ISHRA SS. Rab ne bana di jodi updates part 16 on page 58 on 21/7/17 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
interesting prologue
both are in unwanted relation..
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Nice update continue soon
Eagerly waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Superb start
Raman want to Pune for his studies, param planning something...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Interesting start and nice concept
Raman wants to leave and run away
Param must be having some plan
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Superb please continue, I think"I love you"title is best
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
I think param has bad eye on ishita,Maza same wala hai
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Hey frnds ,
Here is my update..

Part:2
Raman is happy thinking he is goin out of mess called marriage...But toshiji said him that he have to perform certain rituals which he accepted half heartedly..ishra did all rituals then..

Raman starts packing his stuff..

Ishita is relieved thinking she will get space to cope with latest changes of her life ..

Raman: (loudly) Maa !!!!!!!

Ishita: Maa ,mandir gayi hai.

Raman: oh! Toh tum gungi nhi ho!!! Tumhe bolna aata hai..

Ishita: ...kuch kaam tha kya.main help kardu packing main...

Raman:koi jarurat nhi hai .i will manage

Ishita:ok

Raman(himself) ab packing kaise karu..mujhse toh packing nhi hota hai...
Acha chalo agar tum insist karti ho to packing kardo...

Ishita: ok

Ishita started folding his clothes which he have messed in so called packing...nd ironing them
Packing is done in an hour
Raman is happy with ishitas work
He gives his debit card to ishita telling her to keep with herself as he sees his mother standing at door with corner of his eyes
Toshi becomes happy thinking everything is fine between ishra

In evening raman bids goodbye to everyone nd goes to college
In mind she is good...he smiles
In next minute he thinks of pammis word that she has trapped him for money he gets angry on himself that he is falling in her trap willingly...
He vows that he will kick her out of her house as soon as he gets an opportunity
He reaches his flat in pune nd meets romi nd mihir
(Here raman ,romi nd mihir live in ramans flat in pune for their studies..)
They r best buddies nd know everything about each other... except ramans marriage
They r happy meeting him
In morning
Sem 3 of mba starts
Raman along with his frnds sit in the college premises nd were chatting happily as they have met after 2 month...
A girl come and hug raman nd he smiles knowingly who can do this...
While others makes faces seeing her
She is none other than our so called Vamp SHAGUN ARORA..
(Raman nd shagun r childhood friends ..she is evil but he doesn't know it she doea not have any friend than raman she wants to be his girlfriend for his money nd acts.as innocent in front of him..romi ,mihir know about her but don't say it to him thinking he may be hurt...)

Raman hugs her back nd says: Hey!!! shaggy how r u..

Shagun: I m good rkb ...she clings him which he doesn't like nd make her stand afar
College bells rings nd everyone goes to their class...

Teacher: hello students ...how was ur vacations.

Stidents cheers for it..

Teacher:okay students ..i think u have a great vacation..now can start our studies...

Principal enters the class nd everyone greet them
Principal: i hope u have a great vacation...Now we have new frnd for u ...lets welcome her..
raman is sitting indifferently

A girl wearing white anarkali enters the class with innocence filled face ...
Everyone is just drooling over her

Principal: She is ishita...
Ishra are shocked to see eachother in college...
She is joining in 2nd year so u have to help her in studies.. .especially raman as u r president u have to help her ...as raman is shocked he is not listening to him..

Principal: (shouting loudly) Raman!!!!
Everyone comes out of drooling nd raman out of shock...

Raman: Yes sir!
Principal: You are going to help her in studies .. R u getting me..
Raman : ok sir i will help her

Principal: ishita ..have a seat as u like..
She goes to last bench to sit but principal says her to sit beside raman nd he makes shagun sit in last bench who is sitting beside raman ...
This angers shagun..she is not happy with ishita getting all the attention of class..nd especially ramans
Principal leaves nd class starts

Ishita is sad thinking how she ended up here
Flash back :
After raman left bhalla mansion
Param asks ishita to get ready early in morning as they have to go somewhere nd winks at toshi..
(Frnds i have read ur comments about param..here param is positive character..param ishu share brother sister relation nd partners in crime he knows her from childhood..i think u have not read my character sketch..)
In morning he goes to pune nd gets her admissionvin ramans college nd in girls hostel too..
As it is bala param nd toshis plan for keeping them together...

Bell rings nd ishita comea out of her thoughts
Teacher leaves
Shagun comes to ishita
Shagun:hey behenji how dare u sit in my place..

Ishita(politely):sorryi don't know about it...i will sit in last...
She stands up to leave to last but shagun stops her keeping her leg in between..all students surround to see shaguns drama

Shagun: hey beheji!!!!stop..
Ishita stops
Shagun: Give us ur intro
Ishita: I m ishita
Shagun: Where is your family???
(as shagun inquirea about family to know their background)
ishita: i don't have anyone...
Shagun: matlab
Ishita : (with hurt) I m an orphan...
Shagun: then how u get admission in such a expensive college
Ishita: scholarship
Shagun :ohh!!(faking sympathy)
Raman was confused with ishitas answers..he ia not liking all this stuff nd he knows shagun that she will create problems for them whom she doesn't like..
Bell rings indicating nxt class starts
Shagun says her to meet at basement after class

After class ishita goes to meet shagun at basement
Shagun:beheji welcome...

Ishita: shagun kuch kaam tha aapko

Shagun : bas maine toh tumhe yeh batane bulaya tha ki raman mera boyfriend hai aur tum usse dur rehna warna anjam bahut bura hoga..

Ishita:(boldly) I m not intrested in your raman ...nd thank you for your advice and bye

Ishita arrogantly goes out nd she gets angry thinking where she is stuck...she feels like pulling her hair but she can't do anything..

Ishita goes to canteen nd sits
She take out her phone nd dials a number...
Ishita: mere life barbad karne ka koyi aur option ho tho wo bhi try karlo...
Other side: ishita...
Ishita : just don't talk to me... You are a cheater bhai...
Bala: ishu..
Ishita: just don't bhai...u have messed my life in so called marriage nd I m sitting in your saale's (brother in law) college...
He is thinking I trapped him but u, bhaiyu(ishu adresses param as bhaiyu) nd maa has trapped me...i feel like ending my life here only ...

Bala nd param who are toghter in office shouts: shut up ishu..
Param:What the hell arw you talking.. Koi aisa shochta hai kya...tu kabse yeh abla nari wale dialog bolnee lagi...

Bala: thapad kahayegi kya..faltu ki bakwas kare jaa rhi hai...shadi kya ho gayi tu bahut badi ho gayi kya ...
Smilingly. Par mujhe laga ki mera saala tujhse shadi karne se vuski jaan khatre main hogi...

Ishita was goin to say something then raman and his groups comes to her ..

Ishita:afat mere taraf hi aa rhi hai main badme call karti hu..bye bhai nd bhaiyu...

Raman: how dare you insult shagun...

Ishita: what!! Maine kya kiya...
Flashback:
Shaguns anger reaches new heights seeing her leaving arrogantly..she thinks of teaching ishita a lesson for messing with her nd thinks of a plan and goes to raman faking tears nd says him that ishita has insulted her saying when she is trying her to help about studies nd saying that she doesn't need anyones help not her's and not from so called president 's help ..
This angers raman nd he can't see shaguns tears as he considers him as his friend nd his male ego is also bruised..ramans friend also joins him as it is about raman

Flashback ends
Raman: you can't stay in college in messing with raman bhalla..
Shagun smirks seeing it
Ishita sees sangun nd understands it nd don't want to prolong it says;: sorry president sir nd sorry shagun

Raman: don't u dare mess with raman bhalla nd my friends warna anjaam bahut bhura hoga...

Ishu keeps her head down nd her mobile rings...she ignores phone nd it rings continuously ..

Romi and mihir : chalo rkb aise anath kya jane friends kya hota hai...
Ishu has tears listening to this
Ishita smilea seeing the caller id nd picks up the phone
This irks ramans group but sohail(ramans friend) has already became lattu on ishita..

She picks up the phone excuses everyone and goea out of college premises talking happily with her friend abhi who inquires about her day nd goes to her hostel by bus...


I have spend hours in writing this
I hope u will like it
I don't have any experience in writing ...
Can anyone tell me how to give a title
Nd direct link to my readers
Pm me frnds















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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Lovely story dear!!
I liked the story.
Shagun...argh...😡
Hope Raman shows some compassion towards Ishita
Felt bad for Ishita though
Hope to see change in their dynamics.
Do continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
beautiful story
raman was impressed with ishita when she did his packing but than remembered pammi word about ishita trapping him for money adn got angry he is determined to throw ishita out of the house
raman was talking with his group when principle came there with ishita and introduced ishra were shocked seeing eachother there shagun was insulting ishita loved ishita's reply to shagun
ishita was complaining to bala when she said she wants to end her life param and bala scolded her
shagin is bitch she faked drama infront of raman
raman warned ishita raman's friend sohail is lattu on ishita
ishita was talking with abhi happily pls continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: divz9769

beautiful story

raman was impressed with ishita when she did his packing but than remembered pammi word about ishita trapping him for money adn got angry he is determined to throw ishita out of the house
raman was talking with his group when principle came there with ishita and introduced ishra were shocked seeing eachother there shagun was insulting ishita loved ishita's reply to shagun
ishita was complaining to bala when she said she wants to end her life param and bala scolded her
shagin is bitch she faked drama infront of raman
raman warned ishita raman's friend sohail is lattu on ishita
ishita was talking with abhi happily pls continue soon

thank you for ur reasonable comments
I happy with these comments😊

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