Arakshi Fic: Entwined with you.. Ch 6/ Note - pg. 27 9/4 - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago
wowww really nice
sam arjun shaleen convo superb
every one suffers a lot
superb u write it so good
sakshi arjun bond
sakshi shaleen friendship
radhika in mumbai ...
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow i am still in the story and for now don't want to come out of that
so much happened shaleen talked to arjun and even sam tried talking
arjun's outburst and sam's guilt shaleen's secret and then arjun's acceptance of his feelings for sakshi and his decision of marrying roshani
shaleen is still in touch with sakshi and he knows where she is may be he can bring these two face to face
and now that radhika is back and all three of them r ready to take step forward their relations can mend
just waiting for the time when arjun come face to face with sakshi
thanks for pm
by the way i love this arjun of urs 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow awsm update
loved it
very nicely written
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update! So many tangled strings... I can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update!
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Posted: 10 years ago
😭Hiplz continue do not discontinue I beg u
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Barbara12

😭Hiplz continue do not discontinue I beg u

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Stories are being copied off this forum.. And I don't think I can continue to post here anymore.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago

Heyloo Sautannn!😈

Yaay here I am sitting in your new home hehe... with the nature background *dreamy* You know this is so much better than the grey bg 😛

Ok getting distracted here!

Chapter 6A

Radhika and Arjun's reunion was just so beautiful and touching... you have this thing of choosing the right words and putting them into a sentence for me to feel everything the character goes through... and especially what Radhika was going through as she saw the two men she loved the most in front of her. And their hug *sniff* ... they are beautiful

Ahhh tere liyeee! Instantly Squadron leader Veer Pratap Singh comes to mind.. SRK in that uniform. Sheeeshhh *blushes* Oooh and that helicopter rescue *dreamy*

Distracted again!

This song is so perfect for the situation!

Ahh Radhika and Sameer... I am speechless. It was perfect Sautann... their emotions left me a little torn up and especially that part where he is hurt and yet she stands still, holding her emotions back even though it must have hurt so much to see him in pain... and they part. *sniff*

I really like this Shaleen hehehehe😆😆

They are going home? Homeee... flashbacks? 😛

Nooo why do u mention food in your updates.. Pao Bhaji *sobs* I want it now 😭

Ah he hesitates to go inside his own apartment... fearing his own past. I was afraid he was going to let Radhika go in alone buuut I see he goes in too at the end! That must have been painful for him... but for now I think he really needs to be with the one person who means the world to him... his Di 😳

Chapter 6B

Yes yes yes yes Ratnagiriii! I don't know why I get excited from the mere mention of the place 😛

Anywaaay!

Oh god.. was she really being tortured like that? Or was it a nightmare? That was scary... my fingers went cold at the thought.

The diary entries!!! Jaipur!😃 I am instantly reminded of the road trips we took to Jaipur.. the heat and the cold both were extreme and yet I loved it so much. And not to mention, I once went there on a school trip too!

Noo nooo nooo food again You're being really evil tonight.. I haven't tasted Ghevar in ages. In fact I don't even remember the last time I tasted them.

OH MY GOD. Sautan... the line where u say (or Sakshi says) "I wanted to capture every single moment in my memory rather than the camera" - you know that's exactly what I say to myself every time I visit some place new. Of course I do take pictures but mostly I just like to see and think. And of course, there's no better camera than the human eye - that's what I always say.

Oh gosh I can see the palace... I can feel the heat I felt when I walked there once. Memories *sniff*

You did a brilliant job in the descriptions Sautannn... tum bekaar mein chinta kar rahi thi 😛

OH MY GOD! SHEESH MAHAL! I just remembered that place!

Ahhh... it was so freaking beautiful! I remember being spellbound as a child when I entered that place... and now I enter it with Arakshi 😳

OH OH they lit the candles when we entered too! It was so magical *dreamy*

Eeesh then u mention the evergreen song.. Jab pyaar kiya toh darna kya. Hayeee hotwa singing it... and with Sakshi beside him.. OH GOD imagine HIM singing it *thud*

*thud*

*thud*

The imagination killed me.

Okay *splashes water on self*

Huh? What? What happened at the end... which guy? What number? I seee... she was on to something! And you evil sautann won't reveal it!

"... for the sake of a man who hardly even loved her"?

I don't think you're talking about Arjun here? Who's this man?!

WHAAATT??!!! She was cheating on Arjun!!! Whaaa?!

You stopped woman! Of course... hence the name Lollipop 😛

Koi naa I got two chapters so I am happy 😃 and the tour of the Amer palace of course! Loved ittt... do continue as soon as you can 🤗 (tab tak me waiting for you-know-what)

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Posted: 10 years ago
I MUST SAY YOU WRITE VERY BEAUTIFULLY I HAVE JUST READ ALL YOUR UPDATES ON THIS STORY AND THEY ARE VERY DETAILED AND FULL OF EMOTIONS YOU SEEM TO CAPTURE THE CHARACTERS VERY WELL I WOULD LOVE FOR YOU TO CONTINUE BECAUSE I FOR ONE WILL READ EVERY UPDATE👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Buhahahaaa
Well I don't know why I am laughing
But someone is going to kill you, which is supposed to be sad, but I cant stop myself from imagining a laal mukhda with an axe!!
buhahaha
Sorry, got carried away.

The milan...
How much I waited for it. And how much I loved it,
No words at all
The memories are flooding in and I cant just help from getting greedy again.

The B part!
Lolipops ke bhandaar hai mathe!!
kya kya keh diya
aye sabkuch adhoora chod diya
quoting Ritu "hence lolipop!!"

continue soon jaani

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