RuMya OS: The Very Thought Of You

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Neha

@howler

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Neha

@howler

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Posted: 8 years ago

Please add ArVi_ArHi to get a PM for the next update 😃

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LiveLoveLaugh96

@LiveLoveLaugh96

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Posted: 8 years ago

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okay im pretty late buttt it was worth it

Loved loved loved it

You write so beautifully ❤️

The conflicting thoughts, the whole drunk, the stammering when he heard chubby say love

Just perfect ❤️

Pls update soon

cant wait to read what happens next 😃

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Sid

@Get-Lost

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Posted: 8 years ago

Got your PM.😆

I don't follow this show nor do I know who RumYa are but I came here because of you. So say thank you to me..hehehe kidding.😆

Is this your first attempt? It's brilliant if this your first time in writing OS. Since I had no idea who this couple is, so I felt a little disconnect to the whole story but if I read it as a piece of creative writing, it's an excellent attempt. I am very picky in reading OSs..but I am glad that I read this one.

Keep on writing. But don't stop PSing..k..I still have work for you.

Sid😳

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beautifulmess

@beautifulmess

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Posted: 8 years ago

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you know i don't watch this show and i don't know anything about the character 😆

but i read this os only for you 😉

and omg you write this os beautifully the way you describe everything amazing yaar 👏 👏

you know i don't like to read stories on other couples 😆 but this one i must say amazing yaar i love to

read this os and now i want to read 2nd part continue soon 😃

❤️ 🤗

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sparkle2015

@sparkle2015

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Posted: 8 years ago

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First of all, Nehuuu. 🤗

THANKYOU THANKYOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS.

Its needless to say how brilliant you are as a writer and you know I'm your fan officially.

Thankyou so much for granting me my wish to see drunk Rudra someday.

I can totally picture each and every scene in my head.

I wish somehow he indulges in a game like that and chubby chearing him and all. 😆

The song selection was perfect girl. I was singing along. The lyrics were best suiting.

Oh God this guy is in love, that too truly, madly, deeply.

Soumya is messing with his head no? 😆

"LOVE" when I read that, I jumped of my chair literally. 😆😆

I was so badly waiting to see Rudra's POV 'clearly'.

Girl, can you be anymore perfect than this?

THANKYOU NEHUU, I'M SO GLAD I READ THIS. THIS IS THE BESSSTTT.

When are you going to update next? I can't wait. 😃

I don't know how to insert GIFs so, *imagine bear hug*, *kudos*.

Love, Umul. ❤️

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 8 years ago

Heeyy cutiepie!

Honestly, I ne'er thought Ki is song pe bhi u know we can have a couple os( in the sense u wrote)...it wasn't you know cheessy or intense or anything such..something like monologue and monologue is song par was like...I m shocked totally!

So I loved it

Totally nashe si chad gayi..kitna piyega rudra

Itni zyada chad gayi!

As a Hindi teacher..mistakes thi balike! 🤣

But I loved the OS so maafi

Oh chubby ko pehla pehla pyaaarrr hua 🤣

And that part was best acc to me

Filmy and pretty cute

He is thinking and suddenly vo peeche se chubby says...

Too good

Os was lovely!

Coz it felt so in the character I suddenly remembered the first promo we had of Rudra

And the way it is penned..excellent

Saumya's totally getting into the boys head!

You know it is difficult to have a conviction of the characters without the physical presence but the conviction was strong and lovely!

Totally!!

Felt totally RuMya!

Amazing!👏

Keep writing more!

Awesome!

Amazing!!!

Fantastico!

I love it cutiepieee

And I love u more for this 🤗

And ya I love love loved the title! ❤️

P.s God! RuMyains, my pies...u guys are awesome! 🤗

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Neha

@howler

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Get-Lost
Got your PM.😆
I don't follow this show nor do I know who RumYa are but I came here because of you. So say thank you to me..hehehe kidding.😆

Is this your first attempt? It's brilliant if this your first time in writing OS. Since I had no idea who this couple is, so I felt a little disconnect to the whole story but if I read it as a piece of creative writing, it's an excellent attempt. I am very picky in reading OSs..but I am glad that I read this one.

Keep on writing. But don't stop PSing..k..I still have work for you.
Sid😳

Siddyyy 🤗

Thank you so much yaar 😆

This is my second attempt actually, I wrote one before as well, for the same couple too 😳

Thank you yaar once again for reading the OS even if u don't know the couple 😆😳

And don't worry, PSing is my first talent and I'll definitely never stop it 😃😆

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Neha

@howler

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: meeraksg
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you know i don't watch this show and i don't know anything about the character 😆

but i read this os only for you 😉

and omg you write this os beautifully the way you describe everything amazing yaar 👏 👏

you know i don't like to read stories on other couples 😆 but this one i must say amazing yaar i love to

read this os and now i want to read 2nd part continue soon 😃

❤️ 🤗

thnak you so much dear, it really means a lot for me 🤗😳

I'll definitely write the next part and pm u too 😃