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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: fizy_wizy



Yes, twerps do the honours please and I'll go after you as I already have something ready. Just waiting too see how things go on 😆


hey, if you have something ready, you could post it now. I'll follow after you. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: twerping



hey, if you have something ready, you could post it now. I'll follow after you.😃


Na! You should go first 😆. Just make them reach Oberoi Mansion at the end and i'll go further🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: fizy_wizy


Na! You should go first 😆. Just make them reach Oberoi Mansion at the end and i'll go further🤣

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*Gets the popcorn ready*

I am really excited you two!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ranveer glared at the ashen faced driver, before turning his attention to Priyanka. Blood was smeared across her forehead. Varma held up a bottle of water in his trembling hands which Ranveer took and slowly washed the blood off before sprinkling water on her face, her eyes. She moaned and relief flooded into him. Her eyes fluttered open and for a minute she just sat there looking dazed and confused. Ranveer moved towards her, oscillating between fear and relief. His eyes studied her forehead to locate the source of the injury and finally he saw it. A cut near the parting of her hair from which had trickled out the blood deeper than vermillion. He slowly washed the wound with the water from the bottle. Varma produced a first aid kit and Ranveer took out the antiseptic cream and applied it liberally. Priyanka sat all the while, her eyes on his face, her cheeks tinted with a faint blush. Once, Ranveer was satisfied with his handiwork, he ran a finger lightly along her forehead.
"Are you ok?" he said softly.
"I'm alright," she said with a tender smile. The gentle manner in which the officer had taken care of her, had once again created a strange feeling within her. His ministrations had a note of concern in it which made her want to be taken care of like that for the rest of her life. She relaxed into the seat as Ranveer continued to study her face, to see if there was any other wound that needed looking after.

Ranveer grazed a finger lightly along the cut.

"Ahh" she said.

"This cut looks strange." said Ranveer, an awkward look on his face.

"Why?" came her soft query.
He nodded towards the rearview mirror. Priyanka looked at herself. Yikes! The cut did look weird. It was placed exactly where one would put sindoor.

"Oh no!" she groaned.

"What happened?"asked Ranveer. Concern had put lines on his forehead. "How bad does it hurt?"

"No. It's not that." Priyanka said with a grimace. "Just wondering what my family would make of this new look."

Ranveer looked at her, half in amusement, half in disbelief.
She nodded her head at him. "You don't know how hyper they can get over the silliest of things."

"Should we bandage it?" Ranveer said.

Priyanka shook her head in refusal. "Don't worry. With Bhaiya's wedding preparation going on, they might not even notice it."

They both chuckled, at the thought of people mistaking the blood for sindoor.

Varma had been too shocked at the sight of the usually tough and forbidding ACP take care of the lady with such tenderness. He had stood there with his mouth hanging open as he took in the sight before him like it was the latest Salman Khan blockbuster. All of a sudden he was met with the blazing eyes of ACP Randhawa.

"What are you waiting for, you fool?"

"Sir?"
"Get in the car and start driving!"

Varma scurried around the car and soon they were on their way.

He heard the inspector ask his wife softly, "So you want to go home now?" to which she replied, "Yes"

He knew the inspector had his house in Bandra. Eager to show his efficiency, he gave a wide smile and said, "Bandra jayenge, Sir?"

"Malabar Hills chalo! Ullu kahike! Oberoi Mansion." came the angry growl from the backseat.

Confused, Varma headed towards the Oberoi Mansion.
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Posted: 8 years ago
They had a tiring or should we say an adventurous journey. It was just one night and it felt like they've been out together for days. As they were getting closer to the house her face had a bright glow and the smile was a proof that life has become a little better than it was before. He unknowingly had a smile on his face. Priyanka was busy setting her hair, she quite cleverly covered the injury with her bangs. She didnmt want anyone to question Ranveer. Varma who was watching both in the mirror got extremely playful. He moved forward "Sir Jee, Aik nazer gher per bhi daal lijiay".He had a foolish smile on his face that made Ranveer irritated and he glared at him.

"O Bhaiya!"The moment she saw her brothers coming she ran over and hugged him. Her face lit up when she saw her brother doing fine. "It feels so good to have you back Bacha". He kissed her forehead and excused himself as his phone rang.

Ranveer was who was witnessing the sibling's bond was left teary eyed as he remembered his sister. He started taking out Priyanka's luggage from the trunk. He turned his head to the right, saw Rudra staring at him with one eyebrow raised. Priyanka was blankly staring at Ranveer. Her brothers never liked Ranveer. Why was she nervous? She was hopeful that their first meeting would not be like others. "Prinku is he your boyfriend?" Rudra questions her after taking a good look of him.

"N-no bhaiya! H-he is..."
(Ranveer cuts in) "Hi, I am ACP..". Ranveer extends his arm for a handshake. As he was in the middle of introducing himself Rudra grabs his hand and squeezes it lightly "And I am RSO". Ranveer squeezes Rudra hand firmly and smiles. Priyanka was not liking how the things were progressing.

"Reevu"[/] Hearing this name after so many years got him emotional but was delighted to see how grown up she has become now. She came running and hugged him pushing Rudra away.[I] "O My God! I can't believe this, what are you doing here? Where did you vanish all of a sudden? You've no idea how much we missed you"

Rudra and Priyanka were staring at them. Just then Priyanka recalls how Soumya used to mention about Reevu who was her brother's best friend . She was surprised to know Ranveer is that person. No wonder Ranveer once talked like Soumya. Priyanka smiles thinking how Soumya could help her knowing Ranveer better.

Rudra pushes Soumya away "Call yourself lucky that Shivaay Bhaiya isn't around, or else he would have definitely done what I am thinking". They were standing face to face. "I am getting really scared here... And do YOU know what I can do? Just for the sake of it ... may I know what's going on in your head?" Rudra's face had a clear smirk that irritated Ranveer.

Rudra placed his hands on Ranveer's shoulders working down his chest stops right there. Ranveer in his head was counting. Rudra grabs his suspenders and pulls them really well to check their elasticity. Ranveer had gotten an idea what he was trying to do, before he could react Rudra let go off the suspenders snapping them really hard. It left him in pain but he was holding it in as he was getting embarrassed in front of Priyanka & Soumya who were watching this silently with their mouths covered. In his mind he was cursing Ruda.

"Bhaiya! Have you gone crazy? Are you okay ACP Randhawa?" He was moved by the concern shown by Priyanka. "ACP?" Soumya asks "Assistant Commissioner Of Police" Ranveer says it proudly looking at Rudra who was left awe struck. "Wow!!" Soumya exclaimed happily "P-p-police?" Rudra was really scared of him now as he thought ACP is the initials of his name. To control the damage he disappeared the next moment from there with soumya unable to look back. The two younger oberois have been the cause of his untold pain.

" Miss Oberoi, while I am here how about having a cup of tea with Papa Oberoi?" he wanted to start the investigation regarding Svetlana and to him her Dad was the most appropriate person who could give him details. Priyanka was frightened on the thought of being exposed in front of the family
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Posted: 8 years ago
We should give this cut a name . What do u all think about the" sindoor cut" 😉 ? I really wonder what would the Oberois thinking watching Prinku with a Sindoor? And if ACP Randhawa stands beside her? Where were they a whole night? Why didn't she informed her Bhaiyas about the incidents ? Will Prinku be at the verge of fainting? And will ACP be there to hold her 😳 ?
Oh God! So many questions !!!
Nice update twerping 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dimaag

We should give this cut a name . What do u all think about the" sindoor cut" 😉 ? I really wonder what would the Oberois thinking watching Prinku with a Sindoor? And if ACP Randhawa stands beside her? Where were they a whole night? Why didn't she informed her Bhaiyas about the incidents ? Will Prinku be at the verge of fainting? And will ACP be there to hold her 😳 ?
Oh God! So many questions !!!
Nice update twerping 👏


sindoor cut! 🤣
the way the Oberois see through Prinku, don't know if it will make a difference...

and fizza, ACP got hurt again?! i am beginning to feel sorry for trying to ship him with one of these Oberois who really are nothing but trouble!

Boy would be better off with one of us. and when I say one of us, I mean... 😃

Saumya connection was brilliant!! Can't wait to see what the convo between ACP and Tej will be like...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Youuu twooo!!!
Twerps, and Fizy, I LOVED your update! The way you two carved out the story!! NOT typical! NOT expected!!!!
😊
Waiting for more you two AND everyone else!
Cvs should just hire the writers in this Story Circle, as Twerps said! 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: twerping



sindoor cut!🤣
the way the Oberois see through Prinku, don't know if it will make a difference...

and fizza, ACP got hurt again?! i am beginning to feel sorry for trying to ship him with one of these Oberois who really are nothing but trouble!

Boy would be better off with one of us. and when I say one of us, I mean...😃

Saumya connection was brilliant!! Can't wait to see what the convo between ACP and Tej will be like...😳



@bold. You also feel the same way as I do. I will try my best to meet the expectations 🤣

He will eventually form an unbreakable bonding with one of them. Who will be that lucky brother of Prinku? 😉
Edited by fizy_wizy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dimaag

We should give this cut a name . What do u all think about the" sindoor cut" 😉 ? I really wonder what would the Oberois thinking watching Prinku with a Sindoor? And if ACP Randhawa stands beside her? Where were they a whole night? Why didn't she informed her Bhaiyas about the incidents ? Will Prinku be at the verge of fainting? And will ACP be there to hold her 😳 ?
Oh God! So many questions !!!
Nice update twerping 👏


Hmm...
You know I didn't think of this 😲
That's a good idea actually! 😆
Dimaag, just so you know: You have an awesome job with your update! So, don't hesitate ever to share your idea with us! ❤️

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