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@cutenamu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Hmm u updated the story very beautifully...it is very hard to give shape to some one else's concept but u nailed it very perfectly...u did a wonderful job...i just found it..while surfing...and read it...is is awesome...every tiny detail is described soo beautifully...i got to know that u brought some changes in the story too...it is worth reading...overall ur this piece of work is super awesome...plz cont soon and if possible plz pm me...wanna read more

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

This is awsome..
Plz update soon
N do pm me

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rvss

@rvss

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Oh no arjun ki puri family ki jaan khatreme he...

Omg Riya ko bhi kidneep kar liya...

Arjun to puri trahse tut chuka he. ...

Uski puri family aaj use dur he...

Kash Sam ki baat Sach ho jaye or riya ko hose aa jaye...

Mind blowing yaar. ...

Ab dekhna ki arjun us sadaam se kese apni family ki jaan bachye ga...

Please next part jaldi se update karna. ...