Arakshi Fic: Entwined with you.. Ch 6/ Note - pg. 27 9/4

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

res😊
shaleen is in touch with sakshi but how nd why and who was the girl he lost as in his love
sakshi knew or rather she doubted that roshani was in love with some one else but who was that person and if she was in love with someone else then why agree to marry arjun
was even sakshi in love with arjun as he was but both of them didn't even let themselves acknowledge
their love
who were the people who killed roshani and why did'nt sakshi go to arjun after that and told him the whole truth 🤔
thanks for pm and thank u for helping me with blog access 😊

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Chapter 6 A:
Arjun and Radhika's meet..The most awaited reunion..I'm speechless here not for their meet but for the way you have portrayed it, giving me goose-bumps..It was perfect 👍🏼and i'm 😭😃😭...( I know not making sense with the emoticons but that's how m feeling)
The cutest part was "naak laal ho gayi-wala part"..😃And then the hug..As you said, it actually feels like back to home...*happy-wale tears*

Radhika..I love her..❤️For she stood on her grounds, facing whatever came its way, however though it torn her self into pieces. I can't imagine what must she going through when she came to face Rathod. That scene was heart-wrenching and also heart- warming at the same time. Beautifully written..👏
I'm literally having goose-bumps here, again.
All the way I was chocked with emotions but the song made me shed tears finally.😭
Though this part made me emotional, I had a positive feeling too..Feeling so good and fresh after her entry.😊

Shaleen lighting the atmosphere there was really needed at that time. It was nice reading his part.

Pao-Bhaji.. yummy.!.lots of memories with Pao-Bhaji..😔.no no..getting all senti again..
It must have been so painful for him to enter his house again..But he made the correct decision. Nothing may be right in their lives now, but everything is right when Di is with him..

The update was so very beautiful, emotional too, and the best update till now according to me. I just LOVED it.!👏😳

Will read part B tomo..Abhi ke liye itna hi kafi hai..Let me gather myself first.

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Shruti

@shurtiekta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#203

awsm blossom update
arjun n radhika bonding is g8
sam feeling guilt
sakshi bhaut cnfusng
kya hua rosh n all
shaleen is awsm
plss pm me whn u update nxt pt

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Chapter 6 B:
The torture she had to go through was scary..🤢now I want to know who was the one behind this.
Tanisha and Sakshi's talk was nice..I liked that too..
Hayee..! Diary entries..😳 I love reading flashbacks mostly in your and Ritu's stories.😛
Oh btw what is Ghevar..??😕
The description about the palace made me wanting to go visit it.. I googled it instantly..and it is beautiful.❤️ The sheesh mahal too..I can only imagine what must be the feeling when you actually see it infront of your eyes..dreaming..
I loved this part.👍🏼

Okayy..you brought me out of my virtual tour at the palace..So Roshni saved some guy's number as Alisha and Sakshi had heard his voice before..that means she might have met him or known him..but who is he..??

What the ...! What was at the end..!!!!!??????😲😲😲
ok this is what I gather..correct me if I'm wrong. Roshni loved someone else..and saved his no. by some girl's name.That guy was maybe just acting of loving her..She promised Sakshi that she would give her and Arjun a second chance (as you have mentioned)
but on D-day she left to come back but unfortunately did nor return. Sakshi had known this all and did not tell anyone...right?
Now tell me was it the same guy who tortured Sakshi..? If yes..then I have already guessed about the happenings and if no..then..🤔then..simple I need to think..🤪

Anyways..The update was very very nice...👍🏼I loved reading it specially the palace part..hayee..! back to dreaming..

Forgot to say, Update soon and thanks for pm.

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Rama

@Barbara12

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Hi can u pm me also. I would appreciate I already posted my I'd but I did not get any reply. Plz it's ramakgudi @gmail.com. Thanks

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#206

Chapter 6A
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
Radhika and Arjun's reunion was just So Beautiful and Heart Touching
Sam-Radhika moment was Amazing
The pain relief longing hesitation & support every emotion you described sooo Beautifully
The Background song was Supper Awwssmm just perfect
Loved Shaleen's Cute scene with Radhika he knows how to handle such situations
Arjun is back at home
Wonderfully Written
Thanks for the PM

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Chapter 6B
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
Sakshi got nightmare
OMG! she was tortured like that it was so painful
Loved Tanisha n Sakshi's bonding she really care for Sakshi
Loved the diary entries
Arjun humming " Jab pyaar kiya toh darna kya " n Sakshi twirling Hayeee that was Supper Awwssmm Loved It
The end was shocking Roshni was cheating on Arjun...!!!! Why...??? n For Whom...???
Eagerly Waiting to know more
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

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Anu

@anu91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#208

Hello di...

Finally i read all the parts...

Am so sorry for being too late...

Always ur story ill be unique di no doubts in tat just fantastic write...

The love between radhika and Arjun...awe!!!no words...there love has different shades...as a friend,brother sister,and like his mom...simply awesome...

Then Sam radha...perfect couple...after separation also still she kept virath...and the love for him was still same...Sam feeling guilt for Wt he did...

Then comes Arjun...no words for him...he want to take avenge for roshni death...the bride swap on their marriage😲...

The talk of Arjun and Shaleen in flashback..so Arjun accept roshni for his di...The friendship of sakshi and Arjun was so cute...the intro of sakshi via Arjun eyes was cute...the way Arjun thinks of sakshi...just my guess...did Arjun loved sakshi? He accept roshni for his di?

The bond of him with radika was so cute...

Here comes our heroine ...sakshi aka zaara

So many characters in her...the way she was in flashback was so cute...

And bond of roshni and sakshi was good...

So she knows the death reason of roshni...

Did roshni loved someone...who z that person...then y she agreed to marry ...sakshi is like a sister to Sam...atleast Sam should searched her in this two years...

Arjun searched for her but couldn't find her...y z she hiding so many history to reveal wen arjun and sakshi met...

Waiting for their meeting...

And Shaleen...mutual friend for Arjun and Sam...

He is in contact with zaara/sakshi...He too connect with past...

Seriously di...i am feel like watching a thriller movie...curiously waiting for ur next update...

Thanks for giving such a beautiful story...

once again sry for being late...

di i couldn't able to read the story's 4th part...even in block also it was not there...

could u plz send me the link for 4 th chapter...

thank u so much for PM...😊

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Sakshithegreat

@Sakshithegreat

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#209

Hey. Never knew u had moved ur story to a blog. Can I get access. I honestly form know if I commented regularly cause I have been off of India forums for quite a while. Sorry about that.