[HIATUS] FF: Perspective || An Omkara (ft. Shivika) Romance (Ch. 1) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Res!

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Hey, Kriti! Remember you from the EDKV forum and your interactions with Namik. 😆

I'm not what you'd call a Deewani, but I have always been intrigued by Omkara's character and the possible layers this guy can have to his personality (In fact, I think there is so much more to the characters of all the three OBros than what we've got to see so far). Unfortunately, not much of this is explored in the show, yet. Neither have there been many works on Omkara on the forum, and the few that I was following initially were discontinued.

That said, I'm glad you decided to write this fic - I'm totally intrigued by the first chapter and the sneak peek into the second. This somewhere matches the kind of view I had in my mind for Omkara. And the whole party setting along with Meera entertaining herself with the show put on by the gossip-aunties and then Omkara joining in, gave me a very Regency feel for some reason. 😆 It can be attributed to the chapter title, to an extent. 😛

I'm curious to know what happened in the course of their conversation that these two ended up having a fiery row. Excited for the next update! A very well-written piece of work!

P.S: I'm not into VMs but chanced upon Zinda Hoon Yaar by you and absolutely loved it! ❤️


Hey Sarcy! And nice to meet someone from a familiar fandom! 🤗

And sigh, don't even get me started on the potential these characters have vs. what's actually shown. Especially Om! One'd think it's impossible to do injustice to your OWN characters, but Gul Maata always manages to do the inconceivable. Anyways, better I not start ranting 😆 but in short I'm glad we're on the same wavelength about this!

Coming to the fic, thanks! I'm glad to hear that! I wanted Meera to be the wakeup call that Om (I feel) desperately needed to really come into his own. Likewise I want Om to show Meera a mirror to her flaws, that unlike Om she is aware of, but has become complacent to. She's also a result of my longing for a realistic, sarcastic, and bullshit-intolerant female heroine who calls it like it is. Someone we could actually know and far from the archetype "bubbly full of life righteous" female lead we're so used to, or the ones that are supposedly strong, until it actually matters you know?

I hope you like her :) Honestly the chemistry she and Omkara have managed to have is unreal, like even I didn't expect it to be anything that electrifying when I conceptualized it (especially when you've got a seemingly 'goody-goody' guy like Om). I mean I knew they obviously would compliment each other but nothing close to what it's turning out to be. As I'm writing the chapters, they seem to have minds of their own and just really work! And more so than anything else, I'm mentioning this because I'm just really excited for you to read it! Again thanks for such a nice review, I hope you enjoy this story as much as I've enjoyed writing it! :)


P.S. Oh gosh, thanks a bunch! That VM's the closest my heart, glad to hear you liked it! ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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well beautiful concept
& nice start
liking it
plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: poemssyndrome

Being a wallflower myself you have actually hit a note right here somewhere in my mind. This is perfect. I actually like them from the very first line itself!

Keep going! It is gonna be awesome to see a flawed Om. We rarely see that right.

Waiting!


First of all apologies for the late response, I try to make them meaningful which is why they're so scattered and untimely, soz!

And thank you!!! I'm glad to hear an actual Wallflower is able to relate, we're quite underestimated I feel 😆. They're observant but that doesn't quite make them docile, and I hope I show Meera & Om come to embody that!

And haha yes, but rather I think it's Om finally being explored for flawed he already is! Just the show doesn't explore that enough *sigh*

Once again, thanks for reading! I shall post Chapter 2 by tonight (Eastern Standard Time) hopefully!


-Kriti :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kriti, waiting for Chapter 2! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Kriti ! Read your story the day you sent pm but couldn't reply . Beautiful start to an interesting story . I loved the word choice and the blend of the description and the emotions . You have written the first chap in such that one gets grabbed towards the plot.
I actually loved Meera 's character till now though there is a lot to unfold . I just hope she becomes the light that helps Om to erase his shades . Both of their interaction was quite good and you left it in a cliffhanger ! 🥱 That's so mean of you 😆
Anyways continue soon . And looking forward to a beautiful love story of Om .
Thanks for the pm .
Sam

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