Ariya TS: Untitled

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Hey guys after many months I was force to sit back and inspired to write from a beautiful story written by a talented girl "Stuti" aka "angelariya" which left me speechless
Today I am continuing her story from "with her permission" where she left us crying...
It may not be good as hers but I tried my best
I used some of her lines as well to give it a tint of her aroma 😊

Hope you like it angel, take it as my gift for your birthday [:)
P.S. suggest a suitable title for this 😊






A tall, gym honed physique and sublime form with dusky features stood arched against the wooden fence remotely observing the roused and fierce turquoise-blue tides of the forming and dying crashing to the rocks of the shore afore from an open terrace french windowed balcony from an immensely colossal, resplendent wood craved beach house stood sublimely surrounded with eye and soul soothing lush green scenery and flax-gold particals at the bow of the shore...

His atlas shoulders above six packs clad tight body and bulging muscles were revealed from the many folds from the fabric of his ebony shirt...

Strays of gold-orange light managing to get through whitish grey fogs soak the tiny particals creating a magical atmosphere

Weather was now scarcely cool and calm after a very sultry and mussy day and the gentle breeze was ruffling his dark curls

He glanced at the welkin with infrequent dark grey patches of thick fog which were soon going to pour its blessing on the thirsty land and its creatures

He pressed his lips to the steaming cup of sultry liquid in took a sip relishing the scenery leaning to the diminutive wooden table

When a comely and affluent fragrance hit his nostrils, he inhaled deeply absorbing the heavenly scent mixed with the saline tang of sea in his form and smile broadly putting the cup down on wooden table and stood immobile

Foot steps echoed through their balcony betokening that she is coming proximate to him, he stood their eyes closed waiting

His wait came to halt when a delicate pair of soft, smooth and silky arms wound around his waist and a head was placed on his shoulder

He stood their stilled lost in her magical fragrance and touch relishing her company, when the girl came forward and placed an kiss on his heart mumbling an "I Love You"

Riyaaa...

A soft moan eluded his lips and tighten his hold on her petite form savoring her touch, she looked up only to lower her gaze from the intenseness and love in his dark ebony and blackish eyes


The sight of color seeping onto her angelic face was a privilege to watch, he titled his face towards her to touch his lips with the softness of her creamy skin,just then a tiny silver drop kissed his face and traced down cheek, he loosen his hold on her and look at the welkin above to find it fully covered with dark thick pitch-black clouds

Soon more silvery pearls like drops pelted down from the clouds and the cool spray touch there warm skin leaving behind a soothing wet film of water, the little drops began to soak the fabric of there clothes and pasting them to there body like a second skin

His eyes darken at the sight of dripping raindrops from her dark lashes to her cheeks then racing down to her neck and disappearing into her already drenchen form,
Soon haze like drizzle slowly grew into heavy rain..

He held her hand tightly and moved towards the shelter only to halt in his track by the soft tug at his arm, her eyes shone with mischief and before he could have reacted they both were under the pouring welkin, she placed her hand on his shoulder and his on her waist, taking her que he started to sway guiding her moves..
They both danced till she was sneezing uncontrollably

He took her inside and dry her and himself, she hugged him by waist. He kissed her hair and hid her in his strong arms away from everything and everyone.. They sat beside the fireplace covered with warm quilt watching heaven pouring its blessings.,they were disoriented in their world cuddling and murmuring saccharine nothing's in each others ears

But there sweet moment was perturb by a loud shrill sound
**************

He indolently open his eyes and glanced at his side table where the source of voice was put
He kicked his comforter starching his hand to prehend it

"Exigent meeting at commissions office, be there at sharp 11 O'clock "
Replied Sameer after the initial greetings and inquiry

"Okay I'll meet you there"
Arjun replied sighing


He recollects his dream and wipe the line tear from his eye


"Soon Riya very soon yeh sapna sach hoga aur ham isi tarha ek sath honge" he talked with himself assuring she will be back anon


Arjun through his phone on bed and move towards bathroom to culminate his early chores

He emerges wiping his hair dressed in deep blue shade shirt and jeans.He put the brush after making his hair when the door bell rang denoting for the advent of his parcel

He hurried to door, the boy smiled warmly and wished him morning


"Good Morning to you to akhil"


Arjun fetched the fresh flowers from the boy giving him his ferry he smile broadly smelling them

He went in side and opened the door, there laid "his soul" "his life" "his only love"
a cherubic like girl, negligence from the world, from
It's resplendency, from its apostatizes, from everything and "HIM"


"Hi jaan look what i brought?
Your favorite flowers Red Roses..
Dekho kitne khoobsurat hain na bilkul tumhari tarha, jahan hote hain apni khusboo phela dete hain..
He ambulated towards her inhaling an abundance of rosy scent...

It was daily routine to bring her favorite flowers to her room and talked to her


"Dekho na yaar meine kitne pyaar se mangayee hain aur tum dekh bhi nahi rahi acha chalo mein inhe tumhare pass rakh deta hoon taaki tum inki khushboo relish kar sako"
He verbalized with her arranging roses in a vase


"Riyu abhi tak naraz ho mujhse? Itna ghussa ke tum mujhse.. Apne Arjun sir baat nahi karogi?


Manta hoon yaar ghalti ho gayi, lo kaan pakad ke sorry bolta hoon,
Sorry riya please wapis ajao"


Arjun holds his ears sitting contiguous to her and reiterates his actions "Again"


"Please meri angel meri shona ab toh maaf kardo please, mein apni angel ko poora dekhna chata hoon kyun kay pta hai iss angel mein na kuch missing hai tumhe pta hai kya ?
He lay down adjacent to her and faced her fortifying his weight on one arm and asked her creasing her hairs


"voh hai tumhari beautiful dimple smile "

He smile jubilantly at the flashes of days when she used to spread jubilance by just smiling at you


"Kiya yaar ek smile hi toh mangi hai kya tum apne arjun k liye ek smile bhi nahi dey sakti , yaar itni bhi kiya naraz ho tum? please ab toh uth jao meri slumbering resplendency apne arjun ki itni si baat man lo . accha nhi manogi na tum agr tum ziddi hona toh mein double ziddi hu mein har roz tumse yhi baat khta rahunga jb tk tum meri baat man nhi leti , samjhi tum.."


Arjun said adamantly


"Come on now Riya please uth jao na mujhe danto , mujhpe gussa ho i won't mind but please arouse riya i swear tumhe koi bhi dukh ya dard sehne nahi dunga, tumhari life khushiyoon se bhar dunga, tumhe iss duniya se chupakar apne paas humesha mehfoos rakhunga u ken na riya i love you , i love you sooo muc...


He chock on his words hold her and buried his face in the crock of her neck


"Sau Dard Hain
Sau Raahatien
Sab Mlia Dilnasheen
Ek Tu Hi Nahi"



"I love you soo much, please come back.. I can't live without you
Tumhi meri jaan ho riya, tumhi meri zindagi.. Please ab mujhe aur mat tarpaao nahi seh sakta tumhari khaamoshi please riya please"


He would have kept crying if not he sense the women he reverence most after his aayi...
He hurryingly wiped his tears and stood from the bed, he evade looking in her eyes, if would she would caught his falling vigor and hope and he did NOT want that to transpire as his vigor is HER vigor and his hope is HER hope


His throat turned acrid when the inclemency of recollections hit him


Riya's mother... The women who lost her daughter not once twice and both times he failed to preserve her

When Arjun decided to bring riya at his home insted of her mum's he never thought once that his actions will put the once a vigorous lady in situation like that

One day without apprising Riya's uncle aunt and mother visit Ariya...

Shree had told arjun about the troubles Riya's mother faced after Riya's father and grandparents departure, her in laws leave no stone making both their lives a living hell

Riya's aunt always wanted to bring her little sister as Riya's father wife but he doted Riya's Maa and his parents withal didn't have any quandary so they tie them both in the holy matrimony

But now no shades to forfend them from evil eyes they were in the hands of that lady who's heart filled with poison for them both, even Riya's innocent and cherub antics couldn't melt that stone women

Riya and her mother did there best and fought with everyone to consummate her tardy fathers wish of Riya become an IPS officer

Her aunt always taunted her mother about that and now when they saw Riya is in that state except of feeling deplorable they commence taunting and fulminating Riya's mother saying saying what kind of a mother is she to left her daughter alone with a consummate stranger

Even she fulminated Arjun saying he's just capitalizing on Riya's state, GOD kens what he did with her within the four walls of his house
Maybe he make her more sick so he can utilize her as his heart desire

Arjun was shock and turned stone at such snarly remark

Them Sameer, and team took his side and admonish her aunt to mind her tounge

Mrs Mukherjee who was silent all the time came infront of him, taking his gelid hands in her she asked arjun


"Pyaar karte ho na uss se? Toh apne pyaar ko aeise kaise be-ezzat hota dekh sakte ho?


That bring arjun out of his trance he goes toward Riya's room and emerge holding her in his arms protectively and command shreetu to make arrangements for Ariya's espousement

Riya's uncle and aunt were shocked at the turn of events, her aunt still endeavored to verbalize dirty when Aisha jump in between and admonish her not to do that again or else she will put them behind bars in casein deformation and harassment

Anon all the arrangements were made and Arjun performed all the procedure told by priest, after all the ritual priest promulgated Ariya as a wedded couple

Arjun took Mrs Mukhrjee's blessing and she blissfully gave them with teary eyes

Riya's aunt was burning with vexation, she verbally expressed to MRs Mukhrjee's today she her daughter broke all ties with them and thus she can't live in their home as she took mazuma exchange of her owner ship on property to give Riya a better and edified future thus she have no right of residing there

Mrs Mukhrjee was shocked, she didn't cerebrate of this afore and now she has no place to call as her shelter


"Apko fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi hai Mrs shobha mukhrjee, Maa ajse mere sath rahen gi, jahan unke bache wahin unka ghar, so please don't be woeful for my mother and haan you are not invited in our reception.. Please ap jaa sakti hain"

Arjun replied serenely to the lady

"Humph reception, bara aya is laash ke sath shadi aur reception karne wala" she stomp her foot and went verbalizing profanities to them

All team stood there with fisted palms and clenched jaws


"Nahi beta mein kaise tumhare sath? Nahi yeh theek nahi hoga, ap meri fikar mat karo Riya ke papa ne kuch aur property banayi thi woh bech kar mein apna guzara karlungi"


"Maa please apke bete ke hote ap kahin aur kaise jaa sakti hain? Please Riya ko bura lage ga kay meine apko akela chor diya, woh mujhse aur naraz ho jayegi"

Arjun quarrel


"Magar mein"


"Please aunty maan jaaye, isi mein apke bachon ki khushi hai"
Sameer to jumped in to conversation


"Haan aunty please maan jaaye na please"
All team members too request in chorus


"Aunty please yeh toh sochiye iss waqt Riya ko apki kitni zaroorat hai? Arjun sir ko sab adjust karne mein kitna time lage ga aur us waqt Riya ka khayaal kon rakhega?
Aisha place her hand on her shoulder giving a light constrict


"Aur aunty yeh toh sochiye agar riya ke sath woh dono jinse woh sabse ziyada pyaar karti hai honge toh woh kitni jaldi theek hogi? Please aunty na mat kahiye"


Determinately Mrs mukhrjee accedes to stay with Arjun for the sake if her children's bliss and It's been 8 months since that day they three are living since then at Arjun's place ecstatically


"Naashta?"
Arjun asked evade looking as he was cretin she too was drown in those recollection lane again


"Tayar hai table pe laga diya hai"
She smile broadly and replied


"Hmmm thanks Maa"


Uff hai Durga Maa mein kiya karoon? Maa bhi bolte ho aur thanks bhi? Chalo juldi jaao warna woh dono bhukkar mete bache ka nashta khaa jayen gai.." She replied with a light smile


"Shree aur chotu? Mein abhi gaya"
And arjun flees from their as he was really scared to left empty stomach


She smiled and wipe the drop from her eyes and ambulate towards her dear daughter, she sat on her bed creasing her temple gently


"Shona aur kitna sataogi ussey? Pata hai kitna pyaar karta hai tumse? Roz tumhare liye woh tumhare favorite roses mangata hai, apne haathon se tumhara room sajata hai, roz khud tumhare room ki safayi karta hai.. Pat hai Sameer ne kia kaha tha? Usne kaha Arjun kabhi khudse ek glass paani bhi nahi leta tha aur uska room dekh kar aeise lagta jaise ghar mein koi toofan aa gaya ho... Woh bohot akela hai wapis aa jao shona tumhara Arjun haar raha hai, uski umeed mat tootne do riya lout aao apne Arjun ke pass
Apne pyaar ke pass"


"Woh aayegi aunty zaroor wapis aayegi, woh apne arjun sir ko kabhi haarte nahi dekh sakti, jis din arjun apni himmat khoone lagega tab apne Arjun ki himmat banke woh lout aayegi, ap hosla mat hariye apka housla arjun ka saahas barhata hai...
Chaliye apka beta apke liye wait kar raha hoga aur woh jallad tab tak kisi ko kuch khaane nahi dega jab tak ap nahi aate... Aayiye"

Sameer hold her hand and took her to the dining room where as Sameer predict Arjun's glares were keeping chreetu. And girls from assailing on dainty aliment

Upon seeing her chotu cheered and sakshi asked arjun now if they can victual or he's planing to kill them from hunger...


After a joyful and delicious breakfast Sameer and arjun decided to heed for commissioners office

Shreetu and girls stayed at Ariya's to spend their off day with there sweetheart and aunt
********



At Commissioners Office

ACP Rathore ACP Rawthe this is saddam khurana owner of various hotels and malls located in all over India... Said commissioner passing them a file and photo of there target


He also ran hospitals, colleges and schools which treat and educate poor for free and has many orphanages and lady homes running where hundreds of children's and girls lived with no fear but that's what he want the world to see


Human trafficking, organs trafficking, bachon ko bheek maangne wali gangs ko bechna, bachon or larkiyon ke zariye drugs ki smuggling, arms and weapons ki smuggling, kidnaping, killing,terrorism name a crime in which he isn't involve

Or in sab ki dealings woh apne hotels se karta hai


"Toh ap kia chahte hain sir? Iske khilaaf kafi suboot hain hamare pass hum abhi ise arrest kar sakte hain..."
Asked arjun after reading saddam's file.. Disgust and anger evident from his voice


"I agree with arjun, jab sab saboot hamare pass hain toh hum wait kyun kar rahe hain, we should nab him down before he could flee away"
Sameer too reason with commissioner inhaling deep to calm his nerves


Calm down you both I know hamare pass evidence hain but these aren't enough, agar koi bhi loop raha toh woh asani se khud ko begunah saabit karle ga aur hamare woh officers jinho ne yeh sab evidence ikhatta karne ke liye apni jaan di un sabki qurbani zaya jaye gi"
Commissioner's talk managed to cool down both loins a bit

Ek aur baat, hamari intelligence ne khabar di hai ke saddam iss dafa kuch bara karne wala hai, hamari khabar ke anusaar woh ek hi din mein ek sath kayi deals karne wala hai aur shayad ussi din sheher mein kuch bara hone wala hai jiska faida utha ke woh desh chor ke bhaag jayega

Yeh tumhari team ki zimmadari hai uske plans ko nakaam banane ki, mujhe tumpe aur tumhari team pe poora vishwas hai tum mujhe mayoos nahi karo gay...

"We won't sir Jai Hind"
Both RR said and salute in union


"Jai hind"
Commissioner nod and dismiss the meet


Soon everyone was back in ETF premies and discussing there plan of action


"Shree will go to one of saddams college as an exchange student, chotu will go to hospital as a sick patient, Liza will join as a school teacher in his charitable school and sakshi will go to lady home as a divorce and me Aisha are going to goa as a business couple there to keep an eye on his clients"
Sameer explain and appoint everyone their tasks


"Aur tum arjun? Tum kahan jao ge?" Sakshi asked


"Arjun saddam khurana ki uske bissnes delicates ki shaan mein di gayi party ka security in charge hai, He will keep a tab on him as well on his special guests.. Everything clear?" Sameer said


"Team saddam ek bohot hi shaatirbaur khatarnak apradhi hai, we have to be very careful agar usse zara bhi bahank lagi toh ham sab ki jaan khatre mein par jayegi everyone clear" team nodded

"Good now off to your given tasks, good luck"


Within two days Shree joined his new college as a very intelligent and shy boy who was an easy target for saddam's hunch men's to use as their puppet

Chotu was admitted to the hospital in case of severe food poisoning, he was strong and looked very poor with no family..An easy target to kill and get his organs

Liza joined new school as a teacher who posed desperate and broken, she was seen as an easy target for hunch men's to get her in their dirty drug selling business


Sakshi convinced the people there in lady home, she was a tortured soul
She was forcefully married to a guy twice the age of her, so she ran away from her home and now have no one to call as her family .. She was young, beautiful, scared and alone...
Real easy target for their cheapest business

Sameer and Aisha doing great in there task and arjun was with saddam regarding security issues of his party, saddam had no idea what was coming up...

All was going smoothly and accorded per plan but, that was "they" wanted ETFians to think and within a few hours things start to turn in opposite direction for ETFians

Arjun was keeping his eyes on saddam and was in constant contact of everyone, they get vital proofs against saddam and his men which were enough to put them all behind bars surely

After setting everyting Arjun opened his laptop and connected to everyone but Sameer and Aisha were unreachable, he tensed up and kept trying but both were not picking there phones and neither there trackers were responding

He dialed hotel's number but they said they checked out this morning, but of course arjun knew that early returning wasn't in their plan this so he knew something was off, he dialed his friend who was the ACP of his locus, he assure him he will found out where are his friends

He then try contacting sakshi but she too didn't respond to his calls, now arjun started to worry for his team mates, he dialed lady home and they said sakshi had left with her husband at her own wish and happiness

That just blew Arjun's mind, he knew their cover had blown..how? He don't know but he have save his team mates and friends

Arjun rushed towards the hospital when he got a call from Shree, he said Liza is missing, and the last msg he receive from her state chotu is in trouble and they are going to operate on him faking him sick severely and know he is on his way to hospital

Arjun cut the call and drove like anything to get there, he reached there and ask for chotu but they said he was fine now and didn't needed surgery so they grant him leave, even in the documents state the same, arjun began to shout at the receptionist but she was adamant at her statement.. Doctors came and tried to talk with arjun but arjun almost ended up beating them black and blue

Suddenly something hit him, Shree was closer to hospital than him then why hasn't he reach yet? He quickly dialed his number but it disconnected
He tried again and again but shree wasn't picking it up.. Arjun tried again and luckily it got connected

"Shree Shree were are you? Speak something damn it" arjun barked but only the broken and pained voice from shree arjun could receive and then line went dead

Arjun's head began to spin, in some mere hours his entire team was missing.He was worried for their safety

Arjun hurried to ETF office and orders his staff to find about team, he was marching to and for in his office throwing and banging every thing which came in his way..
His phone rang and with the speed of lighting arjun pressed its green button

"Arjun we found your team mates car, its completely broken and traces of struggle have been found near it, but your friend are missing, I've send a search party for them, I will inform you if we found any thing"

He cut the call and frustratedly moved his hand through his hairs, his one team member informed him that some guy saw few masked man forcing a almost unconscious girl in there van with no number plate, her description was same as Liza's

Another member said that shree was seen dragging to the same van as well but still no sign of sakshi or chotu..

Arjun banged his hand on table angrily and sank down on his seat tiredly. His mind was working on the turn if event but his focus lost when he get a call on his cabins landline


"ACP Arjun Rawthe here"

a horrendous laughed echoed in his ears from other side

"ACP Rawthe? Hmmm not bad team missing hai par abhi tak tumhari akad nahi gayi, caller laughed again making arjun clench his fist and jaw

Arjun jolted up from his seat and barked at him

"Kahan hain mere saathi saddam? Bol" arjun yelled at him


"Arey re itna ghussa? Uff chalo tumhe tumhari piyaari team se milwa hi deta hoon, apni Email check karo Rawthe wahan ek surprise hai tere liye" saddam said calmly

Arjun quickly checked his mails and found some video clips there, he opened one clip and shivers of fear pass through his body seeing the scenario afor..

Shree and chotu both were tide from roof upside down, blood oozing almost from every inch of there body

Arjun's blood boil seeing the next clip

In second clip Liza was chained to a wall from Hands and legs in a cross position.. Blood spilling from her forehead and lips

Last clip left arjun with anger and disgust

Third clip contain sakshi's state
Sakshi laid on floor of a big lavish bedroom unconscious and torn clothes...

Tears form in Arjun's eyes seeing his family in such state

"Kamine mein tujhe choorunga nahi, tune mere parivaar ko haath laga ke apni mout se dosti ki hai, mein tujhe choorunga nahi" arjun growled at saddam

Saddam laughed and said
"Uff Rawthe itna gussa? Abhi toh meine kuch kia bhi nahi hai, tumhare teeno sathi bohot pareshan kar rahe thay bas isi liye unhe thora sabak sikhaya, aur rahi baat uss sakshi ki toh uff, maan hi nahi rahi thi hamari baat bus isi liye uska yeh halal kia par ghabrao mat abhi usse haat bhi nahi lagaya meine, uske sath to mein teri aur iss sheher ki barbadi ka jashan manaaonga" saddam said disgusting arjun to his roots

"Aur woh tera dost aur uski chamiya? Waise kia item thi boss, agar maarna na parta toh zaroor apne bed ki shaan banata"

"Saddam zubaan shannhaal ke"
Arjun yelled unable to hold more


"Bilkul bilkul isi tarha woh rathore bhi chillaya tha ab dono ki laashien kutte khaa rahe honge jungle mein"

Arjun dropped to floor hearing this, his buddy his brother Sam in no more, tears flowed down his cheeks damping the dark red carpet beneath

"Arey Rawthe itni juldi toot gaye? Tisk tisk tisk
Acha chalo koi baat nahi tumhara dil behlane ke liye ek kahani sunata hoon ok toh suno

ek tha raaja bahaadur, nidar aur jaanbaz apne farz pe karta sab qurban,
Uski thi raani bari piyaari par jaan usne haari raja ke zid ke aage...
Raja bilkul toot gaya, bilkul bikhar gaya, raani ki mout ne usse ek zinda laash bana diya jiska sirf ek hi maqsad tha, badla"

"Bakwaas band kar apni" arjun roared with flowing tears when he remember roshni, his love for her and those days when he crazily searched her killer

"Arey Rawthe aage toh suno, aage story aur bhi ziyad interesting hai,
Raja ki zindagi mein
Aayi ek pari, piyaari si hunsmukh si, raja ka dil phir pighalne laga magar raani ki yaad mein usse apne se door karta"

Arjun rememberes the day when he first saw riya, he felt attractive towards her, her innocent trials to bring him back to life but he shouted on her, insulted her and ignores his feelings as he didn't want to betray his wife, And his heart sink in remorse when he remembers her sad face when he insulted her for every little thing

"Phir ek din niraash ho kar pari bhi hamesha ke liye chali gayi, raja ki zindagi se door bohot door par tab bhi raja ko kuch samjh na aya"
Arjun recalled the events where riya gulped the virus, her eyes were asking just one thing, LOVE but he was too adamant to accept her feelings and she goes far away from his pains and him


"par phir ek baar pari wapis aayi ke shayad ab raja usse apna le par phir raja ne pari ko thukra diya, pari ab poori tarha se toot gayi, usse yaqeen ho gaya raja kabhi uske pyaar ko nahi apnaye ga, magar pari raja se itna pyaar karti thi ke woh apna sab kuch chor kar chali gayi raja ki khushi ke liye"
Arjun recalls the time when riya came back after her treatment but he posed as her presence never mattered to him, she stays alive or die he doesn't care

Tears roll down leaving their stains on his cheeks and his heart curled when she left ETF because of him

"I am sorry riya" arjun spoke audible enough for him only
His trance broke from the sound of saddam's voice

"Phir ek din pari ko khabar mili uska pyaar, uske saathi sab musibat mein hain, poori duniya unpe ilzaam laga rahi hai, pari se apne pyaar ki be-ezzati bardasht nahi hoyi, woh akeeli nikal pari apne pyaar aur dostoon ki begunaahi ka saboot laane ke liye, aakhir kaar woh kamyaab hoyi, usne apne pyaar ko begunaah saabit kar diya magar iss sab mein apni jaan ki baazi haar gayi, aj raja usse pyaar karta hai par woh ab khud nahi apne pyaar ko jeetta dekhne ke liye"

Arjun remembers every moment when riya fought alone to prove their innocence but in process she got wounded..Arjun's heart cried when he remembers Riya's almost dead state and everything was just because of him, he cursed himself for her state

"Acha Rawthe ek aur kahani suno ge? Ek ghar ghar mein ek sleeping beauty uske saath uski boorhi Maa aur...
Aage sunaon Rawthe ?
Saddam laughed cruelty

Fear gripped Arjun's heart, he knew what was comming up so without another thought he ran madly towards parking

Saddam's cruel laugh echoed in Arjun's deserted cabin

Arjun drove madly praying nothing happen to his riya he reach his locality to find thick black fog was coming out of his house, he rushed inside screaming Riya and Maa
But none was there, his heart hammering inside its cage

Arjun fought with every negetive thought, dark fog and coughing searched his whole house but they both were no where too be seen

Just as he was about to lost his consciousness two pair of arms grab him and took away from the burning place, arjun fought and yelled to leave him he have to save his wife and Maa

"Arjun tumhari Maa riya ko hospital leke gayi hai, woh tumhe call kar rahi thi but tumne call pick nahi ki

Arjun then remembers that when he was arguing with hospital staff his phone must have been dropped somewhere there

"Which hospital?" Arjun ask relieved that they weren't here when saddams men attack and they both are safe...

Arjun drove at a deadly speed to reach hospital asking Riya's room number he was about to go when a heart piercing sound echoed through hospitals premises ,People ran towards exit fearing for there life

Arjun rushed towards the sound and freeze on his tracks noticing that sound came from the same room in which riya was admitted.. Arjun took slow steps absent mindly and halted breath when a voice grabbed his attention

"Arjunnn" Maa's voice emerge from nearby

Arjun was instantly jolted back to consciousness, He quickly ran there to found Maa lying on the floor wounded and half unconscious

"Maa" arjun screamed and took her in his arms

"Woh... Woh log meri Shona ko , meri Shona..." Maa could only mutter these words then slip into unconsciousness

Arjun sat there on the broken glass coverd floor with unconscious Maa in his arms, dark fog and flames emerging from the shattered windows of Riya's room,trying to grasp what just had happened ?His mind was froze., his whole team was kidnaped, best friend missing, his Maa lay with no senses and his life, his riya ...???
And when he comprehend what happen


Riyaaa...
Arjun gave a heart wrenching scream and broke down completely
Curling to the lady's limp form in his arms

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Phew done for today
Please do like and leave you honest comments 😊
As I said before, I don't mind one worded comment but just leave your honest review about it
Good, Bad everything is accepted 😊
Edited by Areesha566 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for liking, you are the first one to comment 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey.. great update dear.. first of all its not that easy to take someone else story and continue it... but from my point of view.. u have done justice.. πŸ‘.. I really loved it.. 😊.. and please PM me urs next update.. waiting eagerly for the next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was awsum dear...
Lovely..
As i said earlier is worth it...
Very gud...
She will love it...
Nd i already gave you my suggestion abt the titile...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh very well written dear

mere ankh bhagaraeh the lines ke sath great.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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didu i lovee it
it's way much better than mine
and my b'day gift is best
mujhe next prt bhii jaldi chahiyeee
sysπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
loveee you
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Posted: 10 years ago
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great update dear
love it
thnx for pm
nxt part update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome fantastic super update
loveit
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update...
loved it se upar wala...
i'm speechless...
do cnt soon...
n thnks 4 pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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mind blowing update
poor riya is in coma πŸ₯Ί
arjun took riya at his home with her mom πŸ˜ƒ
god that too much of riya's uncle & aunty 😑
how dare they talk abt riya like that 😑
ETF had got case of saddam
they were going good but suddenly ETF got trap
god everybody gone missing πŸ’”
arjun was shattered to see choree liza & sakshi condition πŸ’”
worried for sasha as they r missing πŸ₯Ί
god that beast kamina saddam even kidnap riya 😑
hell arjun hurt riya in past badly 😑
but riya again to save ETF sacrifice her life
this is really scary now how arjun gonna save them alone?
continue soon

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