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Posted: 8 years ago
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Last exam baaki hai aur padh padh k bore ho gyi 😆to updates padhi yaha pe 😃phir ye OS bhi aaya dimaag me to likha aur likha to socha share karu😊
Grammar ki waat lagaayi hai maine aap bhi samaj jaaoge😆 but couldn't resist 🤣
Thanks phirse jhelne k liye😳
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NIBIR OS: BEACH

Nisha and Kabir are orphans, met at the age of five in orphanage, became best friends. Raised up in the same orphanage, Kabir cultivated his talent in studies while Nisha used to be observing as well talking to people and kids and their other friends most of the time. At the age of fourteen, they parted ways where Kabir went to London as a foreign investor funded education for two boys. They remained in contact initially talking many times at first which gradually lessened and lost contact ultimately after a year.
Both got busy in their lives. Kabir came to India at the age of 26. He had become a great businessman and had to visit India for some work in the same city as the orphanage.
He was very sure that he would go to the orphanage and also meet Nisha or at least have a talk with her getting her phone no. if she isn't in the city. So, he after completing his work reaches the orphanage. Everyone is proud to meet Kabir who has become so sound businessman internationally and he is overwhelmed.
He asks about Nisha and is told that she left the orphanage at the age of 15.
He gets disappointed as he gets no clue about her whereabouts.
His stay in India was of 3 days and then it is the last day today rather last night as the next morning is his flight back to London. He thought of taking a stroll at the beach he used to visit with Nisha at least he could have her memories if he couldn't meet her.

"Oho!"Nisha yelled.
It drew Kabir's attention and he swirled to find the source of the noise.
"Hey calm down"a girl,Shweta beside her whispered.
Nisha composed herself.
Kabir shook her head and continues his stroll at beach.
"Sun Shweta mai jaa rahi hu uske pass thik hai tu ghar ja"
"Nai nisha tujhe uske saath akele chod k nai jaaungi mai"
"Oho Shweta! Mai koi bacchi nai hu aur yaha kitne saare log hai kuch nai hoga mujhe"
"Magar"
"Magar vagar kuch nai...tu jaa tere patidev intezaar kar rahe honge aur mai ye first time nai kar rahi"
"Anjaan hai vo kahi kuch"
"Kuch nai hoga...aur mera kaam hai ye pschiatrist hu mai...dekha nai ro raha tha vo...suicide nai dek sakti mai aur"
"Nisha"
"Chal bye love you"
Shweta leaves. Nisha reaches Kabir smiling accompanying him with his stroll.
"Excuse me?" Kabir stops and sulks.
"Hello I'm a psychiatrist" she beams.
"So what?"
"So I can help you "
"In what sense?"
"There is no problem that can't be solved in this world"
"But I-"
"Look I know you may not like to share but I'm a doctor and a doctor can heal"
"O Madam you're mad and you require a psychiatrist not I !"
"It's not madness! Just Some problems! "
"But I don't have any!"
"Why were you crying looking at sea then?"
"I'm not answerable to you!"
"Mr. You're young handsome guy don't get sad over a heartbreak "
"Whoa! Flirt kar rahi ho?Mere piche kyu padi ho tum yaar! Mai jo chahe vo karu!"
"Flirt nai kar rahi mai! Samjha rahi hu ki suicide is not a good option...koi bhi ladki mil jaegi tumhe yaar"
"Kya suicide? Pagal ho tum! Kisne kaha mai suicide kar raha hu?"
"Do suicide dek chuki hu teesre ko bachaya tha chauthe ho tum"
"Arey mai heartbreak k vajah se nai ro raha tha okay!"
"Phir?"
"Vo Nis-ek minute mai tumhe kyu batau?"
"Kyunki mai puch rahi hu and I'm a psychiatrist as well as a doctor and doctor can-"
"Heal" he completed her sentence.
"Yeah exactly"
"But a doctor can't solve my problem"
"Means you do have a problem and you lied earlier"
"Argh! No!"
"You're lying now"
"Shut up!"
"I won't until you tell me your problem. I can solve it"
"You cannot"
"I can"
"Fine then! I want to meet Nisha Gangwal. Can you find her?"
Nisha went quiet confused.
"Look I told you right! You cannot solve my problem! Hence proved!"
Nisha understood that the guy doesn't know that she is the girl he's talking about.
"Why do you want to meet her?"
"None of your business! Now go!"
"Who are you?"
"Listen madam! Enough now! Stop stalking me...I know you aren't a doctor and trying all this for fun. I'm warning you to stay away because I'm in my worst temper right now or else I'll throw you in those deep waters"
He started to move forward but she held his hand"I know her"
Kabir was about to retort but a hope crossed his heart"you know her?"
"Erm yeah"she said awkwardly.
"Look if this comes out to be a prank then I'll -"
"You'll kill me" she completed him.
"Yeah. So, where is she? I want to meet her"
"Who are you? I cannot tell her whereabouts to a stranger willing to suicide"
"Argh! I wasn't! Can't you get it?"
"Still you are a stranger"
"Is Nisha your friend?"
"Who are you?"
"Why do I tell who am I to a stalker?"
"I'm not a stalker! I'm a pychiatrist! I didn't want to see anymore suicides! And you are going to tell me who you are because you want to meet Nisha...rest is upto you"
"You don't know her! Just playing with me! Go! And if you have some feelings then such a false play of knowing her hurts me!"
He went ahead.
She could see that he was really hurt but why? Who is he? Why finding her? Why was he trying to suicide?
"I'm Nisha Gangwal" Nisha stated trying to grasp his reaction.
He ceased and turned angry "You're crossing limits now! Don't you dare!"
"I-M-Nisha-Gangwal" she repeated.
He strode to her, she gulped in fear.
He clasped her hand and dragged to deep waters. She tried to free herself from his hold but no use.
He pulled her close to him"one more time you say I'll throw you!" He threatened.
She lowered her eyes"please don't!"
He freed her sighing"Look whoever you're...it's not fun to play with someone's feelings okay? Don't do this next Time with anyone. Go now!"
She felt relieved but was curious to know why he behaved so.
"You aren't committing-"
"I'll make you commit suicide if you don't walk out!"
She swirled but she wanted to know who was he.
Her mobile rang "Hello Dr. Nisha here"
Kabir swirled his neck to Nisha who was walking out.
"Hmm okay let the doze remain so. If you feel anything share okay. I'm there"
"Hmm bye"
"Wait!" Kabir called her out.
She swivels with a little fear.
"You're really a doctor?A pschiatrist?"
She nods.
He walks to her and says"sorry I'm sort of upset okay but but but I wasn't committing suicide"
She takes a long breath "Thank God!"
He smiles "You...erm..really know Nisha Gangwal?"
"Of course I know her...I'm her!"
He blinks in dilemma to believe or not .
"Wait!" She takes out her visiting card and gives it to him.
"Now you believe me? I'm Nisha Gangwal, a psychiatrist and not a stalker!"
His heart skips a beat and he stares Nisha.
"Who are you? Why did you want to meet me? Why you lost your temper?"
"Nisha" he hugs her smiling.
She jerks off breaking the hug"O Mr.! I was helping you doesn't mean all this! I can put you behind the bars! "
He grinned as his eyes glistened looking at her.
Nisha got confused at his behaviour again.
He thought of telling her by his name but thought of prank instead. She too teased him of suicide now his turn.
"Tujhe apane saath le jaane aaya hu"
"Huh?"
He grabbed her by her waist "Kiss karne baby"
She was going to shout but he left her immediately and started to walk back in waters"varna mar jaunga"
She gulped not able to understand of doing what.
"Mai jaa raha hu Nisha"
"Aise logo ko Mar hi jaana chahiye"she swiveled with gritted teeth.
He smirked to himself.
"Ni-" and pretended to be drowned though he knew swimming.
Nisha first ignored but watching him drown reached to his rescue.
She grasped his hand and pulled out of water. As she looked at him tensed he grinned opening his eyes getting on his feet.
"Bacha liya mujhe matlab tujhe kiss chahiye"
"You!" She ground her jaws.
He pulled her to him and immediately said innocently "Kabir hu mai.Kabir Rathore. Maaf karde mazaak kar raha tha"
Her facial expression eased"kya?"
He freed her.
"Hmm erm Kabir hu mai...tune suicide pe kitna pareshan kia to maine bhi thoda kar liya kiss pe...sorry"
"T...tu Kabir hai? Kabir Rathore"
He nodded and gives his visiting card.
Her eyes glistened and she hugged him. He hugs back.
"Kal subah vapas jaa raha hu London"
She breaks the embrace"kyu?"
"Kyu kya kyu? Vahi rehta hu mai"
"Kabir teri Shaadi ho gayi?"
"Nai" he chuckles.
"Girlfriend hai?"
"Err nai kyu?" He asks awkwardly.
"Mujhse Shaadi karega?"
He blinks.
She grins "mazaak kar rahi hu" she laughs.
He glares at her.
"Accha accha okay apna number to de...phir contact choot jaega otherwise"
"Hmm ye le"
"Nisha teri ho gayi Shaadi?"
"Nai aur boyfriend bhi nai hai"she chortles. He chuckles "accha"
"Aise anjaano se mat baat kia kar...please"
"Agar nai karti to tu kaise milta? "
"Nisha" he groaned
"Thik hai par mai nai dekh sakti suicide. Ek min tu kyu suicide karne jaa raha tha?"
"Kya hai yaar! Nai kar raha tha naa mai koi suicide! Ro ni sakta thoda beach pe!"
"Nai!"
"Nisha tu paagal hai!"
"Psychiatrist hu mai!"
"Paagal psychiatrist!"
"Kabir!"
"Fine fine! Par kisiko saath le lia kar okay! Aise akele raat me thik nai..."
"Hmm okay" she smiled.
"Vese ye hi beach pe jaan bachane ka shauq hai tujhe ya koi or jagah bhi chalegi?"
"Matlab?"
"Matlab London me bhi logo ki jaan bacha sakti hai tu"
"Erm"
"Shaadi karegi mujhse?"
"Tu ye prank-"
"No pranks!"
"Bol na!"
"Mai-"
"Naa bolegi to maar ni daalunga...bol to kuch"
"Pata nai"
He frowned.
"Chal bye"
"Kabir erm"
"Kya?"
He swivels as she went quiet again.
Suddenly she pulls him back and kisses him. He goes shocked for a moment but replies afterwards. They tear the kiss.
"Ye kya tha?"
"Kiss" she chuckles.
"Idiot! Vo mujhe bhi pata hai par Shaadi ka jawab nai dia aur kiss kar rahi thi"
"Idiot! jawaab hi tha vo"
He grins and embraces her"never knew I would meet you"
"Me too"
"Never knew I would fall for you"
"Me too"
"Never knew You would repeat my lines"
"Me t-Kabir!"
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res...
I'm going to read it soon..
And I told you not to write os..😡 your OS so fantastic that you have to turn them into SS or ts 😆

Unres..
You know what, kuch main bhi likh rahi hun or uska kuch kuch tumhari is os se same hogaya 😆
Now coming to os.. It was as usual amazing 👏👏
So so cute os 👏
really really loved it...😳
I really enjoyed their conversation 😆
And as usual want more.. I want more parts 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anmol333

Res...

I'm going to read it soon..
And I told you not to write os..😡 your OS so fantastic that you have to turn them into SS or ts 😆

Yaar Anmol understands naa please 😆
Will love to read your view😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: aNibirFan

Yaar Anmol understands naa please 😆
Will love to read your view😊

Please after your exams please write it's next parts and update your other stories too 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anmol333

Res...

I'm going to read it soon..
And I told you not to write os..😡 your OS so fantastic that you have to turn them into SS or ts 😆

Unres..
You know what, kuch main bhi likh rahi hun or uska kuch kuch tumhari is os se same hogaya 😆
Now coming to os.. It was as usual amazing 👏👏
So so cute os 👏
really really loved it...😳
I really enjoyed their conversation 😆
And as usual want more.. I want more parts 😃

Thanks so much Anmol glad you liked it🤗
Same ho gaya kya sorry erm par mujhe pata ni tha 🤔
par exactly thodi hi same hoga dear so no worries 😊
I would love to read 😳
Journey of love ka res dekha tumhara 😉😃 meri to nikal padi😆
waiting for Update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: mkjr

So good loved it awesome

Thanks so much dear😳😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Cute one😃 ...and super fast proposal 😃🤣 now last paper ko jldi se bye bye bolo aur update your stories 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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u people anmol poornima and u...just don't update your stories and make me wait for years years...jaldi update kar football ...and this one...make it a ss or ff...u can't write os and we won't allow u to write...want to read the next part...update it after ur exams get finished...
and this ne was fabulous...amazing...superrr se bhi uparrr waala tha...so cute and lovely
anmol tum apna bhi likho aur post karo...would love to read it...nibir ka koyi bhi story chalega...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: poornima_15

Cute one😃 ...and super fast proposal 😃🤣 now last paper ko jldi se bye bye bolo aur update your stories 😃

Thankz Poornima😳😳
Yup for sure😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niha0606

u people anmol poornima and u...just don't update your stories and make me wait for years years...jaldi update kar football ...and this one...make it a ss or ff...u can't write os and we won't allow u to write...want to read the next part...update it after ur exams get finished...

and this ne was fabulous...amazing...superrr se bhi uparrr waala tha...so cute and lovely
anmol tum apna bhi likho aur post karo...would love to read it...nibir ka koyi bhi story chalega...

Niha naaraz mat ho please dear🤔
Mai next week last exam dene k baad will update 😃
Thanks for liking it😳😳
Ha anmol poornima annie update karo yaar😆

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