first but later understood what he meant. She closed her eyes. Kabir neared her.

Ka- (huskily) I don't want you to close your eyes. It shows fear.

Nisha opened her eyes and they closed the gap between their lips. It was a pure bliss. After what felt like eternity they broke apart. Nisha combed her hair and finally was leaving. The car was standing out already. Kabir went to the main gate to see her off.

She was about to sit in the car when he called her. She turned.

Ka- Nisha... ummm... today when you come home... if I am not there waiting for you please don't panic... I know you can handle it well.

Nisha couldn't understand.

Ka- I mean I might be going to the caf so you can come there.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
PART- 3 (B)
The Final Part

Nisha smiled and finally left. Nisha went for the interview. The interviewers were so impressed with her that they gave her the appointment letter then and there itself. Nisha was so happy and she couldn't wait to see her hubby's reactions. She went to the driver. She asked him to go the caf to surprise Kabir. Nisha sat and left for the caf.

The driver always saw their mails and gave it to either Nisha or Kabir.

Driver- Ma'am, here are the mails.

Nisha took them. They were mostly promotions ones. Nisha kept them aside and took out a magazine as the way back was a bit far. Just then her eyes fell on one of the mails. It was of some doctor. She immediately took it. It said- TO MR. KABIR MEHTA. Nisha didn't know what it would be. She thought that might eb some normal tests.

Ni- (monologue) But Kabir normal tests karwaane se pehle bhi mujhe batata hai. I should open it. After all I am his wife.

She opened it. She read it and was shocked.

Ni- Driver rush to our home.

As soon as they reached she ran to the house. She was shocked when so many people were standing outside her house. She didn't pay any heed and opened the door with a spare key. And happened what she feared. She ran to him expecting for him to stay a minute for her to come. But something good happened. He was alive for some seconds it seemed. Frankenstein rushed inside.

Ka- (almost dying) Nisha...

Ni- (angrily) Kuch mat bolna... you are cheater... a bloody damn cheater... How could you Kabir? Mere khaatir maut ko gale laga liye. Ek baar bata diya hota. I would have left everything and would have taken you to the best doctor in the whole world.

Ka- That is what I didn't want Nisha... I... I knew... I knew I was dying... but Nisha... this is my dream you are living and you have to live it... you should ... get the best... Nisha... i... (in acute pain) Nisha... I... am glad that even when I am dying you are with me...I... love you... and I will be there with you till the end... I promise.

He closed his eyes finally and gave out his breath with a bright smile on his face.

Ni- (shaking him) No Kabir... nothing will happen to you. Please wake up Kabir. Wake up!

She started crying. Frankenstein was crying even harder.

*FB ENDS*

It is the worst moment to live when you see the one you love dying in front of you and you cannot do anything to save them. He had Leukemia. He came to know about it some 7 days ago. He returned one day and was really upset. I think that was the day. He knew that I have a life changer interview so gave up his life. (guilt) He didn't sleep nicely, he didn't eat nicely but I was so engrossed in my work that I forgot everything. (anger towards herself) I lived with him, I claimed to know him but I couldn't even understand anything. He never told me about the disease or the test so that I do not get distracted because he knew that he couldn't have been saved. He wanted me to be happy. (wiped her tears) Now I live to complete his dream. And I know he might be here somewhere watching us so I can't cry. I need to tell him that I am brave because that is what he wanted from me. (everyone wiped their tears)

You know he told me "WORKING HARD IT IMPORTANT BUT THERE IS SOMETHING EVEN MORE IMPORTANT... BELIEVING IN YOU."

Afterall (with a smile) it is our choices who show what we truly are far more than our abilities. And I choose to give justice to his lie. I choose to do what I want because that is what he wanted.

You know when I will grow old and would be sitting in my armchair watching our wedding video or reviewing our wedding album or some other photos and someone comes to me and asked "AFTER ALL THIS TIME?" I would just say "ALWAYS!!!"

Frankenstein stood up and started clapping and so did others.

Ni- (timidly) I love you... MR. Kabir Mehta. Aur agli baar gents ka rumall phenk kar ladki ko dost mat banana. Main toh kuch nahi boli lekin agli baar nahi chodungi. (chuckled)

That day two parents lost their son, a sister lost her brother, a grandfather and a friend lost his grandson and a friend, wife and support lost her life, her love, her Kabir. Kabir's parents asked forgiveness from Frankenstein and because of Nisha he forgave them.

She started moving. Not to her seat but in the lawn he loved the most and nobody stopped her because they knew she needed time.

NIBIR TS VM

This Vm shows Nisha walk through the lawn and how she was remembering him. He was always there with her even when he was not. This VM would show some part of their journey and their special moments.

Hope you guys like it. Please do let me know through your comments.

Edited by 357159pikachu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Everything was perfect...
New start of friendship 😊
Their confession 😳
Married life 😃
But I don't like end 😭
I'm not saying your story but I don't like sad stories in which at last hero or heroine will die 😭
I seriously don't like it's end...
Although it was at starting but whlie reading whole parts I was wishing that kabir shouldn't die, please someone else. Whole time I don't want to acknowledge it 😭
But it was great work 😃
And want updates of ours different 😊

PS - sorry agar bura lagega toh 😳 main bas apna POV rakhi thi 😊
Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anmol333

Everything was perfect...

New start of friendship 😊
Their confession 😳
Married life 😃
But I don't like end 😭
I'm not saying your story but I don't like sad stories in which at last hero or heroine will die 😭
I seriously don't like it's end...
Although it was at starting but whlie reading whole parts I was wishing that kabir shouldn't die, please someone else. Whole time I don't want to acknowledge it 😭
But it was great work 😃
And want updates of ours different 😊

PS - sorry agar bura lagega toh 😳 main bas apna POV rakhi thi 😊


First of all DOSTI MEIN NO SORRY NO THANKYOU😉. And I am really glad you expressed your emotions truly.
End waise toh mujhe bhi ending pasand nahi aayi but actually na hamaare ek close relative ke yahaan bhi aisa hi kuch scene hua hai in the recent past so just trying to express everything i felt during this time. 😊
But i am sure none of us want Kabir to die so will make sure to repent the feeling of losing Kabir through my on going story.
I am really glad you liked it. Actually at first I thought to kill Frankenstein but Nisha had already met him when i explained the first meeting. It went all different.
Aur main gende ki khaal ki bani hoon mujhe kisi baat ka burar nahi lagta hai. 😉
Will update soon. Andi have made a VM as well for this. Will post it today very soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
An emotional yet beautiful TS.hope u all write more.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutie_ammu

An emotional yet beautiful TS.hope u all write more.


Thanks Ammu (Hope that is your name) I am glad you liked it. Surely will try to write more.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: 357159pikachu


First of all DOSTI MEIN NO SORRY NO THANKYOU😉. And I am really glad you expressed your emotions truly.
End waise toh mujhe bhi ending pasand nahi aayi but actually na hamaare ek close relative ke yahaan bhi aisa hi kuch scene hua hai in the recent past so just trying to express everything i felt during this time. 😊
But i am sure none of us want Kabir to die so will make sure to repent the feeling of losing Kabir through my on going story.
I am really glad you liked it. Actually at first I thought to kill Frankenstein but Nisha had already met him when i explained the first meeting. It went all different.
Aur main gende ki khaal ki bani hoon mujhe kisi baat ka burar nahi lagta hai. 😉
Will update soon. Andi have made a VM as well for this. Will post it today very soon.


Very sweet of you 😳
You know what whole time I was wishing that Frankenstein may die but 😭
Waiting for your VM 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
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This was an emotionally beautiful story ... 😊
Their love story and then kabir supporting her to fulfill her dreams was the high point of the story for me 😳
The end was painful but still it had its beauty ... 😊 u wrote it in such a way that i could actually feel the emotions...
and the vm was the topping on the cake ...
All the emotions i was hiding couldn't hide anymore after watching the vm 👏
Great job👏
Edited by poornima_15 - 8 years ago

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