OS : kinna sona tu sona tu Haan Gift for raksha Congo cuteruhi dec/14

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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's party time...yippee dhina dhin da...





I opened this thread to congratulate you my dear raksha aka cuteruhi... A awesome person... A Lovely friend... A finest writer. I just love you and your stories very much...

See you wanted a gift from me so here is your gift on your success

We all know She is 1st in rank of all of fame in this month...

Isn't it great... . It is... It's a great achievement...

Congratulations and celebration ...



So wish her and congratulate her and keep showering love on her and keep motivating her to write for us .

Raksha I hope now you are not angry with me... Nahe ho Na.. I know.. koi mujse zyada dair angry nahe reh Sakta.. right ... Hehehe.. thanks for taking out your time and writing.. it's quite difficult job...

Don't say thanks for this gift... Agar phr bhi karna hai to write an one shot for me... I hope I will get my birthday gift also... Aur ali Kay liye bhi gift chahiye... Miley GA na😳

love you loads..


Here is the gift for you on your success...below is one shot your gift updated

Love you
Rida...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello friends...

This is for my lovely friend and awesome writer raksha aka cuteruhi...raksha wanted a gift from me as she is in 1st position in hall of fame... So raksha this one shot I'd for you...

Congratulations again. ..

Hopefully you will like this gift ... And enjoy reading it...

Ishra OS : kinna Sona tu Sona ruhi Haan

Bhalla house was all decorated like bride, after all it's Raman wedding...Raman looking at his mother and sulks like a kid as he wants to go to his room... His cousin sister teases him for his desperation while he just want to go to her and love her madly.. but here no one is letting him go and he waiting to go to his room and see his beautiful bride...

In all this he remembers the best time he meet her... And fall for her and how they get married

Flashback start

As he enters the room of MBA final to share his experience with the students he spots her who was sitting carefree with her friend and she was not much interested in his lecture... he clear his throat to get her attentions... she looks on with her big almond eyes.. as she looks at him he was all lost in her eyes...

Tu rang hai mera
Noor hai tu
Aadat teri mujhe
Fitoor hai tu
Fitoor hai tu

Yes the position holder of the university, Raman kumar bhalla who was known as book worm has fallen in love with the stranger girl who he doesn't even now...
To know about her he start introduction although it was not needed for sharing some study tips... but he did because he wants to know about her. He asks her about her name and she innocently tells ishita iyer... he was again lost in her melodious voice...it was music to his ears...

after sharing some experience and sharing studying tips... it was time to leave the class but he has no heart to leave... because he don't know when he will see her again because next day he is going back to his city dehli... he keep turning and looking at her...

Tere saath mein ho subah
Tu hi sabse pehle ho haan
Raaton mein baatein teri
Naa neend ko de jagah

Tere paas harpal rahun
Yahi aarzu hai meri
Saanson mein teri mehek
Ho haathon mein haath tera

Mere seene ki dhadkan hai tu bann gaya

Mahiya mere maahi
Jaaniya dil jaani..
Mahiya mere maahi jaaniya dil jaani

Kinna sona tu sona tu haan

One month passed, he doesn't get any information about her but all time he was thinking about her only... his mother was hell bent to get him married but he was only saying that he will marry his love only he knows her name and nothing else...

Mrs bhalla: puttar... tu muje bata to... I will get you married to your love...

Raman looks at his mother and hugs her and says; maa I only know her name... phr mein kaise bataon apko..

Mrs bhalla: I didn't get anything.. you love her but only know her name...

Raman tells how he met her and fall in love with her but he doesn't get time to talk to her... mrs bhalla caresses his hairs and says: to phr tu khud bata... what should I do...

Raman: maa I believe I will get her...

Mrs bhalla: I will pray for you but puttar it was your father last wish to get you married to his friend daughter...

Raman looks at his mother... mrs bhalla continues to says: even I didn't know about them.. you were only 15 year old raman when your father passed... lagta hai kay unhain pehly hi pata tha kay wo humse door chaly jaingay... he has planned everything... insurance... business.. property... we haven't get any problem.. it was his dream to see you as MBA and you take care of his business.. and he wished to see you married with his friend daughter...

Raman: per maa...

Mrs bhalla: I know raman yu don't want... but still for your father just visit them for me... I also don't know anything... I will call mayank arora to make arrangement so that we will visit your father friend.

Raman half heartedly nods and left thinking that his love story will always remain incomplete... day passed in blurr and mayank the manager of the business and they fly to Chennai to meet the friend of om prakash bhalla... mayank has informed them about bhalla arrival, family were so happy to know that bhalla has kept their promise...

Bell ring

Madhvi opens the door... toshi jee greets madhvi while raman was least interested in all this... after some chit chat toshi jee and madhvi gets friendly in the short time... They gets sad when they know about bhalla death... madhvi asks: toshi jee... my daughter has only dreamt of raman will you will make it reality...

Toshi jee looks at raman helplessly.. raman was not getting anything what should he do when a girl runs into the house and simply hugs her mother and says: amma... I am so so so tired... bohat bhook lagi hai...

Raman was just looking at her.. madhvi gets embarrassed she says to ishita: ishu... See bhallas are here... listening to her mother ishita gets embarrassed and she looks down... raman was just wanted to pull her cheeks seeing her innocence and he smiles widely that his love is only the same girl his father has chosen...he was just looking at her...

Tu hi to rehbar hai
Tu hi hai mera rehnuma
Tu hi muqaddar hai
Tu hi hai naseeb mera

Tujhko dekhe bina, jee ye lagta nahi
Tujhko dekhne se, aankhein thakti nahi
Hai kahaan koi tujh sa nazaara yahaan

Mahiya mere maahi
Jaaniya dil jaani..
Mahiya mere maahi jaaniya dil jaani

Kinna sohna tu sohna tu haan

Madhvi: ishu ... raman... I think you should have some talk...

Raman nods... ishita gets up and leaves.. while raman dreamily follows her... toshi jee calls raman and signs what?? Raman smiles and nods happily making toshi jee smile that his son has liked the girl... as elders tart deciding about the marriage ... raman and ishita were sitting silently in room waiting for other to start the converstation...

Raman was just admiring her beauty... ishita after waiting for some more time looks at raman and says: ap goongy ho???

Raman gets shocked with her question he tries to say but ishita shows him palm and says: oh.. sorry... don't feel bad... gonga to koi bhi hosakta hai... murugan jise chahe... don't gets sad... apko meine dekha hia... she tries to remember by scratching her head.. while raman was just looking at her amusedly..

Ishita closes her mouth as she remember that he is her senior... while raman chuckles seeing her reactions... he smiles at her and says: mein goonga nahe hoon...

Ishita: ap to wo book worm.. sorry... I mean raman bhalla...

Raman nods and says: you can call book worm I will not feel bad...

Ishita: aise kaise feel bad nahe karain gay... Bura to sab ko lagta hai... muje bhi lagta hai...

Raman was just looking at her seeing her chattering like a kid... he put his finger on her lips and says: bus... Meri baatoon ki dukan... If you keep talking like this I will get deaf one day surely.

Ishita makes a sad face while raman smacks himself for hurting her... she curls her lips as if she will cry anytime...

raman holds her ears and says: sorry... Bura laga...

Ishita glares at him and says: bohat.. I am so so angry on you... appa kehty thy you are very good boy but you are so rude. Aise hi itni tareef ki meinne apne friends say kay mere raman... she stops seeing him smiling...

Raman: mein tumhara raman????

Ishita: haan pehly thy per ab nahe... ap to mera mazak uraty ho... very bad...

Raman: sorry na ishita... Please... maaf kardo apne raman ko... Ishita shook her head in negative while raman was just trying to manofy her... ishita gets up and tries to leave the room but stumbles and was about to fall when raman secure her in his arms... and was just lovingly looking at her...

Ishita pouts at him and says: choro na..

Raman shook her head in negative and tightens his hold around her and says: aisa hai ishita... kiya tum meri ishita baongi???? And will keep talking to me all day and night...
Ishita looks at him and says: pakka... you will not call me baatoon ki dukan...

Raman chuckles and says: never...

Ishita: to hum sochain gay...

Raman: and you will take how much time...

Ishita: I have waited for you 10 years ... 10 saal samjhte hainn... Its long time... I haven't seen you ever only listened about you and some time met bhalla uncle still I loved you liked a mad person... Claimed you as my raman...

Raman was just surprised with her talks and her depth of love for him... ishita continues to says: 10.. no 5 months ka wait to kar hi sakty hain ap... when I will complete my MBA ap muje apna bana laina...

Raman smiles and says: I love you ishita...

Ishita: koshish karty rahain raman... shayad mujh jitna

pyaar kar lain...
Tu hi hifazat hai
Tu hi hai mera aasra
Teri inaayat hai

Tujh se mila har khumar
Har duaaon mein tujhko main maangu sadaa
Rab se hai har ghadi bas yehi iltezaa
Tu meri zindagi mein hamesha rahe

Mahiya mere maahi
Jaaniya dil jaani..
Mahiya mere maahi, jaaniya dil jaani

Kinna sona tu sona tu haan

Flashback ends...

He was all lost in her thoughts when his cousin sister shook him and says: lagta hai bhaiya to bhabhi Kay khayaloon mein gumm hain... And laughs...Raman ruffles his hair and a pink blush spread across his cheeks...

Mrs bhalla come and playfully hit them and says: ja puttar... Ishita intezaar kar rahi high.. Raman nods and left to his room..

Ishra room

Ishita dressed in wedding attire sitting in the middle of the bed decorated with roses... raman comes and sits beside her holding her hands... both sees each other...

Raman kisses her hands and slid ring in her finger... cups her face and kisses her forehead... kisses her nose... removes the pallu from her head and opens her hairs bites her earlobe making her moan his name...he starts dropping wet kisses on her jawline...

Raman makes her lay and buries his head in the crook of her neck and drops wet kisses on her neckline...ishita turns other side raman holds her shoulder slid besides her... and hugs her from back... Opens the dori of blouse with his teeth ishita shivers under his touch... She turns and hugs him tightly...

He cups her face and traces his lips from forehead to her lips... And takes her lips... ishita wounds her arms arounds her... and moans... Raman sucks her lips and bites her lower lip to demand an entry... Both were drown in the world of love... Soon their clothes were scattered on floor and both were busy in pleasuring and exploring each other while the room was filled with loud moans in rhythmical manner...

Ishita was sleeping in his arms while he was just Lovingly looking at her ..

Kinna sona... aa..
Mera mahiya..
Kinna sona.. kinna sona sona..

That's it my dear friends... I hope you all will like it and enjoyed reading it.. do share your views and don't forget to hit like also

Love you

Rida

Edited by ishrasoul - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ressy..
Unresed...
Superb..
Lovely os..
Raman loved ishita madly...
Unknon to hi that his father already wants to marry ishita only..
Superb..
Edited by fSharm - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hot, cute, passionate, beautiful ❤️ ☺️
Edited by Bulleya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for pm Di
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry for the late reply Di
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome os
thanks for pm
Ishu is such a chatterbox

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful Os...
Loved it... thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful story. Raman love at first sight and Ishita love from 10 years. Superb.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congeats raksha dii

Lovely OS ..
He saw her in class n fell in love with her
She WS the same girl whom his father chosen before his death his friend's daughter
Raman WS so happy to see her ..
Marriage done n they became one
Loved it

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