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The story starts on the engagement day of raghav n kalpi where kamla n vithal including everybody in the chawl gets to know that kalpi loves n wishes to get married to raghav not sammy n this comes as a biggest shock for everyone n in shock kamla even end up slapping kalpi n refuses to accept their relation n told her that if from now on she continues her relationship with raghav then she is dead for her,she will gone break all the ties with her but in the end after lots of hard work finally both raghav n kalpi manges to make kamla agree for their relation n she acceptes both of them n their relation whole heartedly n then again everything gets back to normal like it was before n then finally after lots of drama, rona-dhona both raghav n kalpi gets happily engaged with everyone blessings but this thing doesnt go well with manda because she cant see kamla n her family happy so without anyone's knowledge she quickly took out her phone n informs everything to neetu n even send her the pic of raghav n kalpi's engagement n after seeing both raghav n kalpi happy n smiling together in pic as usual neetu start burning in jealous,she gets busy in thinking or u can say in making a plan to separate both raghav n kalpi n get pakhi n raghav together whereas on the other side unaware about all this both raghav n kalpi spend some quality n romantic time each other at chawl terrace in alone after their engagement n even everybody thought not to disturb them n let them with each other alone for sometime as both of them had gone through a lot so they both need some time n space n who can stop manda she even comes to terrace to spy on both raghav n kalpi as per neetu's instruction n some what for her entertainment too n after this just like their engagement every function of both raghav n kalpi went happily everyone enjoys a lot n now finally its the D-day the wedding day of both of them,everyone was very happy n specially kalpi she was on cloud9,she still cant able to believe that today her biggest dream is all set to get fullfilled for her no other day can be better then today but still she was very neverous or u can say scared,since morning she fills like something bad is going to happen which will gone to change their lifes n thats why she tries to call raghav many a times but he didnt even receives her call for even once which scares her even more but then vithal n kamla Cheers up her n assures her that today nothing bad will gone to happen,today she will surely which is meant to be her's which makes kalpi smile a bit but even though everyone is happy with this alliance one person is still their who is burning in jealous n that is none other then manda,she stoop so low in her jealousy that she even tries to burn kalpi's wedding dress which is saved by vithal at the very end moment,he warns manda just to stay away from this wedding n dare she tries to snatch or to create a problem in her daughter's happiness he will not spare her n manda silently left from their...in evening with the help of her beauticians kalpi gets totally ready for her wedding,she was looking absolute stunning breath taking in her bridal lehenga just like a angle who had just now come down from heaven n after this starts the never ending wait for raghav,time is running out for marriage n prist many a times calls for groom but raghav or anyone else is nowhere to be seen,kalpi was sitting in mandap n desperately waiting for her raghav but their was no sign of raghav,the fear if something bad would had happened with him is killing her heart,now more then herself she is worried for raghav n thats why she tries to call him n sammy many a time but their phones was switched off,she prays to god to keep her raghav safe n to send him here as soon as possible n its like even god too listen her pray n thats why he send raghav,he comes their in his car n as soon as kalpi saw him she quickly runs towards him n soon engulf him in a tight hug but raghav doesnt respond to the hug he stand still which shocks everyone but then another shocks comes out for them as raghav must have come their but he was not alone he had come their with his newly wedded wife n that is nine other then pakhi which left everyone in a complete state of shock n specially kalpi she doesn't know what to say or how to react,the day which she thought to be her best day had turned into worst day for her, this day ends up like a worst nightmare for her, all her dreams,hopes which she thought will get fullfilled with raghav's presence in her life had now shattered into lots of broken pieces n that broken pieces r badly paining n hurting her heart n soul,the one whom she thought will give her lifelong happiness had given her lifelong unforgettable pain but still she doesn't blame raghav for all this because she very well knows that it was written in her destiny that she was never meant to be get loved by someone firstly she never get her mother's love since her childhood n now even raghav too left her in mid way so why to blame anyone,she accepted her destiny because she had no other choice left but all this doesn't go well with vithal,he cant able to see his daughter in this condition it kills him like hell so to let out all his frustration n angry he start beating raghav n everyone tries to stop but fails,he beats raghav like hell n raghav doesnt say a word because he know that whatever he had done was not at all acceotable but he wants to explain everything to kalpi but vithal doesn't give him that chance n was about to kill him but before he can do that kamla requests kalpi to stop her baba n kalpi told her baba to leave him by giving her swear whereas manda start bad mouthing about kalpi,about her character n soon everyone else too join her which effects kalpi a lot,she had become a stone whereas after almost skipping from death raghav tries to touch kalpi but she moved back n start going back to her home but raghav stops her n request her to just listen to him once to which kalpi told him that raghav sir whatever u did with me for that I snatch the right to give me any kind of explanation from u,I dont need ur kind of explanation because ur any kind of explanation wont make things back to normal n now I request u to just get lost from here n if u have any shame left then please dont show me ur face again n never come here again saying so she went upstairs to her house whereas vithal throws raghav out of the chawl n soon one by one everyone disappers to their respective house leaving vithal,kamla n pakhya behind whereas on the other side kalpi just closed her house door n cries her heart out,her crying sounds can easily be listened by three of them because they were just outside the house only whereas on his way raghav tries to call many a times...first two or three time kalpi cuts his calls but when he kept on calling her she just throw away her phone in angry leading it broke into many a pieces just like her heart but then soon kalpi compose herself n opens the door to let her family in n as they all come inside they tries to pacify kalpi but she assures them that she is fine n silently went to change her wedding dress n after changing she just pretends to sleeps without saying anything to anyone n her silence is killing them but they all thinks to give her sometime to accept this fact because it is very necessary for her to accept all this...next morning everyone gets up n finds kalpi missing,they tries to finds her in every possible place where she can be but she in nowhere whereas on the other side kalpi was seen breaking down in the middle of road n crying her heart out but after sometime even her tears too dried up but her heart is crying very badly,she just want to know what was her mistake in all this,why all this happens with her,why she gets punished without any reason, why she n her family has to suffer why,was she was that much bad that everyone left her or use her for their own purpose just like her aai n raghav,she wants her answers but from whom whereas after unable to trace kalpi kamla calls pakhi to enquire that might kalpi had come their but no she was not their too,she had not gone their too...

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kalpi was nowhere to be found n the news of kalpi's sudden disappearance makes raghav very restless,he just want to run away n finds out his kalpi but he somewho controls himself n his emotions for his mom n for their revenge but still he was very much worried for her so deep inside his heart he keeps praying to god to keep his kalpi safe n sound where every she is n not to let anything happens to her n its like god had listen to his prayers because after sometime pakhi gets a call from her kamla maa that kalpi had returned back home safely, she just went out for some walk nothing else which gives a sigh of relief to raghav n he thanks god for listening his prayer n then gets ready for office...when he,pakhi n sammy was in office kalpi to comes to the office to return back all the gifts which raghav had gifted her n specially their engagement ring which always made her remember about her broken dreams n shattered life but in office before she can meet raghav all the office staff start bad mouthing about kalpi,they all start taunt her or actually accusing her to be greedy for money n thats why she thought to trap raghav sir but sir flops her plan by marrying pakhi so now she had come back with her new plan or to find a new target n hearing some noise from outside even raghav,sammy n pakhi too comes out of raghav's cabin but before raghav could do or say anything to them kalpi just silently puts the curtain infront of raghav n went from their without even uttering anything,raghav follows her n tries to stop her as he badly needs to talk to her but kalpi didn't pay any head to him n just went away from their n as she comes back to the chawl their too people start taunting n insulting her which again n again wound her wounded heart even more but in mid of all this manda was the only one who is enjoying all this a lot,it was too much fun for her n after this nothing much happens the entire day but yeah the kalpi who use to be very charged n energetic girl,full of life has now turned into pale n a silent girl n this thing is hurting everyone a lot but even they cant do anything because they all tried to talk to kalpi specially kamla but instead of talking with them n sharing her pain kalpi always simply decided to walk out,she had buried everything inside her heart n doesnt let it come out n in night to worsen her pain even more kalma informs vithal,kalpi n pakhya that tomorrow morning pakhi baby will going to come here with everyone including raghav to spend her entire day with them n for her pag phera rasam too to which pakhya n kalpi doesnt say anything n simple nod their heads but this thing doesnt go well with vithal,he just burst out on kamla n accuse her to be the worse mother for their children's,he told her or u can say gives her a reality check that may be she had become a good mother to everyone else in the world but sorry to say she even fails to be a mother to her own kids,its better to be a born as orphan instead of having a mother like her,while vithal was saying all that kamla thought that at least her kids would support her n will stand for her but shocking to her pakhya supports her baba by saying that baba its just a totally waste to say or to make aai understands anything as she will never going to listen to us or never will stops caring about that pakhi so its just better to leave it,why to stress ourselves for the one who dont even care about us,who dont even have the time for her own family n moreover in our childhood days only she had already shown both of us that how much she loved n cared for us that is zero percent because if she would have ever loved us na then that day she would have saved kalpi first not pakhi when they both were getting drowned in river,if u were not their at that time baba then today our kalpi will surely be not with us,she would have left us n this world too n trust me it would had never hurt our aai because she had her so called pakhi baby na whereas kalpi prefers to remain silent on this topic...hearing all this kamla just bow down her head in shame n guilty because she very well knows that whatever vithal n pakhya is saying is right,for the well being of other n specially pakhi she always keeping avoiding her own kids n her family,she keeps neglecting their happiness, she never spend time with them,pakhi was always her first priority,always for pakhi's happiness she had kept all her other relations at stake n that was the result of all that,that today her own family was against her but still even though kamla was in guilty she doesn't stop thinking about her pakhi baby,about her happiness so she requested vithal n others to let pakhi come tomorrow which shocks everyone that how can someone be so shameless but then kalpi sings her baba through her eyes to just let it be n let aai do whatever she wants so vithal told kamla to do whatever she wants but just be careful that it doesn't hurt his kids otherwise he will not spare her,hearing this kamla gets very happy n excited n in her excitement she one by one tries to hug three of them but three of them just step back n left from their leaving kamla all alone...next day kamla gets up early in the mrng n start preparing all pakhi's n raghav's favourite dish whereas other side pakhi n raghav both were excited, pakhi because she will going to meet her kamla maa n raghav because atleast he will able to see his kalpi n may be he gets a chance to talk to her whereas while kamla was preparing everything with the continuous sound of something or other everyone's sleep gets disturbed n they curse kamla under their breath n gets up to freshen n in mrng when pakhi reaches the chawl with raghav,sammy n gauri kamla gives them all a grand welcome whereas raghav's eyes kept searching his kalpi n kalpi she tries as much as she can to not to come infront of raghav n thats why even in their house too she keeps avoiding eye contact with raghav n always kept herself busy in something or other n then when pakhi n everyone else where having their breakfast kalpi silently comes out without anyone's notice or u can say nobody had a time to notice her...while she was standing alone outside her house n lost in her thoughts someone taps on her shoulder n as she turns the person reveals to be sammy,for sometime they both keep standing like statue,no one says nothing because both of them couldn't figure out that from where to start n how to start talking but after sometime with lots of courage sammy apologise to kalpi on raghav's behalf n told her that I know n can understand that whatever raghav did with u was not at all right n acceptable but please for once talk to him n let him explain his side too which kalpi told him that sammy sir please their is no need to apologise on raghav's behalf,u must apologise on ur behalf,for ur mistake which shocks sammy n he ask her which mistake r u talking about kalpi...sammy sir dont u know that raghav sir had come back to India just for one n only thing that is his revenge,to destory kapoor's n thats why he was trying to trap pakhi so inspite of knowing everything why did u pushed him towards me,why u made him realise that he had start falling for me,he loves me,why u help him in convincing me,why u always keep supporting him n why u ruins my life to fill happiness in ur friends life,to remove his emptiness,lonleyness why u used me,why u spoil my life sir,u know what sammy sir I wish that I would have never meet u or raghav sir then my life must have been very much easier, yeah raghav sir is responsible for my condition n for all this but more then him u were responsible for all this,for all the complicated relations,for all our complicate lifes why did u do this sammy sir,why u played with my life sir n moreover about ur saying to give a chance to ur friend to explain himself then clearly listen sir I would rather perfer dieing instead of talking to ur so called friend understand it sir n make ur friend understand it too kalpi speaks out...hearing kalpi sammy gets totally numb yeah he knows whatever kalpi is saying was right but still he never thoughts not even in his wildest dreams that kalpi will burst out all that like this...
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while sammy was trying to come out with this sudden shock kalpi left from their as she gets one of her friends call,who had asked her to come to her place urgently n after this entire day passed away but kalpi doesnt return back n even her phone was switched off n slowly the night too went away n the sun for a new day of a new mrng pops out but still kalpi doesnt return back n moreover their was no sign of kalpi,even police too were finding her but they too doesnt get any information about her n then sammy tells everyone about his conservation with kalpi n told them that since mrng kalpi was very much stress out what if she does something with her whereas kalpi she just vainsh into thin air just like she never exsits n vithal who was very desperate with this sudden development blames kamla for everything n warns her that if anything's happens to his daughter then he will never going to forgive her n will break all the ties with her but kamla was least interested in all this because right now she is very much busy with her pakhi baby,all her attention was only on pakhi n like this after this sudden unexpected incident one years had been passed away n in this one years kalpi never returns back nor anyone gets any information regarding her but one thing was for sure that in this one years relation between vithal n kamla gets tiffed a lot with each passing day n now vithal n pakhya doesn't even like talking with kamla,they both usually perfers to stay out of the house only whereas in this one years n now on also kamla always keeps on trying to mend her relation with her family but nothing turns out to be in her favour,instead of sorting out everything gets more messed up but still she never gives up nor loose her hopes but the biggest question which always roams in everybody's mind was where is kalpi,what happen one years back that she disappers like that,was she really so fed up with that accident that she hurt herself,was she alive or not,will she ever return back or not but above all this as its said na that time n life waits for no one if we didnt run with the time it will leave us behind n will never return back so like this though everyone still remembers kalpi n misses her but with the time everyone moves ahead in their lifes n thats why today raghav n pakhi is all set to celebrate their first wedding anniversary totally unaware of the fact that this day will going to change everyone's life for forever,some past secrets will going to unfold in present, all the equation of every relation will going to change,everything will get messed up again,its pay back time for some people, every person n relation will get tested,its time to test everybody's patience level in short everything will going to change...in night party was going on in full swing, everybody was enjoying a lot though raghav doesnt like this a lot but still he had do this, he had to bear pakhi for his public imagie,he had to show the entire world that everything is fine between them though it is not raghav doesn't like a bit,he cant tolerate her even for a sec,he just hate her to the core but still he had to show off n best way to show off was this kind of lavishing party will anything else can be better then this for show off but in mid of the party something take place which shocks everyone n its when raghav was insulting prem infront of pakhi,her family n everybody else though pakhi was not at all effected by her brothers insult but it do hurt her parents, they cant able to bear their son insult but still they can't do but till now they doesn't know their son properly n when raghav was insulting prem suddenly unknown to anyone prem comes their n say jiju if u want to say anything to me then say it on my face na why r u back bitching,well leave all that n first of all I'm very sorry that I couldn't able to come to ur wedding n doesn't even able to congratulate u n secondly though I couldn't come to ur wedding but still I had a amazing surprise for u both not actually for u both but for everyone which will going to left everyone in a complete state of shock,I'm sure floor will skip from ur feets,everyone will feel like hell in this heaven...hearing word surprise everyone gets confused n keep looking at each other but raghav ask him what surprise prem which will going to shock me to which prem replied not suprise jiju but a atom bomb for u who will crush ur ego, who will make u loose this win game of urs n make me win in this lost game,who will kill u every sec of ur life,whom u wants more then anything else in ur life jiju...ok fine then do tell me prem where is our gift, now I desperately wants to see the gift,tell me raghav said...ok fine jiju if u were so desperate to see ur gift then wait let me call ur gift n saying so he shouts that please someone brings my gifts inside but no one listen n nothing comes inside to which everyone start laughing on prem including raghav but then controlling his laughter raghav told to prem that in this world their is no such thing who can crush my ego, who can make me bend down...dont be so overconfident mr singhania, their is something prem replied with a smrik to which raghav again told him fine prem if u r saying so then just prove urself,show me who can crush my ego, can make me bow down,if their is something to show then show us,where is ur gift,whom u bring to insult me,defeat me n then before he could say anything further me a voice comes from the entrance n everyone looks their whereas a devilish comes on prem's face n as everybody is looking towards entrance they all could clearly see someone's but his or her face was not clearly visible because of dim light but then kalpana makes a grand entry after complete one year in the party as she comes to the light shocking to everyone n the only word which raghav could able to utter was kalpi but then prem speaks up n say correction Mr singhania not kalpi but Mrs kalpana prem kapoor,my wife n my life which comes as a another shock for everyone n specially raghav just like 440 volt ka n then only everyone actually clearly notice that she was wearing mangalsutra n had applied sindur but inspite of all this raghav moves to hug her but before he could reache to her prem comes ahead n forwards his hand towards kalpi which she happily accepts n with this prem pulls kalpi towards her n kiss her forhead much to raghav's jealousy...raghav was gritting his teeth in angry n was thinking to just smash that prem's face for touching his kalpi but he somewho controls himself but our jagat mata comes ahead n tries to slap prem but before she could that someone holds her hand n that someone was none other then kalpi,she warns her aai that she wont bear if someone hurts her husband that too without any reason n if that someone was her aai also hearing this everyone was hell shocked by kalpi's changed behaviour so pakhi asked her what happens to u kalpi,who can behave like that with ur aai...aai she was not my aai she is urs aai, may be I was her daughter but she always n always loved u n only u, she is my aai just only for name sake but in actually she was ur aai n u were her daughter, I had no relation with her n secondly what is wrong with u all why u all r looking at me like this as if u all r seeing some ghost,what's wrong if I'm living my life for myself n not for others,why should I always live my life for others n scarifice my everything,why cant be selfish for myself, why I can't live my life on my own terms n conditions,its not wrong to be selfish for sometime rather then alway being selfless to others is it kalpi replied...no kalpi it is not wrong to live ur life but where were u in this one year,why u left us like that n why pakhya asked her,hearing this pakhi gets hell nervous whereas kalpi enjoyed the fear on her face n to worsen her condition even more kalpi asked her pakhi will u tell everyone the truth of that day or should I do it on ur behalf,hearing this everyone looks towards pakhi n raghav asked her pakhi what is all this,what is kalpi talking about tell us but pakhi remains silent so kalpi told everyone that I know she wont able to confess her crime so on her behalf I will tell u.
Edited by _RagNaMyLove_ - 8 years ago
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kalpi was about to say everything but before that she looks towards pakhi who were nodding her head in no n requesting her not speak or say anything to anyone n even folding her hand infront of her but kalpi doesnt pay any head to her n told everyone that pakhi was the one n soul reason of her sudden disappearance,one year back the day when pakhi comes to chawl for her pag phera rasam n I went to meet one of my friend at that time while I was returning back some goons block my way n tries to kill me but they doesn't know that in hostel I use to be black belt in karate so I handle all of them very easily n beats them black n blue n moreover ask them that why they all want to kill so to save their life's they told me that someone had given them one crore to kill me n that someone else was none other then pakhi but that day before I could ask that goons anything else or inform anyone about all that some more goons comes their n even I was quite hurt so I just escape from their n to save myself I boarded a unknown train n even without knowing its destination but that train takes me to the right destination that is delhi where I find prem,my happiness,my smile she says n smiling looks at prem whereas seeing all this raghav's angry reaches at peak n he end up slapping pakhi n no one comes ahead to save her or to support her whereas prem told to kalpi that now they should leave as their work is done here to which kalpi nodded n they both start leaving but raghav stops them n request them to stay sometime with them...why u wants us to stay here is it because so that u can get sometime to get kalpi back in ur life if so then jiju stop dreaming because I will never let this happen buf still if u r requesting so much then how can we deny ur request we will stay here with u all for one whole week but for now we both r really very tried n we badly needs rest so quickly tell us where we can stay prem asked...u can stay in ur own room prem raghav replied to which both prem n kalpi thanks him n start heading towards their room but in mid of stairs kalpi stops,turns n with a smrik told to pakhi that I'm very very sorry dear that I spoil ur party but if u guys still want to continue ur party u can we both dont have any problem what say prem... yeah u guys can we really dont have any problem prem replied...no the party is already over u both just go n rest raghav said so they both headed towards prem room whereas all the guests left accept kamla n family because raghav had requested them to stay their with them for next one week so that they all can be close to kalpi n pakhi well she just tries to apologise to everyone but no one listen to her pleadings whereas as soon as both prem n kalpi reaches the room they both burst into laughter,they were laughing like mads n their laughters can easily be listened by everyone who were downstairs or actually they both wants everybody to listen their laughing sound to which pakhi vows to destory kalpi's life for once n all n with this everyone wents to sleep in their respective rooms n kamla n family in guest rooms but raghav he doesn't let pakhi come inside their room so with no other option pakhi has to sleep in the hall but kalpi has not changed that much,she still cares for other n thats why when she saw pakhi sleeping without a blanket she covers up her with her own blanket n prem who had seen this hugs her n when they both were hugging raghav saw them n thought that he had to do something quckily to get back his kalpi as soon as possible...next mrng everyone gathers at dinning table but prem n kalpi was nowhere to be seen so raghav enquires about them from servants who told him that they both were not in their room which makes raghav very desperate but then he hears some giggling sounds so as he turns he saw prem n kalpi come from outside so he enquires them about where they both had gone to which prem very simply replied we both went for jogging whereas raghav is busy in checking out kalpi, he thought kalpi had changed a lot she start wearing much mordern n stylish clothes,she had changed her attitude now she is more confident n bold n when prem saw raghav checking out his wife ge told kalpi to go n freshen up to which kalpi nods n left whereas prem went into the kitchen to prepare some eatable for him n kalpi to which raghav told them to have breakfast with them but prem denies by saying that kalpi cant eat all this because its not good for her health n before raghav could ask anything else he left n after sometime he is ready with some eatable for both of them but before that he gives some medicines n a injection to kalpi to which he told everyone that they r some vitamins n calcium tablet n injection when they all asked him about it but kalpi makes yucks faces while having it but still prem gives her n then likes this 4 days passed away n now just three days r left but still raghav n pakhi doesn't able to do anything,they cant able to separate kalpi n prem,their every plan always backfires on them only n now today is prem's birthday so kalpi thought to make it special for prem so she gets up early in the mrng n by herself she made a beautiful cake for him n even invites their friends too n together they all celebrates prem's birthday in the mrng n even cuts the cake,neetu n sahil infact everyone thought that prem will feed the first bite of cake to any of his parents but shocking to everyone he feeds kalpi n she too feeds her n after this kalpi asked prem that what gift he wants for his birthday to which prem ask her will u give me whatever I will ask from u to which kalpi promise him to give him everything whatever he ask so he ask the one day of her life for himself that is the one complete day of her's for himself n only himself to which kalpi happily aggress n goes to change whereas raghav who was boiling in jealousy n angry told prem that prem u wanted to insult me na u did it,u want to hurt me u did it,u want to make me loose u did it,u want to crush me ego u did it so now please give me back my kalpi as I cant live without her,please give me back my love I request u,if u want I will give u back ur everything but then u have to give me back what is mine deal...I'm not raghav n I cant be like u,I'm not dumbo like u to leave kalpi for this so called money n moreover I had not marry kalpi to seek my revenge from u, I had marry her because I love her yes I love her from the bottom of my heart,she is my love,my life,my breathe,my everything n if u even give me urs money too with mine then also I will not going to leave kalpi,yeah once she was urs but today she is mine only mine n ur so called money cant buy my love so I refuse ur deal,u keep ur money with u n I will keep my love with me understand u better understand raghav n yeah next time dont raise ur finer on me n if u do then do remember that three fingers r pointing towards u also,after this before anyone could say anything kalpi comes down n she was looking absolutely stunning in her baby pink net saree but all the matching accessories n both raghav n prem cant able to take off their eyes from her but when kalpi holds prem's hand something died inside raghav,he feels the same pain which kalpi felt when he left her on mandap n he gets hyper so he just tightly holds her hands n ask her why kalpi why did u do this to me,why did u cheat me with this prem why... hearing this kalpi firstly frees herself from raghav's grip n then start clapping n says wow raghav u r amazing,great,u did a mistake n now blaming me for everything,if u forgot then let me remind u,u r the one who cheat me,left me,broke my heart then how can u blame me,if u can marry someone else then why cant I marry someone else,if u can move on then why cant I,u r the one who broke our relationship then now what right u had to ask me anything tell me Mr singhania...hearing all this raghav again tries to hold kalpi but this time prem push him away n hold his collar n warns him to stay away from his wife otherwise he will gone kill him with his own hands n after killing him he had to even go to the jail then also he is ready... scroll down for last part
Edited by _RagNaMyLove_ - 8 years ago
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Emotional update. Key tum promise urself aub ragna separated ff likhogi. Continue soon.
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Nice update soon
But yy ragna always separate
Its hurt but waiting
Cool love makhi expression of fear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hearing prem even raghav too holds his collar n tries to punch him but before he could do that kalpi holds his hand n gives him a tight slaps across his face leaving the imprint of her fingers on his cheek n then she left from their with prem n after they left raghav breaks down n says sammy today I lost everything,today I realised what mistake I had done,today after hearing her I realised that I lost her for forever,I had done such a unforgivable mistake which I can never repent,why I did that why,why I hurt her,why I choose my revenge over her love,why I cheat her why sammy,hearing this sammy consoles raghav n say I'm sorry raghav I cant able to be ur good friend as I cant able to stop u from ruining urself,I cant able to stop u from choosing a wrong a wrong path,I cant able to do anything for u please forgive me to which raghav told him sammy today I want to celebrate my biggest loss lets go n have some drink to which sammy agrees n they both headed towards their home bar n raghav lost himself in drinks whereas on the other side firstly prem n kalpi went to dhargha n makes a dua for each other n after that one by one they both visits the most famous places of mumbai n entire day enjoys each other company a lot,they both together had lots of fun n they both were comfortable with each other,they both did lots of shopping,masti in short it was a great day for both of them n when they both return back they both see raghav n sammy totally drunk so both prem n kalpi helps them n leave them to their respective rooms...next morning everything was going well without any tension until kalpi feels a strong pain in her head n she feel down,prem assures her that nothing will happen,he will quickly takes her to the hospital n then she will get fine but kalpi stops him n say prem listen to me I dont have much time left n before I die I want u to promise me that u will never forget me or our friendship,u will never leave the right path,u will never become that old prem because I just hate that prem,u will always listen n follow ur heart,u will live ur life with me or without me promise me prem...kalpi please dont say like that,I will not let anything happen to u,I will do whatever u say but please dont leave me please prem says...I'm sorry prem but I want to go n promise me u will do everything whatever u said to me,I promise u kalpi I will always do what I had promised u...hearing this kalpi drops down her hand from which she is holding prem's hands n then close her eyes too n when sammy checks her pulse he informs everyone that kalpi is no more hearing this everyone questions prem that what had happened to her,who can she die all of a sudden without any problem,did u had done something with her tell us but prem reamins silent,kalpi death left him in deep shock n he becomes a staute,he doesnt even shed a single tear on kalpi's death,he just became a lifeless body without its soul n that is why when vithal n raghav slaps him he doesnt utter a single word but his friends cant able to see all that so they told everyone that kalpi died because she was suffering from cancer n prem whom u all r blaming did everything he can to save her,he always tries his best but still he cant able to save her,kalpi was his life n her death left him a state of shock cant u all see his condition n its not like that prem or us never tries to save her we all consults the best cancer doctor for her who informed us that their is only one percent chance of her survival if we opt for surgery but still prem wants to take that risk but kalpi doesnt because she doesnt want to live,she just wants to go away but still gives her the medicines n that too on time to time,he never let her skip any of her medicine n even both prem n kalpi comes here because it was kalpi's last wish that before she die she wants to see n meet everyone of u so prem brings her here so tell me the one who loves her so much how can he be the reason of her death,everyone use to pray for their long life infront of god but she always use to pray for her n finally today god had listen her prayers n she left us but one thing we all had to say was that she is the best no one can ever be like her,she is just a single like her in this world,she is the one who bring new hopes,new dreams in our lifes,she gives our meaningless life a reason to live,she fills colors in our dark life,she taught us the value of friendship n relations,she is the best thing which happens to all of us so we even cant thing of hurting her even in our dreams so please dont blame or say anything to prem,he really loves kalpi a lot,he can never do anything which will hurt his kalpi,please spare her...after all this yug one of kalpi's n prem's common friend gives prem a cd n told him that it was him from his kalpi,before she had come to mumbai she had given this to me n told me to give it to u after her death so I think its the right time...hearing this prem quickly takes the cd n plays it,in the cd kalpi had recorded some special msgs for prem n had share some of her secrets with him n had told him to not to cry after her death as he looks horrible while crying n had told him that may be she doesn't love him like he do but still he was one of her best friend whom she really admires,she told everyone to not to miss her too but do miss her otherwise she will haunt all of them in their dreams,she requested prem to live his life n move on without her n specially she even sings a song too for her best friend prem n at last she made prem remembers her promise to donate all her organs to the needy one n with the closure of cd all the best time she had spent with prem n their friends flashes in the forms pf photo n seeing them prem emotionally touches the tv screen n then after doing kalpi's final rites prem for forever went back to delhi the place where he had spend the best time of his life with his kalpi... ---------------------------------The End----------------------------
Edited by _RagNaMyLove_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice if u want me to say frankly its ok ok yaar
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow its awesome but ye ragna se.jyada kalpi n prem ki story thi
u worte it very beautifully but sad one

write.more n more
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful... Emotional. ... in story hero is not raghav but prem.
Nice. Thanks for pm.

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