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redpetals123

@redpetals123

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#961

Hey dear I have been missing your updates since i didnt reciev pms, i had read this ff till chapter 3 and I though due to some problem there was delay in your update, but now I understood that u have been updating but i didnt come to know. Since I had scrapped you my comment on this ff.

Anyways, I so love this story, it is beautiful, anajlis story is still a mystery, i loved aakash and khushis friendship. They are sweet. Arnav is not able to keep himself away from khushi.

Please pm me when you update you are a wonderful writer.

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esha85

@esha85

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#962

OMG! I am so late in replying...don't want to go into details why but asli duniya was very demanding this week...anyway coming to this update...

1. I think Aakash is just adorable and a true friend. It was really sad knowing what happened between him and Payal...no wonder they don't have a good rapport with the journalists.

2. The dowry and abuse law if misused is actually very sad for the actual victims and the thousands of women in India who go through this. There should be some kind of punishment for those who misuse it. But loved how you brought it out through this story.

3. Aakash has become somewhat a rebel...no surprise why though, with a Mother like Aarti Raizada.

4. Arnav and the 'green eyed monster'...sigh...goes with his character. He may be confused about his feelings but cannot see Khushi with anyone else. Which makes me wonder what kind of relationship he had with Sheetal. Well can see Khushi not too comfortable with the idea of Arnav and Sheetal together..these two!

5. Loved the small moment between Arshi...sparkling chemistry! Well atleast they have forgiven each other and have taken a small step forward...but the gabbar Mom is still lurking around.. but will be fun to read their difficult progress.

😊 Cheers...

Esha

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amita

@star_fan1

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#963

Sorry for late comment

But it was really a refreshing and amazing update

Khushi is feeling light and refresh in company of her friend Akash

Loved the way she is changing and coming out of her guilt with his help

Akash's story was really sad poor fellow have to bear so much with his family due to Payal

Glad that he shared his past with Khushi and Khushi didn't judge him

Her talk with him about Lavanya was so nice

Hope Lavanya's company bring him out of his past

Glad that you given Arnav's point of view in this update

I now Arnav will not judge her like his mother that anger was because of Khushi didn't disclosed her identity to him

Full two hours he was only looking her from distance really he is gone

Loved the way he saved her from his mother's eyes

Akash and his ideas really he come up only with Shraya but its worked with his mother

Arnav and Khushi's conversation was nice at least now everything is clear between then

Arnav is fully fallen for Khushi and now he cleared their misunderstandings for each other so lets see how will your proceed their love story

Khushi and Akash planned for forest adventurous trip will they invite Lavanya and Arnav to for it

Really loved the whole update too much

Waiting for next update eagerly

Edited by star_fan1 - 10 years ago

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bhavis

@bhavis

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#964

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

Side note - I am amazed at what all Arnav is forgiven in IPK world - rape, adultery, marital abuse, lack of morals etc etc. Would we be as generous in understanding our boyfriends and husbands if they committed the same acts? I am guessing you wouldn't because I wouldn't. I don't mean to offend anyone with this comment. Since I joined IF, I have had issue with so called dark FF's where rape is shown as a misunderstanding. And today I decided to express my stance against it.

Finally I found someone who is voicing this out openly. 👏

Main lead performing any crime in name of heroism is unacceptable. I was surprised myself when i read so many FFs where in the name of dark stories Arnav or the lead is doing all those acts and when people used to support this act it kept me thinking about what the girls/teenagers think about their future spouse😕 .

Lives of young women is too precious to be spend after someone who needs help from Professional to treat their mental illness. The way shows and stories portrays that a women can change a man is like a fairy tale which happens only in books and when I see the young women on this forum taking sides of such male characters I feel sorry for them and do wonder if in real life would they allow themselves for such spouse/BF? No its not romantic for a man to hurt a women and then show care for that person. Period no second doubt about it. Its sadistic desire and its a illness which needs treatment. Any form of emotional or physical torture is a NO NO and this is a closed statement not open for debate in any form.

PS - Wanted to first comment on your story but this comment of yours I could not ignore it😃

Edited by -Bhavi - 10 years ago

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Bavari

@Bavari

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#965

Loved the chapter. Meeting a old friend after a long time is reliving the beautiful memories of the past. First time both Khushi and Akash remembered Anjali for the happy times they had it together. So far when she thought about Anjali there was pain of guilt but this time she felt happy reliving happiness of the past before pain and guilt. True friendship does that to you. Makes you want regale with silly things of the past wants to break you into laugh. Gives new perspective of the happening of the present that weighs you down. When she gains new angle to her father's anger through Akash , Akash gains new perspective of his failed marriage. True friendship views and hears the incidents of friend's life with out judging them. Like all other thing your writing about friendship gets to your heart and wants to call the bestie you lost touch in tides of the life. Good job Sandhya.

IPC section498A

Law enforced to save woman from greed breeds another group of greedy people.

Loved Arnav gets all protective about Khushi from his mom. Liked brotherly bond and goofy Akash. So fogged up anger head Mr. Raizada do also posses the beating romantic heart. Loved the way he apologized to Khushi. So along with Lavanya will Arnav get the invitation to Avalanche trip. Sorry for the late comment thx for the PM.

Edited by Bavari - 10 years ago

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#966

friendship.

i love the role it plays in your stories.

on a superficial level all ARHI stories ,even yours, can be classified as romantic however the almost equal element of friendship in your make them just so special.

to me this update was just about two friends khushi and aakash. they not only dominated but became my sole focus of this update.

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@addicted25

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#967

Sandhya, a lovely chapter. Let me say it, thank gooodness he realised what an idiot he had been! I would have got really mad at him if he continued, especially since Akhash has no hard feelings towards her.
The nok-johk between Aki and kuku..( LOVE these sweet nick names) , the fact that Akaash is going with Khushi visiting all the places that she and Anju had decided to visit one day is brilliant. Then they visit the golf course, and the girl came prepared, making herself look great even after a cycle ride...especially since Arnav was around... I could just see it him with his green t shirt just like the trailers. Then Akaash tells khushi about Payal, how the city girl treated him, just because she could. Anyone who abuses a law that tries to protect the innocent needs a tight slap. Just cos she couldnt live in the countryside, needed her friends around her. Im glad he didnt talk of love... he would have been more broken up.

Now to Arnav, love his brooding at the bar... watching them be friends, maybe 2hours was enough time to realise that Khushi will be wanted by other men, even if that is his own brother. Green monster. Then his mother turns up and he plays interference between the two, escorting Khushi out and preventing a scene. He also takes the chance to apologise to Khushi. 😃 . Im glad he also tried to apologise before, even though it was by phone. He even gave her the keys to his car! Just yo make sure she got home safely. Or is that a ploy to see her again? Nice!
brilliant looking fwd to the next chapter 👏 👏 👏

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@addicted25

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#968

Originally posted by: -Bhavi

Finally I found someone who is voicing this out openly.👏

Main lead performing any crime in name of heroism is unacceptable. I was surprised myself when i read so many FFs where in the name of dark stories Arnav or the lead is doing all those acts and when people used to support this act it kept me mthinking about what the girls/teenagers think about their future spouse😕.

Lives of young women is too precious to be spend after someone who needs help from Professional to treat their mental illness. The way shows and stories portrays that a women can change a man is like a fairy tale which happens only in books and when I see the young women on this forum taking sides of such male characters I feel sorry for them and do wonder if in real life would they allow themselves for such spouse/BF? No its not romantic for a man to hurt a women and then show care for that person. Period no second doubt about it. Its sadistic desire and its a illness which needs treatment. Any form of emotional or physical torture is a NO NO and this is a closed statement not open for debate in any form.

PS - Wanted to first comment on your story but this comment of yours I could not ignore it😃

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Totally agree. First in the show, Arnav was indeed potrayed as a man of this world but that doesnt make him a rapist , yes he had anger issues, yes he had bedded women, but that doesnt make him a bad guy. He cared for his family, his whole family which was also shown, even spoiling his mammi because she gave him her jewellery to fund AR and begin his career. 2nd This is fiction. In reality a man who abuses a woman has stepped over a line, once done, will always be guilt free of doing it again. If there is any girl out there thinking their man will change... think again. Rape is not a fairy tale, men dont change, if they can abuse their physical strength over a women, they will continue to fo so.

Edited by addicted25 - 10 years ago

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#969

Fabulous. . One meet with Akash has brought a new life in Khushi. . And this came with the knowledge that she has a friend who didn't judge her and accepted her after everything. . Or maybe bcz Akash connects her to Anjali.. But I m glad to have seen this free side of khushi. .

Loved their outing.. Akash a happy and jolly from outside has hidden a depth of pain inside him.. Its good he shared his past with Khushi. . Bcz the only who can completly understand him, could relate to him is khushi.. Haven't she be accused to something, she is not guilty of.. Loved how Khushi changed Akash mood in an instant. . And I think La and Akki will make a great couple..

Arnav was spying on his brother and his friend. . Awww.. He was jealous seeing them together. . Poor fellow.. What does khushi turn him into.. 😉..

Arnav is guilty of judging and accusing khushi. . he called her, hundred time!!! But she didn't accept his call.. Well why else he accept after being a jerk to her.. But good thing is that they could resolve it in person. .

Loved the update. .