Hoshiyaaarrr, I'm gonna live comment now 😆 so my moods might change from time to time 😆Before anything, can I just say that how are you writing so beautifully yaar, omaimatttaa, even i don't write like this 😳, seriously the words you use and ur sentence structure is so perfect 😃
Okay now coming back to the story 😳, you know when I read the first paragraph I was actually trying to figure out who's this thinking, first I thought it was Rudra... It could have been Rudra, but now that I'm reading the 2nd paragraph, and this line:
One thing I always believed in. I was always cautious, careful, calculative, intelligent, practical.
I was like, "Nope, Rudra is neither careful nor calculative!" 😆 so I assume its Saumya's monologue 😆
Wait they are going to separate? 😲😲
They just started, I mean I just started, so whyy 😭😭 and Saumya, my God she is so hurt, the thoughts just reflected her state right now and I could imagine her conflicting face right now, seeing Rudra's face and thinking all of this 😭😭 man this is just heartbreaking...
And she is pregnant
Why do I have a feeling that there's gonna be tissues, lots and lots of tissue near me by the time I finish reading this OS 😭😭
Okay she's not pregnant, no worries but he ran away, like a coward... Why did he have to go to dubai and that to in a hotel, can't he just stay in O's or Shivaay's room? 😆
"Never did he apologise once."
Okay, he's a jerk alright 😡😡, how can he not apologize.. Is he trying to become Shivaay junior 😡😡 cause if he is then he's doing a remarkable job here (no offence to anyone, its al my opinion so sorry if I hurt any fan's feelings)
I would actually agree with Sumo 100% if she felt that she wants to leave Rudra, cause if he treated her like a toy where he can use her first and then throw her away then its better she leaves him and goes, she deserves much more than this... but deep down its still heartbreaking man
"I was leaving a part of my soul behind and my broken heart. "
This part really got to me and when I was reading this line:
The phrase is: It's over.
We are over.
Saumya and Rudra are OVER.
Let me ask you one question can I... WHY? Why did u make me read this? WHHHYYY
U could have wrote a happy rumya at the end ryte, why thisss...
Please write a continue one, where rudra regrets it and everything about his thoughts pleaseee. U can't just break us like this, I'm afraid that Gul will see this, no can't cannot I'm gonna believe in O.R.
Ya that's right, I'm gonna believe in O.R and nothing is changing that
Thanks for the PM though 😃, do PM me other RuMya stories as well but a request happy ones please, my heart is weak tbh so please be considerate 😭😭
man I can't even post any happy gifs here 😭😭