How would have you loved ShivIka's love story?

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Posted: 8 years ago
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How would have you loved ShivIka's love story?
I mean, just in case if you were the scriptwriter of IB, how would have you made their story progress?

What would you like to change if you get one chance to go back in the past episodes and change whatever you wish???'

I'd have scrapped Shivaay's behavior before marriage when he forced her. I'd have shown he trusting her little bit more.

Share your views😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice post
I would have made shivay fall in love first, show a little shivay's self talk during marriage n I would have shown that he did not trust daksh words deep down in his heart , n I would have shown two barriers in shivika love story
1) shivay nkk believe
2) someone from past like(godfather) guardian of Anika who doesn't find shivay suitable for anika
I would have have deleted that patni sawtan dialogue for sure n have excluded Anika's multiple breakdown😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Rohini..
I Wouldn't change anything as such maybe here n there anika' one or two costumes..!
Their characters, with flaws are what defines them.

If i changed anything thing.. Like Shivaay's behaviour.. Then maybe a part of their character would change.!

Their flaws play a big role in defining them their behaviour their feelings their story.!

My View. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I wud have switched d characters wid Anika n Shivaay in each other's shows like Anika as d arrogant eldest Oberoi heir n Shivaay a poor guy running catering business tortured by his bua. Then d story will go as d show. Why sud only boys have all d fun in Gul's shows?😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ultimatewinner

Nice post

I would have made shivay fall in love first, show a little shivay's self talk during marriage n I would have shown that he did not trust daksh words deep down in his heart , n I would have shown two barriers in shivika love story
1) shivay nkk believe
2) someone from past like(godfather) guardian of Anika who doesn't find shivay suitable for anika
I would have have deleted that patni sawtan dialogue for sure n have excluded Anika's multiple breakdown😊


I still assume/feel/know/believe that a part of Shivaay's heart always trusted her n it was his head that played the stupid between them..
Nevertheless.. Now his brain will also think infinite times to doubt her. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: annikaa


I still assume/feel/know/believe that a part of Shivaay's heart always trusted her n it was his head that played the stupid between them..
Nevertheless.. Now his brain will also think infinite times to doubt her. 😊

Yeah I too some time feel the same n that's y I said shivay character should have a self talk so that at least viewers should know what he is feeling n about trusting anika I think yet he did not develop that trust because he always listen to her only after crossing checking it be it Tia's truth or daksh while anika believed him even after seeing two positive reports n that's y I say TAKKAR is missing after marriage
Just my pov n I respect yours too
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

I wud have switched d characters wid Anika n Shivaay in each other's shows like Anika as d arrogant eldest Oberoi heir n Shivaay a poor guy running catering business tortured by his bua. Then d story will go as d show. Why sud only boys have all d fun in Gul's shows?😆


That would have been extremely interesting and creative 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ultimatewinner

Yeah I too some time feel the same n that's y I said shivay character should have a self talk so that at least viewers should know what he is feeling n about trusting anika I think yet he did not develop that trust because he always listen to her only after crossing checking it be it Tia's truth or daksh while anika believed him even after seeing two positive reports n that's y I say TAKKAR is missing after marriage
Just my pov n I respect yours too


Well Shivaay is a complex creature to understand..
The fact is that he himself is a very confused person..
I think that's the reason why we rarely get his pov..
Its only when he knows what he is thinking.. The pov is shown.. Like when it to his bros..
So i think... It will be a slow journey for him too accept Anika in his life... He has to break his already grown soch... N then build a new soch...
N that's exactly the hard part..!
He has fallen for her...
Fallen head over heels..
Thats irritating him... PROBABLY... Acceptance will come in slowly... But when it comes his WORLD WILL CHANGE.

Of course views tend to differ n i totally respect yours! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: annikaa


Well Shivaay is a complex creature to understand..
The fact is that he himself is a very confused person..
I think that's the reason why we rarely get his pov..
Its only when he knows what he is thinking.. The pov is shown.. Like when it to his bros..
So i think... It will be a slow journey for him too accept Anika in his life... He has to break his already grown soch... N then build a new soch...
N that's exactly the hard part..!
He has fallen for her...
Fallen head over heels..
Thats irritating him... PROBABLY... Acceptance will come in slowly... But when it comes his WORLD WILL CHANGE.

Of course views tend to differ n i totally respect yours! 😊


Yeah it will be slow and beautiful journey n I doubt that he has completely fallen in love with ani, I see guilt n attachment he considers her a part of family but love I'm not sure about it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I think that one thing I would've changed is whole daksh being a psycho thing it was a bit fat fetched coz they showed daksh as shivay's childhood friend who the family knew really well so how could they not know about his problems I mean shivay hadn't seen him for a while but did not even talk to him over the phone or anything

And one thing I'd like to see in the future is a maybe admirer for anika who is nice and truly loves her not like daksh and shivay to feel what it's like to loose the one u love

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