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Chapter 13
credit: SHAGUN
Though jalal has convenced her that salim will be back today on by 5 BTW still her heart is unpeaceful state ,contimously thinking bout her only child ,how he must be there does adham provide him something to eat , what he must be feeling she hasn't take a single morsel in her mouth whenever jalal is trying to make her eat he is getting only failure because as being a mother only she or her god knows how n what she is feeling right now... But having one support near her of her husbanding making her heart somehow in relief but not too much extent.

Its 10 am
Jodha moving back n fro in hall desperately looking at clock hanging on floral painted wall as if testing mother's patience whilst jalal sitting on sofa his condition is not different as jodha , but he is showing hom strong just for her sake but only he know that from what he is getting through , every incident every sinhle act is flashing infront of his eyes till the day he treated salim badly with tge thought that he is someone else's flesh n blood unknown to the fact that he is a part of his soul only , he brought his pace in his palms and regreting on his earlier misdeeds sighing heavily he get up from sofa and padded towards worried mother gently gripping her by shoulders n gesturing her to follow him , she did as she has been instructed

Making her sit on sofa where he was earlier sitting , handing her glass of water she denied to drink BTW he was not less than her ,she admantly denying again jalal looses this battle he cant convince his wife infront of admant mother . Now he understand how much jodha love salim and he cant denied the fact that she loves him also but she is more dedicated towards salim as his mother which ached his heart with the thought that why why he was angry with her , why he didnt understand her POV why he was so cruel rowards his son n his love why he was got so blind by anger why she left him with Saleem in her womb why it had happened to him ,with him why adham kidnapped his innocent son The tjought of adham brought angry tears in his eyes ,his fist clenched whilst nostrils were falring with his heavy breathing . Glancing at his wife who was busy in staring at clock as if trying to make the time turn soon in 5 he again sighed on his failure

Day seems very big for both the parents now the time is 12:30 pm still jodha and jalal were in same spot ,same condition ,same state,same tjoughts rotating in their minds WHY ...WHY ...n only WHY ???...

Time flewing in its own sleed btw for mother and fatger its seems that day has been prolonged
1:00
1:30
2:00
2:30
3:00
3:30
As clocked ticked jalal got startled jodha notice this change and asked him what happened he replied its time for action i will make him realize what he has messed up n with whom. Jodha stopped him and asked him not to leave her alone take her with because she cant stay here alone waiting for them both aware of the fact that both are in danger...
Jalal firstly tried to make her understand btw all in vain so he gave up n jodha too joined him

Dialling the phone to the person , he ask him get ready for the action whereas the reciever was already ready.

M ready boss just twll me when to attack , jalal asked when u have reach therean replied since u told me bout your son i reached at this place and keeping an eye on this man... Noss i thonk this man is psycho he didn't done any wrong to your son btw your son was continously crying for his mother whislt the kidnapper making him quiet by different ways btw the boy didnt taking name of being quiet ... He chuckled at last btw after getting dead silence from other side he got serious he continued sir till when u r reaching and should i take action untill u reach here.. Jalal replied just in 10 min n no just keep an eye on him
Sure sir n call ended

Car ride was in silence from mansion till captivated area
Both were calculating something in tgeir mind btw didnt even glance at ones

Jalal turn off tge ignition n jump out from car jodha following him he reached there
Jalal tap tp man's shoulder he turn to face him both shook the hands and jalal introduced him to jodha
Jaan meet him he is Gaffoor Ahmed he will bring our son safely to us n ... Jodha cut jalal in mid n said to gaffoor please save son please i will be higly obliged i will never ever forget ur this kind help , you will alwats be angel for me please save my son n started crying... Seeing his boss's wife cring like this he felt bit awkward but he understand her condition because he also went through this stage when jalal helped him from then he was jalal's right hand in this kind of work , he always call him by boss and respect him alot ... Seeing his wife cring like this jalal felt bad for jodha he hugged her and statred cosoling her
Jalal : jodha please , i cant see u like this i cant stand when u r crying ... Jodha u r strong na please jaan u have to be strong for our saleem
Jodha : still crying jalal its been 4 days i havent hear his voice his giggle his cry his tantrums jalal i want my saleem please ask him to bring our sleem without any harm to him please jalal
Then she faced to Gaffoor and plead by folding her hands please bhaiya please...please save him ... Hearing bhaiya once again broufh trmears in his eyes he hold jodha's hand and put two fingers under her chin to make her face him he said u said me bhaiya ... Haina !! Jodha nodded he replied then this brother is promising to his younger sister that i will bring youe salim safely to you for this if i have to pay my life also btw i will bring yiur salim back to you ok... Now stop crying and be here n ve strong
Jodha ok n u also have to be safe...
Gaffoor halted on spot n turned to jodha ask her to call him brother once again and when jodha call him he gave brotherly kiss on her forhead snd left the place handing jodha's hand in jalal's hand


No news they got from gaffoor its been 1/ hour even cops also reached here jodha was loosing her patience whereas jalal was getting angry why gaffoor taking so much time he thought to see by himself btw halted in his way when he saw salim in gaffoor's arms and gaffor was injured he finds difficulty in walking but he has to fullfil his promise he did to his sister... Jalal make jodha to look to tge direction from where they are coming . Jodha started running towards the direction jalal also followed him when gaffoor saw his sistdr running like a psycho he increase his speed still feeling weakness but he want little soul to give his mother's arms they reached n stand by facing eachother
Gaffoor : boss , ur son is with you before 5 still 5 minutes are left to bd 5 jalal faintly smiled at him then he ask JODHA to take salim jodha took salim in her arms n kissed his face when she saw that he is not opening his eyes she asked h saleem open ur eyes , saleem beta
Gaffoor saod he got faint he will be ok
Jodha gave side hug to gaffoor amd thanked him whereas jalal ask him to reach hospital soon n handed him the money for treatment but gaffoor decline it he said that he helped his sister to which jalal smiled and replied think that ypur brother in law is giving it to u n take it ok
Gaffoor took the money n left the place , now what jalal sw make his blood boiled he saw adham draghing by police and blabbering unnecessary things . He went towards him and ask police to leace and he will bring him to police station police left the place
Jalal facing adham in cold voice he roared how dare u to mess with my family , how dare u to kidnap my son he kicked him on his guts wheras adham screamed in pain again he picked adham n throw him on muddy floor jodha ran towards jalal n ask him to punish this psycho man
Jalal order jodha to sit in car with saleem n he dragged adham towards car he picked rope from care tied his hands n then roped it from car n he himself came n sat on care turned on the ignition and start the car he sped the car in such a speen that adham was paining jalal was dragging by by tieing him to car till tgey reach to police station adham was looking like a deadbody when cops untie him from backside of car , he was unable to stand on his legs but still breathing
Jalal : inspecter make him realizs what he did n from whom he messed n yes dont stop until he begs for his death n about his death i will decide wheather he is to die at that moment or still need lesson...
Inspector :sure Mr JALAL, jalal did goodluck to inspector n once again punched on adham's nose he cried in pain n left the place before giving evil grin to ibspector n winking him

Mansion
Salim is concious till now and gaffoor got trete
treated n safely reached at his home... Jodha was looking at salim when he asked for chocolate milk she got up to bring chocolate shake for saleem when she felt dizzy n about to fall but at a nick of time jalal hold her n make her sit on bed , jodha blushed when she saw jalal n jalal frowns
He askdd what happened now y r u blushing like a new bride jodha hugged him tightly he caressed her hairs n smiled but didnt said anything , saleem was seeing all this he ask his mother again mumma my chocowate shawe in his baby tounge jodha parted herself from jalal and jalal bend towards saleem n said from now obwards mumma will rest n dadda will do evsrything whatever salim wants .
Saleem give toothy smile n said weally dadda jalal ruffeled his hairs n eent to kitchen to bring choco shake for his son , he brought the shake n gavs it to saleem , saleem started drinking like a good boy and jalal hugged jodha tightly n started giving sloppy kisses over her face jodha nodded negatively n said not now
Jalal replied then i want twins this time n today we will make other one jodha blushes n hide herself in jalal till now saleem finishes the shake n started clapping his hands , jalal picked him up n replied now i will love n protect u both always...
At night
Saleem was sleeping whereas lovebirds were moaning busy in makibg other child... Jodha hugged jalal n said i love u jalal
Jalal tighteneds the grip in returns

The end...

Edited by harrystyolic - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing ending Mavi❤️
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Read your this story in one go ... throughout the story feel bad for jo . How much she has to suffer due to her sister than jalal and at last due to adham . Nice ending with ja saving salim and good punishment for adham...finally they planning for twins.
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Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

Read your this story in one go ... throughout the story feel bad for jo . How much she has to suffer due to her sister than jalal and at last due to adham . Nice ending with ja saving salim and good punishment for adham...finally they planning for twins.

thank u vrinda for commenting...
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Originally posted by: Nonie12345

<font size="3">Amazing ending Mavi❤️</font>

thank u so much...

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