Arakshi Fic: Entwined with you.. Ch 6/ Note - pg. 27 9/4

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kunchu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

HAWWW

Genie how could yo stop it there??????????

Ab kab update doge??

U chudail!!!

Aarggg mujhe aur padhna hai

dekhthi hu mein tujhe

*I can see someone grinning ear to ear*

The confrontation began

but what came as a shocker was Shaleen knows abt Zara?????

OMG

I didnt see that coming

Jab Arjun ko patha chalega thab kya hoga

Sha tho gaye kaam se

Ab jaldi update karna mathe

Pleeez

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it very much
It was Supperbbb...
Loved the conversation between Arjun n Radhika it was sooo Cute
The confortation of the three friends Arjun's anger towards Sam was perfectly written
Shaleen has a past he had lost his love
He is in touch with Zaara...!!!

Flashback was Supper Awwssmm Loved Arakshi's bonding
Finally Radhika has arrived Mumbai
Amazing update
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part eagerly
Thanks for the PM

Edited by _Nikita_ - 10 years ago

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Nethravathi Jagadish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

Chaper 3

Ayush lost his mother at an early age. Aww poor child. His father has distanced himself from him. I'm glad tht Ayush has loving masi like Liza. Atleast usse akela mehsoos toh nahi hoga

I loved tht cute conversation btw Ayush n Arjun. Chalo Arjun muskuraaya toh sahi n he missed his Radhika Di n he called her

Most awaited conversation btw Radhika n Arjun was superb. Flow of emotions was just beautiful. Dono apni jagah sahi hain. Kaun galat, kaun sahi ye toh indono ke milne ke baad hi pata chalega. Aakhir uss raat aisa kya huwa tha ki saarein rishte ek pal main toot gaye?

Sakshi married Arjun n tht too when in tht place Roshni should be there. Arjun ne Saskhi ko doonda par vo aakhir gaayab kaha huwi? So many questions which are left unanswered for two long years

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sairam175

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Welcome back dear

Awesome part

Arjun outburst is resionble

Sam now understand his mistake

Arjun trust for Sakshi is wow

Fb is nice

Radhika come to Mumbai

Now what happen

Con soon

Thanks for pm

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EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Awesome update didi..

Loved it to the core..

Superby written..

Please con soonz..

PS- Sorry for the short comment.. Exams..

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sonai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

wow awesome update. plz continue

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Snehajain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Awesome update...

Mera confusions se bohat bura haal hai...🤪 🤪 🤪 🤪

Just loved the confrontation...😃😃😃

Arjun's anger is justified...😃😃😃

In the whole confrontation I was waiting when will Sameer ask for Radhika...😆😆😆

Shaleen is definitely is hiding something very big...

Arjun-Sakshi-Roshni is still very confusing for me...😆😆😆...I have become habitual of getting confused in ur stories...😆😆😆

Radhika is back...😃😃😃

Cliffhanger...😡😡😡

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Maham

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Posted: 10 years ago

#168

love it

superb

just amazing

and my fav one's

awesome update...

and thanks 4 the pm...

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anitasharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#169

Awesome update
the confrontation between arjun and sameer was much needed
shaleen sakshi ke touch me hai
and promise kisko diya hai
arakshi ka flashback was super cute
finally radhika is in mumbai
can't wait for next
please next part jaldi update karna

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0913155

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Posted: 10 years ago

#170

😊👏The story is just awesome diii... read all the parts together 😉superb love the relationship between radical and arjun😊 sameers and radikha😭 sooo sad yaar plz bring them bk together 😛plx bring saakshi soon..😛 why did u stop there agrrr 😭

Wanted sameers and radihika to meet...now hv to wait for next chapter 😛. Thanks for PM 😉