SwaSan OS 'The Color Green'--Updt Page 1 - Page 9

Hey Viji,

Absolutely amazing os, you know I always associated blue with Sanskar but now I think after reading this story I have started loving green too, blue reminds me of the endless ocean and and Swara reminded me of the happy sunlight, but mixing them you are try a genius..

Truly green is the color of rains and comforting,soothing the soul..coming to the story, I always used to think why there is never anyone for Sanskar so there can be a jealousy angle there as well, yes there was Kavita but still, reading this story just brought one my prayers come true to see Swara jealous like this..it is always Sanskar who always have to make Swara realize that he loves her for once I wanted Swara to go and claim that Sanskar is her's..

Atleast Swara realized that it was due to her own actions and decision that has driven Sanskar away from her, always taking decision which has put their relationship in stake, I seriously don't want Sanskar to forgive Swara so easily, it really brought a relief to finally see her take a stand for him..seriously why can't just Swara for a change listen to him, as if she has taken a oath that she have to stand against his every decision..

Then drunked Sanskar is really dangerous,if only Swara had taken him in his arms and soothed him it would have healed him atleast to some extent..the arrival of Deepika was very effective..the way Swara was so jealous and her sorror to see that how Sanskar was hugging her..must have taught new how Sanskar has felt when she hugged Nikhil..looked like the masterplan of Uttara, must say she can be like her brother when needed..Swara was so cute..the way she was angry to keep her hands of his Sanskar and then dropping the coffee cup and to see Sanskar affected was just so sweet..

The next scene was amazing, the anger, the passionz literally sparks flew when they saw each other and the kiss was so mindblowing and aggressive,brought such a passionate side of their love..the way Sanskar heightened her anger to let Deepika call her Suuny and then Swara trying to establish her claim..was raw in intensity..beautifully written..the intensity if their chemistry was blazing and then it was nice to see Swara finally agree to Sanskar and taking some tiny Minny steps to bring him back to her..it was really amazing to see Sanskar wearing that shirt and telling that he liked it very much..just proves how much he can do for her..Uttara teasing was so cute..that she so obviously know what must have happened..and I surely think it as her deed to send Sanskar to his room knowing that Swara would surely go to their room..and then Swara blushing was just so romantic..

The way Swara in away apologised to him and asking that after everything all she needed was him and not to ever doubt her love was really very beautifully written..and truly sometimes things are understood by just their eyes and by silence..

Amazing story..just makes ne want to read it again and again..

Love,
Piya

My Dearest Piya 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Nynu 🤗🤗


Such a lovely little doggerel you have there. 😆 And no, you are not crazy/ crazier at all. You might well be bonkers, but then I remember the start of it all, was our fascinating 'Angelic Demon or Demonic Angel' discussion on Sunny Boy, and how he is such a Devilish inspiration for Dan Brown's books. 😆

I think I've gone bonkers, too. 😳 😃 Don't worry Nynu, you will find most of us in the same boat. 😆

Loads of Love,


------Viji

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

And I finally UNRES (Capital letters to denote me shouting with joy, that I have managed to do this)

And my tardy self finally gets around to leaving a comment, in no specific order.

Sanskaar in a mint green shirt and dark chocolate chinos ****sigh*** mint and chocolate, do you know how delicious that combination is. I am drooling, over both. And enters Deepika, Deepu (literally meaning light and she does make Swara see the light too, right) who certainly seems to be a little too clingy to Sanskaar for Swara's comfort (I loved it, bless our sadist hearts) and Swara's very objective assessment of Deepu - 'if she were a man, she would have fallen for Deepu.' I so love Uttara, for even though Swara let the fires of jealousy consume her, Uttara knew her brother very very well, there was no way in the world that he would even considered anyone else but Swara. I am a little curious, was Deepika also in the know, would be nice if she was.

Deepika pressing Sanskaar's biceps seemed to have pushed Swara to the breaking point, the unfortunate victim of which was the teacup.

And that leads to the very passionate, intense and much needed encounter between them. Their helpless surrender to each other, was not just a manifestation of the intense physical desire they shared, but also a reflection of how deeply they yearned for each other, in their hearts and soul. Swara's unintentional vocal claim that the physical marking of Sanskaar would show the "hussy" (totally undeserved epithet for Deep) though angered Sanskaar did serve to break some barriers as both managed to talk to each other, rather than talk at each other. It was nice to see Swara take the first tentative steps towards listening to Sanskaar and trying to trust him or rather have faith in his words and concerns. But the highlight for me, at least, was the way Swara reasoned with him using his own words, if he had stated that she should never question the strength of the feelings he had for her, it was time he followed it up by not doubting the depth of her feelings for him. It is a great relief to see Swara, who has realised where she went wrong and state with absolute conviction that she needs one chance to work towards redemption, though she feels she does not deserve one, considering how she never heeded his pleas for a chance.

Blue and yellow - do make green - a new green, of faith and hope. As Ragini and Uttara wanted, Swara and Sanskaar could mend their relationship, on the wings of hope and prayer.

And last, I loved Ragini's stand of not forgiving Laksh immediately and the fact that it was precisely this stand of Ragini that taught Swara as to how blind and foolish she had been.

"Green is the prime color of the world, and that from which its loveliness arises." Pedro Calderon de la Barca. As you wrote in the start, green can symbolize life, nature, fertility, well being, growth, harmony, safety, and balance, but simply put, it is simply lovely, as is your tale.

Loads of love,

Nyna

PS: How does the shipper tag SunDeep sound😉 - for all our sadist hearts😈

Jealous Sanskar & a jealous Swara makes for a deadly combination. Nice concept Viji.😊

Viji darling...

Originally posted by: preet_907

Jealous Sanskar & a jealous Swara makes for a deadly combination. Nice concept Viji.😊

My Dearest Talia 🤗

My Dearest Nynu 🤗