Kush Rang Bahara Shivika ff

Kush Rang Bahara
Part 1
I have been thinking of writing a fan fiction for a very long time...and kept on pushing it...but shivika...their freaking chemistry and maestro performances by Nakul Mehta & Surbhi Chandana got me obsessed...so I'm taking the plunge... Starting with my first ever ff...asking for your support, suggestions & criticisms.

I am starting with the episode of 17th October 2016.
Shivaay tells omru that he can sense Anika and right now also he is feeling her presence. Rudra waves at Anika and says hai Anika di...Shivaay says hello...and he is surprised to find Anika there...he gets up...omru leave the room showing a thumbs up.
Shivaay stammers and tries to apologise...
Anika : apne to kal hi sorry bol diya na...woh hi tikke... koshish mat karna..aap se nahi hoga...mujhe kaam he me jaa ri hu...
Anika tries to leave...Shivaay holds her hand and brings her close to him...Anika is confused by his sudden change...he hugs her.
Dadi calls her..she runs away...Shivaay wonders what happened to him

Dadi : Anika, hum ghar me ek puja rakenge..itna kuch hogaye na isliye...tum jaake ye Panditji ko dedo..aur list leke avo na...
Anika : Tikke dadi
Shivaay comes and both of them get tensed
Dadi : Billu..isko saath leke chaal
Shivika :Dadi...par...
Dadi: mujhe kuch nahi sun na...saath chal dono
Shivika leaves...omru n dadi smile

At the temple...
Anika gets the list and comes downstairs ...Shivaay waits near the car.
Some People: yeh toh wahi ladki he na...tv mein deka waali..kitne besharam...yese ghumte kon...
Shivaay gets angry.
They get into the car...they reach home.

Shivaay tells about this to dadi and omru. Dadi calls everyone..
Dadi : hamari vajse...sab Anika par ungli uttare...jab tak lok ye sabh bul nahi jaungi...tab tak Anika yehan rahungi...
Omru, Prinku, Jhanvi, Pinky, Somu all support Dadi
Anika: Nahi dadi ye sahi nahi...he
Shivaay : Dadi kehre na...maan ja
Omru: Shivaay baby...(looks teasingly)
Anika : Par billuji...meri baat toh...
Dadi : koi behas nahi..faisla hogaya...sahil ko bhi le aana..
Anika : ha...tikke dadi...

Shivaay's room...
Om : Tum Anika ko support karne chayiye...woh bahut hurt ho..
Shivaay: hah..he..
Om: Shivaay tum ye baat samjna he...ki woh tumhari dil ko chooti he
Shivaay : aise kuch bhi nahi..bas meri vajse aab wo issi situation pe...nahi toh..hum equal nahi he...woh ek middle class ladki ho..
Anika stands at the door...she hears everything. She remembers Shivaay calling her road trash and firing her...she also reminisces their nok jhoks n good times. .. Shivaay feels her presence and looks up. Anika cries and runs out. ...Shivaay hesitates for a moment...then he rushes out behind her.

Precap : Anika cries...covering her face...

Please let me know if you like this ff...I'll post longer episodes

i m loving this.. please continue sooonish.

I just loved it...
do continue soon...

Awesome start

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Kush Rang Bahara
Part 2

So here comes my 2nd episode...as I'm having college everydayI find it difficult to post daily...but I'll post as much as I can and longer ones on Sundays as Sunday there is no IB and thats too sad...
So lets continue...

Anika covers her mouth and cries...
Anika: Billuji ne pehle bhi mujhe bahut rolaya...par ab ithna dard kyun hore...
Shivaay kneels down before her...she gets up an tries to leave. Shivaay holds her hand.
Shivaay: Mein...mein..tume hurt nahi karna chate..mujhe bas accept kar ne me difficulty he.
Anika: Aap kuch mat kahiye...me tho sadak..
Shivaay covers her mouth..
Shivaay : I'm sorry Anika...I'm really sorry...me tume dard me nahi dek sakta...
He hugs her tight a tear escapes his eyes. Shivaay comes to senses, he breaks the hug and hurries inside. Anika stands still, unable to move...

Shivaays room...
Om : Shivaay tum Anika se pyaar karta he...
Shivaay : Om...mujhe ye sab ke liye waqt nahi he...kal board meeting he...
Om : Sabko banao...par khud bewakoof mat ho jao Shivaay...
He walks out angrily...
Shivaay: Ha mein usse...usse...pata nahi...par unki bina mujhe nahi raha sakte...par badepapa kya sochenga...prinku ko mene roka...mujhe tia se shaadi karna padengi...meri family ki isat ko bachene ke liye...
He gets sad...

Next morning...Anika and Sahil enter oberoi mansion..
Sahil : Anika di...kya ye ghar aur museum...kitna over lagre..
Anika : Chup kar Sahil
Shivaay comes dressed in suit...eyelock
Sahil: Ye baggad billa aur paanika ke beech kuch toh chalre...
Rudra: Tume bhi laga na..mujhe bhi...same pinch no back pinch.

Rudra and Sahil leave...
Sahil sees Sumo... (Ankho mein teri plays)
They go together...

Dadi tells omru about Shivika shaadi...they tell that's not possible Shivaay won't agree...dadi smiles...they make a plan...somu n prinku too join...

Om sits sadly...
S: Kya hua Om...
O: Mera aur Ridhima ka break up hua
S: What..but how?
O : Woh..commitment chatha he..par me us ke lye tayar nahi hoon
S: Par kyun...u guys are compatible huh..
O: Hah..har rishte masboot hone ke liye pyaar ka sarurat hote he...unke liye ek achi proposal bhi aya ghar me force bhi kar re...woh aur wait nahi karenge...
Par zindagi bar saat rahne ki wada karne se pehle bahut sochna hai...galti hui..toh kabhi sudar nahi sakta..

S: Tum dil chota mat kar...koi tho solution avungi..

The story leaps forward by a month. Shivaay feels good in Anika's company. They start to feel some strange connection and it becomes obvious that they start to understand each other completely and stand for each other at times of need.

Shivaay comes out his room...he is a bit tensed about today's board meeting. He sees Anika sitting on the couch with Om and feels relaxed.

A: Om tu sach mein bahut cute ho...

She pulls his cheeks, he blushes...Shivaay gets a bit irritated.

He gets even more worried as he had already started being possessive...he couldn't even stand Anika showing more love to anyone...even his brothers.

Anika: Billuji aap uss kone me kya kar re...aur parishan bhi lagre kya hua?

Shivaay is lost in thoughts. .

A: billuji... (She pats him)

S: huh...ahh..

A: kya hua apko

S: Nothing...meeting he..isliye

A: apne prepare kiya na...sab kuch tik ho jaungi...

Anika held Shivaay's hand and assured him...he felt so relieved...he wondered why that all his problems felt so small...he himself the great sso...felt like a kid in front of her...a kid who craved for her attention, her care.

Whether he realised it or not...he was madly, deeply and irrevocably in love with her.

Anika hearing Rudy yelling her name ran out waving him athums up...

Precap : Dadi says...Mujhe Anika ki bare mein baat karne sabse...Shivaay tume kya kehna hai

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Kush Rang Bahara
Part 3
Here its Maria again with episode 3 of this ff...so I would like to thank all of you for supporting me...I know my hindi is pathetic...my friends were telling me...somI'm going to write the dialogues too in English...from next update..

So lets continue...

Dadi enters followed by Oberoi women
Dadi: mujhe Anika ki bare me baath karne hi sabse..unki shaadi ki bare me..Is bare mein tume kya kehna hai Shivaay??
S: Dadi yeh practical nahi...it will affect our status..

D : Mujhe aisa nahi lagta..abhi bhi bahut karoch ayyi he...tumari shaadi tia se pakki hogayi...me om se baat kiya da...usse mansur he...
Shivaay is confused and shocked..he tried to make sense of dadi' s words...aab breakup..shaadi..om
O: Muje Anika hamesha acha laga da...par mein yese kabhi nahi socha...hamari soch milti he

Rudy joins them..
R: O mujhe toh goosebumps aare...ho om (kisses him) Anika bhaabi...
Shivaay is dumbstruck...different thoughts rushed through his mind. They all knew it na...still...how could they he felt a sharp pain deep in his heart...he was scared whether he would suffer a break down...it was more than he can take...he should keep himself away from her and also see her being someone else's. Dadi knew, Omru knew. But he denied every time so they weren't wrong, they would have ended up believing him. He hoped that Anika will come and say NO...
Seeing Shivaay's doomed expression

Om started off...

O: Shivaay mujhe yeh koon kandhan surname ye sabh mahine nahilagte mujhe insaan aur sach mahine lagte...aur rishta mein ek sachi achi insaan se judta hai surname se nahi...
Shivaay wanted to say something but his throat parched up...and words wouldn't just come out..
It was his own brother...still...the thought of losing Anika killed him...
Rudra : Anikara kitna cute sa couple name he na
...Shitia se kahi syaada acha lagte he...

Rudra had a score there...but Shivaay was in no mood to enjoy that joke.
The act of joining Anika' s name with Om's made shivaay feel hapless...he wanted to hit rudra for doing so...
S: Mujhe yeh sabh sahi nahi lagta...ek bar badepapa se baat ki jiye na...
He walks out...Anika enters..
Dadi : Hum yeha tumhare baare me baat kar re de...
Anika: Mere bhare mein??
Anika notices Shivaay's lost expression and worries... (yeh kya hua billuji ko... bahut parishan lagre...pehle tikk hu da...)
Dadi: Hum tumhari shaadi karne wale he...om se
Anika felt like she was hit hard with something...om aur mein shaadi...yeh kya ho re...woh to meri dost...bhai jaise he na...aur billuji...she felt miserable. She couldn't speak...
D: Om ne maan liya...aab tumhari baari he...
A: ...Dadi
D: Tum sochkar batao Anika
Shivaay steps again to throw another excuse. But it became terrible fall through.
S: This will become a big stain on our family.
Anika feels angry...its been a month since she came to stay at the oberois. Shivaay occasional expressions of love and sudden disappearances made her frustrated.
She knew that she loved him and he too loved her, but his ego wouldn't allow him to accept this fact. But she needed acceptance.

A: Mujhe qubool hai dadi...agar ghar me sabko mansur he tho...

Shivaay went speechless. The trauma was too much. He felt as the whole world crumbled over him and he was buried beneath all those debris..

Rudy, Somu n Prinku : Ab se aap Anika baabhi ho...,

Shivaayleft the place in haste, hetook his car and drove off fast, parking it on a desolate place. He couldn't hold back anymore...it was a breakdown. ...tears rushed down his cheeks, he cried loudly.

S: Anika mujhe chodke mat jao...I need u

Back at the Oberoi's Anika couldn't believe herself...she had given her consent...as she was angry with Shivaay for his sso waali comment. But now everyone was celebrating. ...preparing for hers n Om's shaadi.

Tej's room

Tej : Kya Anika sahi ladki he om ke liye...lok hum par hasengi

Jhanvi : Anika achi ladki hai...shayad unki wajase aap aur om ki beej ki dooriyam kam pad sakte...

Tej sighs

T: Agar Om kush he toh...me iss bare meine kuch aur nahi kahenga..

Anika heard this...she sighed

A: Meri wajase iss gharme koi problem nahi aa sakti..

The landline rung loudly...as nobody else was around Anika picked it up.

Caller: Shivaay sir??

A: kaun bolre?

Caller: Mam ye office se he...Sir ab tak nahi aya...bahoti important presentation he...kya ham kisi aur ko bechne hai...Sir phone bhi nahi lere.

Tej enters...Anika hands over the phone.

Anika: billuji toh bahut pehle nikal chuki di...ab tak nahi pahunja...kaha gaya hoga...woh bhi...meeting ko chodke...

Anika wonders...she suddenly gets tensed.

Its 12 am...everyone is sleeping...

Anika is sitting on the couch restlessly...

She hears some noise outside...looks through the eye hole and opens the door...she finds Shivaay...drunk

A: apne sharab piya billuji

S: Tum kon he?

A: Mein...Meint tho..Apki beti

S: Tume tia se koi resemblance he nahi...Anika jaise lagre hai

He smiles at her widely...and is about to fall.

A: Billuji dheere...

She makes him lie on his bed and he keeps on holding her hand...

A: billuji haath to chod..

S: Paanika...mat ja

He sleeps on her shoulder..she takes off his suit and shoes...her bracelet gets stuck in Shivaay's watch...it breaks and hangs down..she.covers him with a blanket and leaves...switching off the lights..

Dadi watches...she gets..worried

Dadi: bilu ki halat karaab hore..

Anika sees Om she smiles slightly at him and proceeds to her room...she sits near her bed and cries...

A: billuji...mein apko tho nahi bul sakte...

Its morning...

Shivaay gets up feeling heavy...he tries to recollect past day's incident.

Precap: Shivaay takesAnika's bracelet, he holdsit tight and keeps it safe in his locker.



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